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Did you like the short little twist?

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Yes, I did. Though I felt that something would happen ;)

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DAMNIT!!!
Meh, at least Garlands dead....OR IS HE???

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Dum dum dum. no I guess not ;)

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[spoiler]SPOILER OBLIERATED MOTHER FUCKERS![/spoiler]

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Spoiler obliterated mutha fuckas!

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GAH! I suggest you delete that post before someone else sees!

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I CAN'T!

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Besides, he comes back anyway in the game.

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Edit the post and put SPOILER OBLITIRATED !
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Chapter 5: The Journey begins.

Eve and the others arrived in the throne room and Sirian walked forward, "We have killed Garland
your majesty." he said and raised Garland's head. King Cornelius looked pleased and stood up,
"I thank you, warriors of light. Now the kingdom is free of the wretched traitor and we will live free,
but there is still the four fiends you must defeat. Find them, and destroy them to restore peace to our land." he said and bowed to the warriors, they bowed back. Eve walked over to a table and picked up something from it,
"This is the Lute that my family has been passing on the the princesses of Cornilia for generations, I would like you to have it as a token of my appreciation." she said and gave it to Sam, who examined it and shook hs head,
"We may not need this, but we will find a way to use it anyhow. Thank you, Princess." he said and smiled. Eve smiling back. Cornelius stood up again and whispered something into a guard's ear, then the guard left without
a word, "As a token of MY appreciation, I will have my troops repair the bridge north of here to guide you to the city of Pravoka. I, do wish this will get you started on your quest." he said and the others nodded, turning to leave without another word, but Eve stopped Sam, "Wait, um. Once you restore the crystals, um, maybe, you and I, you know..."
She trailed off and Sam shook his head, "I'm sorry princess, but I can't. I am not from this world. But maybe we will see eachother
again in the future. Until them, I bid you farewell." he said and caught up with his friends.

Once everyone had arrived at the bridge, Lloyd examined it interestingly, and then ran across it, everyone following, determined
to meet thier destiny. To save this world from destruction. And so...their journey began.

((END OF CHAPTER))
Well that was corny

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 29, 2006 9:12 am 
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Your better than me in the art section.

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Your story keeps on going good. Well done ^_^

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This one was corny though...

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As are all "we won the day" scenes :P

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Good point.
And it's the 'we SAVED the day" scenes ^_^;

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I meant that ...

... bastard ;)

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*pets Foxgear*
Don't cry.
Keep on going and you'll someday be just as good as you wanted.

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This is actually my first fanfic, ever foxgear.
All you have to do is practice, read books and shit, and read rps.
And stay in school.

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its why I wanna make comics.....distract the reader from the bad dialogue with pictures lol

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Erix3423 wrote:
its why I wanna make comics.....distract the reader from the bad dialogue with pictures lol


You shouldn't want to ... YOU SHOULD ! ;)

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I shouldn't with my bad artwork.

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Foxgear, stop being so down or I'll kick you ;)
Forced happyness :)

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Chapter 6: Damned Pirates!
After a day of fighting and silence, they arrived at Pravoka. Sirian was the first to walk into the port city and looked around,
"Let's just get some rest and then-" he was cut off by a woman's screaming. Lloyd was first to react and ran towards the screaming.
Once they found the girl she was being held by the neck and being threatened with a knife. The people threatening her were pirates,
trying to loot the poor girl. Lloyd drew his rapier and charged, Siran, in shock, ran after him, Sam and Sara following as well.
Lloyd jumped and stabed the one with the knife in the back. Right where a lung was, killing him. The other pirates noticed and drew
their sabres. Sara stared at the corpse, blood was rushing out the back and it looked like he dropped the knife. Sam grabbed it and
threatened the pirates with it, "I think you should let the girl go." he said. The pirates laughed,
"Do you really think you can defeat us all? FOOL!" a pirate said, who was obviously the captain. The other pirates charged at Sam
and Lloyd, Siri roundhouse kicked the captain (who was holding the girl by the throat) in the temple, making him fly and the girl fell to the ground.
Sirian picked her up and placed her against a wall, drew his sword, and lunged towards a pirate.
Right when Sirian stabbed a pirate in the neck, Lloyd was stabbed in the heart. Sirian cried out as he saw his brother get killed, and in a blind rage,
killed all the pirates in his way, to help his brother. Sara stared as the pirate laughed and came to kill Sirian, only to be killed as revenge,
Sam ran over in thought of what happened and saw, Lloyd had died. Sam's eyes went yellow and took out all three of his orbs, he cast them all at
once at the rest of the pirates, obviously killing them all. Once finished, Sam knelt down and sobbed. Sirian picked up his dead brother
and looked around frantically, "We need an item shop, come." and ran towards one.

The party was in an Inn, Sirian carrying a phoenix down, which had the power to bring people back. A tear dropped from his face onto
Lloyd's wound and dropped the phoenix down. Light emerged from it and Lloyd's eye opened, coughing up blood. Sara quickly took out
her cure orb and muttered out it's name, healing Lloyd's wound, "What happened?" Lloyd asked,
"You died. Don't be so reckless next time." Sirian said and hugged his brother.
Sam was resting, tired from using all his magic to cast all three spells at once.

The next morning, everyone left the Inn to see the captain pirate cowering on a wall of a house, "P-p-please...d-d-don't h-h-hurt me..."
the pirate stammered, "I-I-I'll be good, I-I-I won't hurt anyone anymore." Sirian hesitated, then nodded, "Fine, but I don't want to see you harm anyone again or..." he took out a knife, "I'll kill you." he said and the pirate cowered even more, "T-t-take my ship...j-j-just don't k-k-kill me." the pirate stammered and Sirian withdrew his weapon. Satisfied at the pirate's choice.

Throughout the rest of the day, they made even more preparations for their adventures on the sea. And the next day, they left.

((END OF CHAPTER))
Lloyd DIED! :shock:

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