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Re: Puff Most Epic - [Latest: Ch. 2, Pt. 8 - 06/25/2010]

Fri Jul 09, 2010 1:47 pm

I suppose what makes it hard to follow at times because of the multiple paragraph structure.

Re: Puff Most Epic - [Latest: Ch. 2, Pt. 8 - 06/25/2010]

Sat Jul 10, 2010 3:48 pm

Well I've read everything up this point on DA, and I must say this is an interesting story you guys have here. Looking forward to future updates.

Re: Puff Most Epic - [Latest: Ch. 2, Pt. 8 - 06/25/2010]

Mon Jul 12, 2010 2:03 am

arcon3 wrote:I suppose what makes it hard to follow at times because of the multiple paragraph structure.


there's a lot going on, what do you recommend we do to change it?

Re: Puff Most Epic - [Latest: Ch. 2, Pt. 8 - 06/25/2010]

Thu Jul 15, 2010 12:21 am

RuffDraft wrote:Still here? Are you going someplace?

Going to Tacoma Washington in the end of September and staying around the North Western half of it for two years without internet.

In terms of your story, its still great and wonderfully written. At times I do detect the original PpG, and then their expansion which is something I expect from fan based literature. Its good to have the characters balanced between what they use to and are like, with how the author believed they changed over the years.

But the style, while unique and very imaginative, is still a bitch to adjust to and read. It's a double edged sword for me.

The person with Princess. Is she a OC or that one pro-women villains?

Re: Puff Most Epic - [Latest: Ch. 2, Pt. 8 - 06/25/2010]

Thu Jul 15, 2010 10:22 am

@ Blood Lord: Regard the last line of that paragraph with some scrutiny.

RuffDraft wrote:Soon the much older woman gave the real reason for being there at this early hour. With a flick of her hair that had nothing to do with the motion of her head, she told her, "It's time for your morning training, Princess."


She is a character from the series, and the answer can be found here.

Re: Puff Most Epic - [Latest: Ch. 2, Pt. 8 - 06/25/2010]

Thu Jul 15, 2010 11:45 pm

Oh fuck. She's training Princess?

Dayum.

Re: Puff Most Epic - [Latest: Ch. 2, Pt. 8 - 06/25/2010]

Fri Jul 16, 2010 2:44 am

Blood Lord wrote:Going to Tacoma Washington in the end of September and staying around the North Western half of it for two years without internet.


On this note, there's always internet cafes, and laptops have generally become more affordable recently. I saw a *really good* 15.4-inch one at Walmart the other day for something like $549. I walked by the TV section after that, and a 32-inch TV was more expensive than that (at something like $698). Layaway is a good option and might get you a laptop in a couple of months if you can manage your money right.

Of course, I realize that not everyone can spend that kind of money. But I would hate to see you disappear for years at a time.

Re: Puff Most Epic - [Latest: Ch 2 Complete, Ch1 Pt 1 Revised]

Sun Jul 25, 2010 1:31 pm

I'm currently using a laptop with wi-fi. Nice Dell that I got for graduation for college. I'll have some limited access, but I don't know what will happen. Layaway is a great place. I think I saw a TV a little smaller than that for somewhere in the neighborhood of like $559. I'm not completely sure anymore. Anyways, it was a good deal.

I'm LDS, and the reason why I'm going to Tacoma is for mission where I teach the Gospel to people and basically help out. My connection to the world is heavily severed, and unless I sneak it or get permission to visit Snafu, I'm gone for a while.

Re: Puff Most Epic - [Latest: Ch 2 Complete, Ch1 Pt 1 Revised]

Sun Jul 25, 2010 3:32 pm

Ah, I see. Well that is unfortunate, but good luck to you there. I'll be going to Guam for a couple years starting in November, but I'll have internet in a matter of days after arriving. Not a huge deal for me... unless either of my computers break. I would really hate to have to order a new motherboard or power supply because the weird climate of Guam fucks up the electronics. Add to that if I do order some parts or books or whatever and have them sent to Guam, they have to go through our FPO, and that can take upwards of months to get to me. Ugh. But it's cool... it's a nice place, and it's really close to Japan.

So I'm looking forward to going, anyway.

Re: Puff Most Epic - [Latest: Ch 2 Complete, Ch1 Pt 1 Revised]

Sun Jul 25, 2010 3:42 pm

I heard Guam is a pretty place. So that's probably a bonus.

Are you just going to be stationed there for a bit, or what are you doing?

Re: Puff Most Epic - [Latest: Ch 2 Complete, Ch1 Pt 1 Revised]

Sun Jul 25, 2010 4:17 pm

Aye, I'll be there for a couple years. I'm gonna be on a Submarine Tender, so that's cool. I plan on taking several trips to Japan. Maybe by the time I come back from Guam I'll be completely fluent. lol

Re: Puff Most Epic - [Latest: Ch 2 Complete, Ch1 Pt 1 Revised]

Sun Jul 25, 2010 9:46 pm

you can teach me when we're roommates ha ah ha ha ha

Re: Puff Most Epic - [Latest: Ch 2 Complete, Ch1 Pt 1 Revised]

Fri Sep 17, 2010 11:07 pm

as per requests, we have added astericks to mark passage changes

Re: Puff Most Epic - [Latest: Ch 2 Complete, Ch1 Pt 1 Revised]

Fri Sep 17, 2010 11:55 pm

Dammit BR. I thought it was an update, you little tease.

Re: Puff Most Epic - [Latest: Ch 2 Complete, Ch1 Pt 1 Revised]

Sat Sep 18, 2010 8:13 pm

Haha.

Well, here's a real update for you: We have enough material for the first two parts of chapter 3. We want to finish up the current arc before proceeding. So, once we finish that, we will more than likely have more frequent updates.

Also: A PME comic is in the works. We've hinted it before with all sorts of concept art on BR's dA page, but now it's starting to come to fruition. Something to look forward to.

Re: Puff Most Epic

Thu Dec 16, 2010 9:45 pm

jsam wrote:Hello~~~~~~~~~~~
You know, I think you're right about spacing it out.
But I still like the tabbing I did on it.

I ALSO THINK SO.

Re: Puff Most Epic

Wed Dec 22, 2010 4:24 pm

benlin910 wrote:
jsam wrote:Hello~~~~~~~~~~~
You know, I think you're right about spacing it out.
But I still like the tabbing I did on it.

I ALSO THINK SO.


DON'T POST IN ALL CAPS. Also read the rules. Thanks for reading.

Re: Puff Most Epic - [Latest: Ch 2 Complete, Ch1 Pt 1 Revised]

Sat Dec 25, 2010 10:03 pm

BR, that's a bot. It advertises in its Sig. Kill it like the rest.

Re: Puff Most Epic - [Latest: Ch 2 Complete, Ch1 Pt 1 Revised]

Tue Dec 28, 2010 2:56 am

I swear. he didn't have the sig when he posted. But alas, he is a bot. D:

Re: Puff Most Epic - [Latest: Ch 2 Complete, Ch1 Pt 1 Revised]

Tue Dec 28, 2010 7:34 pm

Hope this thread isn't dead yet because I've got to say, I really enjoyed reading chapter 2 of PME.

It was interesting, exciting, heartfelt, funny and so much more.

I've seen most of concept art and it looks like it's gonna be a truly epic comic.

Granted, there were a few short moments where I got a little lost in the story, but still, it wasn't completely too hard to follow.

I hope to find more of the story and see the comic in the future.

Re: Puff Most Epic - [Latest: Ch 2 Complete, Ch1 Pt 1 Revised]

Thu Dec 30, 2010 9:33 am

Oh, there will be more.

THERE WILL BE MORE.

BR and I have decided to hold off on posting what we have until we're sure about the entire chapter. That'll probably be about the time we have half the chapter complete. Also, BR is staying with his Grandmother right now, and I don't think she has internet. So it's bound to be sketchy until he figures out his internet or gets a new place to stay.

Re: Puff Most Epic - [Latest: Ch 2 Complete, Ch1 Pt 1 Revised]

Thu Jan 06, 2011 3:10 am

I have basic internet due to a cousin staying with her because of her parents' house's awful condition! AROOoooo

but chapter 3 shall be rather exciting i believe.

Re: Puff Most Epic - [Latest: Ch 2 Complete, Ch1 Pt 1 Revised]

Sat Jul 02, 2011 9:51 am

PM me if you want this unlocked for future posting, Ruff. Or BeeAre can do it for ya. Either's fine.
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