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Postby Amaranthine Ali » Wed Sep 06, 2006 1:36 pm

I think what DP means is don't reveal storylines.
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Postby robro » Wed Sep 06, 2006 1:41 pm

ahh okay sorry for that



Meanwhile back in megavile sckool elementery a boy with a white labcoat and blue, cirle shaped glasses was walking down a hallway his face looked worryed
Labcoat Boy: where is blossom? She was supposed to meet me at the park but she never showed up……meabie I sould look if she is in her own home?
Just then a girl with red hair and the black version of the standerd sckool uniform sayed
Girl:dexter listen
Dexter: who are you?…how did you know my name?….
Girl: I have my way’s but my name is not inportant for now you must go to the ppg’s home fast and bring some medbot’s with you….
Dexter: WHAT?!?! How did y-
Before dexter could finish the girl pressed a buten on a watch she was wearing and disapeard
Dexter: what in the name of einstine’s brain?!?!…..what was she talking abou- OF CORCE…..…SHIT
Dexter then also presed a button on HIS watch and dis apeared and later reaperd at the house of the ppg with about 4 white robot’s with a red cros on them and when dexter saw the girls flying twords the house he noticed that they where not flying on theire own power and that blood was dripping from them
As the girls came down dexter was shoked to say the least but did not waste time and told the med bot’s to heal them imeadiatly
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Postby Forse the Deathmaster » Wed Sep 06, 2006 1:44 pm

Nice! i wonder what was the thing that made them fly...
Great job Robro! Keep going!
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Postby robro » Wed Sep 06, 2006 1:51 pm

i would like to but i don't know anything about Bellerephond so please send me a pm with some info
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Postby Forse the Deathmaster » Wed Sep 06, 2006 1:52 pm

Ok! I'll send it shortly!
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Postby dark psyghost » Wed Sep 06, 2006 1:55 pm

Good update Robro. And i was reffering to "*They had a discusion i am not going to write down*".
It would be better something like. "After a meaningless discusion".
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Postby robro » Wed Sep 06, 2006 2:29 pm

ahh okay thanks for the tip

Added after 23 minutes:

Meanwhile 2 portals opened up next to eachother
One portal was black and seemed to be created by pure darkness
The other seemed to be a circle of some strange water
The dark portal started to riple and a flaming orange ball came out
The waterery portal seemed to ripple even more voilontly until a small girl came out wearing a blue dress that seemed to be made for every day use but she also had a human head in her hand and her theeth where dripping blood in her other hand she had about 4 scalpels‘s that seemed to be faintly glowing a electric blue color and they seemd to be charged with heavy amounts of electrisity yet they did not electrify her

The ball seemed to be a small hegehog with camera for eye’s

Girl: what’s this? A orange hegehog? I wonder what color it wil bleed?
With that the girl trew her sckalples at the robot. They cut right into the armor and diliverd a severe electric shock to the robot causing it to overlead and explode sending the girl flying
The girl was blown into a bilding and sayd:
girl: Aaawwww no fun!! It dident even bleed!!!
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Postby dark psyghost » Wed Sep 06, 2006 2:32 pm

Great update Robro.
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Postby Amaranthine Ali » Wed Sep 06, 2006 2:34 pm

Cooool....
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Postby Forse the Deathmaster » Wed Sep 06, 2006 2:34 pm

Awsome update buddy! i wonder who that girl is...
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Postby robro » Wed Sep 06, 2006 2:58 pm

Meanwhile frost and pyro had reached the city of megavile and where quite lost but then they suddenly saw a boy in a lab coat and some white robot’s trying to heal 3 girls
Pyro: hey look
Frost: how strange.
They walk to the boy and ask:
Frost: hey something wrong?
Dexter: are you blind? Cant you see that they are severely injured?
Pyro: anyway we can help?
Dexter: yes if you could find something to cool them down id be grateful
Frost: that I can help you with
Frost began to channel energy in her hand’s as they began to glow brightly blue and then she raised them in the air and made a sort of cave that incased Dexter, the ppg , the medbot’s , pyro and herself
Frost: that better?
Dexter now is shivering but a small grateful smile appeared on his face
Dexter: yes, thank you very much
Dexter: I wonder what happened to utonium though, I find it strange he has not showed up already seeing he is technically their dad
Frost:That’s strange
Pyro: indeed….shal we check it out?
Dexter: if you want but I wil need you *point’s at frost* to keep this ice thing up long enugh for the girls to rececover
Frost: okay I will but I can leave this place and keep it up at the same time so no worry
Pyro: let’s go!!
Frost: okay lead the way
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Postby dark psyghost » Wed Sep 06, 2006 3:00 pm

Great update Robro.
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Postby robro » Wed Sep 06, 2006 3:15 pm

Meanwhile frost and pyro had reached the city of megavile and where quite lost but then they suddenly saw a boy in a lab coat and some white robot’s trying to heal 3 girls
Pyro: hey look
Frost: how strange.
They walk to the boy and ask:
Frost: hey something wrong?
Dexter: are you blind? Cant you see that they are severely injured?
Pyro: anyway we can help?
Dexter: yes if you could find something to cool them down id be grateful
Frost: that I can help you with
Frost began to channel energy in her hand’s as they began to glow brightly blue and then she raised them in the air and made a sort of cave that incased Dexter, the ppg , the medbot’s , pyro and herself
Frost: that better?
Dexter now is shivering but a small grateful smile appeared on his face
Dexter: yes, thank you very much
Dexter: I wonder what happened to utonium though, I find it strange he has not showed up already seeing he is technically their dad
Frost:That’s strange
Pyro: indeed….shal we check it out?
Dexter: if you want but I wil need you *point’s at frost* to keep this ice thing up long enugh for the girls to rececover
Frost: okay I will but I can leave this place and keep it up at the same time so no worry
Pyro: let’s go!!
Frost: okay lead the way


At that time the girl had seperated herself from the building and had set it on fire just for fun
But before that she had taken a random peson from it and sucked it’s blood with her bloody teeth
Girl: this dimention is much more fun then mine, I get to blow thing’s up feed and burn stuff and no one to stop me!!….but that wil not last I think
But then a slightly angered boy voice from behind her sayd:
Voice: indeed it wil not last as your going along with us
The girl turned around and she saw a boy with a red cap and a red rrb uniform
Girl:you and what army?
Boy: you got some atitude theire….who do you think you are?
Girl: my name is Antonia but what’s your’s?
Boy: the name is brick and your going with me wenever you want it or not
Antonia: and then do test’s on me? Not going to happen.
Brick: then I wil have to take you by force
Antonia then fired a bold of lightning at brick and blasted him into the burning bilding
Brick: okay this wil not be as eazy as I toght at first
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Postby dark psyghost » Wed Sep 06, 2006 3:19 pm

Great update Robro.
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Postby robro » Wed Sep 06, 2006 3:21 pm

thank you dark

i think i never have whriten a story this fast
anyway good night il see you tomorow
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Postby last_man_standing » Wed Sep 06, 2006 4:52 pm

All right !!!!!! :devil: Great update
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Postby Amaranthine Ali » Thu Sep 07, 2006 3:46 am

Good. Cool update.
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Postby Forse the Deathmaster » Thu Sep 07, 2006 6:46 am

Great update Robro!
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Postby robro » Thu Sep 07, 2006 9:02 am

thank you all for commenting
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Postby Amaranthine Ali » Thu Sep 07, 2006 12:24 pm

You're welcome. Waiting in antcipation on what is going to happen next. ^_^;
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Postby robro » Thu Sep 07, 2006 12:26 pm

this one might be a slight shock



Meanwhile pyro and frost are in for a shock as they walk into the lab of the proffesor
Pyro: oh my god
Frost: im going to be sick
They had good reason to be discusted as the proffesor was nothing more then a very mangled corpse…….
Frost: WHO DID THIS?
???: i did……..or actualy YOU did it
frost and pyro turn around to see a boy with a red/black judo suit made of a strange material, he had cyan eye’s and dark blue hair
frost and pyro at the same time: WHO THE **** ARE YOU?
???: I am you and I am no one, I am crazy I am smart, and now im going to rip you apart!!
With that the boy blasted at in the direction of pyro and frost but they doged to the left and the right
???: that was not a smart move….
After having sayed that the boy held his hand’s up and splited into a red haired girl in a black judo suit with a red belt around it, and a blue boy in a white judo suit with a light blue band around it’s suit
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Postby Amaranthine Ali » Thu Sep 07, 2006 12:30 pm

lol Now that is kinda funny. But who would ??? be?
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Postby Forse the Deathmaster » Thu Sep 07, 2006 12:33 pm

Okay...that was odd! But awsome update Robro!
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Postby Amaranthine Ali » Thu Sep 07, 2006 12:35 pm

That was what I was thinking forse. But its a good update anyhow.
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Postby Elend-X » Thu Sep 07, 2006 1:10 pm

I just read your story... It's really awesome!
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