(taildafoxbleedmanfan's)The Fanfic Continues...

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(taildafoxbleedmanfan's)The Fanfic Continues...

Postby taildafoxbleedmanfan » Sun Apr 30, 2006 11:00 am

Chapter One - Findings, Battle, Friendship.

"Where - Where am I?" The young fox woke up to a startling sight - A blue hedgehog staring at her.
"Home. " Answered the hegdehog.
"H- How?" She replied.
" We found you near the river banks sat up unconcious in a plane. " Said the Hedgehog, and turned around to start a conversation with another hedgehog, only this one was black and red. "Rough sight if you ask me." Said the black hedgehog. "Name's Shadow. The guy next to me's Sonic."
The young fox stared at the two for a minute then thought, ' Wait, how do these names sound so familiar? ' then she sat up and said " My name's Tail. Tail The fox. "

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I guess I didn't have much to say here, post a reply and I'll say something. Besides, I aint very good at writing these things.
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Postby Darkness_calls » Sun Apr 30, 2006 11:00 am

A good start, but two problems:
1) Tails is a male ;) or is he a she in you fic ?
2) All fanfic go in the Art forum.

Other then that:
Good work keep it up ^_^
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Postby Archrival » Sun Apr 30, 2006 11:01 am

add knuckles he rocks
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Postby taildafoxbleedmanfan » Sun Apr 30, 2006 11:02 am

Tail (no "s" damn you ) is me. She's Tails's sister. Long forgotten sister that is.
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Postby Archrival » Sun Apr 30, 2006 11:02 am

oh and tails' real name is miles tails prower
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Postby Darkness_calls » Sun Apr 30, 2006 11:02 am

taildafoxbleedmanfan wrote:Tail (no "s" damn you ) is me. She's Tails's sister. Long forgotten sister that is.


hey I didn't notice :ogle: (stupid me ^_^ )
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Postby taildafoxbleedmanfan » Sun Apr 30, 2006 11:04 am

Damn you, shut up! It's my fanfic! And it's me! I'm his sister! >.<! Tail's my avatar

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taildafoxbleedmanfan wrote:Damn you, shut up! It's my fanfic! And it's me! I'm his sister! >.<! Tail's my avatar


That was to the guy two replies above.

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Archrival-001 wrote:add knuckles he rocks


He's comin' later, don't you worry.
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Postby Archrival » Sun Apr 30, 2006 11:04 am

i meant the real tails not you
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Postby taildafoxbleedmanfan » Sun Apr 30, 2006 11:06 am

Darkness_calls wrote:A good start, but two problems:
1) Tails is a male ;) or is he a she in you fic ?
2) All fanfic go in the Art forum.

Other then that:
Good work keep it up ^_^


Oh... The Art Forum... Erm... I'll continue it in there. I'm stupid. :'(

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Archrival-001 wrote:i meant the real tails not you


Oh...... I knew that. :P
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Postby Darkness_calls » Sun Apr 30, 2006 11:06 am

That was to the guy two replies above.


I guessed so ;)

Oh... The Art Forum... Erm... I'll continue it in there. I'm stupid. Crying


Don't worry nearly everyone does this mistake ^_^
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The Fanfic Continues...

Postby taildafoxbleedmanfan » Sun Apr 30, 2006 11:33 am

ATTENTION: If you want to see part 1 of Chapter 1, go in the Bleedman Forum. I kinda got the wrong one.

Continuing.

Sonic and Shadow stared at Tail for a moment, then walked out of the room. Tail got out of the bed and walked around the house to meet the others. After walking down a corridor, then walking into the kitchen, a pink hedgehog caught her eye. " Hi!" Greeted the pink hedgehog, " My name's Amy! What's your name? " She stared at Tail continuously until she got an answer. " My name's Tail. " She finally replied.
"Nice name" Said Amy. " There are many of us, if you want to see some of us, just walk into rooms, there are names on the doors y'know. " She continued, then walked off. Tail turned around and bumped into a red echidna. "Oops, sorry! " She apologised. " It's okay. " Said the echidna. " My name's Knuckles. " He continued. " I'm strongest around here, so if you need anyone beating up, just come ask me, ok? "
Tail nodded, then walked into the Living Room, only surprised to see a green hawk. The hawk turned around to see who it was, then said " ... You must be Tail. I've heard about you from Shadow and Sonic. " Tail stared at the hawk for a moment " What's your name? " She asked. They both stayed silent for a minute. "Jet." Said the hawk. "That's a nice name" Replied Tail.
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Postby Archrival » Sun Apr 30, 2006 11:35 am

WAT ABOUT THE ALBERTROSS?????????????????????
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Postby taildafoxbleedmanfan » Sun Apr 30, 2006 11:36 am

Archrival-001 wrote:WAT ABOUT THE ALBERTROSS?????????????????????


I don't like Storm. So ner.
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Postby Rival » Sun Apr 30, 2006 12:08 pm

taildafoxbleedmanfan wrote:
Darkness_calls wrote:A good start, but two problems:
1) Tails is a male ;) or is he a she in you fic ?
2) All fanfic go in the Art forum.

Other then that:
Good work keep it up ^_^


Oh... The Art Forum... Erm... I'll continue it in there. I'm stupid. :'(

I'll merge them for you, it's a lot easier that way.

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Threads Fused. Topic renamed. Accordingly to the rules.
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It continues... Again... Please fuse....

Postby taildafoxbleedmanfan » Sun Apr 30, 2006 3:01 pm

Chapter 2 - The Training

"So, I see you're new. It's about time we got someone new on the party. Welcome. So, are you up to fighting? " Said Knuckles. " Yes....... I am ready..... " Answered Tail, sounding obsessed. "Good. Then begin. Multiple live enemies we have captured from battles will annoy you, attack you, until you kill them... " Explained the training echidna, who has had this done to him before, so is used to it and is an expert.
Tail fought and fought and eventually, tired out. So she fainted.
" ... She has more will power, but she needs actual strength... " Said Knuckles, who scooped her up and laid her on her bed inside, then walked off. The training carried on for 2 years, which one morning, Tail woke up and was challenged by Knuckles himself to recap about if she has learnt. " If you are ready... Start. " Said Knuckles. ". TAIL BLAST! " Tail shouted that out, and formed a blast out of her hands which she fired at Knuckles, who dodged it. "FIRE PUNCH!" Shouted Knuckles, who's hand lit alight with a dangerous and deadly flame, which he lunged at Tail, who dodged. They attacked each other with immense force, when soon Tail wanted this to end. So, she did what noone else in the group could do. Turn invisible. Then, she appeared behind Knuckles and hit him from behind. Which caused him to faint. "I - ... I did it... " She said, surprised and shocked. She then healed him with powers, and helped him rise, but she fainted. " She will be one of our powerfullest... I should get Shadow to teach her how to use weapons... Or maybe not... " He scooped her up again, and laid her on her bed and went to tell the others.

Chapter 3 - Is Love What You All Expected?

Tail stirred, got up and went into the kitchen. Where everyone just stared at her with surprised eyes, but stayed silent. "What's going on?" She asked, breaking the silence. Sonic gulped, but then he plucked the courage to say it, so he pulled out the yellow Chaos Emerald from behind his back, and showed it to Tail. " These jewels, are the core of one of our most powerful changes, Tail. We - We were told by Knuckles that you flashed yellow in your sleep... This is what we call turning super... But you are one of the first just to turn it at the age of 16... " Everyone turned silent yet again, and kept staring at Tail, wanting her to say two words. "Tail... Hold the emerald and say these two words. " Said Shadow. Who gave Tail a slip of paper with the words "Chaos Control" on it, and passed her the yellow emerald. Everyone again stayed silent then walked outside for her to follow. When outside, Tail kept hold of the emerald then said " Chaos Control..." And she turned super with a strong gust of power which made everyone flinch. "You did it, Tail. " Said Shadow. And with those words, everyone's silence turned into cheering. Sonic, who went inside, started to think. Him being 17, he only had one problem - If he liked Tail, and Amy'd find out, he'd get a smack. " Maybe I should dump Amy... I'm not sure... I might not.... Naw, I better not... "
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Re: It continues... Again... Please fuse....

Postby Erix » Sun Apr 30, 2006 3:10 pm

dont make a new thread, you already have one.
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Re: It continues... Again... Please fuse....

Postby taildafoxbleedmanfan » Sun Apr 30, 2006 3:12 pm

>.@ How... Do... I... Add... The... Thread... To... My... Other... one... then..??????????????
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Re: It continues... Again... Please fuse....

Postby Erix » Sun Apr 30, 2006 3:13 pm

wait for a mod.....or copy paste the stuff in this one into your other one.
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Re: It continues... Again... Please fuse....

Postby taildafoxbleedmanfan » Sun Apr 30, 2006 3:16 pm

Erix3423 wrote:wait for a mod.....or copy paste the stuff in this one into your other one.


... Is it my fault I signed up just this morning and noone told me about this? Throw me a frikkin bone here!
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Re: It continues... Again... Please fuse....

Postby Erix » Sun Apr 30, 2006 3:18 pm

no worries ^_^
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Postby taildafoxbleedmanfan » Sun Apr 30, 2006 3:19 pm

Erix3423 wrote:no worries ^_^


Yay, happiness! Too bad there's noone online on my MSN lift... T.T the fox is lonely!
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Postby Rival » Sun Apr 30, 2006 3:26 pm

Okay, I'll merge this thread with the other one, but in future post all of your Art in one thread.
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Re: (taildafoxbleedmanfan's)The Fanfic Continues...

Postby Erix » Sun Apr 30, 2006 3:29 pm

thanks kami ^_^
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Postby taildafoxbleedmanfan » Sun Apr 30, 2006 3:40 pm

T.T I don't get uuuuu!!!!!!! How do u fuse the damn things?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Fusing is good when you're on DBZ, but what the hell?
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Postby Rival » Sun Apr 30, 2006 3:51 pm

I'm a Mod. I have those little buttons at the bottom, with which I do stuff with threads(merge, lock, delete etc.).

Ordinary members can't do that. So just post your Art in one thread please.
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