ari-6 Art Thread: BLAKE ANIMATION TEST

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Re: ari-6 Art Thread (Fanart and Oneshot stuff)

Postby Jesturr » Thu Jul 31, 2014 5:55 pm

Ooooh that last one has a cool pose * U*
You make the limb foreshortening look so easy /jealous
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Re: ari-6 Art Thread (Fanart and Oneshot stuff)

Postby ari-6 » Thu Jul 31, 2014 6:30 pm

@Mutt. Actually it's Zim's ship. I don't have a model of Tak's ship, I don't even know if they made one.

@Jester. It is really hard for me to take compliments without thinking "They don't know what there talking about" or that they are just humoring or patronising me. So I'll just take it at face value and say thanks.
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Re: ari-6 Art Thread (Fanart and Oneshot stuff)

Postby Tenshi Nova » Thu Jul 31, 2014 6:49 pm

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Re: ari-6 Art Thread (Fanart and Oneshot stuff)

Postby ari-6 » Sun Aug 03, 2014 10:29 pm

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Re: ari-6 Art Thread (Fanart and Oneshot stuff)

Postby sloanlone » Mon Aug 04, 2014 1:09 am

I like it. The interior is excellent, the line weight is varied, and the smaller details have been seamlessly integrated with perspective in mind. I only see one or two things that could be tweaked. Maybe.

1) Her left hand: the way the forearm is positioned {if we're using the right as an indicator} the wrist seems to have been extended too far, elongating the arm. It...looks too long with the way the hand is positioned on the game-slave. {Which looks amazing.} If you were to bring the palm down, forcing the fingers in an upwards curl around the device {leaving only the fingertips visible} it might enhance the effect of an object being held.
2) The left shoulder seems too high. {That may be intentional if she's leaning [I assume she is], but it distorts the perspective.} Re-drawing would be taxing (the head/necks position, the bust, etc...), but it is 'noticeable'.
3) The back is arched. Perhaps it would be curled if she is indeed leaning forward/sideways. The torso would need to be re-drawn.)

I feel as though this entire comment is presumptuous. Feel free to ignore it. I'm wrong.
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Re: ari-6 Art Thread (Fanart and Oneshot stuff)

Postby ari-6 » Mon Aug 04, 2014 11:13 am

I knew the hands were wrong but I was trying really hard to make that one perfect. Oh well, I guess it never matters.

So you think I should redraw it? Okay, I can do that.
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Re: ari-6 Art Thread (Fanart and Oneshot stuff)

Postby ari-6 » Mon Aug 04, 2014 6:02 pm

Done.

With the exception of the hands, I liked it better the way it was before

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Re: ari-6 Art Thread (Fanart and Oneshot stuff)

Postby Sigment » Mon Aug 04, 2014 6:30 pm

sloanlone wrote:3) The back is arched. Perhaps it would be curled if she is indeed leaning forward/sideways. The torso would need to be re-drawn.)

I thought that was just her figure, not an arched back.
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Re: ari-6 Art Thread (Fanart and Oneshot stuff)

Postby sloanlone » Mon Aug 04, 2014 7:02 pm

There was no need for a re-draw. Some things just looked a little wonky to me. Either way, it's fine. I shouldn't have commented.

I thought that was just her figure, not an arched back.


Can you keep a figure while sitting/leaning? (I've no idea. I'm probably wrong.)
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Re: ari-6 Art Thread (Fanart and Oneshot stuff)

Postby ari-6 » Mon Aug 04, 2014 8:09 pm

No your probably right. I was trying to make it look a little crooked but I am pretty shity at posing.
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Re: ari-6 Art Thread (Fanart and Oneshot stuff)

Postby sloanlone » Tue Aug 05, 2014 3:08 am

You're not shitty at posing (subjectively speaking, of course). I am wrong. I hashed out the 'problems' during my commute this morning. The pencil and rough ink versions are in my thread.
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Re: ari-6 Art Thread (Fanart and Oneshot stuff)

Postby ari-6 » Wed Aug 06, 2014 1:49 am

Okay.... I made this last week. To enter in a competition. It was made in a week. Because as you know I am slow as hell and terrible at managing my time.

The quality is shaky as shit. If there is anything that could have been done better I already know about it. It pretty much all comes down to poor planning.

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Re: ari-6 Art Thread (Fanart and Oneshot stuff)

Postby korikou » Wed Aug 06, 2014 7:40 pm

I don't really see the shakyness!
Awesome comic though, what was the competition for?
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Re: ari-6 Art Thread (Fanart and Oneshot stuff)

Postby Sigment » Wed Aug 06, 2014 7:48 pm

Ari, this looks outstanding. Well done, I mean that. I especially love those suits. I don't know why, but they remind me of the suits worn by Pilots in Titanfall.
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Re: ari-6 Art Thread (Fanart and Oneshot stuff)

Postby YesterdaysLingo » Wed Aug 06, 2014 8:58 pm

Imo the suits remind me of the recon armor from fallout :3

the only thing that irks me is the cockpit window on the shuttle in the first big panel... It seems just a tad off to me. Good stuff nonetheless:D
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Re: ari-6 Art Thread (Fanart and Oneshot stuff)

Postby ari-6 » Wed Aug 06, 2014 9:36 pm

It "Irks" you. Believe me if that is the only thing that "Irks" you then I consider it a victory.

I just read back through it myself. I am headplanting so hard right now. Where it says "First humans to go beyond our atmosphere" it should say "Solar system". That is what we call "Three days without sleep and 8 red bulls". My head hurts, I'm going to bed.
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Re: ari-6 Art Thread (Fanart and Oneshot stuff)

Postby OrangeBee » Thu Aug 07, 2014 2:13 pm

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Awesome comic Ari-6
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Re: ari-6 Art Thread (Fanart and Oneshot stuff)

Postby Jesturr » Fri Aug 08, 2014 1:55 am

Cool comic :O I especially like that last panel on the 4th page xD

Tell us when you win that competition, Ari!
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Re: ari-6 Art Thread (Fanart and Oneshot stuff)

Postby ari-6 » Fri Aug 08, 2014 2:59 am

Win? I doubt I will even make the final 20 cut. But my arch rival did not even enter. They ended up doing the same thing I did and left it till the last week. Only on the final night it got to 9pm and they thought "I'm never going to make it in time" and gave up. At that exact point I was thinking the same thing and feeling as worthless as I'd ever felt but then a voice in my head said "I you would stop feeling sorry for yourself then you will see, there's still enough time to do this!"
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Re: ari-6 Art Thread (Fanart and Oneshot stuff)

Postby Cerulean » Fri Aug 08, 2014 3:38 am

Those WTF faces at the end are just wonderful c:

What was the theme of the contest? Or was it just a create a one-shot type contest?
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Re: ari-6 Art Thread (Fanart and Oneshot stuff)

Postby Tenshi Nova » Fri Aug 08, 2014 4:05 am

Cerulean wrote:Those WTF faces at the end are just wonderful c:

This is closest I've seen you to using profanity, and I'm counting it c:
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Re: ari-6 Art Thread: ANIMATION TEST

Postby ari-6 » Mon Aug 18, 2014 12:47 am

So........, Guess who figured out how animation works.

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Re: ari-6 Art Thread: ANIMATION TEST

Postby ULTRADJ » Mon Aug 18, 2014 1:05 am

This looks a little more creepy than the other one, but you did this yourself Ari? That's pretty impressive if I do say so myself, it's a nice looking animation.
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Re: ari-6 Art Thread: ANIMATION TEST

Postby OrangeBee » Mon Aug 18, 2014 4:21 am

Hey-O

What do we have here? I'll just give that a things up
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Re: ari-6 Art Thread: ANIMATION TEST

Postby sloanlone » Mon Aug 18, 2014 6:04 am

Ari, it's very good.
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