Dark Psyghost's: Haunting past: PG-13: Fanfic: C42 Pt6

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Postby dark psyghost » Mon Jun 19, 2006 6:43 pm

thanks for the comment Tetra-Holy
and yes a hedgehog it is a shadow version of metal sonic from sonic heroes.
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Postby Forse the Deathmaster » Tue Jun 20, 2006 5:14 am

Nice!
Keep going!! ^_^
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Postby dark psyghost » Tue Jun 20, 2006 11:44 am

Thanks for the comment Forse the Deathmaster

Added after 3 hours 43 minutes:

well here is the next update.

Chapter 8
Part 6: Final preparations.
“Finally I have been activated again.” Said the metallic hedgehog.
Then his communicator activated.
“Tetra-Holy report.” Said Vexus.
“Yes I am here queen Vexus, what do you ask of me?” Said Tetra-Holy.
“You will go to Black Eden as the new commander of my Dark star council.” Said Vexus.
“I will do that.” Said Tetra-Holy and he turned off his communicator.
He flew up crashing through the rubble of Mandark’s exploded laboratory.
A half an hour Tetra-Holy arrived at Black Eden.
“Zilla I am in command now.” Said Tetra-Holy.
“Yes sir Holy.” Said Zilla.
“Zilla I want to speak to the guards who killed Dr.X.” Said Tetra-Holy.
“I will send them in immediately.” Said Zilla as he walked out of the command room.
A few moments later 5 robot guards walked in.
“So who of you shot Dr.X?” Asked Tetra-Holy.
“We do know sir no of us remember firing at Dr.X.” Said one of guards.
“So do remember anything strange around the time of the shot?” Asked Tetra-Holy.
“No sir.” Said the same guard.
Tetra-Holy walked up to the guard as his red irises lighted up.
“Are you guys sure you don’t remember anything?” Asked Tetra-Holy angry.
“We are pretty sure that there was nothing weird happening around the time that Dr.X got shot.” Said the guard.
Tetra-Holy grabbed the guard his arm and ripped the guard in two pieces.
“So does the rest of you still not remember shooting Dr.X or anything strange around that time.” Said Tetra-Holy.
“Well I remember seeing some black smoke does that count as strange.” Said another guard scared.
“Ok I know enough you can go now and take those pieces of junk with you.” Said Tetra-Holy.
Black smoke it can’t be him can it. Thought Tetra-Holy shocked.

At the Powerpuff after several hours everyone was awake and where planning how to fight Serras.
“Let’s just fight him head on.” Said Buttercup.
“I think we should fight him in groups so that we can switch and rest. That way we wear him down so that Danny and Crovax can get her out of Butch.” Said Blossom.
“Good idea so what groups did you have in mind?” Said Brick.
“Well Maya and Bell is one group and Danny and Crovax will be a group.” Said Blossom.
“Ok then I will team up with you and Bubbles.” Said Buttercup.
“That settles it Boomer in me will be the last group.” Said Brick.
Just after Brick has said that they heard a giant explosion coming from Megaville.
End Chapter 8.

so which group should fight first?
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Postby Forse the Deathmaster » Tue Jun 20, 2006 11:55 am

I am realy curious! But i belive that Brick's group will go first!
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Postby dark psyghost » Tue Jun 20, 2006 3:29 pm

Thanks for the comment Forse the Deathmaster.
i am still thinking about which group will go first
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Postby Tetra-Holy » Tue Jun 20, 2006 4:14 pm

o.O; Black Smoke.

I don't know which ones to go first either lol.

But Nice Updates on your Fan Fiction. Keep up the Good Work, Dark Psy.
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Postby Darkness_calls » Tue Jun 20, 2006 4:16 pm

If you have trouble with choosing then just use dices ;)
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Postby dark psyghost » Tue Jun 20, 2006 4:18 pm

thanks for the Tip DC i will propably do that.
thanks for the comment Tetra-Holy.
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Re: Dark Psyghost's PPGD fanfic"Haunting past"(C9

Postby dark psyghost » Wed Jun 21, 2006 11:18 am

well here is the next update.

Chapter 9
Part 1: Another fight against Serras.
Butch had just used an energy blast to blow up a building in Megaville.
“PowerPuff girls you better show you self quickly or your town will be destroyed.” Yelled Butch.
Butch flew towards a group of fleeing people getting ready to slash with his sword.
Most of the people saw Butch coming and got out of the way but one kept running.
Butch slashed him right above the waist and the part of his body above the cut dropped to the ground.
“Weakling.” Said Butch as he kicked the lower part of the man’s body away.
“Butch stop it right now.” Said Brick landing behind Butch.
“So you have come here to kill me that was a big mistake prepare to die.” Yelled Butch angry.
Butch charged at Brick.
But Butch was hit in the back by a blue energy blast before he reached Brick.
“That is for possessing my brother.” Said Boomer.
“Posses me? She did not posses me she has blessed me with enormous power.” Said Butch.
Brick charged up energy in his hands.
“Red dual spheres.” Said Brick as he threw 2 red energy spheres towards Butch.
Butch cut the spheres in half with his sword and the sword drained the energy of the spheres.
Boomer charged at Butch back and tried to punch Butch in the back.
“Boomer no!” Yelled Bubbles remembering the way Butch blocks physical attacks but it was already too late.
Boomer’s punch was blocked by a gust of dark green smoke and Butch turned around and slashed Boomer upwards across the chest with his sword.
Boomer was launched back and landed a few feet back bleeding heavily from the cut on his chest.
“You bastard you will pay for that. Red anger blades.” Yelled Brick with a tear in his eye and his hands where engulfed by 2 red energy blades.
Brick charged at Butch unleashing a flurry of slashes.
Butch blocked the slashes with his sword and they started a sword fight.
“Bubbles get Boomer too the hospital we will help Brick.” Said Blossom and they flew towards Brick and Butch.
“Ok I will get back as fast as I can.” Said Bubbles and she grabbed Boomer and flew away.
Brick was having trouble blocking the sword slashes of Butch.
“Why did you hold back and did you not kill your brother directly?” Asked Serras.
“I want him to suffer before he dies.” Answered Butch.
Suddenly a pink energy blast came towards Butch his back.
Just before the blast hit Brick jumped back and Butch was hit and skidding a few feet over the ground.
“I thought you could use some help.” Said Blossom.
“Not that I needed help but thanks.” Said Brick and he charged at Butch again.
Buttercup charged up energy in her hands and charged at Butch unleashing a flurry of energy charged punches.
Butch blocked Buttercup her punches using his swords.
Brick unleashed a flurry slashes at Butch and Buttercup jumped back.

Meanwhile Boomer regained consciousness and found himself being carried by Bubbles.
He looked at Bubbles for a while and then he kissed her full on the mouth.
Bubbles stopped being shocked that Boomer kissed her.
End part 1.

Added after 23 minutes:

here is a quick drawing of Kwasandra weilding her black sword.
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Postby Forse the Deathmaster » Wed Jun 21, 2006 11:53 am

Very nice job!
For some reason I have the strange feeling that Butch is to strong to be beaten by those guys! Again, nice!!!
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Postby dark psyghost » Wed Jun 21, 2006 1:03 pm

thanks for the comment Forse the Deathmaster.
and your feeling is right and wrong at the same time but that will become more clearly later in this chapter.
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Re: Dark Psyghost's PPGD fanfic"Haunting past"(C9

Postby dark psyghost » Thu Jun 22, 2006 11:52 am

well here is my next update.

Chapter 9
Part 2: Trouble is lurking.
Before Bubbles could react Boomer fell unconscious again.
Why did he kiss me? Wait a minute… no cooties. Thought Bubbles while she started to fly again.
“Eek cooties.” Yelled Bubbles flying towards the hospital.

Blossom and Buttercup fired a combined energy blast at Butch.
“Green death blast.” Said Butch as he fired a massive green energy blast towards the blast from Blossom and Buttercup.
The two blasts hit each other and exploded creating a cloud of smoke.
“Raging fire slash.” Yelled Brick as he made a cross slash with his blades launching an X formed fire blast towards Butch.
Butch noticed the blast as soon as it came through the smoke cloud and flew upwards to evade it.
Butch his feet where hit sending Butch spinning for a few seconds.
Butch recovered and flew up and spread as he noticed Brick charging at him.
With a beat of his wings Butch launched a air blast towards Brick.
Brick did not see the air blast and was hit and was blasted into the ground creating a small crater.
Butch charged at Blossom and Buttercup and unleashed a flurry of slashes.
Blossom and Buttercup flew backwards evading the slashes with trouble.
Butch suddenly stopped slashing and aimed his hand at Blossom and Buttercup and charged up energy in it.
“Destroy soul.” Said Butch and he started to fire a continues barrage of small green energy beams.
Blossom evaded the barrage and flew away but Buttercup was hit and the barrage was blasting her back.
Buttercup had her arms crossed blocking the blasts but she was getting exhausted by this quickly.
Brick got up and noticed his blades where gone so he charged up energy.
Blossom fired a pink energy blast at Butch.
Butch saw the blasted and aimed his hand towards it and the barrage was now aiming at the blast and Blossom.
Blossom’s blast was quickly destroyed by the barrage and Blossom evaded the barrage.
“Not so fast bitch.” Said Butch as he followed Blossom with his hand.
Blossom had trouble staying ahead of the barrage.
Brick fired a red energy beam towards Butch.
Butch aimed his hand towards the beam.
Brick’s beam blasted through the barrage and blasted Butch into a building.
Blossom, Buttercup and Brick flew towards where Bell and Maya where hiding.

Meanwhile at the hospital Bubbles rushed in carrying Boomer.
“What happened to him?” Asked a nurse.
“He needs help quickly.” Said Bubbles.
“Can I have a doctor here now?” Yelled the nurse towards a pair of doctors.
The doctors run towards them.
“Quick we will bring him to the intensive care.” Said one of the doctors and he grabbed Boomer.
Bubbles flew out of the hospital.
In the shadows Kaine was watching the doctors take Boomer to the intensive care.
So that is one down. Maybe I should see if I can help. Thought Kaine.
End of part 2.
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Postby Comic Kitten » Thu Jun 22, 2006 1:02 pm

Wonderful update! ^_^
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Postby Darkness_calls » Thu Jun 22, 2006 1:17 pm

Greatly done DP

Bubbles is still thinking about cooties lol
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Postby dark psyghost » Thu Jun 22, 2006 1:30 pm

Thanks for the Comment DC and Comic_Kitten
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Postby Forse the Deathmaster » Fri Jun 23, 2006 3:00 am

Great! Awsome description of the battle!
Liked the part were Bubbles complains about cooties. lol
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Postby dark psyghost » Fri Jun 23, 2006 11:06 am

thanks for the comment Forse the Deathmaster

Added after 4 hours 56 minutes:

well here is the next update.

Chapter 9
Part 3: Boomer’s end?
Kaine followed the doctor carrying Boomer.
A few minutes later Kaine returned to the room where Boomer was lying and saw that his vital signs where stabilizing.
“I cannot let you live boy.” Said Kaine as one of his fingeres transformed into a black needle.
Kaine transformed some black smoke in a small solid ball about the same size as tip of the needle.
Kaine heard someone opening the door so he went to the shadow to hide.
When the doctor entered Kaine grabbed him with his hand covering the doctor’s mouth.
Then he injected the needle with the black ball into the doctor’s neck.
“Disassemble.” Said Kaine and retracts the needle like finger.
The black ball just visible through the doctor’s skin goes down his neck and separates into 4 smaller balls that are not visible.
Then suddenly the doctor his fingertips fall from the rest of his hands and they dematerialize before they hit the ground.
Then the same happens to the rest of the doctor his fingers first.
This process quickly was dematerializing the doctor’s arms and then it starts at his toes and his legs follow.
The doctor was still alive and noticed that in a few seconds his body would be gone but he was in to much pain to struggle him self free.
Kaine was holding the doctor head covering his mouth until the doctor was gone.
After this Kaine walked towards Boomer.
But before Kaine could get to Boomer a blue greenish energy blast blasted him out of the room.
Before Kaine could see what or who launched it a second blast was coming towards him.
Kaine jumped out of the way and black smoke appeared around him and Kaine disappeared.

Meanwhile Bell and Maya where firing a white and gold colored energy blasts towards Butch.
“I am getting tired of this.” Yelled Butch as he charged up silver energy.
“Vaige’s vengeance.” Yelled Butch as he launched a giant silver energy blast towards the 2 other blasts and Bell and Maya.
Butch blast went right trough the other 2 blasts and hit Bell and Maya blasting them into the ground.
“Now is our chance that attack must have tired Serras.” Said Nighteyes.
“Ok we go now.” Said Crovax and Nighteyes launched onto Crovax turning them into a black red eyed blob.
“Ok.” Said Danny and he and the blob launched toward Butch his back.
Butch was walking towards the crater where Maya was lying when Danny flew into his body followed by Nighteyes.
Then Butch his body froze.

Inside Butch his mind Danny landed on a field next to him landed Crovax who had now black hair black eyes with red irises and a pair of blade like wings.
Then on the other side of the field a women appeared wearing a green Rowdy Ruff uniform and having long black hair and to black colored angel wing her eyes where also black with red irises.
End part 3.
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Postby Forse the Deathmaster » Fri Jun 23, 2006 12:05 pm

great up date Dark!
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Postby dark psyghost » Fri Jun 23, 2006 12:59 pm

Thanks Forse the Deathmaster
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Postby Darkness_calls » Fri Jun 23, 2006 3:27 pm

Ohh well done DP ^_^
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Postby dark psyghost » Fri Jun 23, 2006 3:55 pm

Thanks for the comment DC
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Postby dark psyghost » Sat Jun 24, 2006 11:59 am

well here is the next update.

Chapter 9
Part 4: Let the mind battle begin.
“Long time no see Nighteyes.” Said the women.
“So Serras any last words before I kill you?” Said Nighteyes.
“You could never kill me and you know it Nighteyes.” Said Serras with an smile on her face.
Then Nighteyes charged at Serras with his claw ready to slash.
“To me my blade.” Said Serras and a spirit version of the soulreaver appeared on her right arm.
Nighteyes slashed with his claw trying to hit Serras but Serras blocked it with her sword.
Now Serras and Nighteyes where slashing and blocking each other’s attacks.
Danny flew up and fired a green energy beam towards Serras.
Serras jumped back and charged up some silver energy.
“Do not interfere you little brat.” Said Serras angry and she fired a silver energy blast towards Danny.
Nighteyes engulfed his normal hand in a dark fireball and fired it at Serras.
Danny tried to phase out but that was not working and he got hit by the silver energy blast.
Serras noticed the fireball and used her sword to deflect it away.
“Danny you cannot phase out here.” Said Nighteyes.
“Ok thanks for the warning.” Said Danny.
Serras charged at Danny ready and slashed with her sword.
Danny put up a green energy shield that blocked the slash.
Serras unleashed a flurry of quick stabs trying to break the shield.
Nighteyes saw that Danny had trouble keeping the shield up and charged up dark energy in his normal hand.
“Here it goes darkness flare.” Said Nighteyes and he fired a big dark fireball towards Serras.
Serras flew up trying to evade the fireball but she could not get out of the way and was hit blasting her 100 feet upwards.
Serras regained recovered while she was falling and crossed her wing in front of her as she stopped her descent.
“You will pay for that dark feather buster.” Said Serras angry while she spread her wings open and launched 1000 dark feather formed energy blast.
500 of the blasts headed towards Danny and the other blasts towards Nighteyes.
Danny put his energy shield again and managed to block almost all of the blast coming his way but got hit by the last hundred blasts.
Nighteyes flew away from the blasts but the blasts followed him.
Nighteyes evaded half of the blasts by suddenly changing directions but the last half of the blast hit him.
Nighteyes crossed his arms to block the blasts but the blasts he evaded turned around and hit Nighteyes in the back.
Danny and Nighteyes fell on the ground.
“Damn I thought you said she was tired?” Asked Danny getting up.
“I did say that but I never said she was weak.” Answered Nighteyes.
“So are you to weaklings going to give up or must I kill you here?” Asked Serras taunting them.
“I will never let you win from me Serras. Kokusho the dark star.” Said Nighteyes and he was engulfed by a dark dragon formed fireball.
“You are not the only one who knows the art of the 5 star disciplines. Yosei the light star.” Said Serras and a dragon made from light liquid appeared around Serras.
End of part 4.

and some info about the 5 star disciplines used in the story.
it is an art of 5 great dragon spirit known as stars.
Kokusho the dark star = a dragon spirit controling the powers of darkness and fire. user summoning him will be engulfed by a dark dragonshaped fireball. has mostly offensive techniques some accurate some mass destruction.

Josei the light star = a dragon spirit controlling light and water. a user summoning him will be engulfed by a dragon made of light liquid. has some offensive and some protective moves.

Ryusei the burning star = a dragon spirit with the powers of earth and fire. a user summoning him will be engulfed by a dragon formed of magma. has mostly defensive moves and a few moves of mass destruction.

Keiga the freezing star = this dragon spirit has the powers of ice and mist. a user summoning him will be engulfed by a dragon made of mist ans ice crystals. has move to slow people and to avoid being seen.

Jugen the balance star = this dragon spirit has the powers of wind and elctricity and water. a user summoning him will be engulfed by a dragon made out of electricity. moves are mostly defensive and accurate attacks .
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Re: Dark Psyghost's PPGD fanfic"Haunting past"(C9

Postby Leon FlameBurst » Sat Jun 24, 2006 12:02 pm

Awesome battle, dark psyghost!
And good that you add the info about the art of the 5 star disciplines!
Can't wait for the next!
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Postby Forse the Deathmaster » Sat Jun 24, 2006 12:15 pm

Very good update Dark!
Keep going!
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Postby dark psyghost » Sat Jun 24, 2006 12:26 pm

Thanks for the Comment Leon FlameBurst and Forse the Deathmaster
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