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Anyone just visiting my thread, for the love of god skip the first pages. Just look at my recent stuff. XD

Rough, and I don't think much for the outlines, but the colour mix is quite nice. I think the hair shading should be a little darker, to give it a nicer effect.

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If you guys can recommend a good drawing tablet, that is affordable, please PM me and let me know.

Quite nice. But the pencil lines look odd in there. Keep it up.

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Ah and put your name on the thread. Or spike would get you.

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MEX-I-CAN'T ~Acktoo
hey man what was that show that only gay douchebags like called again? Oh yeah, it's One Piece ~Dave

I forgot to ink it......

Nice... I'd enjoy seeing more pictures... You have a nice style...

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Tip: You should make the torso just a little bit longer.
other then that I like the pose, action poses are always my favorite. <3

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http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/1896/draw39yw.jpg

heres more my normal style. plus I remembered to ink this time .

btw sorry for the cheap gradiant backrounds, I'm lazy


also I just noticed I missed some spots.....just pretend they're colored

welcome to the forums.

http://img50.imageshack.us/img50/7164/draw56wc.png

heres something I drew while on a BWL run. I havent colored it yet, and contrary to popular opinion, I used bleedman's style a little. mainly on buttercup, but to have it match I had to give ketil a similar look.

so tell me, you think its worth coloring?

Edit: I just noticed I forgot to draw buttercup's left arm.......my bad

Heh... It reminds me a lot of DBZ... But that's a good thing...

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colored the above post, still missing that left arm on buttercup though .

bumping for tonight, so I dont forget to update

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I had the black and white colors in. but the file became corrupt and I lost it. So I'll just put it as it is when I draw it. Heres my work precolored

I'll probably color it tommorow.

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http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/4354/draw84qs.png

Just a sketch I doodled. Thought itd be nice to put up, since its not ketil.

might color it tommorow

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I apologise greatly, I just relized that my last 2 were HUGE bitmaps. I'm not gonna change them (to lazy). but if you cant load them, dont worry about it. If I color them, I will convert the colored ones.

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http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/5673/sketch6zy.jpg

I wasnt sure I wanted to post this at all, it was a sketch I did in class today. But it features 2 more of my own characters, though its not a great picture.

Sey hello to Seiro and Terra, brother and sister to Ketil.

P.S. Sorry about another non coloured one

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Cool work! I commend you. If possible, could you describe some of you coloring techniques?

http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/2381/draw98ln.jpg

kinda just a doodle .

My colouring is the simplest laziest colouring technique. I just scan with MS paint, scan it as a type/text ink style.....thats my inking. Then I go to photoshop, switch it to an RGB type. Whip out to magic wand and paintbrush and freehand it. Its not the best looking stuff, but it makes it easy to squeeze colouring into lifes downtimes .

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Cool picture. I can't really tip you on the coloring though I can say that the proportions seem good. I'm a little confused as to weither Ketil's sitting or standing however.

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this was mainly a drawing to focus on a look for ketil when he gets fully engulfed. Sadly, I did just recently notice how akward his stance is. I try my best not to continually dish out standing poses....starting to regret that descision.

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I want honest feedback, I plan on adding an actual backround to a picture, but I want the picture to feature Buttercup and my guy ketil. I drew a buttercup off the top of my head ( couldnt look at her, in math class). I want to know if theres any seriously noticible problems with this buttercup. Keep in mind I plan to completely redraw her, this is simply a rough sketch.

thank you for your time.

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The overall stance isn't bad, and the picture is quite accurate for something off the top of your head. I feel that the legs throw the balance off a little though. If you fixed that it would be perfect.

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legs to long? or disproportioned?

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I would say disproportioned, but in a perspective sense. The left leg should be just a little longer, and the feet need a more solid orientation.

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Raghhh!!!! I am having the worst drawing block. I really want to draw, but cant think of anything!!

off chance anyone has a request?!

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Try to re-draw Buttercups legs. They are too thin. The biginning is good but as you see on most pics they should be larger.And a small idea for your lack of things to draw;
Make a partner for Erix!
The partner musn´t be a girl. And does´nt need to be his partner either. Maybe a nemesis or something...

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well, my chars name is ketil
but yeah, thatd be a good idea, ketil lacks an alter ego, a rival. Hell I barely touch on his brother and sister

That does give me some ideas, thanks.

oh and random kitty girl ftw
http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/9342/kitty20nm.jpg

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