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Re: fanfic "crovax"(chapter 3 part 5)

Postby dark psyghost » Wed May 31, 2006 4:55 pm

this update will be bigger because i could not post for a few days.
sorry for the big post.

Chapter 3.
Part 4: The power of the 3.
Jack was running towards the field where Dexter said something was wrong.
Then he saw Terrawolf shooting a giant fire beam towards something.
Jack charged at Terrawolf and prepared to slash with his sword.
Terrawolf was too focused on the fire beam and did not see Jack coming and was slashed in two pieces and exploded.
Now the fire sphere shrunk but the beam was still heading towards Bubbles.
Buttercup noticed an explosion and saw the beam heading towards Bubbles and charged up a green energy blast.
“Bubbles look out.” Yelled Buttercup while she fired the blast towards the fire beam.
The blast hit but the beam was unaffected.
Now Blossom and Bubbles also saw the beam and charged up energy and launched blue and pink blasts.
The blasts also hit but the beam was again unaffected.
“What can we do?” asked Bubbles a bit scarred.
“Running is not a option it will blow up the entire school.” Said Blossom.
“Maybe if we hit it with a combined blast.” Said Buttercup.
“Ok” Said Blossom and She, Bubbles and Buttercup started to charge up energy.
“Can you buy them some time Nighteyes?” whispered Crovax and 2 red eyes appeared in his shadow.
“I can try” whispered Nighteyes and a red eyed blob flew toward the fire beam.
Gaz who heard the whispered saw the red eyes appear and the blob going to the fire beam.
Nighteyes flew into the beam was blasted back into the ground.
Now Blossom, Bubbles and Buttercup now crossed their hands aiming at the fire beam and launched a rainbow colored blast.
The blast hit the beam and a explosion followed knocking the girls back.
Nighteyes returned to Crovax his shadow but noticed that Gaz saw him.

At the school nurse Dib, Jack, the Powerpuff girls and Dexter were waiting outside the door.
Inside Crovax was being examined by the nurse.
“I think your lower left rib is brushed.” Said the nurse while she wrapped a bandage around Crovax his stomach.
“Take it easy for a while.” Said the nurse when Crovax leaved her office.
Outside everyone looked when the door opened and Crovax was walking out.
“Are you ok” Asked Jack.
“Just a brushed rib.” Said Crovax.
Then Crovax turned towards Buttercup, Blossom and Bubbles and said”Thanks.”.
Now the door opened again and Gaz was walking out carefully with bandage wrapped around her ankle.
“Thanks for saving my sister.” Said Dib facing Blossom, Bubbles and Buttercup.
“No problem it is what we do.” Said Blossom.
Dib poked Gaz in side.
“Thanks.” Said Gaz while she looked at Crovax and then she smiled at him before she walked away.
“Sorry about that Gaz does not like to say much.” Said Dib.
Then the bell rang and recess was over.
End part 4.

Chapter 3
Part 5: The rest of the first school day.
At the next class everyone sat down and miss Meryl started by checking the home work while the class had to read their text book.

Meanwhile at Black Eden Dr.X was walking towards the teleport chamber.
“Report Samantha.” He said as he walked in the room and looked at Samantha.
“Terrawolf has failed and was destroyed.” Said Samantha.
“Ok so they are more powerful then I thought.” Said Dr.X.
“When are we going to plan a next attack?” Asked Samantha.
“Soon.” Said Dr.X as he walked away.

At Megaville elementary the bell rang and school was out.
Bubbles, Blossom and Buttercup where walking out of class.
“What are you going to do Blossom.” Asked Bubbles.
“Dexter and I are going to do our homework together.” Said Blossom.
“What about you Buttercup?” Asked Bubbles.
“I am going to play soccer with some kids.” Said Buttercup.
“And what are you going to do Bubbles.” Asked Blossom.
“Jack asked if he could see me in his office after class and after that I am going to the mall.” Said Bubbles.
“Well see you girls later.” Said Buttercup while she ran away.
“Bye Buttercup.” Said Bubbles and Blossom.
“I also got to go see you at home.” Said Blossom while she ran towards the school library.
“Bye.” Said Bubbles and she walked towards Jack his office.
“Hello Bubbles come in.” Said Jack when Bubbles opened the door.
Courage noticed Bubbles and ran towards her.
“Hello Jack hi courage.” Said Bubbles while she petted Courage.
“Bubbles can you be Crovax his guide around the school for a day or two?” Asked Jack.
“Sure.” Answered Bubbles happily while she was cuddling Courage.
“Thanks Bubbles you can go now.” Said Jack.
“Sorry Courage I have to go.” Said Bubbles as she put Courage down.
Courage looked sad when Bubbles walked out Jack his office.

On a roof of flat Crovax wearing his cloak was talking to Nighteyes.
“Well those girls caused the colored flashes but are too young to be the ones we are looking for.” Said Crovax.
“Indeed but do not forget that they have parents who can also have the same powers.” Said Nighteyes.
“Talking about powers why could you not control that fire beam?” Asked Crovax.
“Well I never tried controlling energy blasts and beam apparently I cannot.” Said Nighteyes.
“I am glad you tried it now instead of when we are fighting alone.” Said Crovax.

At the powerpuff house at dinner time Blossom, Bubbles, Buttercup and professor Utonium where eating dinner.
“So why did Jack want to speak to you Bubbles?” Asked Blossom.
“I will be Crovax his guide around school for a day of 2.” Said Bubbles.
“Who is Crovax?” Asked the professor.
“Just a new kid at our school. Why?” Said Buttercup.
“That name brings back some memories.” Said the professor.
End chapter 3

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well here is the next update.

Chapter 4
Part 1: Being the haunting past.
The next morning Crovax woke up in a abandoned cabin in the forest near Megaville.
“Good morning Nighteyes” Said Crovax while he stood up.
“Good morning.” Said Nighteyes.
“I think we can spend the nights here for a while.” Said Crovax.
“But what if the owner comes here?” Asked Nighteyes.
“This was my father’s cabin and seeing the state it is in I don’t think it has a owner now.” Said Crovax while he walked towards a very old TV.
Crovax turned the TV on and a black and white screen showed a cartoon.
Crovax watched the cartoon for a while and turned TV off.
He grabbed his back pack and flew off.
On his way to school he landed to pick some apples and flew off again.

At Megaville elementary Crovax was putting his cloak in his locker when Bubbles walked up behind him.
“Hi Crovax” Said Bubbles.
Crovax was startled and turned around and said “Hello Bubbles.”.
“I am your guide around the school for today and tomorrow.” Said Bubbles.
“What?” Asked Crovax a bit surprised.
“I am will show you around the school and help you fit in.” Said Bubbles.
“Ok.” Said Crovax
Then the bell rang and the first class started.
Near the end of the second class miss Meryl said “The assignment for tomorrow will be done in groups of three which I pick.”.
She started to call up the groups then she suddenly said “The third group is Blossom, Buttercup and Dexter”.
“Great I am paired up with the love birds.” Said Buttercup a bit annoyed and most of the class started to laugh.
“Please be quiet so I can continue.” Said miss Meryl and she continued.
“And the last group is Crovax, Bubbles and Gaz.” Said miss Meryl.
“But miss I always work alone.” Said Gaz.
“Not this time Gaz.” Said miss Meryl.
Then the bell rang.

During recess Bubbles was showing Crovax around the school.
“And this is where we eat lunch.” Said Bubbles while they walked in the cafeteria.
“Ok shall we discuss our assignment while we eat?” Asked Crovax.
“Ok let us sit with Blossom, Buttercup and Dexter.” Said Bubbles and they walked to the table where Blossom, Buttercup and Dexter where eating lunch and sat down.
“Where are you guys going to do your assignment?” Asked Bubbles.
“At our house would you like to come too?” Said Blossom.
“Well Crovax do you wan to go to our house after school?” Asked Bubbles.
“Ok shall I ask Gaz about it?” Said Crovax.
“Sure.” Said Bubbles and Crovax walked towards the table where Gaz sat alone.
“Hey would you like to do the assignment at Bubbles her house?” Asked Crovax.
“Ok.” Said Gaz being to busy playing a game on her handheld to hear the question.
Crovax walked back towards the table where Bubbles and the rest sat while he grabbed a apple out of his back pack.

After school the Powerpuff girls, Dexter, Gaz and Crovax wearing his cloak walked towards the Powerpuff house.
Blossom knocked on the door and a moment later professor Utonium opened it.
“Hello professor this are Gaz and Crovax.” Said Blossom.
“Hello I am professor Utonium.” Said prof Utonium while he looked at Gaz and Crovax.
But when the proffesor saw Crovax his face turned white and he muttered “You..you…a..are..dead.”.
End part1

Chapter 4
Part 2: A secret uncovered.
Everyone except the professor and Crovax looked confused.
“What is he talking about Crovax?” Asked Blossom.
“Yeah speak up or else.” Said Buttercup grabbing Crovax by his cloak and lifting him up.
“Ok I will tell you first of all I am presumed death but I am still alive.” Said Crovax.
The professor calmed down and everyone went inside.
“Ok but why do you look the same as 20 years ago?” Asked the professor.
“What you know him?” Said Buttercup surprised.
“Yes he tutored my sister and me when he worked as a intern under my father Doctor Ertai.” Said Crovax.
“And why I still look the same as back then I will tell you now” Continued Crovax.
“A few weeks after you where done with your internship the Chemical X study project was moved to an area where my father had no authority to go so he focused on the Ghost project.
On a day my sister and me where in the lab with my father when they where using the ghost portal was used when suddenly black flash caused an explosion which threw me into the portal.
The last thing I saw before I went through the portal was a figure walking out of the flames towards my sister.” Told Crovax but stopped to rub a tear from his eye.
“But how did you survive inside the ghost zone?” Asked Dexter.
“It has something to do with the red eyed blob living in your shadow right?” Said Gaz suddenly.
Everyone looked surprised at Gaz.
“How do you know about that?” Asked Crovax.
“I saw it yesterday when you tried to use it to slow that huge fire beam down.” Said Gaz.
“Ok it is true he lives in my shadow most of the time and his name is Nighteyes.” Said Crovax.
“Was that not one of the two shadow beings from the Ghost project?” Asked prof Utonium.
“Yes he was also blasted into the ghost zone and we made a deal he would give me the ability to survive and in return he could use my shadow as host.” Said Crovax.
Then Crovax started to tell about his journey from the ghost zone to Megaville.

Meanwhile at the Rowdy Ruff project building Dr. Brisbaine was informing Boomer, Brick and Butch about their next mission.
“You guys are going to escort XJ-9 to the burned out laboratory at Dimirvile tomorrow morning.” Said Dr. Brisbaine.
“Why does that weak robot has to come she will only slow us down.” Said Butch.
“Because her data processing unit can download the data from the old computers there.” Said Dr. Brisbaine.
“We understand sir.” Said Brick.
“Good then you guys can go back to your training.” Said Dr. Brisbaine and he walked out of the room.

At the Powerpuff house Crovax finished telling his story and walked away to the window.
Then Crovax grabbed his locket and opened it and looked at a picture of a little girl with green eyes and brown.
“Is that your sister?” Asked Bubbles looking over Crovax his shoulder.
“Yes that is her.” Said Crovax with a sad tone in his voice.
“She looks pretty.” Said Bubbles trying to cheer him up.
“Hey you two we have homework to do.” Yelled Buttercup and Bubbles and Crovax joined the others and started their homework.
End part 2.
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Re: PPGD fanfic "crovax"(chapter 4 part 2)

Postby dark psyghost » Thu Jun 01, 2006 11:32 am

well here is the next update.

Chapter 4
Part 3: Dimirville
After the homework was done it was around dinner time.
“I have to go quickly otherwise I will be late for dinner.” Said Dexter as he stood up and walked to the door.
“I will walk to school with you tomorrow.” Said Blossom and she kissed Dexter on the cheek.
“Bye everyone and goodnight Blossom see you tomorrow.” Said Dexter.
Everyone said goodbye to Dexter and he ran off.
“Professor may I ask did the mother of Blossom, Bubbles and Buttercup have the same powers as they have?” Asked Crovax.
“I created them they don’t have a mother why do you ask?” Said prof.Utonium.
“Oh sorry I did not know that but I am looking for the person who killed my sister and the colored flashes are my only clue.” Said Crovax.
“Well I do not know anything that can help you with that.” Said proff.Utonium.
“Ok well I am going too need to get some dinner.” Said Crovax.
“I have to go too” Said Gaz.
“Ok bye you two.” Said Blossom.
“See you tomorrow.” Said Bubbles.
“Bye.” Said Buttercup and the professor and Gaz and Crovax walked outside.
“So which way do you have to go?” Asked Crovax.
“That way.” Said Gaz pointing towards her house.
“Ok then I will see you tomorrow goodnight Gaz.” Said Crovax.
“Bye Crovax bye Nighteyes.” Said Gaz.
“Bye Gaz.” Said Nighteyes and Crovax flew towards the cabin in the forest.

Next morning at the Rowdy Ruff base the Rowdy Ruff boys prepared to leave.
“So XJ-9 are you ready to go?” Asked Brick.
“Yes I am ready and the name is Jenny.” Said Jenny a bit annoyed.
“Ok Jenny lets go” Said Brick also a bit annoyed now.
After a couple of minutes flying.
“Hey slowpoke keep up.” Yelled Butch towards Jenny.
Brick flew up to Butch and slapped him in the back of the head.
“What did I do?” Asked Butch.
“We must escort her to Dimirville not race otherwise will get in trouble with Dr.Brisbaine.” Said Brick.
“Ok.” Said Butch annoyed.

After an hour they reach the burned out city of Dimirville and they landed.
“What caused this?” Asked Boomer looking around.
“Does it matter lets find that lab and get out of here.” Said Brick.
“According to the map I downloaded it has be beneath us and a shaft must be around here.” Said Jenny and she and the boys started to remove rubble in order to find the shaft.
“I found something.” Said Butch as he ripped a hatch away to reveal a shaft.
“Good job lets go in.” Said Brick.
As they landed inside the laboratory the lights where still on and a computer still running and there where glass cylinders everywhere one was filled with a black liquid and the rest except one where broken.
Inside the non broken cylinder stood a creature with a cat like face with horns it was partly made of metal and his right arm ended in a double barreled gun and his left arm in an odd metal claw.
End part 3.

and a pic of the described creature which think about naming exp01056 but suggestion on the name are welcome.
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Re: PPGD fanfic "crovax"(chapter 4 part 3)

Postby dark psyghost » Fri Jun 02, 2006 11:30 am

here is the next update.

Chapter 4
Part 4: accidental activation.
“What the hell why are the computer still running?” Said Brick.
“This place had a backup power source I think I going to start downloading the data.” Said Jenny while she walked towards the computer.
Jenny connected a cable from her body to the computer and said “Download started and do not touch anything.”.
“Who made her the boss?” Said Butch.
“Well Dr.Brisbaine said we must listen to her while she was downloading.” Said Boomer.
A red eyed blob was looking at Butch from the shadows and quickly moved inside Butch his shadow and disappeared.
“What have they been doing here?” Asked Boomer looking at the creature.
“We don’t know and I for one do not want to know either.” Said Brick.
“You are probably right.” Said Boomer walking back to the computer.
“I am bored hurry it up slowpoke.” Said Butch as he leaned with his hand on the computer accidentally pushing a button.
Brick flew over to Butch and slapped him in the back of his head.
“What?” Said Butch rubbing the back of his head.
“She told you not to touch anything.” Said Brick.
The creature’s eye opened and his red eye lighted up and on the computer screen a message appeared “EXB 01056 activated draining sequence started”.
The creature used its claw to grab Boomer.
“Let me go.” Yelled Boomer while he tried to push the blade half of claw away.
EXB 01056 started to shot around a everything and hit Jenny and the cable snapped.
“Why you let go of my brother.” Said Butch and he charged at EXB 01056.
Butch unleashed a flurry of punches at EXB 01056 and EXB 01056 released Boomer.
“Boomer are you alright?” Asked Brick who also unleashed a flurry of punches at EXB 010156.
EXB 01056 started to swing with his arms at Butch and Brick and the two boys backed off before they where hit.
Now EXB 01056 started to shot around again and Jenny and the Rowdy Ruff boys had to evade the shots.
Meanwhile the black liquid in the other non broken cylinder was drained and a girl was inside with brown hair.
The girl had an empty tube running from her mouth and many tubes with a black liquid where injected in her body.
At the moment she opened her green eyes she was hit with an energy blast and blown out of the laboratory.
Now the Rowdy Ruff boys and Jenny where still evading shots and hitting EXB 01056 with punches.
“This is not working I think we should use energy attacks to kill this thing.” Said Brick while he launched up a red energy blast.
The blast blew EXB 01056 his claw clean off.
“Ok that works well.” Said Boomer and he and Butch fired a green and blue energy blast
But EXB 01056 tried to move out the way and the only thing his was his left horn.
Behind the EXB 01056 Jenny fired her chest cannon and the beam went right through EXB 01056 his chest and he dropped dead.
“Well done Jenny.” Said Brick as he rubbed the creature blood from his forehead.
“I can’t download now the cable is broken so let us head back.” Said Jenny.
“Ok let us get out of here.” Said Brick and they flew out of the lab.
End of part 4.
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Postby Frostmork » Fri Jun 02, 2006 2:09 pm

Shit...I waited for you to have some time.And you updated like hell!
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Postby dark psyghost » Fri Jun 02, 2006 3:14 pm

thanks for the comment.
well i got bored whe the forum was down.
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Re: PPGD fanfic "crovax"(chapter 4 part 4)

Postby dark psyghost » Sat Jun 03, 2006 4:38 pm

well here is another update.

Chapter 4
Part 5: A mysterious girl.
As the Rowdy Ruff boys and Jenny where flying back to the Rowdy Ruff base when they noticed something lying on the streets of Dimirville.
“Butch go and check out what is lying there.” Said Brick.
“Ok.” Said Butch while he flew down.
Then he saw a girl about his age with brown hair and green eyes lying on the ground and he flew back up.
“So what was it?” asked Brick.
“Just a girl.” Said Butch.
“We have to help her.” Said Jenny and she flew down.
“No we don’t. Our orders where to escort you to this place and back.” Said Brick.
“Well I am going to help her like it or not.” Said Jenny while she was still flying down.
Jenny landed and walked towards the girl and asked “Are you ok?”.
The girl screamed something not understandable with a scared look on her face and crawled away from Jenny.
“We better go help her.” Said Brick annoyed and the boys flew down.
As the boys landed the girl was still screaming and crawled towards the boys as soon as she saw them.
“What the hell.” Said Butch when the girl crawled behind him to hide from Jenny.
“Just grab her and we can go.” Said Brick.
Butch grabbed her and put her over his shoulder and they flew off.
The girl did not like this and started to punch Butch his shoulder.
After a few minutes of flying the girl was still punching Butch his shoulder.
“Aw that hurts.” Yelled Butch while he dropped the girl accidentally to rub his shoulder.
Jenny followed the falling girl trying to catch while Brick flew towards Butch and slapped him in the back of the head.
“Sorry.” Said Butch rubbing the back of his head.
The girl suddenly stopped falling and saw Jenny flying at her and started to scream and flew towards Brick.
The girl flew behind Brick to hid Brick grabbed her wrist and said “Ok let us go and Jenny stay away from the girl.”.
After another few minutes flying the girl pulled her wrist free and grabbed Brick his hand.
Brick looked back and saw that the girl smiled at him then he turned his head again and the girl, Jenny and the Rowdy Ruff boys flew back to the Rowdy Ruff base

At the Rowdy Ruff base Jenny, the girl and the Rowdy Ruff Boys landed Brick and the girl where still holding hands.
Dr.Brisbaine walked up to them and asked “How did it go?”.
“Not so good some odd creature interrupted and shot Jenny stopping the download of data.” Said Brick.
Then Dr.Brisbaine looked at the girl and asked “Who is she?”
“We found her lying in Dimirville on our way back and she can’t speak a known language.” Answered Brick.
“Why did you bring her here?” asked Dr.Brisbaine.
“Well we where planning to drop her of at the first town we could find but then she was able to fly so we thought you might want to see her.” Said Brick.
“Ok good thinking you guys. Bring her inside so we can do some medical examination on her.” Said Dr.Brisbaine.
End Chapter 4.
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Postby Comic Kitten » Sun Jun 04, 2006 2:02 am

Keep up the excelent work! ^_^

ps-Great update and fanfic!!!
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Re: PPGD fanfic "crovax"(chapter 4 part 5)

Postby Leon FlameBurst » Sun Jun 04, 2006 4:28 am

Great chapter, dark psyghost!
I will be waiting for the next chapter!
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Re: PPGD fanfic "crovax"(chapter 4 part 5)

Postby dark psyghost » Sun Jun 04, 2006 3:25 pm

Thanks for the comment Leon FlameBurst and Comic_Kitten

here is the next update

Chapter 5
Part 1: The arcade.
At Megaville elementary the last bell of the day rang and Crovax was putting his cloak on when Gaz walked up to him.
“So what are you going to do today?” Asked Gaz.
“I do not know.” Said Crovax.
“I can show the most fun place in this town if you want?” Said Gaz.
“Sure I can use a little fun right now.” Said Crovax and Gaz and Crovax walked into Megaville.
After twenty minutes they reached the mall.
“What is in here that can be fun?” Asked Crovax.
“The arcade and next to it is a Pizza Hut that is all the things I need for a full day of fun.” Answered Gaz.
“Pizzas are good but what is a arcade?” Said Crovax.
“You will see and you will like it trust me.” Said Gaz and smiled at Crovax.
When they reached the arcade.
“Wow a hall full computer games this can indeed be fun.” Said Crovax.
“So you want to play some games with me?” Asked Gaz.
“Sure.” Said Crovax and he and Gaz started to play video games.

Meanwhile somewhere else in Megaville Samantha was standing.
“Time to have my revenge this time you will die Buttercup.” Said Samantha to herself when she pressed a button on her watch.
Then she suddenly was wearing a battle suit with three rocket pods on each shoulder, on the left arm was a machinegun and on the right arm a barrel of a sniper rifle and a laser scope.
She was wearing a visor in front of her eyes.
She started the jet pack on the suit and flew off searching for Buttercup.

In the arcade Gaz was beating Crovax for the ninth time in a row.
“Yeah I won again.” Cheered Gaz.
“Well I need a break I going to eat a pizza do you want to join me?” Asked Crovax.
“Sure I am hungry.” Said Gaz and she and Crovax walked to the Pizza Hut and sat down.
“I will order for us what do you want to order?” Said Crovax.
“I want a big cheese pizza and a giant cola.” Said Gaz.
“Ok” Said Crovax while he walked to the counter to order.
A few minutes later he returned with a plate containing two pizzas, a normal diet cola and a giant cola.
“Here you go a big cheese pizza and a giant cola.” Said Crovax while he gave Gaz her pizza and cola.
“Thanks what did you order?” Asked Gaz.
“A big cheese pizza and a normal diet cola.” Answered Crovax and he and Gaz started to eat.

Meanwhile Samantha had found Buttercup practicing her fighting moves.
Samantha visor locked on to Buttercup and she fire two rockets at Buttercup.
End Part 1.
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Re: PPGD fanfic "crovax"(chapter 5 part 1)

Postby dark psyghost » Mon Jun 05, 2006 12:47 pm

well im still working on the update but here is a not yet colored drawing of samantha's battle suit.

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well here is the next update

Chapter 5
Part 2: Buttercup versus Samantha.
Buttercup noticed the rockets and jump out of the way.
Buttercup looked around and saw Samantha wearing her battle suit.
“You are so going to pay for that.” Yelled Buttercup and she charged towards Samantha.
“Your speed will not help you this time.” Said Samantha while she fired a beam from her sniper rifle arm.
The beam was so fast Buttercup could not evade it and was hit and crashed into the ground.
“Now you will die.” Said Samantha and she aimed and fired her machine gun at Buttercup.
Buttercup evaded the bullets but Samantha’s suit was locked on to Buttercup and line of bullet fire followed Buttercup.
“What the hell.” Said Buttercup trying to keep ahead of the bullet fire.
Buttercup flew behind a building and noticed that bullet fire stopped.
Samantha looked around trying to get a lock on Buttercup.
Buttercup flew towards Samantha and fired a green energy blast.
Samantha saw Buttercup and fired a rocket at the energy blast which exploded on hit.
Buttercup fired a second blast while she was charging towards Samantha.
Samantha fired a second rocket to cancel the second blast which again exploded on hit.
Out of the smoke Buttercup appeared and punched Samantha in the stomach sending her flying a few feet back.
Samantha recovered and fired a beam at Buttercup sending her flying backwards.
“Enough fooling around you are finished. Full barrage.” Yelled Samantha and she started to fire all her weapons.
Buttercup had to fly away to evade this massive crossfire of bullets rockets and beams.

Meanwhile Bubbles was in the mall with Mandy when she saw Crovax and Gaz at the arcade.
She ran up to them and said “Hi Crovax Hi Gaz.”.
“Hello Bubbles.” Said Crovax.
“Hello.” Said Gaz.
“So what are you two doing here are you two on a date?” Asked Bubbles with a smile on her face.
“No Gaz is showing me the mall.” Answered Crovax.
“Yes I am showing Crovax the mall.” Said Gaz blushing.
Mandy was now walking in the arcade and said “Bubbles lets go we need to be at other side of the mall.”
“I am coming Mandy bye you two have fun.” Said Bubbles.
“Bye.” Said Crovax and Gaz.
A few minutes later Buttercup crashed through the roof of the mall.
“Buttercup.” Yelled Bubbles and flew towards Buttercup.
“Are you ok?” Asked Bubbles.
“I am ok.” Answered Buttercup.
Crovax watched Samantha flying above the mall taking aim.
Samantha fired a beam and hit Bubbles sending her flying into the ground.
“Bubbles are you ok?” Asked Buttercup charging at Samantha.
Samantha fired a second beam Buttercup crossed her arms to block.
“I am going to help them see you soon Gaz. Said Crovax.
And he flew towards Samantha.
“Nighteyes D.D. tactic.” Said Crovax and a second later he charged towards Samantha.
Samantha saw Crovax charging and fired a beam at him.
The beam hit Crovax and went straight through his chest and his body dropped down to the floor.
End Part 2.
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Re: PPGD fanfic "crovax"(chapter 5 part 2)

Postby dark psyghost » Tue Jun 06, 2006 4:03 pm

well here is the next update.

Chapter 5
Part 3: alive and kicking.
Buttercup and Bubbles saw that Crovax got shot and that his body did not move anymore.
“Is he dead?” Asked Bubbles looking a bit scared.
“I don’t know bubbles but I will beat that girl.” Said Buttercup.
“So that is one dead so who of you girls is next.” Said Samantha locking on to Buttercup.
But before she could fire two dark energy discs cut her sniper gun barrel in half.
“What the hell.” Said Samantha angry.
“Did you really think that I die so easily.” Said Crovax charging at Samantha.
“How did he do that?” Asked Buttercup surprised.
“Well survive this. Full barrage.” Yelled Samantha starting to fire every weapon except the broken rifle at Crovax.
Crovax teleported behind Samantha while Bubbles and Buttercup also charged at Samantha.
“What the h..” Samantha said but was punched by Buttercup on her cheek before she could finish her sentence.
Samantha swung her broken barrel arm at Buttercup who evaded it with ease.
Now Bubbles kick Samantha in the stomach sending her a few feet back where Samantha was kicked in the back by Crovax.
Buttercup charged at Samantha and punched her downward before she could recover.
Seconds before she would crash into the roof of the mall Samantha recovered and fired six rockets at Bubbles, Buttercup and Crovax.
Bubbles and Buttercup fired blue and green energy beams at the rockets while Crovax summoned his dark blades and threw 1 like an energy disc towards the rockets.
The energy attacks and the rocket exploded when they hit each other.
Buttercup charged towards Samantha fist first.
Samantha locked on to Buttercup and fired her machine gun.
Now Buttercup evaded the bullets but had to keep flying because the bullet fire followed her.
Crovax threw his other blade towards Samantha who was still firing at Buttercup.
Samantha noticed the blade to late and the blade cut of the suits machine gun arm.
Buttercup charged at Samantha charging up a green energy blast.
“You three win this time but I will be back.” Said Samantha as she pressed a button on her watch and disappeared.
“You better run.” Said Buttercup angry.
“I am glad that’s over.” Said Bubbles.
“Well I am off see you girls tomorrow at school.” Said Crovax as he flew back to Gaz.
“Good work on the duplication Nighteyes.” Said Crovax just before he landed.
Gaz ran to Crovax and “Good fight but I thought you where do not scare me like that again.”.
“Ok shall we play some more video games?” Asked Crovax.
“Ok.” Said Gaz and she and Crovax walked towards the arcade.
End Chapter 5.
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Postby Darkness_calls » Tue Jun 06, 2006 7:19 pm

You need to use commas more.
Other than that ... awesome ^_^

(sorry for not commenting in a while)
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Re: PPGD fanfic "crovax"(chapter 5 part 3)

Postby dark psyghost » Wed Jun 07, 2006 4:10 pm

thanks for the comment DC i will try to use more commas

here is the next update
Chapter 6
Part 1: Maya.
Three days later at the Rowdy Ruff base the mysterious green eyed girl was talking to Dr.Brissbaine.
“Doctor Weasel told me you are Maya is that correct?” Asked Dr.Brisbaine.
“Yes.” Answered Maya happily.
“Ok Maya you will be joining the Rowdy Ruff boys starting today.” Said Dr.Brisbaine.
“Is that scary metal kid with them?” Asked Maya.
“No only Brick, Butch and Boomer are in that team.” Answered Dr.Brisbaine.
“Ok.” Said Maya.
“Ok I have your new clothes here. I will wait outside while you change clothes.” Said Dr.Brisbaine while he put a pink Rowdy Ruff uniform down and walked outside.
A few minutes later Maya came out of the room wearing the pink Rowdy Ruff uniform.
“So lets go to the boys to tell them the news.” Said Dr.Brisbaine while he walked towards the exit of the building.
“Yippee I am going outside.” Said Maya while she hopped next to Dr.Brisbaine.
When Dr.Brisbaine and Maya went outside Brick and Butch where fighting each other as practice and Boomer was lifting weights.
“Boys come here I have something to tell you.” Said Dr.Brisbaine.
Brick, Boomer and Butch flew towards Dr.Bribaine and Maya, who was now looking at the boys.
“What is it Dr.Brisbaine?” Asked Brick.
“This is Maya she will be joining you’re team.” Said Dr.Brisbaine.
“What! That weak girl.” Said Butch.
Brick slapped Butch in the back of the head.
“What did I do?” Asked Butch.
“If Dr.Brisbaine has decided that Maya joins our team she must be strong.” Said Brick.
“Thank you I am Maya, who are you?” Said Maya shaking Brick’s hand.
“I am Brick” Said Brick.
Maya flew up to Butch and stuck her hand out to shake hands.
“I am Butch and stay out of my way.” Said Butch annoyed.
“You are not nice.” Said Maya and she stuck her tongue out at Butch.
She flew over to Boomer, who was daydreaming again.
“Hello you must be Boomer.” Said Maya while she stuck out her hand to shake hands.
Boomer was too busy daydreaming to hear Maya.
“Hello mister sleepy head wake up.” Said Maya a bit annoyed.
“Oh hello I am Boomer.” Said Boomer a bit surprised.
“Well continue your training now.” Said Dr.Brisbaine while he walked back inside.

It was almost evening when Boomer sneaked out of the base and flew off.
Maya saw Boomer leaving and followed him.
Meanwhile Brick was lifting weights.
There is something odd about that girl. Thought Brick.
“Well why aren’t you with Maya? I thought you said you would show her around the base?” Said Butch annoyed.
“I showed her the base and went back to training. Why do you ask?” Said Brick.
“No reason.” Said Butch while he thought Brick is getting weak because of that girl.
As Butch walked out of the training room and into the hallway, he heard a voice inside his head.
“You do not need them; I can give you the power to destroy those 3 girls.” Said the voice.
End Part 1.
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Postby Darkness_calls » Wed Jun 07, 2006 4:16 pm

oh ohh
who is the owner of the voice. What will he offer and will Butch make a deal.

All this and even more in the next chapter of the fic.
lol

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Re: PPGD fanfic "crovax"(chapter 6 part 1)

Postby dark psyghost » Thu Jun 08, 2006 1:57 pm

thanks for the comment DC and here are the answers.

Chapter 6
Part 2: The dark voice.
“Who are you?” Asked Butch.
“I am Serras a shadow ghost of a dead angel.” Said the voice.
“Why would a dead angel give me power to kill?” Asked Butch.
“Because I work for a god who never wanted them to live in the first place.” Said Serras.
“But I do not need any help to beat them, not the help of my brother or your help.” Said Butch.
“Ok then try to beat both of your brothers tomorrow so I can see that you are powerful enough.” Said Serras.
“Ok I will beat my brothers tomorrow.” Said Butch.
“See you tomorrow.” Said Serras.

Meanwhile Maya had followed Boomer to Megaville, where Boomer was looking at Bubbles.
“Who is that girl?” Said Maya standing behind Boomer.
“Uh that is Bubbles.” Said Boomer surprised to see Maya.
“But we have to go back to the base.” Said Boomer.
“You like her don’t you?” Asked Maya with a smile on her face.
“Eh no I do not.” Lied Boomer while his face turned red.
“You liar you do like her.” Said Maya noticing Boomer’s red face.
“Let’s get out of here.” Said Boomer while he flew off.
“Boomer and Bubbles sitting in a tree.” Sung Maya while she followed Boomer.
“Please do not tell Brick or Butch.” Said Boomer.
“Ok.” Said Maya and she continued singing.

The next day at training Butch was gloating about him beating Brick and Boomer.
“Why not fight us both then?” Asked Brick.
“Ok why not.” Said Butch.
“Ok Boomer get ready to show Butch how strong we are.” Said Brick.
And Brick charged straight at Butch and Boomer followed.
Brick unleashed a flurry of punches but Butch blocked them.
Now Boomer flew behind Butch and kicked Butch in the back and Butch skidded a few feet on the ground.
Butch stood up and launched a green energy beam towards his two brothers.
Boomer and Brick saw the beam and launched red and blue energy beams, which blasted right through Butch his beam.
A second before the two beams would hit, Butch felt an odd and his eyes turned red while he fired a powerful dark green energy beam.
The dark green energy beam blasted through the other 2 beams and hit Boomer and Brick.
Brick and Boomer fell on the ground unconscious.
“Ok Butch that is enough.” Said Dr.Brisbaine.
“Ok.” Said Butch and he flew behind a tree.
“Be glad I helped when you needed help.” Said Serras.
“Ok so you where right. What will you gain giving me more power?” Said Butch.
“I will give you power if I may coexist inside your body.” Said Serras.
“I do not know, will I be in control of my body or you?” Said Butch.
“You will be in control most of the time.” Said Serras.
“Ok I will let you live in my body” Said Butch and his eyes turned red.
“Shall we kill those girls?” Said Serras.
“Yes” Said Butch as he flew of with an evil smile on his face.
An hour later Butch landed in Megaville and a dark aura was now surrounding him.
He stamped his foot on the ground and a stone spike impaled a man walking in front of him.
“O Power Puff girls come out come out were ever you are.” Yelled Butch with his and Serras’s voice.
End part 2.

the next update will be on sunday because i have a family weekend comming sorry to keep you people waiting.
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Re: PPGD fanfic "crovax"(chapter 6 part 2)

Postby Leon FlameBurst » Thu Jun 08, 2006 2:00 pm

Great and long chapter! Excuse for that I was long time no here.
And sura I can wait, take you time.
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Postby dark psyghost » Thu Jun 08, 2006 8:14 pm

thanks for the comment Leon FlameBurst. and i will post the update as soon as i return from the family weekend.
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Re: PPGD fanfic "crovax"(chapter 6 part 2)

Postby dark psyghost » Sun Jun 11, 2006 5:12 pm

well here is the next update.

Chapter 6
Part 3: A dark Butch.
Butch was waiting for the Power Puff to show up.
“Why not destroy some buildings or kill some people to get their attention?” Said Serras inside Butch his head.
“Why not.” Said Butch and he launched an energy blast towards a tower.
The energy blast caused a big explosion which made people in the area run and scream in panic.
Butch flew up to a kid and threw the kid into a near wall.
Suddenly Buttercup came flying at Butch.
“So you are finally here.” Said Butch with an evil smile on his face.
“Yes, so where are your brothers Butch?” Said Buttercup.
“I do not need those weaklings to beat you and your sisters.” Said Butch.
Buttercup charged at Butch ready to kick.
Buttercup tried to kick Butch his head but the kick was blocked by a gust of dark green smoke.
Buttercup now unleashed a flurry of kicks and punches but every kick or punch was blocked by a gust of dark green smoke.
Butch watched Buttercup trying to hit him and charger up a green energy blast.
Buttercup noticed that Butch was charging up energy and evaded the green energy blast when Butch launched it.
Butch charged at Buttercup and kicked her into a wall.
Butch was charging up a green energy blast when he was hit by a pink energy blast and skidded a few feet on the ground.
“Are you ok Buttercup?” Asked Blossom.
“I am fine.” Said Buttercup.
Butch was getting up and launched two green energy blasts one towards Blossom and one towards Buttercup.
Buttercup evaded the blast but Blossom was hit and blasted into a building.
Butch charged towards Buttercup and they exchanged a flurry of punches.
After a few second Butch jumped back.
Butch stamped on the ground and a shockwave headed towards Buttercup.
Blossom was now behind Butch and she charged at him
Blossom unleashed a flurry of punches at Butch, which where all blocked by gusts of dark green smoke.
Buttercup flew up to evade the shockwave and launched a green energy blast at Butch.
Blossom and Butch jumped back to evade the energy blast.
Bubbles flew up to Blossom and launched a blue energy blast towards Butch.
Butch flew up to evade the blast and launched a green energy beam towards Bubbles and Blossom.
Bubbles and Blossom where hit and skidded a few feet back.
Buttercup charged at Butch and launched a kick which was blocked by a gust of dark green smoke.
Butch spun around and kick buttercup letting her skid into a wall.
“This is too easy.” Said Butch.
End of part 3.
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Postby Darkness_calls » Sun Jun 11, 2006 6:17 pm

NO!
go Buttercup you can defeat him :P

Good work ^_^
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Re: PPGD fanfic "crovax"(chapter 6 part 3)

Postby dark psyghost » Mon Jun 12, 2006 4:14 pm

thanks for the comment DC

here is the next update.

Chapter 6
Part 4: Identity revealed.
“Come on just kill them already.” Said Serras.
“No I want to enjoy killing them as long as possible.” Said Butch.
Blossom got up and fired a pink energy blast towards Butch.
Butch was hit by the energy blast and flew into a building.

Meanwhile Crovax was training in the forest.
“Ok that is enough for today.” Said Crovax while he looked around.
“Something is happening in Megaville.” Said Crovax when he noticed the smoke above the city.
“We better see what it is.” Said Nighteyes and Crovax flew off towards Megaville.

Butch was getting up but was hit by green and blue energy blasts.
Butch flew up from the rubble caused by the blasts.
“So you girls ready for more fun.” Said Butch and he charged towards Buttercup.
Butch launched a kick at Buttercup but she blocked it with her arm.
Buttercup launched a punch at Butch but it is blocked by a gust of dark green smoke.
Butch launched a punch towards Buttercup and she is hit in the jaw.
Buttercup recovers and fired a green energy burst at Butch.
Butch is hit and flew backwards a few feet.
Before Butch could recover Bubbles fired a blue energy blast at him.
Butch was hit by the blast and flew upwards.
Blossom charged at Butch and raised her hands like hands above her head like a hammer.
Blossom slammed her hands towards Butch back but her hands were blocked by a gust of dark green smoke.
Butch turned around and shot Blossom through the left side of her chest with his eye lasers.
Blossom dropped towards the ground.
“Blossom.” Yelled Bubbles and she flew towards Blossom.
“Now to finish her.” Said Butch and he charged towards Blossom.
“Darkness Flare” Said Crovax as he fired a giant dark fireball at Butch.
Butch was caught of guard and the fireball blasted him into a building.
Bubbles caught Blossom who was unconscious and the wound in her chest was bleeding badly.
“Bubbles get her out of here.” Said Crovax.
“Ok I will be back.” Said Bubbles and she flew off carrying Blossom.
“How dare you to intervene?” Said Butch.
“Because I can.” Said Crovax.
“Well I will kill you too then.” Said Butch with an evil smile.
“You can show yourself now Serras.” Said Nighteyes.
“So you still posses shadows instead of real hosts Nighteyes.” Said Serras.
“How did you know him?” Asked Butch.
“He is an old enemy of me. But will have to show myself this will hurt a bit.” Said Serras.
Butch screamed out of pain as two sharp claws ripped through the flesh on his shoulder blades.
Now Butch unfolded two black angel like wings with claws and still covered with his blood.
“Ah that hurt a bit. But now you see me as I truly am.” Said Butch with his and Serras voice.
End Chapter 6

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Postby Darkness_calls » Mon Jun 12, 2006 7:45 pm

DEMON BUTCH!
lol

Good idea.
Serras frightens me :P
Well done ^_^
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Re: PPGD fanfic "crovax"(chapter 6 part 4)

Postby Leon FlameBurst » Tue Jun 13, 2006 12:12 am

Great battle scene, dark psyghost!
Can't wait for the next!
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Re: PPGD fanfic "crovax"(chapter 6 part 4)

Postby dark psyghost » Tue Jun 13, 2006 2:21 pm

Thanks for the comment DC and Leon FlameBurst.
Serras supposse to be fritghtening but that will be explained a few updates later.
and i hope the next update will be as good of a battle as the last.

here is the next update

Chapter 7
Part 1: The power of a dark angel.
Butch flew up into the sky and pointed his arm towards Crovax.
Crovax flew towards Butch summoning his dark blades.
“Destroy soul.” Yelled Butch and a dark green energy sphere appeared around his hand.
Butch fired small energy beams from the sphere towards Crovax.
Crovax evade the beams but Butch was still firing and followed Crovax movements with his arm.
Crovax had trouble evading the beams and got hit and blasted into the ground by a continuous barrage of beams.
Buttercup fired a green energy blast at Butch and Butch was hit.
Buttercup charged up energy.
“Green buster” Said Buttercup while she fired a powerful green energy blast at Butch.
Butch evaded the blast and charged at Buttercup.
Crovax got up and threw one of his dark blades at Butch.
Butch stopped and the blade spinning like a disc missed him.
Butch fired his laser eyes at Buttercup but Buttercup flew out of the way.
Crovax charged at Butch ready to slash with his dark blade.
Crovax slashed at Butch with his blade.
Butch evaded the slash and unleashed a flurry of kicks and punches at Crovax.
Crovax was hit by most of the kicks and punches but managed to block a few.
Buttercup launched another green energy blast towards Butch.
Butch grabbed Crovax his arm and threw Crovax into the blast.
Buttercup charged at Butch charging up energy in her fists.
Buttercup unleashed a flurry of energy powered punches but Butch blocked them.
Crovax recovered and flew up and summoned a second dark blade.

Meanwhile at the Rowdy Ruff base Brick was waking up.
“What happened?” Asked Brick looking around.
“Butch hit you and Boomer with and powerful energy attack and you two fell unconscious.” Said Dr.Brisbaine.
“How is Boomer doing?” Asked Brick.
“Boomer is still unconscious.” Said Dr.Brisbaine.
“Where is Butch and how did he get so strong?” Asked Brick.
“Butch flew towards Megaville. And we think he is possessed by a shadow ghost.”
“A shadow ghost?” Said Brick surprised.
“Yes, the data that XJ-9 was managed to recover from the Dimirville laboratory tells that the Ghost project used them. They can increase people powers but also make people act insane.” Explained Dr.Brisbaine.
“How do we get that that shadow ghost out of Butch?” Asked Brick.
“Well I don’t know but I have send Maya to Megaville to make sure that Butch is not killed.”

Butch kicked Buttercup into the ground.
Crovax charged at Butch and unleashed a flurry of slashes at Butch.
Butch evaded the slashes and flew out of Crovax his slash range.
“So you are the son of that idiot Dr.Ertai. I enjoyed watching him and your annoying sister die.” Said Butch in his and Serras’s voice and laughed.
“Nighteyes posses my body.” Said Crovax with anger in his voice.
“Ok” Said Nighteyes and he turned into a red eyed blob and launched into Crovax his body.
“Kokusho the dark star.” Yelled Crovax with his and Nighteyes’s voice and he was engulfed by a dark dragon shaped fireball.
“You will die bastard.” Said Crovax enraged as he charged at Butch still engulfed by the fireball.
End Part 1.
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Postby Darkness_calls » Tue Jun 13, 2006 3:05 pm

GHOST WARz!

Well done.
I think there will be and interesring fight scene in the next chapter ^_^
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