MD literary Attempts. (Fanfics, poems [Grimace], etc.

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MD literary Attempts. (Fanfics, poems [Grimace], etc.

Postby Material Defender » Wed Jul 06, 2005 11:38 am

Well.
Um.
Here's the first chapter to a fanfic of sorts I'm writing.

Chapter 1: The Arrival

On a completely average day, in a completely average clearing in an average forest, opened an incredibly odd portal that three strange looking things stepped from.
One was 8 ft, completely covered in metal except for a hood that held blackness and was stayed in a shape as if a human head was there. His metal was gray and bloodstained and his hood was gray as well. He had a Red cape, with gray spots with red-orange energy strands protruding from his back. He carried a giant sword and a big book with him.
Another was 5 ft 2 in, wearing a black cloak and wearing a wrapped covering over her body and pelvic areas. It also was on part her right leg and arm. She had completely red eyes, had skin that was black as darkness itself, and deep purple hair. She was human in form except for her height. She carried twin daggers on her side.
Another was 7 ft 5 who was bright red skinned, heavily muscled, and had humanoid form. He wore armor all around his body except for his head, which was exposed. The armor was black and gold with some bloodstains on it as well as some spikes to protect some areas from attack. He had 4 yellow eyes (One pair for day vision, other for night vision) with white rims around them, and had dirty gray hair. He carried a claymore on his back, in between his two red wings.
The portal closes quickly once they come threw. The girl looks around at the trees and plants. “Well its certainly greener then home,â€
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Postby Lord and Master » Wed Jul 06, 2005 2:29 pm

God discription.
Shockro wrote:Theme song
Lord and Master, he's such a bastard but when a girl's in trouble he'll be there on the double.
Lord and Master, he's the one! Who will be shunned in the great land of fun.
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Lord and Master, he's such a bastard but when a girl's in trouble he will be there on the double
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Postby Material Defender » Wed Jul 06, 2005 2:31 pm

Lord and Master wrote:God discription.

Do you mean good desciption?
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Postby Lord and Master » Wed Jul 06, 2005 2:40 pm

No, I liked the way you discribed you characters, Like the bloodstained hood.
Shockro wrote:Theme song
Lord and Master, he's such a bastard but when a girl's in trouble he'll be there on the double.
Lord and Master, he's the one! Who will be shunned in the great land of fun.
Repeat**
Lord and Master, he's such a bastard but when a girl's in trouble he will be there on the double
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Re: The MD's attempt at writing

Postby Material Defender » Wed Jul 06, 2005 4:46 pm

Here are some poems I made.
Ships
By MD
There are ships to cruise away in
Ships to come home in
Ships to start wars
Ships to end wars
Ships that sail
Ships that use engines
Ships that float
Ships that fly
Ships that are huge
Ships that are tiny
Ships with guns
Ships with cargo holds
Ships that are made of wood
Ships made of metal
Ships of Space
Ships of Air
Ships of Sea

Compliments and Insults
Some words are insults, others Compliments
Some are not either, yet they bite the same
Some insults do not bite, if heard enough
Some compliments hurt more then insults told

Be careful with these words, lest harm come to you
But remember these are just words, not acts
Be kind in thy acts, your words will soon follow
Harm others; see what happens to thy words

Humans
By MD.
There are humans that kill
Humans that heal
Humans that don’t care
Humans that are lost
Humans that are found
Humans that are bones
Humans that are flesh
Humans that are in control
Humans that toil with no reward
Humans that imagine
Humans that think
Humans that just do
Humans that are evil
Humans that are good
Humans of no thought
Humans that are killed
Humans that are healed
Humans that are gone
Humans that are here
Humans that have one-track minds
Humans that see a broad perspective
Humans who fly
Humans that Swim
Humans who walk
Humans who do naught
Humans that sail
Humans who drive
Humans that are rotting
Humans that are stuck
Humans who are rolling along
Humans who lose everything
Humans who win the lottery
Humans of the Earth
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