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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 17/11/13)

Postby Sigment » Wed Nov 20, 2013 6:27 pm

Mind control powers and a wacky hairdo. Such a great combo.
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 17/11/13)

Postby GrimlyLoveGunner » Sat Nov 23, 2013 2:29 pm

Those chairs look a little high up but everythings colored so pretty it's hard to find a valid error. 8D

So preeeeettyyyyyyyyy~

Cute pink pony with cupcake cutiemark and mind powers. I'm sensing either Yandere humor or character death. Because that it just too awesome. XDDDD
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 17/11/13)

Postby Thy Obsessive Freak » Sat Nov 23, 2013 8:06 pm

Thanks again and yeah, the perspectives got messed up there and don't people recognize who the pink-maned pony is?

Anyways here's more of X-Ponies.

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Here's also the next Story of Mizuka. Though to warn the art got messed up badly due to a large number of reasons.
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 17/11/13)

Postby Sigment » Sat Nov 23, 2013 8:28 pm

Uhh... Freak? Ya... kinda put Mizuka pages where you wanted to put X-Ponies pages.
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 17/11/13)

Postby Thy Obsessive Freak » Sat Nov 23, 2013 9:01 pm

Dang it!
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 17/11/13)

Postby GrimlyLoveGunner » Sun Nov 24, 2013 1:55 pm

don't people recognize who the pink-maned pony is?


I DUNT NO MY PONIES JUST THAT THE YILLOW WON WIF PINK HAIR WIKES BUNNIEZ. AND TEH COWGURL ISH APPLEJACKZ.

I think. I just say what I'm thinking. XD Urhmk- type what I'm thinking. orz

MIZUUUUUU.

Some of the dialogue is off in the Mizuka pages. like the guy keeps getting cut off. It also looks like there was a word cut off in the Pony pages. Though I could have been reading out of order again. Bad habit of reading Right to Reft and visa-versa.

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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 17/11/13)

Postby Thy Obsessive Freak » Thu Nov 28, 2013 7:25 pm

Oh right, was guessing you were a Pegasister, but nevermind, not everyone is on the internet.

Also for darn sakes! It's something that's criticised in my work anyways, I think I just need to get use to comic dialogue more we're I'm too use to Prose dialogue.

Anyways, more of X-Ponies and in a few days, more of the Story of Mizuka.

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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 17/11/13)

Postby GrimlyLoveGunner » Sat Nov 30, 2013 2:27 pm

I'm on the internet! I just don't have cable. I've only watched MLP a few times at my grandma's. Understand why it's spectacular, do not have enough time to become part of the spectacle-...uh... ness.

orz. and I don't have home wifi so I have to go to the library- and we're down to one car right now so I've only been able to get here three times a week.

I did geek out when there was a commercial for the humanoid pony dolls on TV though. XDDD

Careful choosing font color- I know more well then anyone it's hard to find an acceptable color that doesn't blend in with the background at one point, but some of Monsieur Birdies dialogue was virtually unreadable.

Speaking of Monsieur. I just finished reading a intense WW2 set Hetalia fanfic last night. So when you mentioned concentration camps my head exploded alittle.

8D LIKE WHEN ALL THE GOSSIP SHOWS MOMMA MAKES ME WATCH STARTED TALKING OVER AND OVER AGAIN ABOUT BRIAN GRIFFONS DEATH OMFGPAWIUEBAWPEIBAPEFAUOWBGAPWRGBUWAPOGUBwpaoiubapibugrapwubgawpgawu geekout.
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 17/11/13)

Postby Thy Obsessive Freak » Sat Dec 07, 2013 4:33 pm

Okay, haven't posted any of Mizuka in a long while, but hey, I'm working on X-Ponies as well now and putting a bit more focus into that because it's growing me a fandom faster, but I'm still pressing with Story of Mizuka because that's been attracting more help and more loyal fans, as well as when I've finished it, I'll have moved onto my more ambitious comic. Also, guess who's back, ya-hu.

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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 17/11/13)

Postby Sigment » Sat Dec 07, 2013 4:41 pm

Uh... Freak? The last page didn't come through.
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 17/11/13)

Postby Thy Obsessive Freak » Sat Dec 07, 2013 6:37 pm

Darn it all
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 17/11/13)

Postby GrimlyLoveGunner » Sun Dec 08, 2013 4:00 pm

*Gasp*

MIZUUUUUU.

CALM THE FLOODGATE DOWN.

Are you telling me you live in a world of almost absurdly pleasant peace apart from a few daemons lurking around seducing ppl but you don't have anesthesia to subdue and quietly SURGICALLY remove little wings and tails?

SILLY MIZU IS ANGSTY-SILLY.

Yeeshez.

Also.

YAY UR BACK!

Also.

WILLIAAAAAAAM! YUR ALL GROWED UP AND SO ROVELY!!!~ I JUST WANT 2 CUDDLEZ OMGOBNOXIOUSFANGIRLYAY

But- ack. That was terrifying. Poor baby. Mizu, you know how your Daddy estranged himself to you via' emotional constipation and lack of empathy?

Well you've jumped quite a few steps above that. Silly old man.

Also.

Try a different way of painting tears. They kinda look silly as just little blue smears like that.
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 17/11/13)

Postby Thy Obsessive Freak » Sun Dec 08, 2013 8:19 pm

Thanks again GrimlyLoveGunner. I am still around, just that it's taking longer to get things done and again thanks for the advice, hopefully I do the tears better.
For now, a lot of X-Ponies to catch up on.

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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 17/11/13)

Postby GrimlyLoveGunner » Sat Dec 21, 2013 1:31 pm

GAAAAAASP. PONIEZ.

There's some glaring dialogue problems-

"Yes! I promised (period/comma/dash/something) just like you did!
Like how you promised to be nice to me if I ate from the mud.
And how you promised to free me if I dropped that stuff into the other ponies (bowl?) who died the next day.
And how (you) promised that if I begged and pleaded for an hours! " (remove 'an' or the 's')

I understand 150% you get wrapped up in it. But read through it carefully JUUUUST OOOONCE and you could easily catch those!
It's worth it. Alot of my stuff goes along slow cuz' I make myself read my fanfiction chapters through twice and with both fanfic and doujinshi I re-read what I've already done to remember what I was doing/remember the flow of things.....

And my laptop battery is being shit so I haven't been able to get around to scanning and putting up my refferance arts yeeeeeeet~ Nyehmphf.

Anywayanywayanyway-

ACK. TEH SUSPENSEZ. MUST..... MUST.... BE PATIENT......

XDDDD orz But yeah- Is it loosely following any of the X-Men movies? or Avengers? Can I have any idea of what's happening next? WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN? IS SOMEBODY GONNA BLOW UP LIKE JEAN LUC PICARD!? WHHAAAAAAAAAAAAATS HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAPPENIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNG!?

HASHTAGSPAZZOUTPLZ
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 17/11/13)

Postby Thy Obsessive Freak » Sun Dec 22, 2013 6:39 am

Yeah sorry, I normally only give myself time to add the dialogue very late at night where I'm very tired and groggy and want to go to sleep. I may try better and see if I can start waiting to put them up until morning.

And yeah it's loosely based on X-Men: First Class, but I'm hoping that if I manage, between acts I will be following a different hero each time, starting with Captain Equestria.

Anyways, also more pages.... A lot more pages.

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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 17/11/13)

Postby Sigment » Sun Dec 22, 2013 4:09 pm

Freak, one of the X-Ponies pages was URL linked instead of shown.
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 17/11/13)

Postby Mad-Mutt » Mon Dec 23, 2013 9:41 pm

PONIEEES!!!

That is all.

Okay that's not all.

Nice job trying to capture the show's art style.

Okay now that is all.
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 17/11/13)

Postby GrimlyLoveGunner » Sat Dec 28, 2013 3:00 pm

It's so charmingly hilarious how all these goofy pony names mixed in with these intense serious situations.

Like my modern-day AU Hetalia stories with all the old-timey European names.

"Francis!"
"Feliciano!"
"Ludwig!"
"Gilbert!"
"Rodrich!"
"Berwald!"
"Emmil!"
"Rocky!"
"Who?"

XDDDDD orz

Can't say I didn't figure out Rena's plot twist back when you freaked out you that you had forgotten to stronger hint at something. XD

LE GAAAAASP! Are we gonna find out how that occurred? Did they get drunk on Dharem ale after a mission? XDDDD

But poor Rena, those bangs were just begging to be yanked.

That bruise on her face kinda shows up awkwardly, It's a big smudge that instantly developes but not right after the impact- which was directly head-on so it'd make more sense for it to show up on her forehead- Or at least show with a different angle that she hit more on that side so it's not so MARK-ON-FACE-WOW all of a sudden for us.

So I just guess- Shave dat beard off, Joe Carrol. It makes you moar patient. Trololololol.
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 17/11/13)

Postby Thy Obsessive Freak » Sun Dec 29, 2013 8:13 am

GrimlyLoveGunner wrote:
That bruise on her face kinda shows up awkwardly, It's a big smudge that instantly developes but not right after the impact- which was directly head-on so it'd make more sense for it to show up on her forehead- Or at least show with a different angle that she hit more on that side so it's not so MARK-ON-FACE-WOW all of a sudden for us.



Darn it! I thought I had the bruise thing going!

Anyways thanks guys, forgot to mention that the real big hint was that Mizuka mentioned to Kunaga during the dance that Juzumi was suppose to be unable to have kids, since well half of those parts were also damaged, so Metsu's birth looked like a miracle. Anyways this is meant to transpire into a side story for Metsu, but you'll get a huge amount of information in the next two following scene to how it happened as I experiment with flashbacks again.

P.S. Like how you mentioned 'trying' Madd-Mutt lol , thanks though. I'll be mentioning it soon in the information dump that the quality may continue to increase for X-Ponies and explain why.
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 17/11/13)

Postby Thy Obsessive Freak » Sun Dec 29, 2013 4:29 pm

Right, fesitive season has been keeping me busy, but finally came out with another four pages. To note that I'm starting to change my art style a bit. The one at the bottom is the new three-shade colouring. It takes progressively and a lot longer, so it's somewot agonizing and is mostly just useful for dark venues, but worth it as it helps me think more about the sources of light and how to use the brush better. This may end up making me struggle, but we'll see how it goes.

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Also introducing is the new skeleton for the Story of Mizuka which will be implemented for when you next see Mizuka.

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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 17/11/13)

Postby GrimlyLoveGunner » Mon Dec 30, 2013 2:18 pm

SKETCHEZ.

YEY. 8D

They look really good, but seeing how you do it I can tell how you still mess up some things like perspective and angle.

I've been having trouble with shoulders lately so whenever I get the time to draw it's all I practice. XD

Holidays with a bunch of presents have me preoccupied and although I'm on the last level of Silent Hill 3 I'm grumpy everything else has slowed down. >.>

AFTER THE HOLIDAYS. WE MUST FOCUS ON LOSING TEH COOKIE WEIGHT AND FINISHING OUR BUZZNEZZEZ.

Damn Mr. Claus has a whole bunch of multi-armed minions running about. >.>

BACK WITH THE SKETCHES.

It can be hard. You really have to think in 3D and be like- Where should THIS BE!?

One thing that can help is if you can get your hands on one of those wooden puppet models. I had one I named Hammy but his wrists broke cuz I screwed around with him too much so he's just decoration now. XD In my art store the tiny ones are only eight dollars. But It might help with some dynamic poses and positioning when at an angle.

And you've been doing hands pretty good but one tip is to use your own hand as reference- and when you need to draw the other hand you can use a little mirror.

Just lost mine, actually. Dammit. >.> I needed that.

XD But yeah everything's looking good! At least Mizu's still focused on doing SOMEWHAT better then his own father. 8D

Angry Rena is angry.
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 17/11/13)

Postby Thy Obsessive Freak » Fri Jan 03, 2014 10:13 am

Right, sort of in a hurry here, so sorry if this is rushed. But I'm basically experimenting with flashbacks and more of how Mizuka saved Rena and Juzumi's relationship will be explained near the end and it's the next scene you see Mizuka that the new skeleton will be implemented.

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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 17/11/13)

Postby Sigment » Fri Jan 03, 2014 2:15 pm

Interesting pages. They explain her situation in a way that sounds reasonable for the story. Well done.
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 17/11/13)

Postby GrimlyLoveGunner » Sat Jan 04, 2014 2:29 pm

YEEEEES, That explains things.

Still kind of comical though. Not that you can change that- this is quite an awkward conversation to have to begin with.

Rena: Mizuka, I want to have the noble dharem life by raising a viable and skillful heir, but my angelicly perfect husband is unable to bear children. So I was thinking, since I care about you, and you're emotionally constipated, we could have sex as a test-out without it really meaning anything.

Mizuka: But you know, condoms don't exsist in this world.

Rena: Bonus?

XD Ahhahaha~

The flashbacks definitely better, but I can't get over that it would do good for the borders to be black. Hng.

That's what you could do for a long, full-scene flashback like this. And use a cloudy/shaded effect for short flashbacks. That's what I've been doing. But that might be the reason that I'm prone to mention it so much.

Your angles are looking better too, But their armour is too shiney. Unless you toned it for the flashback- It looks more like glossy leather then metal battle armor.

And for a second I admired how cute younger Mizuka was- then I realized you'd just forgotten his veins in one panel. XD Ahaha~
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 17/11/13)

Postby Varspool » Wed Jan 08, 2014 7:45 pm

Oh man I have so much catching up to do!

Just from skimming though, you're getting a lot better. Keep up the good work, Freak. :D
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