Man, I went back and read more of your stuff. Talk about amazing writing style--your scribblets make every word work for its bread, so to speak. Nothing is wasted, but there isn't a sense of thrifty writing. Rather, reading it feels like every sentence has a world of detail to fall into, and the best part is you don't overextend anything. There's the consistently effective diction and descriptions that always seem to be just long enough to stir the senses, but never longer, topped with your seemingly innate ability to always show and never tell.
If you were to ask me for an example of that writing, off the top of my head, I'd pick this one:
Tuor wrote:...As my front turns damp and the puddle starts to taste metallic, I think of my delusion, and wonder. I wonder if I ever mattered, if my gestures mattered, if my outpourings mattered, or if she had just gone along with it all the while, and then gotten tired of me and found an excuse. The puddle starts to turn salty....
...She wraps herself around me, smelling like mandarine, and bergamot, and fresh soap, and I fall asleep listening to her breathe.
Tantalizing little tidbits. Being able to write around those boring descriptions of "I'm bleeding," "I'm crying," and "She smells nice" is a subtle talent, but immensely enjoyable when employed effectively.
Much creep on this thread now. Much creep on your RP posts. Very writing. Such fancy.
Edit: I know I'm singing the praises a bit much and not pointing out any mistakes to fix and improve, but it's because I'm not skilled enough as a reader to catch mistakes of that level of subtlety (because I don't see any glaring mistakes anywhere), so I can only offer honest compliments. If I do see any issues, rest assured I'd bring it up, not mindlessly parrot "Amazing, amazing!" ad nauseam