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Re: Vert's art stuffs

Postby sevensoybeanz » Fri May 30, 2014 9:40 pm

Have a sketch while I work on that storyboard thingy.

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Re: Vert's art stuffs

Postby (CH3)3CLi » Fri May 30, 2014 10:11 pm

That motorcycle/moped/whatever thingy looks really cool. I'm amazed that you design even slick-looking vehicles, too, on top of great character art.
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Re: Vert's art stuffs

Postby Wulfespinndel » Sun Jun 08, 2014 6:47 pm

Your art isn't bad at all. Out of everyone else in this section, you truly have the most potential. Please continue to improve on your art and technique, we all want to see more from your talents.
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Re: Vert's art stuffs

Postby sevensoybeanz » Sun Jun 08, 2014 8:46 pm

So I finished that storyboard thing (kinda), and now I've made a short animatic. Thinking about finishing it in comic form.


Also, thanks guys.
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Re: Vert's art stuffs

Postby ari-6 » Sun Jun 08, 2014 9:26 pm

Wow. Now I really want to know what happens next.
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Re: Vert's art stuffs

Postby stooie74 » Mon Jun 09, 2014 3:50 am

definitely interesting so far, can't wait to see when its all done
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Re: Vert's art stuffs

Postby sevensoybeanz » Thu Jun 12, 2014 12:19 am

Yeah, I really want to finish it too, but I keep getting distracted by making other silly stuff. Like this.

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Re: Vert's art stuffs

Postby sevensoybeanz » Thu Jun 12, 2014 11:07 pm

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Concepts of a thing I'm doing with a friend. This is the main character in my rendition.
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Re: Vert's art stuffs

Postby Mimeme » Sun Jun 15, 2014 9:13 am

Your storyboard is very clean! I'm seeing a reminiscent of Ghibli Studio here, and that is a fantastic reference when it comes to character-centric journeys (on a more personal level).

The silhouettes are very clear - their emotion and expression (via body language) are readable at a glance, and their facial expressions convey so much even in their subtlety (and so much about the character is revealed through it, it makes us care about them already)! The way you lead one scene to another is also very well done, enabling us audience to catch onto the story without the need of dialogue (and this is usually hard to achieve). The placement of angles are appropriate where they should be - directing us to what the emphasis on that particular shot is.

The animatics are also paced very nicely - the timing allows us to fill in the gaps of their actions and enough for anticipation/suspense.

If there is any constructive criticism can be given here, there are only two:

1) Be mindful of crossing the lines
For example: Character is on the left side of the screen on the first panel, but then switches to the right side of the screen in the next panel. While their overall layout is maintained, it could disorient viewers as their eyes are still stuck on the left side of the screen (due to persistence of vision); therefore, it would be advisable to place the characters in the same general position as the last. But if you really need to switch the camera position, you can break the shots by placing a neutral shot in between, like frontal/rear shot or the character's POV. Another way to fix it is by camera motion or disruption (be it event or cut away to another scene).

further example of crossing the line (based on their positions on the screen):
SHOT 01: Alex > Marie > Darla
SHOT 02: Darla > Alex > Marie
This could be applied on props as well.

2) Employ camera motion
Camera motions like TRUCK IN, PAN, and such could further enhance the intention of the scenes. For example:

SHOT 01: Wide Shot. A character is in the middle of crossing a bridge (we TRUCK BACK with him to show the scenery pass by him), but he suddenly stops when he notices something glimmering in the water. He leans over the rail to curiously squint at it.
SHOT 02: We cut to his POV, Close Up. The glimmer is insistent, SLOW TRUCK IN to the glimmer on the surface of the water (to create a sense of mystery and to draw the audience into the significance of it)
SHOT 03: Cut to Close Up of his face. He narrows his eyes as he becomes very intrigued. Continue SLOW TRUCK IN (for suspense). Suddenly, his companion calls out from off screen, making him jump up in confusion (sudden ZOOM OUT/TRUCK OUT to Medium Shot as we have been rudely pulled out of it). He turns his head to the source of the voice (PAN to the side of the screen to reveal where his companion is while keeping the character within the frame). He frowns at his approaching companion before he turns his head back to the side of the bridge. His eyes widen in surprise.
SHOT 04: Character's POV. The glimmer under the water is gone, and he only sees the reflection of himself and his approaching companion on the surface of the water.

Forgive me if I'm using a lot of cinematographic terms or jargons, but I hope this would help you improve your works :) believe me, you do have a knack for it.

Can't wait to see more of this, even if they will be continued in comic form!
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Re: Vert's art stuffs

Postby sevensoybeanz » Mon Jun 16, 2014 8:25 pm

Oh not at all! This is some great constructive criticism that I'll be sure to use in later works involving storyboarding, and animatics. As for the panning thing my tools were kinda limited. Plus Premier Pro is giving me a hard time, but I see what you mean. Thanks, Mimeme, really appreciate it!
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Re: Vert's art stuffs

Postby sevensoybeanz » Fri Jun 20, 2014 10:48 pm

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Kind of an inside joke, her hair used to be like that guy's.
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Re: Vert's art stuffs

Postby sevensoybeanz » Tue Jun 24, 2014 10:08 pm

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Probably not gonna be able to have anything up anymore anytime soon. Been a blast guys, and thanks for everything!

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Re: Vert's art stuffs

Postby ULTRADJ » Tue Jun 24, 2014 10:11 pm

How come?
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Re: Vert's art stuffs

Postby OrangeBee » Wed Jun 25, 2014 12:24 am

Nice style here. Looks professional
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Re: Vert's art stuffs [CLOSED]

Postby Cerulean » Wed Jun 25, 2014 12:36 pm

It's been a blast having you here c:
You'll always have a place here should you choose to return! :D
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Re: Vert's art stuffs [CLOSED]

Postby Sigment » Wed Jun 25, 2014 5:08 pm

Been nice knowing you, man, and a joy seeing your art. Dunno what you've got planned down the line, but I hope it goes well for you.
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Re: Vert's art stuffs [CLOSED]

Postby OrangeBee » Wed Jun 25, 2014 8:03 pm

Have a wonderful adventure
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Re: Vert's art stuffs [REVIVED!]

Postby sevensoybeanz » Sat Jul 05, 2014 10:27 pm

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I've returned! :V

Had to deal with some personal stuff, but it's okay now, so let the art train choo once more! :D
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Re: Vert's art stuffs [REVIVED!]

Postby Cerulean » Sat Jul 05, 2014 10:47 pm

Wooo, welcome back!
Glad to hear that everything is settled c:
looking forward to seeing more of your work :D
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Re: Vert's art stuffs [REVIVED!]

Postby ULTRADJ » Sat Jul 05, 2014 10:57 pm

Welcome back! I can't wait for what's in store of your art!
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Re: Vert's art stuffs [REVIVED!]

Postby ari-6 » Sat Jul 05, 2014 11:28 pm

You shouldn't have said goodbye, that's way too depressing. I mean locking your art thread. Who knows when he might come back, if ever. Instead just say your not here right now, then it's like you never left. Anyway good to have you back.
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Re: Vert's art stuffs [REVIVED!]

Postby sevensoybeanz » Sun Jul 06, 2014 12:58 am

Sorry for worrying you Ari, but I wasn't really sure if I was really going to come back so I didn't know what to say.

Anyway~

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Bust shot of one of my OC's. Trying to practice coloring in a different way inspired by one of my favorite artists. Kinda tricky, but I'll learn to do it one of these days. I'd like to customize my brushes better for doing works like this.
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Re: Vert's art stuffs [REVIVED!]

Postby Sigment » Sun Jul 06, 2014 1:36 am

Glad to hear that you're back, man. And the headshot looks great. I like how you did her hair.
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Re: Vert's art stuffs [REVIVED!]

Postby ari-6 » Sun Jul 06, 2014 11:28 am

Also, which artist are you talking about?
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Re: Vert's art stuffs [REVIVED!]

Postby sevensoybeanz » Sun Jul 06, 2014 2:17 pm

Umm... haha, well I can't really say. The artist draws some stuff not safe for work, but he's really good!
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