Thank you for your support guys! You're right i shouldn't give up. I’ll continue but i have to make some changes on where this is going. So since the last update was awful i decided to rewrite it. Don't worry I’ll post a new update as well. Note: This version of the last update is totally different from what it used to be.
Chapter 4 part 6:
The shadow (The one I rewrote)
Alex was stunned. Fear could be seen deep in his widened eyes. He felt an ice-cold breath next to his face. He felt a murderous intent. He felt the cold, pale fingers of the creature behind him slowly grabbing the back of his neck. The grip of the creature tightened. There was a sudden rash of wind. The creature looked down at his hand which was, a second ago holding Alex's neck. Alex had vanished. "Still too slow." a voice sounded behind the creature. The creature slightly raised his head showing a slight sign of annoyance by this phrase. The boy with the short black hair turned around finally revealing its face. He was wearing pitch black T-shirt and trousers that made him look like he was one with the shadows of the now dark room. "I hate it when you say that." he said. The boy's skin was pale making him look almost as a ghost. His brown eyes stared intensively and angrily at Alex that was standing in frond him. "What do you want?" Alex said coldly. "A race." "Not again..." "You will race me..." "Please! Leave me alone..." If you don't do it i shall kill everyone in this city. And with my speed. They will be dead before they know it." There was a moment of silence between the boys. Suddenly a loud boom was sounded and Alex had vanished. "Good! But lets make this quick. I don’t have a lot of time." said the pale boy and with a burst of tremendous speed vanished as well.
The world around him had turned into a blur as Alex raced in the roads of Megaville. The pale boy suddenly appeared next to him and the two begun to run side by side. "For the one that is supposed to be the fastest master alive you are not running so fast." he said with a smile. Alex jumped over an incoming car landing next to the running boy. "I don't want anyone to get hurt." Alex said. The boy's smile faded. "Then it isn't a race." he said and turned his head to his left to look at Alex. "Maybe you need a reason to run." "What?" The boy vanished in a burst of speed. He appeared in frond of Life holding a car with his left hand. Life heard screams from inside the car. "Shade...What the hell are you doing?" Shade just smiled and threw the vehicle towards Life. Alex began to skid on the ground in order to avoid the large projectile creating a trail of dust behind him. The car hurled inches above him. Alex was able to see a terrified face thru the windows of the car before the vehicle flew above him. Alex finally stopped skidding and came to a stop. He was now laying on the ground looking shocked. There was a loud boom from behind him. He was now breathing heavily. He slowly raised his head to look at his opponent. Anger burned inside him. His yellow eyes slowly begun to change in colour. They began to glow with a multicolour light. Shade smiled once more. "That's better. Now come and get me." he said and vanished. Alex yelled in anger and vanished as well. He was now outraged.
"Many bolts of shadow were heading my way. I quickly jumped in the air trying to avoid them. He threw a couple of more bolts at me and i countered them with bolts of light. As always our shadow and light attacks cancelled each other. I landed next to him and we exchanged some incredibly fast punches and kicks. I'm faster than him but since he has more strength than me i was loosing. I jumped back to get some space so i could counter attack. We both put all of our power in our right legs and we attacked at the same time. Our legs met and broke. Mine broke in fifteen different places. I try to kick him with my free leg but he caught it and broke in his palm. We were already tired from running in such high speeds. So i gathered all the power i had left and used the ultimate speed attack. Then soul found me and...Hold on..." Alex paused. He looked down at his bandaged legs. Forse and Soul looked at him with curiosity. "I think that I’ve recovered enough energy to heal." he said. "Yeah. Me too." Forse answered. “Me, too.” Soul exclaimed. "Hey buddy. Take these useless bandages off me so i can heal properly." Alex said. Victor slowly approached his blond friend and removed the bandages from his knees. The knees were still bloody and the bone could be seen. Alex closed his eyes so he could focus all the power he had recovered so he could heal. Suddenly the bones on his legs begun to grow back. As the bones grew nerves and muscles appeared around them. The flesh on his knees begun to stretch and cover the muscles and nerves. With in ten seconds the bone had formed his leg again. In eleven seconds the muscles had covered the bone. And in twelve seconds the flesh stretched over the muscles and Alex had his legs back. "Much better." he said and got up from his bed. He looked up to see the cuts and bruises on his two friends heal quickly, the same way that his legs had. Soul's broken and deformed arm begun to find its shape again and Forse's broken ribs slowly got back on their place. Suddenly angry voices begun to sound from outside the small room. The three masters swiftly directed their attention to the door.
End of chapter 4 part 6: The shadow.
I have been looking everywhere to find a picture that showed something that looked a bit like Wraith's weapons, his chains. I wanted to find something better but this was all i could find. If you played Prince of Persia the two thrones you should already know how his weapons look like. If you haven't played that game then look at the chain in this picture. Note: Wraith has one on each hand.
I’m writing it now! Just finish with this one and the second one will be here in a couple of hours.