Dark Psyghost's: Haunting past: PG-13: Fanfic: C42 Pt6

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Re: Dark Psyghost's: Haunting past: PG-13: Fanfic: C42 Pt3

Postby Cadaverous » Sun Dec 10, 2006 11:24 am

nice...uh oh, the evil smile can't be good, The world needs help!
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Postby Elend-X » Sun Dec 10, 2006 11:55 am

Indeed... Awesome Update Dark!
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Re: Dark Psyghost's: Haunting past: PG-13: Fanfic: C42 Pt3

Postby robro » Mon Dec 11, 2006 11:57 am

fantastic update
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im a bit dyslectic so please exuse posseble spelling error's
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Postby dark psyghost » Tue Dec 12, 2006 6:50 pm

Thanks Cadaverous, Elend-X and Robro.
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Postby dark psyghost » Fri Dec 15, 2006 4:16 pm

Sorry to say this but due to christmas and some other stuff i am putting this on Haitus till 28 december.
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Postby Elend-X » Fri Dec 15, 2006 4:20 pm

I'll be waiting anxiously!
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Re: Dark Psyghost's: Haunting past: PG-13: Fanfic: C42 Pt3

Postby dark psyghost » Fri Dec 22, 2006 7:36 am

Well found some time to write a small update.

Chapter 42
Part 4: A heated battle begins.
“What’s so funny? You lost the last time you fought me.” Said Cadaverous.
“But this will be nothing like last time.” Said Kai.
“Strong words but words don’t mean anything.” Said Cadaverous.
“Your right. Cyber dranzer magma jet.” Said Kai as he pointed his hands at the ground.
The ground beneath Cadaverous feet began to tremble and cloaked boy quickly jumped backwards.
A few seconds later the ground cracked open and magma blasted out of the ground.
Kai pointed his hands forwards and the pillar of magma started to move in the direction of Cadaverous.
Cadaverous eyes glowed up and a wall of ice appeared in front of him.
The pillar of magma continued to move towards Cadaverous and the wall of ice shattered as soon as the magma hit it.
Cadaverous turned into ice crystals and they moved upwards above the pillar of magma.
Kai raised his hands and the pillar became higher but the ice crystals had already moved over it and moved behind Kai.
Then the ice crystals transformed back into Cadaverous who was now holding a green sword.
Kai turned around as Cadaverous slashed at him with his sword.
The pillar of magma fell back into the earth as Kai blocked Cadaverous his sword with his right underarm.
“What the hell.” Said Cadaverous as small cracks appeared in his sword.
“I have become a lot stronger then last time. Take this.” Said Kai as he pointed his hand at Cadaverous and fired a fireball.
Cadaverous was hit and blasted backwards into the street at the end of the alley.
Cadaverous quickly got up and noticed Kai was charging up energy.
Damn he learned some powerful attacks but like any human he cannot keep on using such powerful attacks without exhausting himself. Thought Cadaverous.
“Cyber dranzer attack.” Yelled Kai as he pointed his hands at Cadaverous and he fired a giant fireball shaped like a mechanical bird’s head.
“Freezing son of Crosis, Keiga the freezing star.” Yelled Cadaverous as he pointed his left hand at the fireball.
A ice blue energy beam shaped like an dragon moved from Cadaverous hand towards the fireball.
The two attacks collided and mist appeared around them.
When the mist disappeared the ground was covered in pieces of ice.
Suddenly Tala jumped from a building behind Cadaverous and fired a storm of ice crystals at Cadaverous.
Cadaverous quickly turned around and made a wave like motion with his right hand and the ice crystals melted.
“Tala I told you to stay out of this.” Said Kai angry.
“Yes but you have a much bigger chance of beating him is I help you.” Said Tala as he landed on the ground.
“Fine you can help.” Said Kai.

Meanwhile in the temple of the Holy dragon guard in Japan Master Zen was looking out of the window.
“I come with bad news. The robots have managed to kill many of our elite warriors and they are coming this way.” Said a member of the Holy dragon guard as he entered the room.
“Damn we never had this many deaths in battle since the Vaige war.” Said Master Zen.
“What do we do? Evacuate this place?” Asked the member.
“No we stay. Like the first master once said. If we go down we will take as many enemies down with us.” Said Master Zen.
End Part 4.

Haitus still applys. Have some trouble keeping my thoughts straight hope to get them straight after christmas.
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Postby APE » Fri Dec 22, 2006 8:15 am

Quite nice
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Postby Elend-X » Fri Dec 22, 2006 1:06 pm

Great Update!
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Postby Forse the Deathmaster » Fri Dec 22, 2006 2:24 pm

Wow!!!! Soooooooo many updates that i missed! I don't know where to start! But i will read all of this as soon as i can but for now this last update was great! Sorry for the hiatus thing and i hope that you will manage to straighten your thought soon!
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Re: Dark Psyghost's: Haunting past: PG-13: Fanfic: C42 Pt4

Postby Cadaverous » Fri Dec 22, 2006 5:56 pm

nice update, the robots are winning, AHHH!!!
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Postby Darkness_calls » Fri Dec 22, 2006 6:41 pm

Damn Robots!
Well done DP!
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Re: Dark Psyghost's: Haunting past: PG-13: Fanfic: C42 Pt4

Postby dark psyghost » Fri Dec 29, 2006 6:32 am

Thanks everyone.
Well it is a day later then i said but here is the next update.

Chapter 42
Part 5: Fire and ice versus the master of these elements.
In New York Kai and Tala where standing next to each other facing Cadaverous as the soldiers and robots where still fighting around them.
“So are you ready to die?” Asked Kai with an evil smile.
“You have no chance on killing me.” Said Cadaverous.
“Big words for a dead man.” Said Tala before he yelled “Wolfborg ice spike eruption.”.
Tala pointed his hand at Cadaverous who quickly jumped in the air when he felt some trembling in the ground beneath him.
Many big ice spikes erupted from the ground below Cadaverous and the cloaked boy turned into ice crystals before on of the spikes could impale him.
Behind the ice spikes the ice crystals gathered and turned back into Cadaverous.
“Where is he? Did I hit him?” Asked Tala as he looked around.
“No, he used his ice crystal teleportation again.” Said Kai also looking around.
Suddenly Kai and Tala where surprised when a ice blue flash shattered the ice spikes and send a very big amount of ice shards flying there way.
“Cyber shield.” Yelled Kai as he jumped in front of Tala.
A shield of fire appeared in front of Kai and the shards of ice melted as soon as they hit the shield.
Kai could see Cadaverous standing with his hands pointing at him.
“Cyber dranzer.” Yelled Kai and he became engulfed by a fireball shaped like a mechanical birds head.
Cadaverous eyes glowed as he also became engulfed by fire and a green sword appeared in his left hand.
Kai charged towards Cadaverous who was also moving at great speed towards Kai.
Cadaverous slashed at Kai with his sword when he was close enough.
Kai simply evaded the slash and threw a punch at Cadaverous.
Cadaverous moved his head to evade punch as the two flames engulfing the boys merged into a giant flame.
Cadaverous slashed sideward but Kai ducked and used a low sweeping kick to tackle the cloaked boy.
Cadaverous fell on his back and Kai was aiming his hand at Cadaverous his face.
“Flame saber.” Said Kai and fired a thin beam of fire at Cadaverous his face.
The cloaked boy quickly rolled to his left and the beam of fire cut deep into the street where his head was a second ago.
Cadaverous quickly jumped back onto his feet and Kai jumped backwards away from the cloaked boy.
As Cadaverous looked at Tala he could see why Kai jumped away from him.
Tala was standing facing Cadaverous pointing his hands at the cloaked boy.
Between Tala and Cadaverous a giant wolf’s head made of ice was moving at Cadaverous.
The lower jaw of the wolf was ripping through the street and behind it the ground and other things that where in his way where frozen solid.
Cadaverous focused his energy and fired a giant fireball at the icy wolf’s head.
A large cloud of smoke of mist appeared as the fireball hit the wolf’s head.
Suddenly the wolf’s head emerged from the mist still heading straight for Cadaverous.
End part 5.
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Postby Elend-X » Fri Dec 29, 2006 8:47 am

Great Update Dark!
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Postby Darkness_calls » Fri Dec 29, 2006 1:53 pm

Go Cad, Go cad!
Greatly written DP!
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Postby APE » Fri Dec 29, 2006 6:24 pm

Oh no, Cad is in trouble, whatever shall he do?
nah, the real question is:
Why did he waste his energy, when he might as well have teleported away?
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Re: Dark Psyghost's: Haunting past: PG-13: Fanfic: C42 Pt5

Postby Cadaverous » Fri Dec 29, 2006 9:05 pm

cause he's hard-headed and doesn't like to lose
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Re: Dark Psyghost's: Haunting past: PG-13: Fanfic: C42 Pt5

Postby Leon FlameBurst » Sat Dec 30, 2006 8:12 pm

Wow, what a nice battle! I wonder who will win!
Nicely done, Dark Psyghost!
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Postby Forse the Deathmaster » Sun Dec 31, 2006 3:47 am

Awsome update Dark! I'm sure that Cad will burn the flesh off their bones!!!!
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Re: Dark Psyghost's: Haunting past: PG-13: Fanfic: C42 Pt5

Postby dark psyghost » Sun Dec 31, 2006 8:41 am

Thanks everyone.
well here is the next update.

Chapter 42
Part 6: Mechanical?
Cadaverous waited as the mist moved around him as the wolf’s head was closing in on him.
As he was sure that no one could see him through the mist Cadaverous turned into ice crystals that moved through the mist past the wolf’s.
Behind the wolf’s head still covered by mist the ice crystals turned back into Cadaverous holding a green sword in his hands.
Cadaverous quickly charged at Tala holding his sword ready to slash.
Tala was surprised as Cadaverous emerged from the mist charging at him.
Tala jumped backwards as Cadaverous slashed at him but the sword Tala’s side leaving a cut.
Kai was now charging at Cadaverous as the wolf’s head fell apart in many shards of ice.
Through the cut in Tala’s side Cadaverous saw some electrical wiring covered by metal plating.
“What has happened to you?” Asked Cadaverous.
Because of the sudden surprise of the fact that Tala was part machine Cadaverous did not notice Kai.
Kai fired a fire ball at Cadaverous back and Cadaverous was hit and fell to his hands and knees by the force.
Kai walked next to him and said “The cluster made me and Tala way stronger by removing our natural weaknesses.”.
“The only things you have become are mechanical monsters.” Said Cadaverous as he got up.
“Maybe but we now have the power to beat you and your weak Holy dragon guard.” Said Tala with an evil smile on his face.
“It does not matter if you are mechanical freaks you will still lose.” Said Cadaverous.
“Enough talk. Time to die.” Said Kai as he pointed his hand at Cadaverous and yelled “Fire bolts.”
Kai fired many small spheres of fire at Cadaverous but the cloaked boy jumped out of the way.
Tala focused his energy and small ice spikes appeared on his fingertips as he charged at Cadaverous.
Cadaverous noticed Tala charging at him and fired a continuous stream flames towards him.
Tala jumped over the stream of flames as Kai pointed his hand at Cadaverous and fired more small spheres of fire at Cadaverous.
Cadaverous stopped firing the stream of flames and jumped back just as Tala landed and slashed at him.
Tala managed to hit Cadaverous shoulder with his claw and Cadaverous landed holding his shoulder with his other hand.
End part 6.

Happy new year everyone.
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Postby APE » Sun Dec 31, 2006 9:02 am

HAPPY NEW YEARS!! Verry nice update, but won't the small spheres of fire, that Kai fired hit Tala? I mean Cad moved and Tala was near the spot.
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Postby dark psyghost » Sun Dec 31, 2006 9:41 am

Thanks APE. That is something you will find out next year when i post the next update.
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Postby Elend-X » Sun Dec 31, 2006 11:40 am

Great Update Dark and Happy New Year!
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