I hate it when I'm late to the party, but fuck it. I got nothing better to do right now anyhow.
IN AN UNKOWN PARALELL DIMENSION
Gee! That's fucking narrows it down! You could at least say if it's on Earth #62 or something.
A Tall, Brown-haired boy who looked to be about 16 was running for his life. He was wearing a black kimono with a white robe over it and he had a sword at his waist. He also wore glasses and was pretty tall. He also had a Small device attached to his left shoulder that was strapped around his body. A large blue wing of flame was sprouting from it, but it was no ordinary flame. It was sucking energy from the area around him.
For the love of God, try not to explain two things then fucking pause! Try to use a continuity, explaining his appearance from bottom-to-top or vice versa. This does not only make it a tad easier to imagine the character, but also allows you to improve upon his appearances on stages. The lower half, the Torso and the freaking head, without having to skim through dozen of updates and paragraphs in order to revise said work and improve upon it in the later stages. Also, "Tall, brown haired boy"? Gee, I'll be sure to be on the lookout for a tall boy that's 16 of which I know not any facial features or such. I'm sure I don't even need to know the lenght of his hair or volume or shit to figure it out it's him!
A Reishi Wing.
A Reishi Wing? What the fuck is that? What is it's purpose? What does it look like? I don't care if it's from Bleach, you have to explain the specific characteristics of this anime to the people who don't watch it so they won't be confused out of their mind.
With a spark of electricity, his katana transformed into a very large Serrated-edge katana.
A spark of Elictricity from what? And why the fuck transform a Katana's blade into one which is common on small knives and scissors? What's the point?
He turned to his enemy and stood his ground. When the python went to strike, he held up his blade and held back the python's fangs. he then focused and his Reishi wing flared.
He then threw the python back and launched himself into the air. he then pointed his blade and screamed his attack
How the fuck do you throw a giant ass python back? From what I saw of Bleach the monsters are 4 stories high and usually very powerful. He ain't the fricking Hulk from your description of him and the python could of swallowed him whole. I mean, it's fucking giant. It has a mouth bigger then his body from what I presume so what could of worked here would of been him pushing the blade through the top of his mouth, not bear-wrestle with his teeth.
"It can only be accessed by tearing the dimensional fabric separating the worlds, which allows Hollows to travel to any other dimension at will." He pissed off the Godfather of Soul Society, why would he even be there?
He was trying to Perform Konso
Send him to Ethiopia? And I'm going to abstain from using Mehico jokes on this one.
on a Man's soul that was about to turn, when the Man gave out a horrid scream and his mask began to form. He jumped back and watched the hole form in the man's chest and the white mask form. He knew he needed to run but he couldn't because his sword was still attatched to the chain of fate that still clung to the man's spirit. He Watched as the man's body disappeared and all that was left was the mask.
I repeat, explain to us non-bleach viewers.
Until the spirit transformed....
He was touched by Satan?
He then remembered how Hollows broke the barrier through Hueco Mundo..... They cut the area around them... So he cut a random hole in front of him and saw a small house..... two floor with only 3 windows. He jumped through the hole and landed in the front yard.
........................ Ok, fuck it. Bleach logic has no place in this universe.
He then went up and knocked on the door and was greeted by a girl with Black hair, Green eyes and wore green pajamas.
Green Pajamas? Who wears pajamas in the middle of the day? Wait, now that I mention it, what time of the day is it? Night, day, morning, sunset?
"My name is Artemis Tyrax. I ran from home and need a place to stay. I've had no food for a day and need to rest...."
You didn't even try to make him sound like a kid. All that's left for him to do is a Chally-hoo my good sport gig. And I ain't buying that shit story that hes matured at, what, 6?
Buttercup thought she saw a black butterfly...
'Scuse me? Lemme qoute Bleach wiki on this:
"Hell Butterflies, like the Shinigami themselves, are only visible to spiritually aware beings"
I can already see how this is going towards the "tragic" death of your OP, Buttercup kicking some Gotei 13th ass then admitting his love over him as he gives his last breath. Been there, read that.
Artemis knew he was 16 but still felt attracted to Buttercup
It ain't even worth the hassle to do pedobear jokes on this one.
but then he saw something. Buttercup had a strange Aura about her. Using his Soul Reaper ability he Gauged That Buttercup had a very high Spiritual pressure and he saw a green Aura Surrounding her. Yet he also had a strange feeling in his gut.... A feeling that was only present when he looked at Buttercup.... He Decided it was nothing and continued talking to the professor...
You fucking discover somebody with high Spiritual bullshit and an aura. How the fuck do you let it be? Also, Green
aura? All that's left is to bring in Eduardo and Otto and do a Captain Planet reference. Also, who the fuck calls his ability to detect auras and spiritual pressures Soul Reaper. That like calling handing money to the poor extortion.
[i]If that hollow wanted me so badly, why did it let me escape??
Oh, I don't know. Maybe because you zapped it's ass to kingdom come? Also, more question mark's don't make your question more philosophical.
He slowly started to grip the stone which released him from his body, but when he saw it was Buttercup, he relaxed. She came up and sat at the end of his bed.
FUCK NO! Buttercup kicks mother fucking ass, she ain't no Japanese bitch that likes to call strangers onii-chan and fucking cuddle with them in bed ten minutes after meting them.
"No, I wanted to talk to you.... I know you're not who you say you are.."
That's Blossom's line you media whore.
grabbed his stone.
What the fuck are those stones anyway? Michael Jackson's ball's?
Buttercup almost fainted when she saw him before her...
Why must you make her a fucking pussy?
She gasped when she saw his Zanpaku-to at his waist and his Reishi wing
"I'm really 16... or at least, I was"
No shit Einstein, I thought you were 80.
"I am a Soul Reaper. A captain of court guard company Z. And in order to be a soul reaper you need to either die or seperate from your life and make a new one. My old life, I was 16 so this is my spirit form, but now I am your age. That is who I am now."
"Yes, A Soul Reaper is a person who Helps the spirits of people who have died to 'pass on'. But, some Souls are filled with emotions that carried on from their life and they become malignant souls. We call them Hollows because they always have a hole in their chests from where their heart used to be... But we are also dispatched to Assimilate these souls and send them to the soul Society."
"Long story short, I'm a badass. Now suck my incredible huge dick"
"But, You have something strange about you... an aura..."
"Is that why you were staring??"
"Yes.... and no... I was also staring because you mesmirized me..."
Buttercup blushed and felt a warm, fuzzy feeling inside....
"Oh my God..... You... You have a seperated Soul..."
Well GEE! You gave me the exact same stone which you used to separate your own soul (?), I wonder why!
"You are a Reincarnation...."
"Wow.... What is that??"
For someone meting the equivalent of Death, she seems bored out of her mind.
"You have a soul that is a type of "Copy" or Twin to a previous soul that has been assimilated. When Certain Souls assimilate into nothingness, they leave shards behind that manifest into newborns. In your Case, A shard manifested in you when you were created...."
Wait, wait, wait.....What?
Buttercup then proceeded to Examine herself in her soul form, continually staring at her limb body, lying next to Artemis' Gigai. And Artemis Felt that feeling in his gut again as he looked at Buttercup...
"Hey, Can i ask you something?? ........."
Que porno music
Dr. X Watched as this man approached him.
"who are you? "
"i am the Shadow.... I Control the Hollows.."
"yes. creatures that have no feeling, no fear, just a killing instinct.... but i am here because i am hunting a soul reaper....."
"And how does this pertain to me??"
Explain why X dosn't start kicking his ass right away. I'm pretty sure if I had a giant ass monster in my cave, I'd go batshit crazy on it's ass.
"it seems this soul reaper has fallen for someone you know very well. a girl by the name of buttercup..."
"Intriguing... But i still fail to see where i come in.."
" i am offering an army of malevolent souls, all i ask in return is that you help me get the hide of the soul reaper.... do we have a deal?? "
How the hell does he know what a soul reaper is? Why does he believe that thing can procure him an army of spirits? Why isn't he least bit interested the above?
After Returning to their Human Bodies, Artemis told Buttercup about the strange feeling he had and she told him that she felt the same. So they had agreed that they could try to create a relationship between them, but they were still not sure if it was right
They Lay on the grass and when Artemis put his hands down, his hand touched Buttercup's and she blushed a deep pink. So they stared into each other's eyes....
Oh for the love of God. Please God let Jack come by to end this bullshit.
Mongrel, capture this girl and draw out the soul reaper. So the Hollow disappeared
Who, what where?
"Exactly who are you?"
Finally! Somebody with a brain cell!
I did not become a hollow myself, but i gained control of them
If I wouldn't be tired for bullshit explanation I might actually be inclined to listen to this.
"my name....was.. Ichigo Kurosaki..."
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAIT! Ichigo has the mask? Good, I can buy him being insane but isn't that thing a real world object? If he got killed, it should of fell off his spirit or something, not hang in there like a leach. Although this is Bleach so god knows what makes sense anymore. Also, Ichi-fucking-go? Where the fuck is Rukia?
At this time, Just as Artemis and Buttercup were about to kiss
Pussy, Media-whore, Moronic and willing to fuck anybody. Good job mate.
He didn't even fucking meet Dexter!
And to make your story as short as possible :
The step-brother of My Immortal in the PPGD universe.