cool fic, its kinda addicting, keep it up!

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my fanfic:With Power Comes Responsibility, or Chaos chapter 14, the finale is up, check it out

thanks!

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My first fanfic-Chapter 14: viewtopic.php?t=11453
A Model's Diary!:Ingrid Lavinge:Translated by Tsunade:Comedy:
viewtopic.php?t=14977
Teen Titans, you'll never be forgotten!!!

I finally got around to reading your fic, nice job I'm really liking it so far

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thanks i haven't finished reading yours. i'll go now

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My first fanfic-Chapter 14: viewtopic.php?t=11453
A Model's Diary!:Ingrid Lavinge:Translated by Tsunade:Comedy:
viewtopic.php?t=14977
Teen Titans, you'll never be forgotten!!!

woah Inuyasha and Teen Titans Collision Course...this is interesting

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"Nothing else could love me, not even... especially not me.
Or is that just a lie the Dark Passenger tells me?" - Dexter

Chapter 4- Bad Feeling…

Meanwhile in a dark castle floating in a lake
“HAHAHAHAHA….” A maniacal female voice laughed fading
“What’s so funny??” two boys, enclosed in a large metal box, asked at the same time with a really angry face. One of them is green-skinned with a purple costume and the other one has blonde hair and orange costume.
“Now now... what’s with those faces?” She said and an evil chuckle came out from her mouth (of course) “You won’t suffer, that, I promise” she said leaving the big dark room.
“Pfft” the blond-haired boy complained “I want to kick her butt” he said kicking and punching trying to get out of the metal box he was in. “Aaah!! Kage bunshin no jutsu! (Shadow Replication Technique)” the boy said and smoke appeared on his left side. The smoke cleared and another boy appeared (the same as the original).
The blond-haired boy extended his left hand toward the replication. The replication started to do a motion with his hands and a blue sphere appeared. “Rasengan!!” the boy yelled and he extended his hand toward the glass in front of him but it didn’t do anything not even a single scratch. The boy rebounded backwards and hurt himself a little. “Damn it!” the boy complained. It didn’t have any effect?!? the boy thought surprised
“Hey clever boy! YOU HAVE TRIED THAT MORE THAN 3 TIMES!!!!” the green-skinned boy yelled
“Shut up you…!!” he stopped as he noticed a woman with long hair entered but she was in the shadows. Then a guy entered grabbing a boy unconscious.
The boys noticed that they were talking. Then the guy, who was grabbing a boy, gave the boy to the woman and left. The woman started walking toward a desk full of small and big buttons at that time the green-skinned boy and the blond-haired boy saw the boy she was grabbing he has black hair and a short type of kimono, bound by a black sash, with cloth around his bare feet and wrists. She pushed a silver button and some robotic arms grabbed the two boys inside the large metal box and the woman threw the boy she was grabbing into the large metal box. “You have a new companion” she said and the robotic arms dropped the two boys. The woman leaved the big dark room.
“Naruto, we need to get out of here.” The green-skinned boy said standing up and walking toward the black-haired boy
“Huh? Beast Boy…?” Naruto said
“I have a bad feeling about this” BB said worried

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My first fanfic-Chapter 14: viewtopic.php?t=11453
A Model's Diary!:Ingrid Lavinge:Translated by Tsunade:Comedy:
viewtopic.php?t=14977
Teen Titans, you'll never be forgotten!!!

they were bound to turn up in your fanfic
great job

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Lily: few people here are worthy of my rape

Waiting for the next chapter/Chapters to make a real comment.

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nice work! keep it up!

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my fanfic:With Power Comes Responsibility, or Chaos chapter 14, the finale is up, check it out

Great and well clair text, great job, keep this up, Tsunade!

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PPGD Downfall in the Future, Chapter 0-1

thank you all!
i never thought it would be liked that much

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My first fanfic-Chapter 14: viewtopic.php?t=11453
A Model's Diary!:Ingrid Lavinge:Translated by Tsunade:Comedy:
viewtopic.php?t=14977
Teen Titans, you'll never be forgotten!!!

great update

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WhAT?! Naruto's rasengan didn't work!? hmmm... great update

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Chapter 5-Konoha Village

Back to Raven and Sango

“Sooo, you’re from the future… from the future Japan?” Sango said since all the trip was quite
“No. I’m from United States, why?” Raven said wondering why she asked that.
“Well you know about the girl from the future I told you earlier. She’s from future Japan and she never mention anything about flying people” She explained
“And your friends, where are they?”
“After we defeated Naraku, we went to future Japan with Kagome, the girl. We were Inuyasha a half demon half human, Miroku a prevent monk, Shippo a little fox, Kagome, Kirara and I. I married Miroku…”
“But didn’t you said he was a pervert monk??” Interrupted Raven ( )
“…yeeeah” Sango said a little embarrassed
“But you still love him. I understand” Raven said with a smile
Sango smiled back. “Well to put it short they all are in the future Japan. I’m here because Kohaku was kidnapped and I saw Herald heading to this place…” she stopped

The 3 of them stopped and landed on the ground. They saw a big village and at the end of it some faces carved in a mountain. They entered the village and looked around it. The saw some children running and one of them run into Raven and fell back.

“Konohamaru-kun!” a girl and a boy yelled while they were running
“What the… who…?” Konohamaru stopped as he saw Raven scared “Who…who are you?”

Before Raven could say any word. The girl and the boy that were running catch up to Konohamaru. They grabbed him and ran back “The Hokage wants to talk to you” and they left

“Hokage??” said Sango and Raven
“Were are we?” asked Sango
“As if I know” answered Raven
“I’m hungry” Sango said and noticed a sign that said Ramen Ichiraku “Ah! Ramen, come on Raven I’m starved” they entered


Meanwhile

“Konohamaru!!” A beautiful woman yelled
She had long blond hair, big breast and brown eyes. She was wearing a vest with the word gamble on its back. She was sitting on a desk. Next to her was another woman with a pig on her hands. She had short black hair.
“Yes…” Konohamaru answered knowing what will come but still worried about the girl she saw earlier
“Konohamaru… the woman changed her face from the angry one to the concerned one noticing his worried face …what’s wrong? You look worried” The woman replied
“Well… I am. I saw earlier a young woman with a blue cloak. She seems scary. I don’t think she’s from here. Also there was another young woman next to her with long black hair and a little cat on her arms.” Konohamaru answered
“Genma, Aoba” called the blond-haired woman
Two men appeared and knelled “Godaime-sama?(Fifth Hokage)” they both answered
“Find those two and bring them here”she ordered
“Yes” And the two men left

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My first fanfic-Chapter 14: viewtopic.php?t=11453
A Model's Diary!:Ingrid Lavinge:Translated by Tsunade:Comedy:
viewtopic.php?t=14977
Teen Titans, you'll never be forgotten!!!

I am confused but interested

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Lily: few people here are worthy of my rape

Great update Tsunade

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Chapter 6-Misunderstanding, The Fifth Hokage

Back to Raven and Sango

“Saaay what???” Sango shouted in disbelief “What kind of money you’re talking about?”
Raven grabbed her “Look we’re definitely not eating here” She said to the employee “Come on Sango” Raven pulled her out
“Geez, I’m starved” Sango complained
“I think we can’t eat in this village” Raven said
“There’s gonna be some…” she stopped since Raven created a dark barrier. “What…?”
All the people near them scared and ran away shouting.
“Intruders!!” Two men shouted (Genma and Aoba)
Raven took out the barrier and saw the two men.
“Intruders?? Ok this is a misunder…” Sango didn’t have time to finished since Aoba threw some kunai at her. She dodged them doing a back flip. Kirara transformed. He then threw another one with an exploding tag she dodged it but noticed the tag. “Oh no!”
She jumped but it wasn’t on time and flew away but Kirara caught her.
Raven and Genma were exchanging punches both of them dodging each others’. Genma jumped back and threw a kunai with an exploding tag. Raven covered her with a dark barrier. The tag exploded and smoke appeared. Genma landed and looked but a dark fist appeared and punched Genma really hard on the face causing him to fly a few meters. Raven flew up and grabbed him.

“Aaaaaaah!” some people were shouting
“Tsunade-sama, there’s people out there screaming and running” the black-haired woman said looking through a window
“Huh?” Tsunade standed up and looked “What’s going on?” she asked
“Maybe is those intruders” the woman replied
“Let’s go Shizune” Tsunade said leaving the room

Sango was on Kirara’s back going toward Aoba “Hiraikotsu!” she yelled throwing her boomerang to Aoba. He dodged it. “Gotcha!” said Sango swinging her dagger to him. He moved but she was able to do a scratch on his left arm. Some blood fell as he landed on the ground. Raven landed too having Genma caught in her dark arm she created. She created another arm and grabbed Aoba.

“Ok now you’re going to listen to me” Sango said
At that time someone threw some kunai at Raven but Sango blocked them with her boomerang. “Now what?” Sango complained. She looked up to where the kunai came from. She saw two female figures standing on a roof. “Two more, just great!”
“Hey you” Tsunade said landing on the ground “Who are you two?”
“Oh no! I asked first” Sango said really pissed of “Why these two men attacked us? We are not intruders like they said” pointing to Genma and Aoba. “And who are you?!?”
“Sango calm down” said Raven
“Calm Down, Calm Down?!?! Raven don’t tell me to calm down. My brother was kidnapped, I’m hungry and we can’t eat here AND these guys came from no where and attacked us and you’re telling me to calm down?!?” She shouted
“Yes” Raven answered calmly
Her brother was kidnapped?? “I guess this was a misunderstanding” Tsunade said
Raven let out the two men and cured Aoba’s wound
and she can cure too? Who are these people? “Who are you?” Tsunade asked
“I’m Raven, this is Sango and this is Kirara.” she answered “And you are?
“I’m the Hokage of this village, Tsunade-sama, and this is Shizune and Tonton” she answered
Raven stayed quite with an eyebrow raised
“Hokage??” asked Sango
“Hokage is the most powerful ninja in this village” explained Shizune
“And the one who protects the village and the villagers” said Tsunade “Sorry about all this. Genma, Aoba you can leave now” she said and they left
“Hokage-sama!!” A man with a scar on his face shouted as he was running toward Tsunade.
“Huh?”
The man stopped breathing heavily “We got news fromNaruto!” he said
Naruto “Thanks Iruka.” She was going to leave but stopped “Raven, Sango come with me.”
Raven and Sango looked at each other and started following her.

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My first fanfic-Chapter 14: viewtopic.php?t=11453
A Model's Diary!:Ingrid Lavinge:Translated by Tsunade:Comedy:
viewtopic.php?t=14977
Teen Titans, you'll never be forgotten!!!

I am interested
not totally sure what goes on but still

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Lily: few people here are worthy of my rape

awesome update Tsunade

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You have to have seen naruto to understand, great job Tsunade

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Great chapter, Tsunade!
I will be waiting for the next!

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PPGD Downfall in the Future, Chapter 0-1

It's annoying not being able to watch Naruto
until August 22nd

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Lily: few people here are worthy of my rape

guys i have a question:
do you have any comment,suggestion or something to complain about my fic?

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My first fanfic-Chapter 14: viewtopic.php?t=11453
A Model's Diary!:Ingrid Lavinge:Translated by Tsunade:Comedy:
viewtopic.php?t=14977
Teen Titans, you'll never be forgotten!!!

Chapter 7- Naruto and BB’s news

They arrived to Tsunade’s office

“Ok Iruka,spill” said Tsunade
“Yes. Just one could come back” Iruka said
“Who?” asked Tsunade
“Raido” Iruka answered
“And the ANBU members?” Tsunade the asked
“…” Iruka just couldn’t answer. He didn’t know the ANBU where in this too
“Kotetsu!” Tsunade called
“Yes?”
“Call Anko right away” she ordered and he left “she should know”
“What is this all about?!?” asked Sango with her face green since she was starving ( )
“Oh I forgot! You’re hungry right?” teased Tsunade
“Tsunade!” Shizune said like saying-don't do that-
“Yes, Yes. Izumo!” Tsunade called
“Yes?” he answered
“Bring food to this young woman” Tsunade said pointing at Sango who was staring at her.
Suddenly they heard something “Make two, I’m hungry too” Raven said holding her stomach and Sango chuckled
“What do you want ma’ am? Izumo asked to Sango
“Whatever! Just make it fast!!” Sango shouted. If she could she would probably eat him
(lol Sango pisses off when she’s angry)
“Woah! Lady calm down” Izumo said with a terrified face taking a few steps back “and you?” He asked to Raven
“Same here” Raven said

Izumo left. At that time the 7 (including Ton Ton, Shizune’s pig, and Kirara) of them started to hear near some footsteps. Someone opened the door. It was another woman with violet hair.

“I’m here. I came as fast as I could. It was an emergency… right? Anko said and noticed Raven and Sango. “Who are they?”
Izumo came with the food and gave it to Raven and Sango. They started eating
“That’s not important right now! The ANBU have news from Naruto??” she asked already worried
“Yes! Anko nodded “They said that they saw him unconscious on the ground near a lake. But before they could reach him someone attacked them. That one of ‘em was a woman with short black hair…
could it be…? Raven thought
… and the other one had a blue cloak” Anko explained
blue cloak Sango and Raven looked at each other. Tsunade noticed
“Did they followed them?” Tsunade asked
“They couldn’t. There was a barrier or something and they were all out of chakra too. They are in the hospital now but they need medical treatment.” Anko suggested
“I see…” Tsunade said
“But at least we know Naruto is alive. That’s all that matters now, right?” Anko said with a big smile trying to cheer her up
“Yeah that’s right” Shizune cheered
“I guess you’re right” Tsunade said smiling “Oh! Sorry. Sango, Raven this is Anko, Anko this is Sango and Raven and that cat Kirara, Sango’s pet” Tsunade introduced them
“Hello! Nice to meet you”Anko said smiling
“Nice to meet you too” Raven and Sango said
“They’re looking for someone too” Tsunade said
“Now that you mention it. I remember the ANBU member saying something about a green guy. But I can’t remember exactly what.” Anko said
“Beast Boy?? Raven said a little relieved
“Shizune go to the hospital and treat the ANBU members. Anko and Iruka you can leave now. Thank you!” Tsunade said
“Yes” the 3 of them nodded and left.

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My first fanfic-Chapter 14: viewtopic.php?t=11453
A Model's Diary!:Ingrid Lavinge:Translated by Tsunade:Comedy:
viewtopic.php?t=14977
Teen Titans, you'll never be forgotten!!!

great update but the black text is very hard to read.

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