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Re: robro.the strange man.fast and short update's(updated)

Postby robro » Mon Aug 28, 2006 2:39 am

for the moment the parts i made wont have fight's.......but im planing to make some

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no fight's.......yet



Meanwhile back at the in the ppg home buttercup had calmed down and bubbles had woken up and blossom had
Utonium: so that’s what happened
Blossom: as far as I can tell yes
Utoniom: buttercup what did you see?
Buttercup tells of the none existent eye’s and face without emotion
Professor utoniom is quite shoked but when he hears about the marking’s on the cape…..
Utonium: WHAT!?!?!



Back at Brisbane’s office
Butch: YOU WANT US TO CATCH THAT MAN!?!?!?
Brisbane: I GAVE YOU A DIRECT ORDER
Butch:*grumble's*...yes sir
Brick: with all do respect sir but i don't think we can do this on our own
Brisbane: yes you can given the right equipment
Brisbane:take what you think you'l need but only take what you can carry
brick yes sir
all 3 the rrb fly off to megavile...ecuiped with some horific weapon's....to fight a horific enemy
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Postby emblaze » Mon Aug 28, 2006 2:55 am

i'm shoock up too from the mans face... i don't like horor tipe anything... anyway they were good updates...
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Postby last_man_standing » Fri Sep 01, 2006 5:13 pm

Cool update
obviosely this guy is scary as hell
I wouldt go after him being the coward I am
If you go after him your probaly retatred
wait I know a better way of saying it
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=91MtHvcespM
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Postby dark psyghost » Fri Sep 01, 2006 5:26 pm

Great updates Robro.
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Re: robro.the strange man.fast and short update's(updated)

Postby robro » Fri Sep 01, 2006 5:33 pm

thank's
and do to some stupid mistake's from my side i cant update until wensday
(im going to take out the fast part of the title...i think)
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Re: robro.the strange man.short update's(updated)

Postby robro » Sun Sep 03, 2006 6:12 am

meanwhile the rrb are still searching for the strange man…until…
boomer: hey look over there
brick: yep that’s him
butch: wat are we waiting for?
Brick: agreed, RRB ATTACK

Butch fly’s with enormous speed’s and charges a super powered punch
Brick fire’s a burst of head sized energy blasts
Boomer charges and fire’s a human sized energy blast
These attacks are all aimed at the strange man and simontaniosly hit and create a huge dust cloud making it hard to see

Butch suddenly get’s hit by something and is trown out of the dust cloud and into a bilding
Suddenly a huge blast of blue energy hit’s brick
And a burst of red energy shot’s hit’s boomer and both get trown into the same bilding as brick and when the fog clear’s….

rrb : NO WAY!!!

The man was still standing theire and was seemingly unharmed and around him the faint remain’s of a grey energy shield is disappearing

The rrb recover from the atack’s they indured and fly up, look at eachother and nod
Brick: RRB TRIANGLE CANNON ATACK
They all fly into a trangle formation and 3 lines of energy with theire signature color are poined to the middle of the triangle and they form a huge ball of energy they then all grab something that look’s like a big cannon and somehow the enormous ball of energy is sucked into it and a small red energy blast is fired at the piece of rope,igniting it and fireing the cannon but the cannon strangly fire’s something that look’s like 3 masive lightning strike’s
But when it hit’s the man a huge explotion followes and blast the rrb thrue about 40 bilding’s and 2 mounains
Suddenly a enormous grey blast hit’s the rrb and before they can do anything they are K.O. ed and the last thing that they see is the –completely unharmed- strange man in front of them and some burning letter’s made of blood that spelled:

“LEAVE ME ALONE”

10 second’s after they where K.O. ed the rrb where teleported back to base and each one was put in a glass tube that was about a meter in diameter filled with green fuid
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Postby dark psyghost » Sun Sep 03, 2006 6:16 am

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Re: robro.the strange man.short update's(updated)

Postby robro » Sun Sep 03, 2006 6:23 am

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Postby last_man_standing » Sun Sep 03, 2006 3:58 pm

hhmmmmm,he fought back...good for him ^_^
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Re: robro.the strange man.short update's(updated)

Postby robro » Sun Sep 03, 2006 4:17 pm

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Postby CLESTE » Sun Sep 03, 2006 10:56 pm

Cool Robro I really like it :) <3
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Re: robro.the strange man.short update's(updated)

Postby robro » Mon Sep 04, 2006 10:37 am

thank you
im glad you all liked it......

here is a very short one

meanwhile the ppg had returned the piece of cloth to the professor and just when they had placed it under a special microscope reinforced to take the weight of the cloth they heared a very very loud explotion and the caractistic sound of a energy beam….but this one was louder then they ever heard
bubbles: what was that?
Blossom: I don’t know but it sound’s powerfull
Buttercup: what are we waiting for??
Blossom: sometime’s she is just a bit too reckless yeah I guess your right….let’s go!!
The ppg fly off to the source of the disturbance just as the professor discover’s something most catastropthic
Utonium: so it is true….. this is not good not good at all

sorry for it being so short but im going to update this part with another part(aka im gona "glue" another part to it later on)
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Postby dark psyghost » Mon Sep 04, 2006 11:29 am

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Re: robro.the strange man.short update's(updated)

Postby robro » Mon Sep 04, 2006 11:41 am

thank's
ohh and anyone who has a character that he would like to be in this, just pm me and i wil see if i can add him/her into the story
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Re: robro.the strange man.fanart(accepting custom carr's)

Postby robro » Tue Sep 05, 2006 2:35 pm

Meanwhile the ppg had reached the site of the explotion just in time to evade the gigantic beam of energy and see the rrb get k.o and then disappear as they look to see the sorce of the attack they are even more shoked then they already where
Buttercup: what the hell?
Bubble’s: :shock:
Blossom: what in the name of-
Before blossom could finish the man looked in the direction of the girl’s and blossom looked directly into his gaze


and before the girl’s could do anything the man raised a arm and aimed it at the girl’s and out of thin air a stream of hard light hit them with 2 time’s the speed of light and blasting them trugh about 20 bilding’s and they landed right infront of the lab of the professor and they where all in about the same shape as the rrb

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Meanwhile in a remote corner of the woods on the edge of town a girl and a boy where walking and talking to each other when all of the sudden…..
Boy: huh?!?
Girl: what is it pyro?
Pyro: FROST TAKE COVER!!!!

At the moment he said that he pushed her to the right and was blasted back for about 1 km crashing into many trees on the way
Frost: PYRO!!!
Frost blasted off and tried to catch up with pyro and when she did she blasted him out of the way of the invisible force but semi-freezing him in the progress
Frost made a blue aura appear on her right hand and flew to pyro, laid her right hand on him and began melting the ice with the aura, freeing pyro in the progress
Pyro: tttttthhhannks ssssssssssiiiissss
Frost: heat yourself up idiot
Pyro: ffffffiiiinnnne
A red flaming aura began to envelop pyro and his body temperature raised itself up to the normal temperature
Frost: thanks for saving me brother
Pyro: and thank you for-
Suddenly a grey flash occurred and the strange man stood before them and aimed his right arm at them
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Postby dark psyghost » Tue Sep 05, 2006 2:42 pm

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Re: robro.the strange man.fanart(accepting custom carr's)

Postby robro » Tue Sep 05, 2006 3:13 pm

thank's

DAMM THOSE KEYBORD BUG'S
sorry but my key bord is bugging
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Postby last_man_standing » Tue Sep 05, 2006 3:46 pm

Awesome update
So you decided to use'em.............Bad Ass
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Re: robro.the strange man.fanart(accepting custom carr's)

Postby conti » Tue Sep 05, 2006 7:36 pm

very nice robro, can't wait for the next update.
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Re: robro.the strange man.fanart(accepting custom carr's)

Postby robro » Wed Sep 06, 2006 8:46 am

wow. how did it get this poulair??
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Postby Forse the Deathmaster » Wed Sep 06, 2006 8:59 am

Hey Robro sorry for the lack of comments lately...
Anyway awsome updates! Great job!
About that custom char thing...I wanted to suggest some of my chars but some of them do not belong in here...
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Re: robro.the strange man.fanart(accepting custom carr's)

Postby robro » Wed Sep 06, 2006 12:44 pm

you can alway's edit them a bit
and beside's.....it's a whole difrent universe so they can belong here if you want

and don't wory about that "lack of coment's" thing, it's okay im not mad or somthing like that

Added after 3 hours 34 minutes:

Grey fire came out of the hand along with –what seemed to be- a beam of grey ice
Frost: ICE SHEILD
Pyro: FLAMING DOME
Pyro was protected by a dome of fire that was just big enugh for him and frost had a sphere shaped shild of cristal clear ice all around her

But strangly the atacks never hit the shield’s as they stoped just before the shield’s and merged into letters made of grey ice and flaming in grey fire, the word’s spelled:
LEAVE ME ALONE

Frost and pyro just gaped at the words(stuning affect of the eye’s) and then pyro shouted
Pyro: THAT BASTERD
Frost: CALM DOWN HOT HEAD
*discusion between them that im not going to whrite up*
frost: ANY WAY I think that this is meant as a warning
pyro did not say anthing….he was to bizy thinking how he was going to kil, torcher and humiliate the strange man
frost got prity fed up with this and slaped him in the face and pyro droped right down to earth…..after having flown thrugh about 10 tree’s and into a mountan
frost dashed up next to him and sayed
frost: now just let’s go and find some village to rest up okay?
Pyro: fine!
Frost helped pyro up and they waked back to the letter’s that where still threre but fanished after about 10 seconds after they came back to them
Pyro: ooookkkkaaayyyyyy
When they walked a bit they came to a sloap of about 45 degree’s
Pyro:……mind if I speed up the pace a bit?
Frost: by all mean’s do so
Pyro held his hand’s up in front of him and a sckate board, put it in front of him ,stood on it and then began to “slide” down the hill leaving a trail of fire behind in his wake
Frost just began to run to the sloap and her feet began to glow with a bleue aura and leave behind a trail of bleue ice and as she reached the sloap she asumed the stance that snowboarder’s use on theire boards and she bgan to slide down with amaysing speed’s leaving behind a trail of ice in her wake
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Postby dark psyghost » Wed Sep 06, 2006 1:13 pm

Good update Robro. But don't mention things you are not going to write up.
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Postby Forse the Deathmaster » Wed Sep 06, 2006 1:14 pm

Excellent update Robro!
Maybe i could suggest Bellerephond as a char...
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Postby robro » Wed Sep 06, 2006 1:35 pm

dark psyghost wrote:don't mention things you are not going to write up.

huh??


thanks for the comments forse and dark
Forse the Deathmaster wrote:Excellent update Robro!
Maybe i could suggest Bellerephond as a char...

belle- who?
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