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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (FreakyNick -Teaser)

Postby Sigment » Sun May 25, 2014 7:21 pm

I seriously need to get my ass in gear and get back to proof reading the text. Sorry about that.
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (FreakyNick -Teaser)

Postby Thy Obsessive Freak » Mon May 26, 2014 10:31 am

It's alright, it'll take Grimly a while before she can get onto that, so you are free to take your time as far as I'm aware, unless GrimlyLoveGunner says otherwise.

Anyways, already back to Zyuu

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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (FreakyNick -Teaser)

Postby Sigment » Mon May 26, 2014 3:10 pm

"Hold sacred". Sorry, but that's buggin' me a little. Still, good page, man.
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (FreakyNick -Teaser)

Postby Thy Obsessive Freak » Tue May 27, 2014 3:39 pm

Another twist! I like to keep twisting things don't I?

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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (FreakyNick -Teaser)

Postby Sigment » Tue May 27, 2014 4:01 pm

Is that Metsu? Huh, this should be interesting.
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (FreakyNick -Teaser)

Postby GrimlyLoveGunner » Wed May 28, 2014 3:17 pm

Metsu?

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW~

THIS IS GOING TO BE SO MOTHER LIBBIN CUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUTE.

Not sure Mommy would approve, though. XD

Metsu's gonna grow up to be such a badass. XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (FreakyNick -Teaser)

Postby Thy Obsessive Freak » Thu May 29, 2014 2:36 pm

Tnanks guys

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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (FreakyNick -Teaser)

Postby Thy Obsessive Freak » Sat May 31, 2014 4:16 pm

Thanks to the mist I couldn't get my chemo yesterday because of mist, so I'm getting it on Monday (Yep-pee I'll get those horrid needles then). I meant to put up two pages today, but accidentally missed out one (Sort of suffering from cancer without my chemo... yeah, hits hard right now, can't walk right at the minute). So expect two tomorrow really.

Also apologies if the anatomy is crud as blazes than usual. I was tired thanks to everything and so couldn't fix it like I normally try to and just left it as it is, so this is what my anatomy would usually be like if I didn't attempt to fix it all the time. Also sorry for the huge info dump, also what happens without a script I guess, don't think of what you truly need to say.

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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (FreakyNick -Teaser)

Postby GrimlyLoveGunner » Sun Jun 01, 2014 12:40 pm

Awww, Freak. Good luck~ Be sure to just relax when you need it.

Anatomy's pretty okay in the last page, the page before that has to swift a scene transition. You should try a zoom-out of the room in the first panel.

Because all the indoors (and characters) look identical, it's hard to otherwise define that we've entered a new area.

Anyway, Grumpy Rena is grumpy.
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (FreakyNick -Teaser)

Postby Sigment » Sun Jun 01, 2014 12:49 pm

It feels like your posing has improved. Like with Taichi in the second panel. Looks natural, well done.
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (FreakyNick -Teaser)

Postby Thy Obsessive Freak » Tue Jun 03, 2014 12:43 pm

Thanks Sigment, it's really great to hear that and unexpected.

Anyways, here's the three pages I've managed to make up for missing.

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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (FreakyNick -Teaser)

Postby Sigment » Tue Jun 03, 2014 1:06 pm

First page, sixth panel. That expression is priceless. Good job as always, Freak.
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (FreakyNick -Teaser)

Postby GrimlyLoveGunner » Wed Jun 04, 2014 2:21 pm

Oh gawd this is so cute. XD

Metsu looks alittle too grown-up in the second page though. I think it's just the nose. You fixed it nicely in that first panel of the last page.

Round faces, Big eyes, high eyebrows, tiny mouths and tiny noses to make a character look young. Though not too bad, cuz Metsu either way looks very feminine. XD

The red font is hard to read, but I can't think of a better way to do it. Unless you can figure out if there's a drop shadow option. Does the program you use have layers? Though if there isn't an option to do it automatically, it would probably be too time consuming to do it manually.
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (FreakyNick -Teaser)

Postby Thy Obsessive Freak » Thu Jun 05, 2014 3:15 pm

Yeah I noticed that so I looked up some tutorials to challenge that and glad it worked it out. Problem was that I changed it digitally and several of them have already been done traditionally so it's going to be a bit difficult fixing the next few pages. Anyways, here's another page I managed to do.

I change between Manga studio, Sai and Painttool just to do the font.

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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (FreakyNick -Teaser)

Postby ari-6 » Thu Jun 05, 2014 7:18 pm

Thy Obsessive Freak wrote:I change between Manga studio, Sai and Painttool just to do the font.
All that, just for comic sans? Wow.
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (FreakyNick -Teaser)

Postby Thy Obsessive Freak » Fri Jun 06, 2014 6:33 am

Yep, just for the sake of not having to show anyone my bad hand writing and I have trouble doing dialogue balloons. If it wasn't for that, all I'd need is my traditional art tools and Sai


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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (FreakyNick -Teaser)

Postby Thy Obsessive Freak » Sat Jun 07, 2014 2:17 pm

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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (FreakyNick -Teaser)

Postby Thy Obsessive Freak » Sun Jun 08, 2014 2:58 pm

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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (FreakyNick -Teaser)

Postby GrimlyLoveGunner » Mon Jun 09, 2014 5:29 pm

Rena looks about ta' pee herself.

I miss when she was all mellow and normal. XD But she's a widowed mama with an illegid' prince baby and GABUU'S DEAAAAAAD. NOOOOOOO THE AAAAANGST.

......But Metsu's so adorable I luv it awhmahgawd.

I like the facial shading. I don't know how new that is but I'm only noticing it now. 8D
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Back from the Hospital)

Postby Thy Obsessive Freak » Thu Jun 12, 2014 2:30 pm

Awesome, Stooie noticed as well, it's basically just me changing the skin shading from the airbrush to the brush after looking at Teen Titans and one of Bleedman's older stages that I want to imitate and have my art like. General goal is to have style like that.

Anyways, yes, reason I disappeared for a while was because my temperature sky rocketed, was almost sick and so on. Turns out that I got a bacterial infection, so got taken to the hospital and gah! Was giving a carnal or whatever you call it! Dreadful and gruesome thing that shouldn't exist, I don't care if it saves lives! I thought they were just going to take blood out which I consented, what I didn't consent to... Was that! I found it stuck in my hand and freaked out, I literally pleaded to get it out all night! Sorry but one of the worst fears I have is actually sleep rolling and basically destroy the vein it's inserted into. I managed to get sleep the night later but only because I was exhausted from all begging to get it out the night before. I maybe 24 years out (25yrs old tomorrow), but a guy can still be cowardly and irrational, no matter how old he gets. Either way, my white blood cells drop drastically (They're meant to, but this was whilst I had a bacterial infection, so yeah). I'm free now of that feckin' carnal (Again whatever it's called) and out of the hospital. I wouldn't have minded being stuck inside the hospital if it wasn't for that accursed thing! There's was pretty nurses after all... and I don't care if they saw me act like a wuss, the view was the important thing.

But yes, I'm back and managed to do another page of the Story of Mizuka.

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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Back from the Hospital)

Postby stooie74 » Thu Jun 12, 2014 4:46 pm

I'm sorry that you went through that Obsessive Freak, sounds awful but if its all worth it in the end. Hope your Ok :(

Ok now to look at the new page....wait, what's he gonna do?! I'm quite surprised now 0_0
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Back from the Hospital)

Postby Mad-Mutt » Thu Jun 12, 2014 6:23 pm

That sounds like it sucked there buddy. I hope you start feeling well soon.
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Back from the Hospital)

Postby Thy Obsessive Freak » Sat Jun 14, 2014 2:41 pm

It did, but luckily I had friends and family who came and saw me regularly and the nurses were pretty nice in a lot of ways. lol

Anyways, yes, managed to do two pages today.

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Also hope this counts as a treat, but managed to do an alternative cover for Pride and Feminism. Reason why is because I'm right now just coming up with more ideas for a comic. I've had to drop Shattered realms, one I lost a lot of momentum due to the cancer. Two, I was hoping my style would stay consistent, as in avoid having these noticeable sudden improvements/changes. Three, was not satisfied with the art. I thought my art had gotten a lot better, but wasn't good enough to make me pleased. Hence I'll wait until I re-do Shattered Realms, maybe as a comic again, great if I could find another artist, but that can be difficult, but may even end up doing it as another format.
Also using this an exercise to examine my work to look for consistent strengths and weaknesses that I'm sharing so yes, first one I'll be showing for today is Dignity and Feminism.

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Summary: Dignity and Feminism takes place in a similar reality only Pro-wrestling is real and nasty. It revolves around the female pro-wrestling named Elsandra. After she mistakenly throws an insult to her General manager boss Henry Frodrick, she is humiliated and punished brutally. In an obscene act of defiance though, Elsandra returns to work. Seen as martyr and voice to all victims of abuse, Elsandra is thrust a midcard wrestler, into a main event and one of the biggest role-models amongst the company.
With Frodrick still as the General manager, but only barely, he attempts to make Elsandra regret where she is, but with the help of her friends Elsandra will see to it that you can be a bully no matter how big you are.
Themes: The story obviously tries to tackle the ideas of abused victims. It's also sick to imagine, but you hopefully peeps know about those who think victims treated as heroes are just milking the attention they get, yeah I hate those people with mindset (Yes I do know there are such things as victims who do that, but I'm more sickened by the peeps who think every victims like that). So that's one thing that drove this story was challenging that (Though the prose story is about only 40% it was going to focus a lot more on this idea). Besides that it also involves some of the other cliche sports (Or sport entertainment if you prefer :) ) themes like honour, friendship and winning as well as themes you see on WWE. But it more focuses about victims (Besides the idea of them being treated as heroes).
Strengths: It's an easy and very simple story. It's perhaps my biggest idea not involving any fantasy/sci-fi (Besides people jumping off from the turnbuckle to want hurt each other and fighting inside steel cages) meaning there is almost no explaining needed. It was also just really fun writing my own Wrestling world like you see on WWE, only a few people read the story, but they got the vibe and that's pretty rare to capture that considering we all know what WWE is like (Even if you don't watch it) and I think it portrayed the women really well without ill-flattering them.
[img]Weaknesses:[/img]Problem was that it took part in a pro-wrestling world, I think that's its biggest weakness is that I tried to make it so much like it that it shared the problems that Pro-wrestling drama has that only pro-wrestling can get away with. For one there's the head scratching things like why no one calls the police when one wrestler's vandalizing property or why they leave baseball bats lying around for them to use on each other. Also just the silly and ludicrous characters that you'd have to imagine what they'd be like on the streets. So in a way it's still pretty fantasy/sci-fi. There's also probably the problem it has so many characters because it's trying to explore a pro-wrestling world that during the story I was introducing characters to introduce the variety of wrestlers there was. It's the only real weakness I find with the idea thus far.
[img]Likehood%20of%20me%20turning%20it%20into%20a%20comic:[/img] Minimal. This one has the biggest gap between me and I rather get someone else to make it into a comic/manga for me (Not that I'm actually asking anyone to be honest) simply because it would require really good anatomy for me to be satisfied. Already with the artwork up top I'm unsatisfied with the anatomy. I might in a couple of years later, who knows, but for now I think this is the least likely one of me actually doing.
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Back from the Hospital)

Postby Sigment » Sat Jun 14, 2014 4:04 pm

The kids' arms look a bit too stubby in those last couple of pages. Don't remember who, but someone on Snafu told me that the fingertips should line up about with the middle of the thigh. At least, that's what I believe they told me. Pretty sure the proportions should be about the same at that age as well.

Anyway, the pages look great besides that. Hope the advice helps, man.
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Back from the Hospital)

Postby GrimlyLoveGunner » Sun Jun 15, 2014 12:43 pm

There's was pretty nurses after all... and I don't care if they saw me act like a wuss, the view was the important thing.


XD Fuck Freak, the way you change the subject from cancer. I love it. XD

and the nurses were pretty nice in a lot of ways


I think I saw that p0rn.

XD Anyway- You know I'd offer to help with Shattered Realms if I wasn't already work-heavy on Freaky Nick. I still haven't gotten a chance to Read Gretchen's story. And you keep adding to it! XD Sorry, but whenever I've had freetime, I've been using it to make pages and drawing in general. My own written stories are getting dustier and dustier. >.>

Building on Sigment's advice- The wrist of an arm should reach the bottom of the crotch, and the hand & fingers should be equal length of a characters chin to eyebrows.

Loving the Dignity and Feminism picture. Elsandra's lookin' sexy. Though her shoulders are a tad wide and her leg a bit short. Unless they're supposed to be bent. In which case, you gotta make the foot smaller.

I'd ALSO offer to do something with that, which I already have, but I'm still really practicing anatomy. I've started getting dimensions and perspective down, but yeah. It's okay if it's shelved for a while.

I gotta draw creepy Twisted Judith naow. hah. XD

AS FOR THE COMIC PAGES

Metsu, I love you. So.... damn.... cute.... awwwwwww-

The background coloring- yellow- is alittle distractingly bright. I don't do color comics so I can't think of good advice for it- just to use a darker or at least a dimmer shade of color. It's too shocking and comical. Black wouldn't work- maybe blue or purple?

*EDIT five second later*

WAIT, IT WAS UR BIRFDAY?

HAPPY BIRFDAY FWEAK. 8D

And- hey, nothing unrealistic about a horrible fear of needles. Out of childhood habit, I still sleep with a stuffed cat. XD

HER NAME'S RAN. AFTER THE GIRLFRIEND IN DETECTIVE CONAN~
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