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PostPosted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 8:20 am 
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Wow a quick comeback, I had a cool Idea and I have a basic structure this time
Here is my Naruto fanfic, A little opening for everyone

Opening: A young protogy
the sun was high in the almost cloudless sky. in a clearing in a forest, there was a stream running through it, a few wooden posts scattered around it, in the stream was a young boy about 13 years old, he wore a green shirt with a lightning bolt on the front, he wore Dark blue trousers, he had spiked white blonde hair one hanging over the left side of his face his eyes were blue like sapphires, he then closed them and formed a few hand seals in a space of 5 seconds ending with two fingers on one hand sticking up in the air the same with the other except the fingers were resting against the others palm
“Shadow replication” the boy said opening his eyes.
then 3 more boys appeared either side of him, the strange thing was that these were exact replicas of the blonde haired boy.
“Darn it, I wanted to make more” the original said sighing, “But this should be enough to pass my exam.”
he then formed the same hand symbol and the others vanished. Then a rustling could be heard from the edge of the clearing behind him. He then turned reaching into a small container on his left leg and pulled out a shuriken, instantly throwing it in the direction the rustling came from then another shuriken came from the edge of the clearing and both clashed cancelling the other out and landing on the ground.
“Who’s there” the white blonde haired boy said looking in the direction the shuriken came from.

end of Opening

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 8:26 am 
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Good opening PPGD Fan.

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 8:59 am 
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Wow, maintaining 2 fics??

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 9:04 am 
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wazit_blade wrote:
Wow, maintaining 2 fics??
I abandoned the other one Wazit

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 12:01 pm 
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Awsome openning PPGD Fan!
I can't wait to see the rest!
Naruto is awsome I'm now watching episode 34 in youtube.

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Good job PPGD


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Nice...I´ll try NOT to miss this one too.

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 1:12 pm 
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yay for ninjas!!!

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woah! naruto fic? ppgd fan? cool!
Fightng dreamers huh? i like haruka kanata and the one that is on episode 154 i think(i don't know the name)
BTW Came baack!

Oh! and Cool oppening ppgd fan

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 31, 2006 1:10 am 
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....eh I've only watched like 2 episodes of Naruto on youtube lol...and a few AMVs...the anime looks awsome its coming to aussie tv in october (both the original and the dub w00t )

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So why did you abandon the other one PPGD Fan?

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^_^ cause this is a new story :P
and anyways,good update PPGD fan ^_^ Loved it!

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 31, 2006 6:46 am 
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Well, certainly a new beginning

And it's opening, not update, whisper

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whispersoul25 wrote:
^_^ cause this is a new story :P
and anyways,good opening PPGD fan ^_^ Loved it!


Edited Wazit ^_^
Ok then ^^

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McDurg- I dunno' whispaho, I've seen some pretty hot things in my life. Like myself. I masturbate to my own image every day. :D Naw. How about all three of us combine, in the form of a sexy Godzilla? We would totally fuck Mothra.
Alfimi - *sighs*....things i have to do *corners whisper against the wall* *unbutons shirt**flashes**butons shirt up again* there, enjoy your hearty.
Coos - Whisper's a bitch. :D
Malumultimus - Whisper...you are my favorite worshipper.
Mal again - Nyaaaa~


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wazit_blade wrote:
So why did you abandon the other one PPGD Fan?
Check the thread, my reasons are there

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 31, 2006 7:23 am 
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I rather not the many pages of the thread scares me

Ah I know that you are making a terrific new fic and that is all that matters. By the way, I gave my own character at the recruiting thread so yeah....

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Chapter 1 part 1: The graduation exam
a figure suddenly jumped out into the sky, The boy couldn’t see because the sun was blinding him. A man landed in front of him. This man was quite tall, he wore a black jumpsuit, a green jacket with a red swirling circle on the back, his hair was black and shoulder length which was rather messy, he wore a Blue forehead protector which had a leaf symbol engraved on it, his eyes were a pale green .
“Training hard I see, Kazuko” The man said smiling
“Thank you Hideko sensei” Kazuko said bowing his head
“I think your ready for your exam now” Hideko said with a smile and he put his hand on Kazuko’s head rubbing his hair. “You better get back to the school, your exam starts soon”
“Yes sensei” Kazuko said and he jumped into the trees and began branch hopping back to the village.

At the school an hour later in one of the classrooms Kazuko was sitting at his seat waiting to be called to take his exam. his seat was at the top of the stand, the tables and chair were made of wood, all the other students had been called and were chilling after there exams outside the school, then Hideko peeked round the door.
“Kazuko, it’s time” he said and Kazuko got up and ran to the door running under Hideko’s arm, he then ran to a door a few meters away. Inside the room was empty except for a long table with three ninjas sitting at it. the sun was shining through the large windows
“Lets see...” said the middle ninja flicking through some papers, then taking one from it “... Kazuko Miyaguchi, this is your first attempt to graduate isn‘t it?”
“Yes sir” Kazuko said entering the room and standing in front of the table
“Now” said the ninja on the left “In order to pass this exam you will need to use the ‘shadow replication technique to a certain standard, if it’s good then you pass”
“Now show us if you are capable of being a ninja” said the Ninja on the right.
Kazuko then began to perform different seal shapes ending with one hand with 2 fingers sticking up and the same with the other except the fingers rested against the others palm
“Shadow replication” Kazuko said and 5 copies of himself appeared either side of him
“5!” said the ninja on the left “That's very impressive, the other applicants couldn’t make more than the 3 required”
“Congratulations Kazuko” said the middle ninja
the ninja on the right picked up a forehead protector from the pile next to him and held it out, Kazuto’s replications vanished in puffs of white smoke and he walked forward and took the forehead protector from the ninja and put it on, the metal plate sparkled in the sunlight
“Thank you” Kazuko said bowing his head to the three of them and left the room heading for the doors leading outside.
“I did it!” he thought triumphantly to himself.

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Great opening and chapter 1!!! I can't wait for the next one!!! w00t

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yay he passed, he's a winner :snoogins:

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So far so good

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continue on with it ^_^ hope ill se my character ASAP...i just hope

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Alfimi - *sighs*....things i have to do *corners whisper against the wall* *unbutons shirt**flashes**butons shirt up again* there, enjoy your hearty.
Coos - Whisper's a bitch. :D
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Sweet can't wait for more!

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