Dark Psyghost's: Haunting past: PG-13: Fanfic: C42 Pt6

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Postby dark psyghost » Tue Jun 13, 2006 3:08 pm

think so too but i need to get a time limit on the "kokusho the dark star" move to prevent crovax from being overpowered but the fight will be interesting.
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Re: PPGD fanfic "crovax"(chapter 7 part 1)

Postby dark psyghost » Wed Jun 14, 2006 9:41 am

well i here is the next update.
credit for the title of this part goes to DC.

Chapter 7
Part 2: ghost wars
Butch evaded the fireball that engulfed Crovax.
Crovax turned around and aimed his hands at Butch.
“Kokusho’s breath blast.” Yelled Crovax and the Dragon fireball fired a dark fireball at Butch.
Butch tried to evade the fireball but got hit in the right side and started to spin.
Buttercup was getting up breathing hard and was exhausted.
Crovax charged at Butch.
Butch noticed Crovax charging at him and crossed his arms and wings in front of him to block.
Crovax hit Butch and Butch was bashed through three buildings.
Butch spread his wings and charged at Crovax charging up energy in his fist.
“Kokusho’s wrath.” Yelled Crovax and he launched the fireball that engulfed him at Butch.
“Vaige’s vengeance” Yelled Butch while he fired a huge dark silver energy blast.
The blast and fireball exploded on contact that caused shockwaves that made Crovax and Butch brace them selves.
Crovax and Butch where both breathing hard.
“We have to get out of here Butch it takes a lot of power to use the power of my god.” Said Serras.
“What I can kill that loser and Buttercup now.” Said Butch.
“You don’t get it do you I am out of energy they can kill you very easily now idiot.” Said Serras.
Crovax charged at Butch fist first.
“Ok we will get out of here.” Said Butch annoyed and he flew away from Crovax.
“Oh no you don’t” Said Buttercup and she launched a energy blast towards Butch.
But a golden energy blast hit Buttercup’s blast and caused an explosion that blasted Crovax into the ground.
Crovax lost consciousness.
Buttercup flew after Butch but Butch flew faster with the help of his wings.
Suddenly Buttercup was hit by a golden energy blast and hit the ground.
Buttercup could hardly move, at that moment Bubbles arrived.
“What happened?” Asked Bubbles.
“Crovax and Butch tired each other out and Butch tried to escape.”Said Buttercup.
“Why did you not stop him?” Asked Bubbles.
“I tried but someone blasted me and Crovax and help Butch escape.” Said Buttercup.
Bubbles flew over at Crovax and picked him up.
She looked up and saw.
End of part 2.

tried to ad a cliff hanget. and i hope Crovax is not overpowered.
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Postby Tetra-Holy » Wed Jun 14, 2006 10:23 am

Very good, Fan Fiction dude
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Postby dark psyghost » Wed Jun 14, 2006 4:59 pm

thanks for the comment Tetra-Holy.
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Re: Dark Psyghost's PPGD fanfic"Haunting past"(C7

Postby dark psyghost » Thu Jun 15, 2006 12:02 pm

well i have chaged the title this one fits the story better.
here is the next update.

Chapter 7
Part 3: the so called god Vaige.
Bubbles saw an orange haired girl in a pink Rowdy Ruff uniform flying towards her.
“Hello Bubbles have you seen a black haired boy in a green colored uniform?” Asked Maya.
“You mean Butch?” Asked Bubbles.
“Yes, how do you know Butch?” Said Maya.
“He is part of the Rowdy Ruff boys who are enemy’s of me and my sisters.” Said Bubbles.
“Ok I am Maya also part of the Rowdy Ruff team. Am I your enemy also?” Asked Maya with a sad face.
“No, you have not tried to hurt me or my sisters.” Said Bubbles.
“Yippee you don’t hate me.” Said Maya happily.
“But why are you searching for Butch?” Asked Bubbles.
“I was send here by my boss to make sure he did not get killed and to find a way to get the crazy person out of Butch.” Said Maya.
“Who is your boss?” Asked Bubbles.
“That is a secret.” Said Maya.

Meanwhile on a roof behind Bubbles a man stood surrounded by shadows.
These shadows where not caused by light but emitted from the man himself.
The only thing you could see about the man’s face where his blue eyes.
So the experimental chemical x girl still lives. Thought the man.
“Serras I thought you told me that the girl had died in the laboratory.” Thought the man telekinetically speaking to Serras.
“Vaige my God, I have seen the girl die with my own eyes.” Thought Serras back to the man.
“Then why do I see her right now answering to the name Maya?” Thought to man to Serras.
“Maya? You mean the professor’s daughter was not the girl?” Thought Serras back to the man.
“Off course but I will forgive your mistake my angel if you kill every chemical x being on this plane.” Thought the man to Serras.
“Yes my lord I will do as you ask” Thought Serras back to the man.
“I will contact you later my angel” Thought the man to Serras as he closed the telekinetic link.
That stupid Serras still thinks I am her so called God Vaige. But I have other persons to speak. Thought the man and a black surrounded him and he disappeared.

Meanwhile Butch was flying towards a mountain area following Serras directions.
“So why where you so quiet the last few minutes?” Asked Butch annoyed.
“I was speaking to my god. And he had some valuable information.” Said Serras.
“What for information?” Asked Butch curios.
“Well he told me that your brothers and Maya are trying to work together with the PowerPuff girls to try to kill you. Because they are jealous of your power.” Said Serras.
“The bastards I knew they be jealous if I showed them that I was more powerful then them.” Said Butch.
“That is why we are going to get my holy weapon and kill them all.” Said Serras.
“I don’t know if I can kill my brothers.” Said Butch.
“They will kill you if you do not kill them first.” Said Serras.
“You are right let us kill them.” Said Butch with a evil smile on his face.
End of part 3.

hope the telekinetic conversation was not to confusing it was the best way to type it in my opinion.
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Postby Tetra-Holy » Thu Jun 15, 2006 12:32 pm

Telepathic Conversations are always hard to, Do even though. Atleast you did well Dark Psyghost. Very good Part. =D
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Postby dark psyghost » Thu Jun 15, 2006 12:52 pm

Thanks for the comment Tetra-Holy.
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Postby Archangel M » Thu Jun 15, 2006 2:14 pm

This is a really cool fan fic. I like how Butch is a demon of hell!^^ Nice work dark psyghost!
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Postby dark psyghost » Thu Jun 15, 2006 2:20 pm

thanks for the comment Archangel M
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Re: Dark Psyghost's PPGD fanfic"Haunting past"(C7

Postby dark psyghost » Fri Jun 16, 2006 12:59 pm

well here is the next update.

Chapter 7
Part 4: the man is identified.
At a ship somewhere in the universe queen Vexus was sitting on her throne when a black smoke appeared in the middle of the room.
Out of the black smoke stepped a man surrounded by shadows.
“Honorable queen Vexus” Said the man while he kneeled before queen Vexus.
“I haven’t seen you a long time, what brings you here lord Kaine?” Said Vexus.
“I have come to give you valuable information and advice as always.” Said Kaine.
“What for information?” Asked Vexus.
“Well that your servant lied to you 20 years ago and the girl that would stop the cluster invasion still lives and still can stop it.” Said Kaine.
“What Dark Samus Aran said she killed the orange haired kid with green eyes.” Said Vexus surprised.
“She indeed killed a orange haired girl but it was the wrong one.” Said Kaine.
“The wrong one how do you know it was the wrong one?” Said Vexus.
“Because I saw the girl using her ability’s just recently.” Said Kaine.
“Ok so I will have to kill her. What about the Powerpuff Girls they are also able to stop my invasion.” Said Vexus.
“Yes that is also why I am here I saw the girl talking to one of the Powerpuff girls.” Said Kaine.
“That may cause some real problems for my Dark star Council.” Said Vexus.
“Is the chemical x girl not a part of that council?” Asked Kaine.
“Yes, why did you ask me that?” Said Vexus.
“No reason.” Said Kaine smiling a little.
“I know you Kaine you never ask anything without a reason.” Said Vexus a bit angry.
“Ok it is most likely that Bell will betray you.” Said Kaine.
“What her father works for me she will never betray her father.” Said Vexus.
“But she will she has blamed her father for the death of her friend.” Said Kaine.
“What?” Said Vexus surprised.
“You did not know. Bell cared about a flesh and blood human because she is a flesh and blood human with superpowers.” Said Kaine.
“So what do you suggest I do?” Asked Vexus.
“Simple you send her on a mission to Megaville where she would most likely be killed by the Powerpuff girls and then you make sure she cannot enter Dark Eden ever again in case she survives.” Said Kaine.
“Good plan but why should I trust you?” Said Vexus.
“Look at it this way or Bell will kill members of the Powerpuff girls or she will be killed in both cases you will gain something.” Said Kaine while a black smoke surrounded him and he disappeared.
After Kaine left Vexus pressed on a button on her throne to open a intercom.
“Dark Samus Aran report to me immediately.” Said Vexus over the intercom.
A few minutes later a person in a black phazon suit that had a light blue-greenish glow coming from the shoulders, visor and the arm canon on her right arm.
“You have wanted to see me queen Vexus?” Said dark Samus while she kneeled before Vexus.
“Yes you will go to earth to kill the Powerpuff girls and the girl target I gave you 20 years ago.” Said Vexus a bit angry.
“As you wish my queen.” Said dark Samus while she stood up and ran towards the launching deck.
On the launching deck dark Samus charged up energy and became engulfed by an dark energy sphere.
When she was completely engulfed by the sphere she flew off towards earth.
In the shadows of the launching deck stood Kaine.
So queen Vexus has send her servant to finish the job started 20 years ago. Then maybe she also believed my lie about Bell betraying her. Thought Kaine.
End chapter 7.
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Postby Archangel M » Fri Jun 16, 2006 7:04 pm

Nice story dark psyghost. Sorry for a plain and short but I promised Tetra I'd read his fan fic as well.^_^;
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Postby Tetra-Holy » Fri Jun 16, 2006 7:29 pm

Very good, Fan Fiction. Yet again. Dark Psyghost. I really like the Twists and Turns on this Fan Fiction. xD
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Re: Dark Psyghost's PPGD fanfic"Haunting past"(C7

Postby dark psyghost » Sat Jun 17, 2006 3:43 pm

Thanks for comment Archangel M and Tetra-Holy

Added after 4 hours 38 minutes:

well here is the next update.

Chapter 8
Part 1: Recovering from the fight.
Several hours later at the Powerpuff house Crovax was waking up lying on the couch.
“Where am I?” Asked Crovax.
“You are at our house.” Said Bubbles.
“Hello I am Maya who are you?” Said Maya.
“I am Crovax and this is Nighteyes.” Said Crovax pointing at his shadow.
“Hello Maya.” Said Nighteyes as 2 red eyes appeared in Crovax his shadow.
“Eek crazy person.” Yelled Maya and went behind Bubbles to hide.
“You mean Butch has that inside of him?” Asked Bubbles.
“Yes.” Said Maya.
“I think Maya is referring to Serras.” Said Nighteyes.
“Who is this Serras anyway?” Asked Buttercup.
“She is a shadow ghost who believes she is the angel of the untouchable god Vaige.” Said Nighteyes.
“So why is she possessing Butch?” Asked Bubbles.
“That is easy she always possesses a power hungry mind because those are easy to manipulate.” Said Nighteyes.
“Nighteyes can you tell them about Serras later. We need to discuss more important matters.” Said Crovax.
Then the front door opened and professor Utonium and Blossom entered the room.
“What important matters?” Asked Blossom.
“Blossom are you alright?” Asked Bubbles flying toward Blossom and hugging her.
“Yes I am fine. But what important matters?” Said Blossom hugging Bubbles.
“The matter of beating Serras.” Said Crovax.
“How will we do that? You cannot kill Butch.” Said Maya.
“Ok that makes things a lot difficult but there is a way.” Said Crovax.
“What way?” Asked Blossom.
“It is possible to fight Serras inside Butch his mind, but we will need more help and a good plan for this to work.” Said Crovax.

Meanwhile in Black Eden Kaine was hiding in the communication room.
“Hello Queen Vexus.” Said Dr.X talking to Vexus on a big screen.
“Hello Dr.X, I have a mission for Bell she must attack Powerpuff girls right now.” Said Vexus.
“Ok my queen.” Said Dr.X.
“And I want to speak to Zilla alone.” Said Vexus
“Ok I will send him in.” Said Dr.X as he walked out of the communication room.
This does not feel right Bell will surely die fighting the Powerpuff girls. Thought Dr.X.
After a while Zilla walked into the communication room.
“Queen Vexus you wanted to speak to me?”
“Yes Zilla, is it true that Bell blamed Dr.X for a death of a human?” Asked Vexus.
“Yes the boy Mandark that worked for us killed himself and Bell blamed Dr.X for it.” Said Zilla.
“Ok I know enough, as soon as Bell leaves make sure she will not be able to come back to Black Eden.” Said Vexus.
So she believed my little lie. Thought Kaine.

Meanwhile in the mountains Butch had landed and walked in a cave.
“There it is my holy weapon given to me by my god my soul reaver.” Said Serras when she and Butch saw sword with a curved blade and a vampire skull between the curved blade and the handle.
“We will sleep here and go back to kill those girls and everyone who try to stop us tomorrow.” Said Serras.
“Why not now?” Asked Butch inpatient.
“Because I need to recharge my powers.” Said Serras.
“Ok we will kill tomorrow.” Said Butch with a evil smile on his face.
End part 1
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Postby Tetra-Holy » Sat Jun 17, 2006 3:51 pm

Very Good Aswell again. =D
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Postby Archangel M » Sat Jun 17, 2006 7:15 pm

Awesome updat dark psyghost! Waiting for the big battle!
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Postby dark psyghost » Sat Jun 17, 2006 8:02 pm

thanks for the comment Tetra-Holy and Archangel M
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Re: Dark Psyghost's PPGD fanfic"Haunting past"(C8

Postby dark psyghost » Sun Jun 18, 2006 4:09 pm

well here is the next update.

Chapter 8
Part 2
At the Powerpuff house Crovax, Maya and the Powerpuff girls where discussing who could help them.
“We can ask the rest of my team.” Said Maya.
“Oh no I am not working together with Rowdy Ruff boys.” Said Buttercup.
“Aw why not they are not that mean.” Said Maya with a sad tone in her voice.
“I think it is a good idea to get the rest of your team Maya, we can use all the help we can get.” Said Crovax.
“But Butch his brothers are our enemy’s” Said Bubbles.
“I think his brother find it more important to get Butch back to normal then to kill you girls.” Said Crovax.
“Ok they can help but if they start to attack us we will fight back.” Said Blossom.
“I will get them right now.” Said Maya.
“Bye Maya.” Said Bubbles, Blossom, Buttercup and Crovax.
“Bye bye.” Said Maya as she flew off.
“When I first came back from the ghost realm I fought a boy had powers that would be helpful for this plan.” Said Crovax.
“Why don’t you go get him?” Asked Buttercup.
“I will but I will be gone for a couple of hours.” Said Crovax.
“Ok bye Crovax.” Said Bubbles.
“See you girls later.” Said Crovax.
“Bye.” Said Blossom and Buttercup.
Crovax flew off.

An hour later Maya arrived at the Rowdy Ruff base.
“Maya what brings you back here?” Asked Brick.
“We need your help to get Butch back to normal.” Said Maya.
“Who exactly needs our help?” Asked Brick.
“Me, the Powerpuff girls and Crovax.” Said Maya.
“You know that the Powerpuff girls are our enemy?” Said Brick.
“Yes but is saving your brother not a bit more important?” Said Maya.
“Ok we will help meet us in megaville in about an hour.” Said Brick.
“Thanks Brick.” Said Maya and she kissed Brick on the cheek.
Brick blushed a little Maya did not notice it and flew off.

After half an hour off flying back Maya saw an explosion.
Maya flew towards the place where the explosion came from.
When she landed there she saw some destroyed robots and a white haired girl wearing a white dress with a black stripe on it.
“I am Maya who are you and why are you crying? Asked Maya.
End of part 2.

Added after 8 hours 4 minutes:

well another update today.

Chapter 8
Part 3: Getting more help then expected.
“I am Bell.” Said Bell still crying.
“Why are you crying Bell?” Asked Maya slowly flying towards Bell.
“I lost everyone I cared about.” Said Bell Starting to cry even harder.
“I am sorry.” Said Maya and she became sad.
Maya flew over at Bell and hugged her and also started to cry.
“Why are you crying?” Asked Bell surprised.
“Because you having no one to care about makes me sad.” Said Maya.
Bell and Maya continued to cry.

Meanwhile Crovax had arrived at the house of Danny Fenton and rang the doorbell.
“Hello.” Said Sam.
“Hello is Danny home?” Asked Crovax.
“Yes I will call him.” Said Sam and she walked inside to the staircase.
“Danny someone is here to speak to you!” Yelled Sam.
“Ok I will be there in a second!” Yelled Danny from his room.
A moment later Danny came down and was shocked to see Crovax.
“What are you doing here?” Said Danny a bit angry.
“Before you attack me I came here to ask for your help.” Said Crovax calmly.
“Why would I help you?” Asked Danny.
“Because if you do not help it may mean the end of humanity.” Said Crovax.
“What are you talking about?” Said Danny.
“Let me explain.” Said Crovax.
“Ok I am listening.” Said Danny.
“A few days ago a team of super powered boys went to the burned out laboratories in Dimirville. There a shadowghost called Serras merged with one of the boys and posses him enhancing his power and using him to destroy everything in her path.” Explained Crovax.
“So those other boys can help you. Why do you need my help?” Said Danny.
“That is true the other boys and some other people are helping me already but we need to get the ghost out of this boy’s head. And since you have the power to fight inside someone’s mind you would be a big help.” Said Crovax.
“So you want me to fight this Serras inside the boy’s head?” Asked Danny.
“Yes, but I will also fight inside the boy’s mind as well.” Said Crovax.
“Ok I will help.” Said Danny.
“Ok we need to fly back to Megaville.” Said Crovax and he flew off.
“Ok.” Said Danny and he followed Crovax.
“May I ask you why you let a shadowghost live in your shadow?” Asked Danny.
“Sure I will tell you.” Said Crovax and he started to explain his past.

Meanwhile at the spot where Bell and Maya where still crying.
“Why where you flying here?” Asked Bell.
“I came back from my team after asking for their help saving their brother.” Said Maya.
“Do you want to be my friend?” Asked Maya trying to cheer Bell up.
“You want to be my friend?” Asked Bell surprised.
“Yes.” Said Maya.
“Ok I will be your friend.” Said Bell with a little smile on her face.

Meanwhile at the Powerpuff house the doorbell rang and Blossom opened the door.
“Hello Blossom understand this we are allies till Butch is saved.” Said Brick.
“Ok but is Maya not with you?” Asked Blossom.
“You mean she has not returned yet?” Asked Brick.
Just as Brick had asked that question Maya and Bell flew towards the Powerpuff house.
End part 3.
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Postby Tetra-Holy » Sun Jun 18, 2006 4:14 pm

Awwwww, Cute.

Friendships are always amazing. Great Update, Dark
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Postby dark psyghost » Sun Jun 18, 2006 6:08 pm

Thanks for the comment Tetra-Holy
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Postby Darkness_calls » Sun Jun 18, 2006 6:36 pm

Greatness Dp :happy:


*suddenly DC appears and points at Maya and Bell*
CRYBABIES!
*DC is killed in the most horrable way*
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Postby dark psyghost » Sun Jun 18, 2006 6:49 pm

lol.
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Re: Dark Psyghost's PPGD fanfic"Haunting past"(C8

Postby dark psyghost » Mon Jun 19, 2006 12:47 pm

well here is the next update

Chapter 8
Part 4: Finally some sleep.
Blossom was shocked to see Bell.
“Is that not the girl that attacked you Blossom?” Asked Buttercup.
“Yes what is she doing here?” Said Blossom.
Maya and Bell both landed near the Powerpuff house.
Blossom charged at Bell ready punch her.
“No do not punch her she is my friend.” Said Maya as she steps in front of Bell.
Blossom could not stop her punch and punched Maya in the stomach.
Maya fell on her knees.
“Are you ok Maya?” Asked Bell.
“Yes I am fine.” Said Maya while she was getting up.
“Sorry Maya but she attacked me once before.” Said Blossom.
“Why?” Asked Maya.
“I was helping my father and Susan.” Said Bell tears starting to appear in her eyes.

Meanwhile in the communication room of Black Eden Zilla was Talking to Vexus.
“What do you mean Dr.X is dead?” Said Vexus angry.
“Well you ordered that Bell would be teleported to earth alone but Dr.X tried to teleport Bell and himself to earth. The guards tried to stop them when he got shot by one of the guards but all the guards say they did not shoot their weapon.” Said Zilla.
“So where is Bell now?” Asked Vexus.
“Before he died Dr.X teleported Bell to earth.” Said Zilla.
“You idiot you know she will attack us after this.” Said Vexus even more angry than before.
“Yes I have send a team of exterminators after her but she killed them all.” Said Zilla.
“I will send a new commander tomorrow till then you will be in charge.” Said Vexus.

Back at the Powerpuff house Bell had just told the Powerpuff girls and the Rowdy Ruff boys what happened.
“What are you going to do now?” Asked Blossom.
“I will get revenge by destroying the Dark star council.” Said Bell.
“So you are going to fight the Dark star council now?” Asked Blossom.
“Yes, so can you girls forgive me for fighting you in the past?” Asked Bell.
“I forgive you.” Said Bubbles.
Bell smiled at Bubbles.
“I will try to forgive you.” Said Blossom.
Buttercup did not say anything and went outside.
Then the doorbell rang and Bubbles opened the door.
“I am back and this Danny the guy I told you about.” Said Crovax.
After everyone greeted Danny and Crovax.
“I think we will need to get some sleep if we are Serras will need to rest until tomorrow.”
“Ok all the girls will sleep in the room of the Powerpuff girls and the boys will sleep in the living room.” Said the Proffesor.
“Ok.” Said everyone and the girls went upstairs.

After a few hours everyone was sleeping when a black smoke appeared and Kaine appeared out of the smoke.
A there is that boy. Thought Kaine and he walked over to Crovax.
Kaine opened his mouth revealing two fangs and he bite Crovax in his neck.
Kaine’s eyes started to glow and after a few seconds he stopped biting Crovax and a black smoke appeared again.
He is the one I need. Thought Kaine as he disappeared.
The odd thing was there was no bite mark on Crovax his neck.

Inside Crovax his dream when he got bitten.
Crovax stood in the city of Megaville that was burning around him the Powerpuff girls, Maya, Bell and the Rowdy Ruff Boys lay motionless.
“So you are not an x being?” Said a girl with long black hair and black eyes wearing a black dress.
“No and who are you?” Asked Crovax.
“Don’t you remember me I am your daughter.” Said the girl in a taunting voice.
Crovax was shocked when he heard this.
End part 4
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Postby Tetra-Holy » Mon Jun 19, 2006 12:57 pm

Very nice Chapter, Dark Psy. =D

Very intense. An very nice. It's nice Blossom is going to Try to Forgive, Bell.
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Re: Dark Psyghost's PPGD fanfic"Haunting past"(C8

Postby dark psyghost » Mon Jun 19, 2006 4:05 pm

Thanks for the comment Tetra-Holy.

Added after 2 hours 4 minutes:

well here is the next update.

Chapter 8
Part 5: A very bad dream or a ominous premonition.
“What do you mean I don’t have a daughter? And what is your name?” Asked Crovax.
“My name is Kwasandra. You helped to create me but you will not remember it.” Said Kwasandra.
“So how do you know I am not an x being?” Asked Crovax.
“Because unlike your friends you still live.” Said Kwasandra.
Hearing this Crovax got a bit scared.
“Why you bitch why did you kill them? Dark blades” Said Crovax charging at Kwasandra summoning his dark blades.
“Because I felt like it. Black sword.” Said Kwasandra as her left hand was engulfed by a black energy sword.
Crovax unleashed a flurry of slashes which Kwasandra easily blocked.
After 2 minutes of sword fighting Kwasandra charged up energy in her right hand.
“Black salvo.” Said Kwasandra and started to fire a barrage of black energy blasts at Crovax,
Crovax was blasted into the wall of a building by the first 5 blast and the last blast blasted him through the wall.
Kwasandra held her hands above her had and charged up a pillar of black energy.
“Nightmare sword.” Yelled Kwasandra as she made a horizontal slash with the energy pillar transforming it in a black energy wave heading towards Crovax.
Crovax flew out of building and threw his blades like energy discs towards Kwasandra.
Kwasandra fired a black energy beam towards Crovax destroying the 2 energy discs.
The beam hit Crovax his shoulder before Crovax teleported behind Kwasandra holding 2 dark energy spheres in his hands.
Crovax threw the sphere 1 after the other at Kwasandra.
Kwasandra turned around and got hit by the first sphere but jumped up and kicked the second sphere back at Crovax.
Crovax was just able to evade the sphere and charged at Kwasandra.
“Dark blade.” Said Crovax summoning his dark blades again before he unleashed a cross slash toward Kwasandra.
Kwasandra grabbed the blades stopping the slash.
“What the hell.” Said Crovax surprised.
“You have to do way better then that.” Said Kwasandra and she crushed the blades with her hands destroying them.
Crovax was shocked about the fact she destroyed his blades that easily.
Kwasandra unleashed a flurry of punches which was so fast that Crovax could only block a few punches.
After 10 seconds Kwasandra stopped punching grabbed Crovax his neck and lifted him of the ground.
“You failed.” Said Kwasandra with an evil smile and she punched right through Crovax his chest.
Crovax woke up sweating and noticed some black smoke.

Meanwhile at Vexus her throne room Vexus was talking to one of her servants.
“Activate the hedgehog project on earth.” Said Vexus.
“Yes my queen.” Said the servant typing many commands on a console in the throne room.

On earth in a shut down laboratory in Nevada many tubes and wires where automatically unhooked from a black metal hedgehog with red stripes in the 5 spikes on his head.
Then suddenly his eyes opened and 2 red irises appeared in his fully black eyes.
End part 5.
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Postby Tetra-Holy » Mon Jun 19, 2006 4:37 pm

Very good once again =D.
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