FOXGEAR's Fan Fic

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Re: FOXGEAR's Fan Fic

Postby Swobok » Wed Apr 26, 2006 11:59 am

Sorry, but for me digimon died after the first season ^_^
MUHAHAHAHAH
Each time a pathetic fool like you read this sign, i get stronger....
Soon... the world will be MINE ! Muhahahahha !

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Postby Hiryu » Wed Apr 26, 2006 12:58 pm

Swobok wrote:Sorry, but for me digimon died after the first season ^_^
Give him a trie!!! His still workin on it!!!
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Re: FOXGEAR's Fan Fic

Postby Swobok » Wed Apr 26, 2006 1:05 pm

I was just giving my opinion about the whole serie. :tokingmonkey:
I hope it will be really diferent, i'm waiting for the next chapter.
Oh, and make spaces after your ",", it will be easier to read lol
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Re: FOXGEAR's Fan Fic

Postby Kane369 » Wed Apr 26, 2006 1:34 pm

Can't wait for the next chapter.
Plus, Digimon sucked after the second season. After that, I stopped watching.
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Re: FOXGEAR's Fan Fic

Postby Kane369 » Fri Apr 28, 2006 6:37 pm

Dun dun dun duuuuuuun....
Looking forward to next chapter
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Postby Darkness_calls » Fri Apr 28, 2006 6:45 pm

Good, This is going well. Now what is in his pocket ...
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Postby Kane369 » Fri Apr 28, 2006 6:50 pm

The Digivice.
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Postby Kane369 » Fri Apr 28, 2006 6:59 pm

Too short, sorry to say.
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Postby Darkness_calls » Fri Apr 28, 2006 7:01 pm

Good. This is going well.
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Re: FOXGEAR's Fan Fic

Postby Kane369 » Sat Apr 29, 2006 7:59 am

I'm sorrry. *gives foxgear a cookie*
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Postby Tuor » Sat Apr 29, 2006 3:13 pm

For me none of these have enough detail to constitute a chapter.
"Suddenly Frodo noticed that a strange-looking weather-beaten man, sitting in the shadows near the wall, was also listening intently to the hobbit-talk. He had a tall tankard in front of him, and was smoking a long-stemmed pipe curiously carved. His legs were stretched out before him, showing high boots of supple leather that fitted him well, but had seen much wear and were now caked with mud. A travel-stained cloak of heavy dark-green cloth was drawn close about him, and in spite of the heat of the room he wore a hood that overshadowed his face; but the gleam of his eyes could be seen as he watched the hobbits."
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Postby Material Defender » Sat Apr 29, 2006 3:19 pm

Tuor wrote:For me none of these have enough detail to constitute a chapter.


No shit man. It annoys me stuff like this gets all the comments and when I spend hours trying to type up my chapters, I get one reply at most.
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Postby Darkness_calls » Sat Apr 29, 2006 8:48 pm

That chapter reminded me of the movie ^_^
Good one.


Oh, don't listen to MD and Tuor. You're doing fine, MD may be a little fustraded because he spends a long time writing his fic. and I am one of the few that comment.
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Postby Darkness_calls » Sat Apr 29, 2006 9:17 pm

You're most welcome.


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Wait a sec ... I dont have a hat ...
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Re: FOXGEAR's Fan Fic

Postby Material Defender » Sat Apr 29, 2006 11:50 pm

13?

Not to be rude, but I could show you stories I made when I was eleven, though slightly(read, really.) crappy plot wise, that had a bit more detail then this.
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Postby Serafina » Mon May 01, 2006 7:41 pm

I like it. : D

But....Digimon?
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Postby Lotus Flower » Wed May 03, 2006 5:43 am

FOXGEAR wrote:Plus it's my 1st time actually TRYING to write.


Err seriously? That's one heck of a life if you didn't need to try writing before >.>
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Postby Darkness_calls » Wed May 03, 2006 5:51 am

Lotus Flower wrote:
FOXGEAR wrote:Plus it's my 1st time actually TRYING to write.


Err seriously? That's one heck of a life if you didn't need to try writing before >.>


You are turning his words around :unsure:
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Postby Lotus Flower » Wed May 03, 2006 6:10 am

Darkness_calls wrote:
Lotus Flower wrote:
FOXGEAR wrote:Plus it's my 1st time actually TRYING to write.


Err seriously? That's one heck of a life if you didn't need to try writing before >.>


You are turning his words around :unsure:


Not really. His wording was misleading, which made mine misleading. replace my "try" with "try hard". Happy?
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Postby Darkness_calls » Wed May 03, 2006 6:12 am

Lotus Flower wrote:Not really. His wording was misleading, which made mine misleading. replace my "try" with "try hard". Happy?


Sure, but leave him be. I like fanfics. And if MD is jelous becauseFoxGear gets more attention then poor him ... (I btw love MD's fics). FoxGear will most likely get much better. ;)

Allow him some time to train ...
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