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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 7/09/13)

Postby Cerulean » Mon Sep 09, 2013 2:12 pm

Oooh, interesting. I didn't see the pregnancy coming, but I'll admit that this just enhances the feeling that something bad is about to go down. The calm before the storm.
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 7/09/13)

Postby Sigment » Mon Sep 09, 2013 3:05 pm

Agreed.
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 7/09/13)

Postby Thy Obsessive Freak » Wed Sep 11, 2013 4:37 pm

Thanks both Cerulean and Sigment for your comments, glad you both still have an interest in the story and hope you do stick around for the storm that will unfold in this chapter.

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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 7/09/13)

Postby Sigment » Wed Sep 11, 2013 11:48 pm

She sounds a bit jealous... like she wanted to be the first one to bear his child.
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 7/09/13)

Postby Cerulean » Thu Sep 12, 2013 12:39 am

Did you miss a page? I found your deviantart yesterday (or was it this morning, hmmm) and caught up, but I noticed there isn't a page there (between nosebleed page and good job page). The one about practicing diplomacy.

I agree with Sigment here, I didn't expect that reaction from Rena (especially considering how she is already presumably happily married and has a baby of her own). Maybe the reaction has something to do with something about the first born of each generation of the royal family? It seems hard to believe that she would be jealous after she kept pushing Kunaga and Mizuka together.
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 7/09/13)

Postby Thy Obsessive Freak » Thu Sep 12, 2013 4:42 am

Darn it! You're right Cerulean! Fixed it now anyways!

But yes as for Arch Rena's reaction there was a clue to why she would've reacted in chapter 2, but one problem... I forgot to insert the flaming clue! :redface: Yes I wrote me notes, but I lost them while writing up the scene where it was slipped in, so it blew over me head. Luckily it doesn't harm the main plot at least, but has left his awkward situation where no one has any idea about Arch Rena's reaction.
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 7/09/13)

Postby Thy Obsessive Freak » Fri Sep 13, 2013 8:17 am

Next! Hopefully people find this funny.

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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 13/09/13)

Postby GrimlyLoveGunner » Fri Sep 13, 2013 1:17 pm

Gack! Why did you have to update so fast!? I just finished catching up!

XD anyway- Awwww wittle William-illiam-illiam~ So cute and sweet but has to take care of the psycho ditzy blonde lady~ awwww~

This is how I read Gabu: "OhwhutJosieyeahshewasridiculouslyobbsessedwithMizuka-chanwhentheywereyoungandshe'stotallypissedyou'reknockedupandisprobablygoingtocausesomemayjorshitlatercuzshesblondeandblondesarealwaysevilsoyouneedtawatchurbacksistahohBTW Can you catfight?"

XD I love him.
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 13/09/13)

Postby Thy Obsessive Freak » Thu Sep 19, 2013 6:33 pm

And now! For the grand unveiling of chapter 3 (It's only half way complete, but this sets in motion what I have been forewarning!).

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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 20/09/13)

Postby Cerulean » Thu Sep 19, 2013 7:52 pm

Forgive me for sounding like a broken record, but I must say WHAT?! (again) I did not see this coming at all....Eagerly anticipating the rest!
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 20/09/13)

Postby Sigment » Fri Sep 20, 2013 12:03 am

I won't say that I saw this coming, but I knew as soon as I saw Kunaga that there was way more to her than was let on. I was just waiting for it to be revealed. That being said...

DUHN DUHN DUH-DUH-DUHN DUUUUUUHN...
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 20/09/13)

Postby Thy Obsessive Freak » Sat Sep 21, 2013 7:58 am

Thanks again guys.

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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 21/09/13)

Postby Thy Obsessive Freak » Mon Sep 23, 2013 2:53 pm

Just to note this may seem really rushed and really bad due to how many panels I tried to fit in at once... Yeah, not the greatest of ideas and I think that's why some people feel the stories rushed. Less panels in me pages.

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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 21/09/13)

Postby Thy Obsessive Freak » Wed Sep 25, 2013 2:30 pm

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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 21/09/13)

Postby Sigment » Wed Sep 25, 2013 2:37 pm

My, what a... lovely portrait of his father. Gotta say, for a second I thought he was seeing him in the mirror.
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 24/09/13)

Postby GrimlyLoveGunner » Thu Sep 26, 2013 1:55 pm

I'm not sure if I just never noticed it before- but I laugh at their surprised faces. XD

Mizu-chans Daddy reaaaaaally didn't seem to want to get that picture taken. He looks so grumpy. XD

And- of course. We should of realized earlier. The Daemon was a Divinity because he's blond. It all makes sense once we find out! XD

We really would have gotten a bigger emotional reaction if we had had a little bit more time spent with Kuna. But maybe more epicness will arrive. Hmmm....

Ah, yes, and- Hi Dolly! *giggle* you *giggle* needn't.... be.... so.... shy Dolly..... *giggle*..... You can.... *giggle* speak up....... Pfffft- AHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAAA.

So damn cute. That entire little introduction.

Oh, and-

First child

???

OMGFAOIWEUHGYBRWOEGIFJHWBAOIFRBWANOWAYOWABURFOPWQBQRFAWPOBWHUTAHAHAHAWOIUBRAWOPEROQAPRBPOWEFBUAWHUH?!

IS THAT SUGGESTING WHAT I THINK IT'S SUGGESTING?!

Mind -> blown

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Oh, but also- it was actually the page before you mentioned it where I thought things seemed rushed. Like, if we had slowed down the dialogue and had more: shocked - becoming - realization that would have strengthened the impact too. Instead there was a sense of becoming fatigued while reading it all. (And there's some parts where the dialogue is hard to read.) But you only had one typo in the new batch of pages. Saying 'Rely' instead of 'Real' (I think, now I can't seem to find it.) And one minor part where with 'Beesides' I think that's it. 8D
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 21/09/13)

Postby Thy Obsessive Freak » Thu Sep 26, 2013 4:04 pm

Sigment Kurosai wrote:My, what a... lovely portrait of his father. Gotta say, for a second I thought he was seeing him in the mirror.


Thanks again Sigment for the comment.

GrimlyLoveGunner wrote:]Oh, but also- it was actually the page before you mentioned it where I thought things seemed rushed. Like, if we had slowed down the dialogue and had more: shocked - becoming - realization that would have strengthened the impact too. Instead there was a sense of becoming fatigued while reading it all. (And there's some parts where the dialogue is hard to read.) But you only had one typo in the new batch of pages. Saying 'Rely' instead of 'Real' (I think, now I can't seem to find it.) And one minor part where with 'Beesides' I think that's it. 8D


Hm, so more panels? While they talk? Makes sense, frustrating as it means more work but makes sense all the same. But overall thanks, really glad to read your comment as well GrimyLoveGunner and your effort to assist.

Speaking of efforts of assisting, I'm posting a little early here as I wanted to credit Morpheus while I remembered. I had issues with the female eyebrows as you can see above, they looked too cartoony and when I tried to thicken them, they looked too bushy. Hence I went for Morpheus for help as he is probably the most excellent for giving artistic advice/criticisms/whatevers here in my opinion (Well I rarely see others giving art advice). So wanted to also wanted to see if others also noticed the big improvement he made.

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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 24/09/13)

Postby GrimlyLoveGunner » Fri Sep 27, 2013 12:55 pm

Shizuni's Gabu's girl right? Forgot about her. Her hair looks different.

Nice that she has a cool backstory. I'd thought of her as an annoying girlish girl that just felt she had better, less dirty things to do. XDDD

I'm not sure how to help you with this- but They look kind of odd sitting in the chairs. Like, they're really thin. They're also sitting there just drinking tea, without a table to set it on in site. But maybe that's a cultural thing? mmm.

And I don't know if you brought it up ever and I just forgot but why do Dharem have cracks in their skin? I thought they were all zombie corpses when I first looked at the comic. XD
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 24/09/13)

Postby Thy Obsessive Freak » Fri Sep 27, 2013 6:20 pm

GrimlyLoveGunner wrote:Shizuni's Gabu's girl right? Forgot about her. Her hair looks different.


Yes I put more detail into it as I felt it looked more like she had a wrapped sheet over her face and just generally trying to make it more something I can stay consistent to

GrimlyLoveGunner wrote: Nice that she has a cool backstory. I'd thought of her as an annoying girlish girl that just felt she had better, less dirty things to do. XDDD


It was a last minute call I inserted and by what I understand seems to be one for the better. Basically I needed this scene, but it felt too empty with just Kunaga sulking, so I gave it more purpose by adding in more world building to make it seem more alive with some discrimination on the go, adding the fact that Dharem are discriminate orphans as well as adding this tribe discriminates just as much.
It wasn't thought about giving Shizuni more character though, she is just meant to be everyone's friend and so on. There are other purposes, but they will be pretty minor that could've been filled out without the need to give her any character at all if that makes sense.

I'm not sure how to help you with this- but They look kind of odd sitting in the chairs. Like, they're really thin. They're also sitting there just drinking tea, without a table to set it on in site. But maybe that's a cultural thing? mmm.


I guess I should've done more sketching of people sitting on chairs, they do look a tad silly I will admit and should've thicken them as they do look like they're sitting on cardboard (Now isn't that amazing) And um yeah, didn't think of putting a table there... that was a clumsy thing to do...

GrimlyLoveGunner wrote:And I don't know if you brought it up ever and I just forgot but why do Dharem have cracks in their skin? I thought they were all zombie corpses when I first looked at the comic. XD


Again something unthought out that someone brought up in the first few pages I made that I've been forgetting to fix. They're actually veins sticking out with the only real purpose similar to that of hair and eye colour, distinguishing Dharem better. I did put it as I just thought it made Dharem look cool, but I do feel it has made characters more recognisable.
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 24/09/13)

Postby Thy Obsessive Freak » Mon Sep 30, 2013 2:39 pm

I thought now would be a good time to post more.

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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 24/09/13)

Postby Sigment » Mon Sep 30, 2013 2:54 pm

Well, this should be interesting... Hold on, let me get some popcorn...
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*Ding*
Okay, ready!
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 30/09/13)

Postby GrimlyLoveGunner » Tue Oct 01, 2013 2:16 pm

Ooooh~ dynamic panelz. shows that shiz is about to go down.

I have a theory of what's going to happen next. Yesh. I have an idea. hnnnngmpf.

w00t!

I don't like popcorn, I'm cuddling down with a bowl of oatmeal. *Nomnomnom*
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 30/09/13)

Postby Cerulean » Tue Oct 01, 2013 11:00 pm

Zyuu huh? That's a cute name.

Oooh the suspense. Seems that no matter what the outcome of all this is, there will be DRAMA. Can't wait c:
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 30/09/13)

Postby Thy Obsessive Freak » Wed Oct 02, 2013 12:02 pm

Thanks for the comments guys, it means a lot. I'll be sure to show what happens next shortly.
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 30/09/13)

Postby Thy Obsessive Freak » Sat Oct 05, 2013 3:58 pm

Quite an extended part of the story.

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