The rules have changed. Scroll down to see the new rules.

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So you will post "everyones" one panel comic weekly or something?

I got a new sketchbook! Pefect way to roadtest it

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"Worst case scenario I'll get arrested for public nudity.
Best case scenerio I'll get arrested for public nudity with a boner. It's win win." ~ Dave
"Also Yoshi is the most important person in all of Australia." ~ Zepherin

What I mean is, srsizzy and I will pick from all the emails we get with panels, and we post the best one.

But then that person goes to the back of the line, so you'll have a better chance of getting your comic chosen the next time we update. Unfortunately, that means you will have to make a new panel.

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MY EYES, THEY BLEED!

THat has to be the worse comic I've ever seen.

(With the exception of fruitliner and Dave's last post)

1. I didn't make it.

2. It's meant to be random.

3. You're right, it really isn't very good.

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In never said you made it, although the site is a good idea, I think some ameuters could do better then that shit.
That comic really couldn't of been the best submission. Unless that was the only submission.

It looks like it quite literally came out of my ass.

Im waiting for Tyreal here to produce a better art attempt, since he seems to be so critical of everyone else. And Im also looking forward to his picture, which apparently is the cornerstone of beauty, for hes also critical of others theres.


In otehr words, Shut the fuck up Tyreal.

Just so you know, srsizzy, my partner on the site, made that comic. I'm really not going to make any comics unless nobody submits after a while.

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Fine, I'll stop being so critical.

But I will not say anything nice about that comic.
And I can't actually give you guys anything because my scanner is on the fritz.

Actually I think it isn't that bad of a comic. At least the artist knows the basics of anatomy an how things should look.

Tyreal, shut the fuck up unless you have a comic you update, or even art that can compare. Even if you are a good artist, you've still no right to criticise so harshly. Try some constructive criticsm fo once instead of shit like "Wow, that really sucks".

I'm gonna try and do something with the bunny. Hope you'll like it

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"Worst case scenario I'll get arrested for public nudity.
Best case scenerio I'll get arrested for public nudity with a boner. It's win win." ~ Dave
"Also Yoshi is the most important person in all of Australia." ~ Zepherin

Ok, Here is my go at construtive critism.

The comic needs some drawn improvements but lacks any real humor and in general need improvement. Its basically is a starting line.

Of course it is a starting line. It's the first fucking panel! Not strip, panel. Look at any comic. You'd be hard pressed to find a punchline in the first panel.

As for the art, once again, I think it is good. It has a cartoonish feel that actually looks quite refined, save it should use better inking (:P).

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"Worst case scenario I'll get arrested for public nudity.
Best case scenerio I'll get arrested for public nudity with a boner. It's win win." ~ Dave
"Also Yoshi is the most important person in all of Australia." ~ Zepherin

NEW RULES OF SUBMISSION:

Sign up for an account at Smack Jeeves. From there, e-mail us at onepanelatatime@gmail.com, and tell us what your Smack Jeeves user name is. We will make you an author for One Panel At A Time, at which point you will be able to post new comics, and nothing else. We don't want people screwing around with the site html so posting comics will be your only administrative ability.

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Aw fuck it. Too many steps for me.

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"Worst case scenario I'll get arrested for public nudity.
Best case scenerio I'll get arrested for public nudity with a boner. It's win win." ~ Dave
"Also Yoshi is the most important person in all of Australia." ~ Zepherin

Not really. Once you've signed up with Smack Jeeves and email us your Smack Jeeves user name you're an author forever and can post as many comics as you want.

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