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Re: Dark Psyghost's PPGD fanfic"Haunting past"(C9

Postby dark psyghost » Sun Jun 25, 2006 12:51 pm

next update is here.

Chapter 9
Part 5: The battle between light and dark.
“So you summoned Yosei to protect yourself from Kokusho interesting choice.” Said Nighteyes.
“Just shut up and die already.” Said Serras angry and she charged at Nighteyes.
“Kokusho’s breath.” Said Nighteyes and a fireball was lauched from Kokusho’s mouth.
The fireball hit Serras but caused less damage because it had to go through the light liquid.
“You cannot win all your attacks will be weakened by Yosei before they hit me.” Said Serras.
Danny fired a green energy beam towards Serras.
The beam went straight trough Yosie and hit Serras full force.
“I told you to keep out of this you brat.” Said Serras.
“So why would I listen to you.” Said Danny as he fired another energy beam.
“Reflector hole.” Said Serra and a white hole appeared in front of Serras.
The beam entered the hole and the hole teleported behind Danny.
The beam came out of the hole and hit Danny in the back.
Danny disappeared.

Outside Butch his body Danny appeared.
“What is happening?” Asked Blossom.
“Well we where planning on beating Serras inside Butch his mind and forcing her out of his body.” Said Danny.
“Then why are you the one who is outside his body?” Asked Buttercup.
“I ran out of energy so I needed to get out of his body.” Said Danny.
“Well how is the fight going inside Butch his mind?” Asked Blossom.
“Both Nighteyes and Serras has summoned some sort dragon shaped aura .” Said Danny.

Inside Butch his mind Nighteyes was charging up energy.
“Pure darkness.” Said Nighteyes and Kokusho fired a powerful dark energy beam from his mouth.
“Reflector hole.” Said Serras and a white hole appeared before Serras.
The beam entered the hole and came out of it going towards Nighteyes.
As soon as the beam hit Kokusho his and Nighteyes’s eyes lit up.
“I thought you would do that but you forgot that a star is able to absorb energy attacks from elements it controls.” Said Nighteyes with a smile.
“Damn you. Yosei breath.” Yelled Serras and Yosie fired a light liquid orb from his mouth.
“Kokusho’s breath.” Said Nighteyes and Kokusho fired a dark fireball from his mouth.
The orb and fireball hit each other and exploded creating a cloud of smoke.
“Dark inferno.” Said Nighteyes and an explosion of dark fire emitted from Kokusho.
The smoke was blown away by the explosion and Serras was hit not very hard because the light liquid weakened the blast.
The field below was now burning in dark fire and both Serras and Nighteyes were breathing heavily.
“Lets finish this. Kokusho’s wrath.” Said Nighteyes and Kokusho was launched at Serras.
“Yosei’s holy barrier.” Said Serras and Yosei transformed into a spherical light barrier around Serras.
End part 5.
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Postby Forse the Deathmaster » Sun Jun 25, 2006 12:59 pm

Great work!
I belive that those two are equal in power.
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Postby dark psyghost » Sun Jun 25, 2006 1:05 pm

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Re: Dark Psyghost's PPGD fanfic"Haunting past"(C9

Postby Leon FlameBurst » Sun Jun 25, 2006 1:38 pm

Great chapter, dark psyghost!
And a nice battle!
Keep going till the end! *eat some popcorn*
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Postby dark psyghost » Sun Jun 25, 2006 4:45 pm

Thanks for the Comment Leon FlameBurst.
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Re: Dark Psyghost's PPGD fanfic"Haunting past"(C9

Postby dark psyghost » Mon Jun 26, 2006 11:09 am

well here is the next update.

Chapter 9
Part 6: the battle ends.
“I knew you would unleash Kokusho’s wrath. But it will not harm me at all because Yosei’s holy barrier will protect me from any damage for half an hour.” Said Serras with an evil smile.
Kokusho hit the barrier and an explosion followed.
When the smoke had disappeared Nighteyes and Serras floating in the air and the barrier was gone.
“What the hell where is my barrier?” Said Serras surprised.
“Because of the power of Kokusho your barrier was destroyed instantly so now we both have sacrificed our star.” Said Nighteyes.
“Well I will destroy you anyway with or without Yosei.” Said Serras angry.
Serras charged at Nighteyes.
“D.D. tactic.” Said Nighteyes and he got slashed in two by Serras.
Serras started to laugh when she saw Nighteyes body fall into two pieces.
Suddenly she got hit by 2 dark lightning bolts.
“What is going on, what hit me?” Said Serras.
“I did. Did you really think I would be hit so easily?” Said Nighteyes standing behind Serras.
Serras looked at the body she just cut in 2 and that body turned into a black blob and flew back to Nighteyes.
Serras tried to charge up energy but failed and fell on her knees.
Nighteyes charged up some dark energy in his normal hand.
“Time to finish you.” Said Nighteyes and he fire 4 dark lightning bolts.
“You may have won this time but I will return.” Said Serras and she laughed as she disappeard.

Outside Butch his body everyone was waiting for anything to happen.
Suddenly a red eyed blob fell from his body and fled into the shadows of destroyed building.
A few seconds later Crovax appeared.
“So who has won?” Asked Brick.
“Nighteyes won but Serras fled and Butch will be in a lot of pain for a time.” Said Crovax.
Then Butch started to scream from an extreme pain in his back where the wings where.
Butch fell on his hands and knees from the pain and his wings where losing feathers.
“We have to get him to the hospital quick.” Said Brick and he grabbed Butch and flew off.
The Powerpuff girls, Maya, Bell, Danny and Crovax followed him.
After a minute Butch his wing had disappeared and he was bleeding heavily from the cuts made by the wings.

At Dark Eden Dark Samus walked in the command room.
“So did you capture him?” Asked Tetra-Holy.
“No he disappeared before I could capture him.” Said Dark Samus.
“No worry about it he will show himself again sooner or later.” Said Tetra-Holy.
What is he up to? Thought Tetra-Holy.
End of Chapter 9.
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Postby Darkness_calls » Mon Jun 26, 2006 11:13 am

Ohhh good one.
I pretty sure it must be painful what he is going through ... poor Butch
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Postby dark psyghost » Mon Jun 26, 2006 11:25 am

Thanks for the comment DC.
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Postby Forse the Deathmaster » Mon Jun 26, 2006 1:55 pm

Wow! That must have hurt. Butch might feel a slight sting in the morning. lol
Very nice Dark, Congratulations.
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Postby dark psyghost » Mon Jun 26, 2006 3:04 pm

Thanks for the comment Forse the Deathmaster
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Re: Dark Psyghost's PPGD fanfic"Haunting past"(C9

Postby Leon FlameBurst » Mon Jun 26, 2006 5:39 pm

Looks like Butch have a bad day with pain.
Great chapter, dark psyghost!

Guess you will say:
'Thanks for the comment Leon FlameBurst.' lol
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Postby dark psyghost » Mon Jun 26, 2006 7:05 pm

Thanks for the comment Leon FlameBurst.
your guess was correct. :)
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Re: Dark Psyghost's PPGD fanfic"Haunting past"(C9

Postby dark psyghost » Tue Jun 27, 2006 2:04 pm

Next update.

Chapter 10
Part 1: The start of a hospital stay for Butch.
In the hospital Brick carrying Butch entered along with Bell, Maya, Crovax and the Powerpuff girls.
The hospital entrance hall was filled with people from the police.
A nurse ran over to the group.
“What happened to you all and hello Blossom, Bubbles and Buttercup?” Asked the nurse who had red hair that covered her face.
“Miss Bellum?” asked Blossom.
“Yes but we need to get that Rowdy Ruff boy to a doctor quickly. Follow me.” Said Miss Bellum and she ran toward a man.
“Doctor Soft we have a seriously injured boy here.” Said Miss Bellum.
“Ok I will look at him.” Said doctor Soft.
Doctor Soft grabbed Butch and walk into an examining room.
“So how are you girls doing?” Asked Miss Bellum.
“We are fine. Our new school is fun and Blossom has a boyfriend.” Said Bubbles and she, Maya and Bell giggled.
“Bubbles.” Said Blossom a bit annoyed and her face was a bit red.
“And are they new friends?” Asked Miss Bellum.
“Yes that is Bell she was our enemy first but now she is a nice girl. And that is Maya she is in the same team as the Rowdy Ruff boys.” Said Bubbles.
“And that guy is Crovax.” Said Buttercup.
Meanwhile Nighteyes and Crovax where talking in a corner.
“I think I need to train in the art of 5 star disciplines” Said Nighteyes.
“What do you mean I thought you said you mastered that?” Asked Crovax.
“No I said I mastered 2 stars of the 5 star disciplines.” Said Nighteyes.
“So you know Kokusho and Yosei.” Said Crovax.
“Yes but I need to learn to summon Keiga, Ryusei and Jugen.” Said Nighteyes.
“So how will you learn that?” Asked Crovax.
“I don’t know we first need to gather some information about the techniques before I can learn them.” Said Nighteyes.
Doctor Soft came out of the Examining room.
“The boy will need to stay in the hospital for 4 days. I have closed the cuts on his back with stitches.” Said doctor Soft.
“Ok.” Said Brick with a sad face.
Maya flew over to Brick and hug him.
“Don’t worry he will be alright he is strong.” Whispered Maya in Brick’s ear.
“I know thanks for reminding me.” Whispered Brick back.
“What happened here and why is the place filled with people form the police?” Asked Blossom.
“Someone killed a doctor and tried to kill Boomer.” Said Miss Bellum.
“What. Is Boomer alright?” Said Brick surprised.
“Yes he is fine.” Said doctor Soft.
End part 1.
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Re: Dark Psyghost's PPGD fanfic"Haunting past"(C10

Postby Leon FlameBurst » Tue Jun 27, 2006 5:39 pm

Nice chapter, dark psyghost!
I didn't see that coming, Miss Bellum working in the hospital!
Keep this up!

Oh Im thinking, I spend now more time to comment your fanfics and not spend to my own...
Oh well, I don't mind.
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Postby Darkness_calls » Tue Jun 27, 2006 5:52 pm

Hahaha. Bellum in the hospital ^_^
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Postby dark psyghost » Tue Jun 27, 2006 6:25 pm

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Postby Forse the Deathmaster » Wed Jun 28, 2006 9:24 am

Once again! Good work Dark!
Very nice chapter!
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Re: Dark Psyghost's PPGD fanfic"Haunting past"(C10

Postby dark psyghost » Wed Jun 28, 2006 9:41 am

thanks for the comment Forse the Deathmaster.

here is the next update.

Chapter 10
Part 2: Miss Bellum’s story.
Danny landed in front of the Powerpuff house and rang the doorbell.
Professor Utonium opened the door.
“Hello Danny where are the girls and everyone who was going to fight Butch?” Asked the professor.
“They are at the hospital Boomer and Butch are seriously wounded.” Said Danny.
“How is the rest doing?” Asked the professor.
“They have many minor injuries nothing serious and are pretty beat.” Said Danny.
“I will go to the hospital now care to join me?” Asked the professor.
“No I will go home now and rest.” Said Danny.
“Ok thanks for helping and goodbye.” Said the professor.
“Goodbye.” Said Danny and he flew off.

Meanwhile back in the hospital Miss Bellum was looking at the wounds of the girls.
“Nothing serious you girls can go home if you want.” Said Miss Bellum.
“May ask you something miss Bellum?” Asked Bubbles.
“Sure.” Said Miss Bellum.
“Why are you a nurse now?” Asked Bubbles.
“Well when the mayor retired half a year ago I also quit my job as assistant. Then an old college friend of me doctor Soft called and said that they needed some nurses in the hospital here. I took the job and moved to Megaville 3 months ago.” Explained Miss Bellum.
“So Blossom you have a boyfriend now?” Asked Miss Bellum.
“Yes.’ Said Blossom and her face turned a bit red again.
“Should you not let him know you are ok?” Asked miss Bellum.
“That is a good idea. I going now bye.” Said Blossom.
“Bye Blossom.” Said Miss Bellum, Bubbles and Maya.
“Bye.” Said Buttercup, Bell and Crovax.
“Is Boomer awake?” asked Bubbles.
“No he will be unconscious for a day or two.” Said doctor Soft.
“Ok.” Said Bubbles.

Somewhere beneath Townsville in a cave like place 2 persons where looking in a pool of blood.
Surrounding them where pointy spikes made of hardened magma with fire on top of them.
Thanks to the fire the walls of the place and the many spikes had a glow which was red and orange.
“Is that the boy Kaine is after father.” Thought one of the persons telepathically to the other one.
“Yes I think that is the one and it troubles me.” Thought the larger person back.
“Why?” Thought the smaller person to the larger one.
“If Kaine is up to something it will always turn out bad for everyone except himself.” Thought the larger person back.
The smaller person looked at the boy in the pool of blood; the boy was wearing a brown cloak and had brown hair and blue eyes.
He has so much hat inside of him and is kind of cute. She thought.
End Part 2.

and again i hope the telepathic conversation is understandeble cause it is pretty hard to write.
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Postby Forse the Deathmaster » Wed Jun 28, 2006 10:03 am

Keep going Dark!
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Postby dark psyghost » Wed Jun 28, 2006 10:46 am

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Postby Darkness_calls » Wed Jun 28, 2006 12:23 pm

Whohoo, telepaths!
(I love telepathy XD)

Well done DP!
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Postby dark psyghost » Wed Jun 28, 2006 12:41 pm

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Postby Archangel M » Wed Jun 28, 2006 2:36 pm

Im REALLY SORRY I havem't posted a reply to you in ages. I was busy reading Tetras fan fic and PPGD fan fic. Then I cotinued mine and so forth. Finally cought up and I must say you have done a great job so far! Keep it up! ^_^
http://www.snafu-comics.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=13293 My Fan fic (Updated 1 hour ago)

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Re: Dark Psyghost's PPGD fanfic"Haunting past"(C10

Postby dark psyghost » Wed Jun 28, 2006 5:30 pm

Thanks for the comment Archangel M. I am glad you have found the time to catch up.

Added after 2 hours 27 minutes:

well here is the next update.

Chapter 10
Part 3 : The mysterious duo.
The small person was walking to the exit.
“Where are you going daughter?” Thought the large person to his daughter.
“I am going to help him father.” Thought the daughter back.
“Wait you can not do that.” Thought the father to his daughter.
“Why not?” Thought the daughter back.
“2 reasons. One you never been in the mortal realm before and two he is friends with my old enemy’s.” Thought the father to his daughter.
“that is not fair I can go to the mortal realm so once has to be the first time. And because they are your enemy’s does not mean he is.” Thought the daughter back and she ran towards the exit.
Suddenly the rock wall around the exit moved and closed off the exit.
“I will not let you go to the mortal realm when Kaine is planning something.” Thought the father to the daughter.
“Why, are you afraid of Kaine?” Thought the daughter back.
“No but he is dangerous.” Thought the father to the daughter.
“Why?” Thought the daughter back.
“Come to the pool of blood and I will show you.” Thought the father to the daughter.
Both father and daughter walked to the pool of blood and the pool started to show an image and the text “956 years ago”.

In the image in the pool a men with blue eyes and black hair wearing black pants was walking towards a women with blue eyes and brown hair wearing a pink dress.
“Sis can you help me?” Asked the man.
“Sure Kaine.” Answered the women.
“Come with me.” Said Kaine and he walked into a shed.
As soon as the women entered the shed Kaine pulled on a rope and a rope trap beneath her feet triggered.
The woman was now hanging upside down and Kaine walked towards her.
He grabbed a rope and tied her arms together at elbow height beneath her head.
“What is the meaning of this?” Asked the women angry.
“You are going to give me eternal life and eternal youth sis.” Said Kaine with an evil smile and he grabbed a big iron bucket.
He put the bucket beneath the women her wrists and he cut the wrists open.
The bucket was filling with the woman’s blood.
After 5 minutes the woman’ body was out of blood and Kaine walked towards the bucket.
Kaine used the blood to make ancient markings on his chest and arms.
After he had made the markings on his body he grabbed a scroll and opened it.
“Ish sha ra I mu ka she shan.” He started to read up and ancient text.
After 2 minutes of chanting the ancient text the blood in the bucket turned into a black smoke.
The smoke entered Kaine’s body trough the strange markings.
Then Kaine’s body started to emit shadows and a black smoke surrounded him.
Now Kaine set the scroll and his sister’s body on fire.

Back in the cave the daughter looked at the blood pool and was apparently impressed.
“What did he do to himself?” Thought the daughter to the father.
“He used an ancient spell called “Death’s mist”. “ Thought the father back.
“It gives him the power to control the black smoke created from the blood of a death sibling and eternal youth and life.” Thought the father to the daughter.
“Ok so I will be careful bye father.” Thought the daughter back and she ran out of the cave.
“Wait.” Thought the father to the daughter but it was too late she was gone.
End Part 3.

This was a long telepathic conversation so i hope it is understandeble.
and can you guess who the father and daugther are?
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Postby Forse the Deathmaster » Thu Jun 29, 2006 12:04 am

Good update Dark!
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