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WhiteSong's PPGD Bell Fanfic- "Sister Dear"

Postby WhiteSong » Sun Apr 13, 2008 10:20 am

“Sister Dear”
Chapter :1

Explosions erupted from a once seemingly calm forest. Birds scattered towards the skies in panic. As trees were scorched or knocked over by the pure power stemming from a center force.

Three girls, each with their own colors were having a stare-off with another…
One like them, similar yet so different… Bell.

The snow white girl, with hair and eyes as white as clouds. Was smirking at the destruction she had caused. Watching as the smoke billowing from the crater dispersed.

Her opponents the three warriors of good- the PowerPuff Girls. Blossom, Bubbles, and Buttercup. They were glaring, while in ‘combat mode’ ready a spring at any moment.
The red-clad one decided to brake the silence by shouting. “Why are you doing this Bell?!”
Bell just continued to smirk.
“It’s no use Blossom!” growled the green clad bombshell, other wise known as Buttercup. “She’s our enemy!”
Lastly the blue-clad girl, with pigtails of sunshine nodded. Silently agreeing. Her name is Bubbles, the “youngest” of the three.

Bell played with a lock of her albino hair, whilst smiling cruelly. Before replying…
“It’s fun.” There was a flash of white, and in an instant, Buttercup found herself flung across the forest floor. “Buttercup!” The two powerpuffs yelled in unison.
“I’m fine…” muttered a bruised, but notably unharmed Buttercup.
“That was one hell of a “love-tap”!” Growled the green bombshell warrior.
Love?, That was nothing “Sister”…” Was Bell’s reply.
The three girls shared confused glances. Sisters? Since when?
Taking advantage of their momentary distraction, Bell sped towards the bow wearing leader. Giving a upward kick to the shocked Blossom. Before grabbing her collar and throwing her into the air. Following up with a large volley of white energy.
Seconds later there was an explosion, then nothing…
“Blossom!” This time the remaining two yelled.
“Two left… and now without a leader.” Bell taunted.
“What will you do now?” She questioned completely apathetic.

Buttercup responded, with a cry of pure rage! Charging at high speeds ready to deliver a “Buttercup Punch” to the albino’s skull.
Surprisingly Bell took it!
Smiling as she flew across the area into several trees.
Buttercup panted in slow concession .Clearly tired.

Suddenly a streak of white light flew from the impact point, while slamming a open palm into Buttercup’s face! Clutching onto her head! “You’re the next to go!” said Bell in a singsong voice. As Said girl slammed the green wearing girl into the ground, creating a crater in the process. Before forming another blast of white energy, blinding all who saw it…
Until, to Bubbles horror- Buttercup was unmoving…
Dead.

“Blossom… Buttercup!” The pigtailed girl wailed. Bell turned to the remaining powerpuff, making steady paces towards bubbles…
Eyes locked, Bell formed another volley into her right palm.
Until she saw something… tears…
Bubbles was crying! Inches away from her, Bell sighed in resign.

“Simulation mission abort…”

Bell sighed in a defeated tone.
The “forest” began to disappear, along with the crying Bubbles…

Suddenly a voice crackled over a intercom radio.
It was Dr.X. “Bell? Why did you abort?” The professor questioned.
Which Bell simply replied “tired.” It was a blatant lie, and the Professor knew it. However he let it slide… for now.

Bell couldn’t stand it! Every scenario! Every time! It was always what crumbled her resolve!
Sighing once again frustrated, Bell left the training lab…
Dr.X sighed, feeling an incoming headache. “Battle Simulation… another failure.”
Rubbing his forehead as he looked at the computer’s weekly charts- this week had been strange. Bell had not been herself…
And the simulations were ending in failures! Why? He did not know..
And maybe not even Bell herself…
“Tomorrow is another day…”
Chapter 1-End

(This is my first PPGD fanfiction... It's as you can see centered around Bell. I will not know when the next chapter will be up. It depends on my motivation and inspiration... so in other words, it may take awhile...)
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First Fanfiction: Bell Centric Chapter.3( In the works! Hopefully...)---->
"Sister Dear"
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Re: WhiteSong's PPGD Bell Fanfic- "Sister Dear"

Postby AngelLilly » Sun Apr 13, 2008 11:06 am

Hey Bell! ^^

Nice story! =0

I really really liked it so keep it up.

Awwww, why'd you make me cry? :'(

I'll forgive you though, you didn't really kill BC. <3
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Postby Wolfy » Sun Apr 13, 2008 11:17 am

Yes indeed, keep it up.
I look forward to seeing more.
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Postby Iris » Sun Apr 13, 2008 6:00 pm

That is a awesome opening, I didn't realize until the end that it was a simulation...and i didn't see that coming!
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Postby WhiteSong » Sun Apr 13, 2008 6:04 pm

Thanks Iris! That was what I was going for actually!
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"Sister Dear"
Thanks Wolfy!

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Postby Wolfy » Sun Apr 13, 2008 6:50 pm

You also had me fooled at the start. ^^;
I saw the part where Bell kills Buttercup and I was thinking:
Wait, what?
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Postby Maoman123 » Sun Apr 13, 2008 7:09 pm

Great start Bell! If i could say anything bad, it'd be grammer things, but you have great descriptions, and great action. Can't wait to see where the story goes!
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Re: WhiteSong's PPGD Bell Fanfic- "Sister Dear"

Postby tomaszavenger » Tue Apr 15, 2008 4:22 pm

Awesome, and the simulation got me too...

I thought you killed BC, and I was angry lol.
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Re: WhiteSong's PPGD Bell Fanfic- "Sister Dear"

Postby WhiteSong » Sat May 10, 2008 5:41 pm

(Here's Chapter two of "Sister Dear" after a little hiatus. Enjoy.Note: I am as an author trying to convey the enigma known as Bell's personality. Her Personality for this story is completely of my imagination. Please do not flame. ThankYou.)


[center]“Sister Dear”

Chapter 2
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Bell sighed, a thing she had seemed to be doing quite often.
What was wrong? She was not ill.
Being who she was, Bell could not get sick. She was immune to human diseases… Something her “father” prided in. The perfect warrior, the perfect little girl.
With eyes and hair of purity. Purity yes, but tainted. For behind her flawless skin, lied the things the feelings that made her impure.
Doubt, fear, confusion something Dr.X originally wished to “stamp out” of her, with her creation. That was unavoidable, but it did not mean she couldn’t hide it.

Behind masks of cruelty and feigned innocence. Bell had cultivated such ruses, in order to fool everyone. To believe she was “perfection”. But she was only the true fool. For fools of old hid behind masks. And for her to block the world, reality.
Something she, Bell- has always hated. Reality. It left in unbearable “sting” an indescribable “pain”, knowing that her world was fake… Yes she was the fool, yet Bell would have it no other way. Her name is Bell, this is who she is.

Why was she given the name “Bell”? Why had the villain professor known as Dr.X, given her such a strange name? Was it symbolic? What was in a name? Bell pondered. What had caused this? These sudden outlooks? Before she hadn’t cared, it would not even cross her mind. But now… now- everything has taken a 180 degree turn!

It was with her meeting, with one of her “sisters”. The leader, Blossom. The fight though one-sided at first. Sparked something… something Bell herself could not phantom.
And her she was contenting life.
A bitter laugh dwelled past her lips. Life? What “life” has she ever had?!
Images flashed before her shut eyelids, hands fisted she let out a cry of pent up anger. “It’s not fair!” Bell cried. “Why me?!” “Why am I so… confused?!” She trailed off. “So lost?...” A drop of something “wet” fell onto Bell’s clenched hands…
Blinking, eyes blurry- it hit her! She was crying! Bell never cried, for things like this!

Suddenly, once confusion turned into fear. Fear for what was happening to her! These foreign emotions… So she fled… back towards the base complex she called home.
If any passerbyers were in the base at Bell’s arrival. They would only see a blur of white, and a gust of supersonic air… Samantha happened be that lucky person, as she felt the “gust” created by the unknown force. “What the hell?-“ cursed her ever sharp tongue. As the brunette turned her head to the now long gone drift. Before glaring and stomping off to where ever she was originally going.
“Damn PowderPuff…”

-Bell’s Room-
Slamming her current bedroom door, Bell slid down body tired and in disarray. Shakingly getting up, she glanced at Gir. As the quirky alien somehow ambled into her room and was currently sitting on her bed. A small smile played on her lips as she picked up the disguised alien and lay on her bed. Gir always made Bell feel better… Call it strange, but the green “dog’s” spouts of random gibberish made her feel calm. Maybe it was it’s simple idioticy that made her feel this way? Bell never really cared… Sighing once again Bell decided to tell the silly pet how she felt today… “Gir…” Said alien turned it’s head towards her. “Everything is so… confusing…”

Gir sat on the albino powerpuff’s stomach, shouting words of nonsense. Though Bell didn’t mind. That “nonsense” was just what she needed. As she listened to the faint voice of the strange robot, she lulled into a pleasant sleep…
Not even noticing Dr.X’s presence outside her door. “Sweet dreams Bell.” The man whispered. God only knows that she needed it. So Bell slept, into a world of dreams as peace reigned.
But for how long… was uncertain…
-Chapter 2 End-

(finally. I did this all in one sitting. Though I had it written down already... just minor alterations and such. This is why it takes so long for me to write. Sorry I take so long...)
Anyway, Reviews are very much welcome. And NO flaming please. Thanks.
-WhiteSong-
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Thanks Tomaszavenger for your great ideas!
First Fanfiction: Bell Centric Chapter.3( In the works! Hopefully...)---->
"Sister Dear"
Thanks Wolfy!

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Re: WhiteSong's PPGD Bell Fanfic- "Sister Dear"

Postby Wolfy » Sat May 10, 2008 5:46 pm

I applaud this new chapter. I like your style, and I also like how you portray Bell.
I still look forward to seeing more.
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Postby WhiteSong » Sat May 10, 2008 6:08 pm

Thanks Wolfy! ^_^ I always look foreward to the RRB's clan members comments.
-WhiteSong-
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Thanks for everything Angellily(Bubbles)!
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First Fanfiction: Bell Centric Chapter.3( In the works! Hopefully...)---->
"Sister Dear"
Thanks Wolfy!

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Re: WhiteSong's PPGD Bell Fanfic- "Sister Dear"

Postby Wolfy » Sat May 10, 2008 6:12 pm

No thanks necessary.
I just hope it doesn't go on hiatus again. ;)
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Postby WhiteSong » Sat May 10, 2008 6:20 pm

I hope not as well... but I have currently hit a snag (writers's Block) on the fourth chapter... And yes, I planned it that far... But seeing as I am running out of ideas, I might go on a LONGER hiatus... proabaly for months... I really hope it does not come to that..
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First Fanfiction: Bell Centric Chapter.3( In the works! Hopefully...)---->
"Sister Dear"
Thanks Wolfy!

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Re: WhiteSong's PPGD Bell Fanfic- "Sister Dear"

Postby Wolfy » Sat May 10, 2008 6:23 pm

Chapter 4, eh? Nice.
Oh well, you'll most likely pull through your writer's block.
My friend writes stories, and he has blocks quite often.
But something will come to you.
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Postby WhiteSong » Sat May 10, 2008 6:41 pm

Thanks! ^_^
I am Bell in the RowdyRuff Boys Clan...
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Thanks for everything Angellily(Bubbles)!
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First Fanfiction: Bell Centric Chapter.3( In the works! Hopefully...)---->
"Sister Dear"
Thanks Wolfy!

"Demons are EVIL Dood!"- Prinny <3
"K-Kind?!D-Damn it! I take it back! I'll beat them ALL the WAY to death!" -Laharl <3 "Darkness is power, Power enriched by the heart, The controler unifies the darkness."-Me(parody of Chaos emeralds)
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Postby Iris » Sat May 10, 2008 7:07 pm

Great update Whitesong(and about time too :P).
I really enjoy seeing how you have portrayed Bell.
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Postby WhiteSong » Sat May 10, 2008 7:09 pm

Thank you Iris! ^_^ I love hearing from you!
-WhiteSong-
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Thanks for everything Angellily(Bubbles)!
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Thanks Tomaszavenger for your great ideas!
First Fanfiction: Bell Centric Chapter.3( In the works! Hopefully...)---->
"Sister Dear"
Thanks Wolfy!

"Demons are EVIL Dood!"- Prinny <3
"K-Kind?!D-Damn it! I take it back! I'll beat them ALL the WAY to death!" -Laharl <3 "Darkness is power, Power enriched by the heart, The controler unifies the darkness."-Me(parody of Chaos emeralds)
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Re: WhiteSong's PPGD Bell Fanfic- "Sister Dear"

Postby AngelLilly » Sat May 10, 2008 11:48 pm

Nice new chapter Bell! ^^

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Postby WhiteSong » Sun May 11, 2008 7:20 pm

Thanks Bubbles! Your back! *hugs*
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Thanks for everything Angellily(Bubbles)!
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First Fanfiction: Bell Centric Chapter.3( In the works! Hopefully...)---->
"Sister Dear"
Thanks Wolfy!

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"K-Kind?!D-Damn it! I take it back! I'll beat them ALL the WAY to death!" -Laharl <3 "Darkness is power, Power enriched by the heart, The controler unifies the darkness."-Me(parody of Chaos emeralds)
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Re: WhiteSong's PPGD Bell Fanfic- "Sister Dear"

Postby AngelLilly » Sun May 11, 2008 7:22 pm

Hee hee

*hugs*

But only on weekends. Still semi grounded....
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Re: WhiteSong's PPGD Bell Fanfic- "Sister Dear"

Postby tomaszavenger » Tue May 13, 2008 2:42 pm

It's good... i've tried 3 ideas of my story, but no-one reads it.

I might have to resort to (gulp) a PPGD fanfic.
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Postby WhiteSong » Thu May 15, 2008 4:40 pm

Don't Worry Butch. I'll read it! Original stories are always the best!
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"Sister Dear"
Thanks Wolfy!

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Postby tomaszavenger » Fri May 16, 2008 8:16 am

Can't wait for this haitus to be over. It took me 4 years to get over the Bleedman hiatus, but hopefully you'll start soon. ^_^
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Re: WhiteSong's PPGD Bell Fanfic- "Sister Dear"

Postby Wolfy » Fri May 16, 2008 8:19 am

Oh well, comparatively this was a short hiatus.
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Postby Davidka » Sat May 17, 2008 2:24 am

Tomaszavenger, I read one of your stories...

Hmm, this is a good story, I like it. I'm sigging you, WhiteSong.
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