Chapter 1: I want to play a game. Naruto FF rated T

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Chapter 1: I want to play a game. Naruto FF rated T

Postby Mr.Evil » Sat May 20, 2006 5:45 pm

Did this in my free time, mixed Saw with Naruto and hope you all enjoy

Chapter 1: Darkness

Sakura opened her eyelids to see darkness, nothing to see but endless darkness all around her and added with a horrid stench. She quickly covered her nose, the stench being a stench she couldn’t recognize but felt like she had smelled it once before.

She sat up while her eyes still hadn't adjusted to the light, the air a bit cool but nothing she couldn’t handle as she tried to move. She was able to get up but as she tried to walk her right leg wouldn’t work and fell back to the ground

What’s going on here?

She thought as she felt a heavy steel chain was around her ankle on her right bare foot.

Where am I? Why am I here?

She thought in a panic. Then a chill, colder than any ice, move up her spine as she heard a groan from in front of her. “H-hello? W-who is there?”

“S-Sakura?” a weak voice asked, yet still gave the girl some hope.

“Sasuke, Sasuke is that you?” she asked in a tone of both a mixture of hope and fear.

“Yeah, it’s me,” he replied, a smile appeared on her face.

“Sasuke, do you know where we are?” she asked.

“Sorry, I don’t. But it could help if you turned on the lights.”

“But I can’t see anything around me, where’s the switch?”

“Just feel around the walls, I just check and if it’s not on my side it must be on yours.”

“Alright,” she replied, quivering in her voice as she turned around and placed her hands in front of her, shaking as she did because she couldn’t even see her own hands.

They finally collided with a cold wall; she moved them around in the endless darkness until she found it. She flipped the switch and instantly blinding lights from overhead shinned down on them.

Her eyes adjusted to the light faster than to the darkness as her face was filled with horror, finally realizing what that smell was as she saw Naruto dead on the floor in front of her; a pool of blood surrounded her teammate and a Kunai in his hand with blood covering the blade. “NARUTO!” she screamed in terror, then looking around the room in a frighten state. All she could see was a bathroom that looked like it had been abandon for years, tile barely holding onto the walls and Sasuke on the other side, with a chain around his ankle just like hers.

“Calm down, Sakura,” Sasuke said.

“How can I be calm?” She cried back as the horror forced her to sit back down, “Naruto is dead in front of us, we are in a place against are will, we have no idea why, and you want me to calm down?”

“Yes,” he replied in a dark tone, “because wasting our energy like that won’t get us anywhere.”

She tried to calm down, but the pool of blood from Naruto still had her at her wits end. “So, what do we do?”

“Sasuke looked around, then noticed a clock hanging in-between them that just turned ten. “Do you see that?”

“She looked over at the clock. “What about it?”

“That is the only thing that is new in this place; someone wanted us to know what time it was. So it is safe to say who ever did this to us doesn’t want us dead, yet.”

“I see what you mean, but what does whoever kidnapped us want with us?” she asked.

“I don’t know, but maybe something near us will help clear this up.”

They looked around the areas they were allowed to reach for anything, but as the clock struck ten minutes past they were no farther than where they started.

“There has to be something here,” Sakura said as she looked back over at, Naruto. Her body begun to shake once again but then, she noticed something in his other hand, the hand closer to her.

Slowly, she moved closer to the lifeless corpse, of the one she use to have as a teammate. Because of the chain she had to lean forward on her stomach and stretch her arm as far out as she cold. She reached his hand and pulled out the item. She looked at the tape recorder. “Sasuke, I found something,” she said, holding it up for him to see.

“Is there a tape in it?” he asked as she looked inside.


“Then play it.”

She nodded as she pushed the button to rewind the tape until it stopped then pushed play.

A dark raspy voice came out of the recorder. “Hello Sakura and Sasuke, I want to play a game. You both have more than one reason why you are here, but as you can see you are trapped unless you can find a way out. I want to know if your lives are worth that much to you. Your other teammate was a strong one, but with so much poison coursing in his blood, it looks to see that all he could do is slice his own throat.”

“Naruto was always a weak one,” Sasuke mentioned as the tape recorder added.

“By now, I would assume that Sasuke just insulted his own teammate has he has done so many times before. You should know better and respect the dead.”

“Just then, Sasuke was electrocuted as Sakura screamed out. “SASUKE!”

“Don’t worry, that should only be enough to stun him, Sakura. And don’t even try to use your Jutsu’s. I’ve made sure that you won’t be getting out that way. Now all you two need to do to live through this, is to follow the rules, after that my heart will see that you are worthy to live. Let the games begin,” then the tape ended.

To Be Continued

Thought of this in my free time, I hope to continue this with one heck of a twister in the end.

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Postby Emerald Emblem » Sat May 20, 2006 5:48 pm

Shorten the chapters
then i might read it
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