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Re: Advanced Critique (please read top post)

Postby Darkman1 » Thu Jun 01, 2006 4:08 pm

Hmmmm, Spike on vacation?>.<


Anyway, I find that the picture has quite a good balance to it, and you're anatomy isn't bad at all. The hands however could afford to be more accurate, but this is something that takes some long term mastery, and nothing to stress. Also, perhaps the arms could be definded a little more, they look a little like sticks. Other than that, bang up job! :snoogins:
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Postby Zeshen » Sat Jun 17, 2006 1:06 pm

what do you guys think of my action hero dexter.


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Postby Frozenangst » Sat Aug 12, 2006 2:30 pm

Is this a dead thread, or can I still post something?
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Re: Advanced Critique (please read top post)

Postby Brax4 » Fri Aug 18, 2006 12:47 am

Looking for some critique here, this isn't the shaded version, which is upstairs, but I think that I'm going to start a comic about it, seeing as though I've stopped all other comics, because the adventurous ones are too long and annoying to draw, my comic: LOST RUNES has been cancelled, and my Brad Comix comics were just drawn way to badly, so I think I might start a comic with this as the main character:
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Re: Advanced Critique (please read top post)

Postby mr.snuggles » Fri Sep 01, 2006 12:47 am

i know im gunna regret this but

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Postby advent-retribution » Fri Sep 01, 2006 1:37 pm

ehh.....i dont know. any critique on this?

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Postby Sky » Wed Sep 20, 2006 6:40 pm

Anybody got any comments for Raikou Syc?

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Postby Possiblekim » Wed May 16, 2007 2:37 am

How about this one.

This was one of my many serious attpemt. I think only the face and hand was badly drawn

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Postby DarkCrystal65 » Wed May 16, 2007 6:30 am

hmm.. I think all the white that looks too white is bad. Make sure you bend them in by overlaying it or something. You shouldn't have pure white when it's a highlight.
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Postby Possiblekim » Thu May 17, 2007 3:31 pm

Yeah I got that sense but I am quite ppor at designing background. I am trying to prove but oh well
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Postby DarkCrystal65 » Thu May 17, 2007 10:04 pm

Possiblekim wrote:Yeah I got that sense but I am quite ppor at designing background. I am trying to prove but oh well


I'm not talking about the background I'm talking about the highlight on her. it shouldn't be pure white.
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Postby Possiblekim » Fri May 18, 2007 1:20 am

Ooh.. thanks
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Re: Advanced Critique (please read top post)

Postby JJ+ » Fri Sep 07, 2007 7:23 pm

Hey Im Kinda New To This Whole Thing
But I Wanted Some Advice On My Work
I Have Tons Of Sketches
And I Wanna Make A Manga Of My Own

This Is The Only One Ive Skanned So Far

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Only Done In Pencil Hence Forthe The Crappy Quality
But I Need To Get Better

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Postby Faust777 » Fri Sep 07, 2007 8:40 pm

it looks good, but the proportion is a bit off. mainly the head being too big in this shot and the legs to small and short.
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Re: Advanced Critique (please read top post)

Postby JJ+ » Sat Sep 08, 2007 3:30 am

Thanks

Im Trying To get The Whole Size Proportion Thing Spot On
And Strangely ive Only just noticed the Heads Too Big?

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Re: Advanced Critique (please read top post)

Postby Faust777 » Sat Sep 08, 2007 11:49 am

I use polykarbon tutorials whenever I get stuck. So yeah check it out.
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Oh and I usually would get stuck at getting the shoulers right in proportion to the head. So I just kind of remind myself that the characters face should be equivalent to the size of their hands. And the head should only look likes its big enough. to big or they'll look like they are falling over. As for the legs, the legs in general are about the size of the character's torso and waist in length.
And the arms normally hang down somewhere in between the hips and the kneecaps.
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Postby DinosaurPirate » Sat Sep 08, 2007 11:58 am

I'd like to have this one critiqued if y'all don't mind. =P

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Postby Faust777 » Sat Sep 08, 2007 5:14 pm

Well, its hard to find something wrong with this one...
Ahhh, lets see....His shirt looks a little skintight....unless its supposed to be that way. His head looks a little large, but thats probably just cause hes a younger character right? His left hand thumb.....it looks a little thicker than normal.
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Re: Advanced Critique (please read top post)

Postby Satoshi_Jiro » Tue Nov 20, 2007 2:13 pm

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here is a fanart of Little Red from EA by Endling, first attempt at drawing red and i know theres something wrong with the bottom area but i just cant figure it out ;_;

also it was drawn on notebook paper at first, i had planned on using photoshop to fix it up a bit but i might just redraw the whole thing to make it better or something
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Re: Advanced Critique (please read top post)

Postby karauma » Tue Nov 20, 2007 2:27 pm

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This is a more seriously done pic, so I would like to improve on it, advanced crit' plox.
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Re: Advanced Critique (please read top post)

Postby Piano_Cat5 » Sun Nov 25, 2007 1:31 am

Karauma, I would look into the anatomy of the shoulders. I think the line of the arm should be behind the torso, if that makes sense. It just seems like the fold where the arm meets the torso shouldn't be there, though whether that's an issue with clothing folds or anatomy, I'm not quite sure.

It is, however, a good start, and if the arm is fixed, then it would be a nice looking piece. Are you planning on coloring it? Because it strikes me as a piece that would look great in color (I don't know why, just throwing it out there. ^^)

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Re: Advanced Critique (please read top post)

Postby karauma » Sun Nov 25, 2007 6:09 am

Thanks piano, I'll try it with the line behind the torso. ^^

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Re: Advanced Critique (please read top post)

Postby rossfellow » Wed Jan 16, 2008 9:41 am

Is this a dead thread or what?

Actually, I'm having trouble. I'm new to CGing and I'm trying to color this:
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My attempt so far(WIP):
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Here's the problem. I'm trying to keep the blackness of the background characters while their colors are recognizable. I'm not sure what to do anymore >_<

Suggestions? Help?
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Re: Advanced Critique (please read top post)

Postby MyxPaperxHeart » Wed Jul 01, 2009 8:34 pm

How's this?
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It's pronounced (AH-ME) :)
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Re: Advanced Critique (please read top post)

Postby MyxPaperxHeart » Wed Jul 01, 2009 8:41 pm

http://myxpaperxheart.deviantart.com/art/Original-Character-Ami-127966965

DX I don't think it excepted my pic so here XD and if it did and I just can't see it then srry :(
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