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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 8/10/13)

Postby Sig Skellington » Tue Oct 15, 2013 3:50 pm

I think there's an exception or loophole in there when the mother isn't Dharem.
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 8/10/13)

Postby Thy Obsessive Freak » Tue Oct 15, 2013 4:13 pm

Cerulean wrote:Hmm, so Kunaga and Mizuka are married huh? It adds another reason as to why Mizuka wouldn't want anyone else to know about Kunaga.


Yeah, in a way.

Cerulean wrote:So does this mean that even if the Divinity hadn't warned Mizuka ahead of time, she would have been discovered anyway since the baby has horns on his head (also the whole 6 month pregnancy thing (unless dharem also have shorter pregnancies?))? Or would she have somehow concealed them?


Again kind of, Kunaga's plan was to bail when she could, but her real scheme will be unveiled about what she originally planned (Though it's going to be forever when that's unveiled). But the part about getting a half-daemon and half-dharem prince was apart of her goal.

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Sigment Kurosai wrote:I think there's an exception or loophole in there when the mother isn't Dharem.


There was, or I should say there is. Dharem DNA is aggressive when it comes to the genetic side, as in you'll be born with more Dharem features than the half, but due to the aggression it causes higher miscarriages. That and also the fact of the amount of power a Dharem is born with that it's hard to carry a half-Dharem. However Kunaga being a Succubus/shapechanger was able to adjust her body to change that later fact. However the earlier fact where Zyuu is 75% Dharem and only 25% Daemon only comes in play far-far later.
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 8/10/13)

Postby Thy Obsessive Freak » Thu Oct 17, 2013 4:35 pm

Okay, scene isn't entirely been done yet, but I thought this was good enough to post up. To warn I've been kind of taken the thing slow, just stuff going on, like lack of sleep, busy and doing concept art. I do want to finish this though, because after this I plan to do my next comic, plus there's still a lot of fun to be had in this and I love process.

By the way, symmetry sucks, just as worse as Perspective, sam them both!



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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 17/10/13)

Postby GrimlyLoveGunner » Sat Oct 19, 2013 12:44 pm

sam them both!


You really do need sleep.

Also: First thought for page: Beard.

XD Ahahaha~ Try to show his lips a bit. It just looks like he's part werewolf and that thing is overgulfing him.

Awww, I wanna see little Zyuu. I bet he'll be coot just wike' Willummm~

And yes, symmetry is a pain. Very big pain. Although if you do things digitally sometimes you could draw half of something- copy and paste- flip it- and make needed adjustments and touches.

It would be easier if you can do layers. I don't know what you're using.

All I have is Windows Paint. >.>
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 17/10/13)

Postby Thy Obsessive Freak » Sat Oct 19, 2013 3:55 pm

GrimlyLoveGunner wrote:
sam them both!


You really do need sleep.

Also: First thought for page: Beard.

XD Ahahaha~ Try to show his lips a bit. It just looks like he's part werewolf and that thing is overgulfing him.

Awww, I wanna see little Zyuu. I bet he'll be coot just wike' Willummm~

And yes, symmetry is a pain. Very big pain. Although if you do things digitally sometimes you could draw half of something- copy and paste- flip it- and make needed adjustments and touches.

It would be easier if you can do layers. I don't know what you're using.

All I have is Windows Paint. >.>


Sam's actually a substitute word I use. I use to love saying that word until I started disliking using it.

And good suggestion GrimlyLoveGunner, I was wondering what was wrong with the beard, looked at some old anime characters with beards and see what you mean, so that should be a lot more helpful.

And I use Sai, which has almost literally no measurement tools whatsoever and I doubt a fancy copy and paste tool like that.

Anyways, here's the next scene quickly finished. Also started giving Rena eyelashes to try those out.

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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 19/10/13)

Postby Sig Skellington » Sat Oct 19, 2013 4:16 pm

Tradition, cultural law... Times like this make you wonder what the point of it all is...
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 19/10/13)

Postby Thy Obsessive Freak » Sat Oct 19, 2013 4:41 pm

Sigment Kurosai wrote:Tradition, cultural law... Times like this make you wonder what the point of it all is...


You need to study Sociology and Psychology (And probably philosophy though I don't like Philosophy) my friend, a country's identity is an illusional, but very valued thing :) .
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 19/10/13)

Postby Thy Obsessive Freak » Tue Oct 22, 2013 6:13 pm

Anyways (Seriously Sigment Kurosai, study Sociology and Psychology, there's a reason people call it a hobby) was able to get some more done, though this scene wasn't as a long as I hoped, it doesn't seem too rushed, right?

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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 19/10/13)

Postby Thy Obsessive Freak » Wed Oct 23, 2013 2:45 pm

Right, just to note I haven't stopped doing the Story of Mizuka, I'm still passionately doing that. But I had plenty of time to do this mini-comic called Rockets and Anvils: Crazy ride. It was inspired by my friends I see every Friday and so I doddled them all in this and well you got this. At first I had no plans to do it digitally or put it up online because I felt there were too many inside jokes. But a number of people who weren't aware of the inside jokes read it and all found it really funny and thought I should put it online. So leaving time (Instead of doing three more pages of Mizuka or something), I did this in span of two days, so yes, hopefully everyone finds this funny.

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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 19/10/13)

Postby Sig Skellington » Wed Oct 23, 2013 2:52 pm

Completely random, but completely hilarious.
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 23/10/13)

Postby GrimlyLoveGunner » Thu Oct 24, 2013 12:04 pm

OMG THAT COMIC IT ISH YEEEEEEEEES.

IT NEEDS TO BE A REACCURING ADVENTURE W00000000T.

YAY. 8D

Ahahaha~ That robot has a beard~

As for SoM.... Som.. somsomsosmsomsom....

anyway-

Careful placing panels- it gets confusing which ones to follow.

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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 23/10/13)

Postby Thy Obsessive Freak » Thu Oct 24, 2013 9:26 pm

Just practicing with the panels as I was told a few times that the diagonal lines just weren't working for me, so I'm going back strictly to squares and rectangles, but trying to shake it up so it doesn't get so boring.

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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 23/10/13)

Postby Thy Obsessive Freak » Sat Oct 26, 2013 5:06 pm

Sorry for messing up Mizuka in the very last panel... No idea how it happened.

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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 23/10/13)

Postby GrimlyLoveGunner » Mon Oct 28, 2013 1:23 pm

A male succubus is called a incubus, I believe. Unless it's irrelevant and he's half succubus because the bus' half is female and that's how it works-

But anyway. The only problem with Mizu in the last panel is the eyes are real close together- or maybe it's that they're small and thus is the result of such.

Blonde Daemon is very understanding. Like to see how this is going to turn out. Like to see more action soon- since right now is just showing what the initial result of the original drama is.

...... Did everything I say make sense? XDDDD orz

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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 23/10/13)

Postby Thy Obsessive Freak » Mon Oct 28, 2013 5:46 pm

Oh, makes sense.

And okay, maybe that's true, it could be just the eyes, I'm probably having to put more thought into how I position the face. But hopefully every thing else is improving.

But sadly there won't be any real action until chapter 4. There'll be those that might count, but nothing like a big fight scene and flying across the plains. But there will be some violence to follow :twisted: But the story of Mizuka was planned to be mostly a drama with shonen elements.

But thanks, I really appreciate the help and the comment as well as the awesome picture GrimlyLoveGunner
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 23/10/13)

Postby Cerulean » Mon Oct 28, 2013 10:21 pm

Oooh more violence you say? Looking forward to it c:
and looking forward to what happened to Juzumi too
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 23/10/13)

Postby Thy Obsessive Freak » Tue Oct 29, 2013 6:06 pm

Cerulean wrote:Oooh more violence you say? Looking forward to it c:
and looking forward to what happened to Juzumi too


Take it this way, it's not important to the story what happened to Juzumi. But to clarify now as it'll be later (And I'll probably forget, due to the fact it's that unimportant). He died because his heart gave out. As you'll recall, his left side was hit by the accident, this included this heart to, which was damaged. So it was only a matter of time until Juzumi's heart finally gave up and he passed.
Anyways, more fun.

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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 23/10/13)

Postby Sig Skellington » Tue Oct 29, 2013 10:45 pm

2+2=Murder.
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 23/10/13)

Postby Mad-Mutt » Tue Oct 29, 2013 10:54 pm

I can't think of anything to say right now Freak, but I still wanted to let you know that I'm enjoying the comic so far. Sorry I don't have more to say, but keep up the good work, buddy.
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 23/10/13)

Postby Cerulean » Tue Oct 29, 2013 11:04 pm

Ohhh ok, so that's how he died. Makes sense.

The plot thickens

Also, the various hair styles in these pages look really good (one of the first things I noticed about each character in this set of pages).
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 23/10/13)

Postby GrimlyLoveGunner » Thu Oct 31, 2013 1:05 pm

Maybe it's just that I keep forgetting what order to read the panels in- Damn Otaku brain- but some of the dialogue seems alittle off. This isn't supposed to sound mean- but it sounds like you had a stroke in the first few panels, it transitioned so fast.

I'm sure it sounds right in your head- but again- read over and inspect somethings before finishing a page. It'll cut any mistakes in half. I also got thrown over by the quick transition to flashback. It took me a second to realize that's what it was. If you keep doing flashbacks we'd need to figure out how to clearly show that's what it's become.

In Naruto they white behind the panels becomes black. In some soft Shojo manga there's a fading line that transitions to the new scene. For quick shots, the entire flashbacked panel in shaded.

Or, since your comic's in color. You could make it in black-and white. Hm? 8D

Ah- and shoulders- careful making them too high up. Everyone looks surprised and too tense. It's fine when they're in armor but poor little Chibi Rena looks like a daemons trying to crawl up her butt. XD

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I LOVE GABU.

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DAMMIT! I SHOULD OF KNOWN WHEN HE WAS SO ENDEARING IN HIS VERY FIRST PANEL.

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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 23/10/13)

Postby Thy Obsessive Freak » Fri Nov 01, 2013 10:06 am

Wow, four comments at once, that's a surprise. Guess it shows how hyped things are gettin :twisted: Thank you all anyways, they're really appreciated.

And thanks Cerculean, glad someones noticed it and hope they're working well to improve me art.

And dang it! Knew I should've done something about that. It was more when I drawed it I thought it was good, but when I did it digitally I realised I maybe hadn't made enough pages, which caused things to be rushed because it was all grinded and squished to fit into ever so many pages. It should maybe slow down a bit when I do the next few scenes though. ANd thanks for pointing out the shoulders, only noticing them now.

But all is very much appreciated... Now to ahem, unfold someone's fate :twisted:

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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 01/11/13)

Postby Sig Skellington » Fri Nov 01, 2013 12:02 pm

Careless son of a bitch...
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 01/11/13)

Postby GrimlyLoveGunner » Fri Nov 01, 2013 2:47 pm

........

DAMMIT YOU'RE GONNA MAKE ME CRY.

AHHHHHHUGH.

GABBYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

*sharp intake of breath*

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*moar breath*

YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY.....

I was also going to add that at least Kuna's dress has tattered somewhat. I wouldn't have been surprised is Mizu's been taking care of her, but it really does appear she's been wearing that thing about five years.

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GABBYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
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Re: Thy Obsessive freak's artwork (Updated 01/11/13)

Postby Tamuramu » Fri Nov 01, 2013 3:31 pm

Its getting good, can't wait to see the rest of it.
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