Thanks BL! (:
I think I might redo the girl though.

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y? i think she looks good. only thing i'd recommend is give them all eye brows not because they look like they need them but because its easier to show different emotions if you have em. =3 (don't forget to give the girl little thin ones and the guys bug bushy ones! Badass might be better without tho. /shrug)

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I'd have to agree with BL that eyebrows would give better emotion.
And on the subject of the girl, all I can see that you might want to do would be to make her waist a little thinner and bring out the hips a little, but even without that it looks really good.

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Haha, thanks everyone, I'll think about the eyebrow thing, I've never really put eyebrows on many of my characters, but I'll try and see.
Also, as much as I wish this is a comic, it's not... Well, not yet? It's actually for a set of cards, used to play a game involving zombies, and all things of the sort.
As for animation, i royally suck at it. Though I'd love to see them as a cartoon.
Thanks for all the comment and critique guys.

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The girl reminds me somewhat of a punk-rocker Michelle in your style. So clearly, I like that on most 8D

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Haha, thanks Coosy, I may redesign.

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heh' he right tho i can totally see your guys animated. ^^

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Just messing around with the character outlines. Might make a desktop out of it soon enough.

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Silhouette pieces are always so awesome in their own kind of way 8D

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draw a rain bow behind them *dur dur /retard 'special' face

Naw but i do love silhouettes. ^^

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:3 good character design means that your characters are recognizable just by their silhouettes.

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Haha, thanks guys, those are the Brains! characters, I'm probably going to make them my background on my desktop, and at the bottom, I'm going to have Zombies interacting with all my icons on my quickbar thing on my Mac.

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Who're those characters?!

NOT POKEMANS!

Done with the lineart... Kinda'?

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The guy on the left; his left eye seems kiiinda weird.

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Yeah, I'm not good with eyes, as everyone knows, I'm just gonna' run with it, I have a deadline to get these characters done, a few zombies, weapons, and some other specialty cards done by May 1st, and I'm a huge procrastinator, so I'm just running with what I have.

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Deadline? what fer?

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My boss, he's making them into cards for his game and taking them to a convention.

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Whats ur job??? What convention?! I'm so out of the loop!!! D=

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Well, my job has nothing to do with the project, my manager wants me to help him make a card game, almost a board game type deal, I'm doing all the art of the cards, and with about 7 categories, I need to try and have at least one of each category done for the cards, we're going to a card convention to try and get people excited.

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Well sounds cool! I made about 3 different card games and 6 bored games in my life its always good fun! =3 Most successful card game I made had 637 different cards took me 2 years. xD But anyways if i lived near you id so ditch everything and tag along with to a card convention!

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Been a while my friends, no?
Am I back? MAAAAAAYBE, maybe not. I'm not quite sure yet. Anyways, this is like, the first thing I've gotten done in forever. Read the description on dA if you're all that interested.

http://elfei62.deviantart.com/#/d2snjev
'Tis PG v. General Honey Bear (:

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You will die if you don't return, also. 8D

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MAAAAYBE.

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BRAX!
You need to be here more often!

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