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Re: My comic: Grim Tales From Dark Realm

Fri Jun 17, 2011 5:18 am

@ alopunk: Thanks :D

@ qwevictor: I'm not good at EL, and also the Old English
so sorry about that :D

Well, next page, this time, I draw with my pen, and color with Wacom
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Re: My comic: Grim Tales From Dark Realm

Fri Jun 17, 2011 8:52 am

"What, you gotta date with him?", That also seems kinda weak in the whitey banter department.

Re: My comic: Grim Tales From Dark Realm

Sun Jun 19, 2011 9:38 pm

@ Imosa: So I would change : "What? You gonna date with him" to ""What, you gotta date with him?"
really, I don't know what do you mean :D
(Sr, My EL is bad)

Re: My comic: Grim Tales From Dark Realm

Sun Jun 19, 2011 11:31 pm

I kind of suggest that you drop using Bleed's style for this.
I don't mean stop the fan-comics. I mean do the comic, but using your style. You know, the art that you've done that is very detailed and inked well. In that style, you'd probably be able to quickly get a spot at the top for your comic if you tried. Not sure, but it'd help.

Your style with this fan-comic would beat the style that you're trying to do now. Try to do the next update in your style, and see what the people say.

Re: My comic: Grim Tales From Dark Realm

Mon Jun 20, 2011 6:45 am

Actually, in a long time using this style, I randomly use it in this comic
really, now I don't TRY to draw in bleedman's style, just draw, and this is the result :D
there maybe bleedman's style, but I'll try to combine it with my style

Re: My comic: Grim Tales From Dark Realm

Mon Jun 20, 2011 12:01 pm

Maxgate wrote:@ Imosa: So I would change : "What? You gonna date with him" to ""What, you gotta date with him?"
really, I don't know what do you mean :D
(Sr, My EL is bad)

Ya.
I guess you should also change "Who is "He" you are talking about" to "Who is this "He" you are talking about".

Also upon looking more the word Rumble has too little impact. Everything else has this sketchy black outline but the word Rumble does not and that makes it look out of place.

Re: My comic: Grim Tales From Dark Realm

Wed Jun 22, 2011 10:22 pm

@ Imosa: Got it!
I'll fix it later
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Re: Grim Tales From Dark Realm - page 12: Jr's Doom

Thu Jun 23, 2011 2:06 am

No grammar mistakes here. Good job.
Only thing I can think of is writing "Slash" in a different font. Something like Chiller. Check out dafonts if you don't already know about the site.

Re: Grim Tales From Dark Realm - page 12: Jr's Doom

Thu Jun 23, 2011 5:08 am

Great comic so far :) really enjoyed reading it, looking forward to the next one! In this latest page, is he meant to say 'Cheese'?

Re: Grim Tales From Dark Realm - page 12: Jr's Doom

Fri Jun 24, 2011 3:56 pm

Cheese*
Also, i agree completely with Mimeme

Re: Grim Tales From Dark Realm - page 12: Jr's Doom

Tue Jul 05, 2011 10:09 am

ok
this page: no color, just black and white (Maybe I'll color it in the future)
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P/S: I fixed page 12, too
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Re: Grim Tales From Dark Realm - page 12: Jr's Doom

Tue Jul 05, 2011 10:18 am

Whoa... nice.

I want to see it in full color later.

Grivous.

Re: Grim Tales From Dark Realm - page 13: Fake-brain (No color)

Tue Jul 05, 2011 1:13 pm

Actually... I'm loving the black and white... i think it fits the mood perfectly.

Re: Grim Tales From Dark Realm - page 13: Fake-brain (No color)

Tue Jul 05, 2011 4:22 pm

There's a mis-spell.
'Behide' should be 'Behind'
Also 'anything of you' should be 'anything like you' I assume.
That's all the mistakes I could find.
Know what? You really piss me off!

really piss me off!

piss me off!

...
Reminds me of those street punks in Ryu Ga Gotoku.
I hope that clone-dude-whatever-the-hell-he-is doesn't say "Your ass is mine!" or something like that in the future.

Re: Grim Tales From Dark Realm - page 13: Fake-brain (No color)

Fri Jul 08, 2011 11:11 am

@ Grivous & Alopunk: well, because of my laziness, and loving black and white, I think I'll keep going with black and white :))
but I'll color them if I have more time
@ Unlimited: actually, I really want to use "anything OF you" in this situation :D
and I fixed "behide" =) Thanks :D

well, another page:
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Re: Grim Tales From Dark Realm - page 13: Fake-brain (No color)

Sat Jul 16, 2011 12:54 am

Maxgate wrote:@ Grivous & Alopunk: well, because of my laziness, and loving black and white, I think I'll keep going with black and white :))
but I'll color them if I have more time
@ Unlimited: actually, I really want to use "anything OF you" in this situation :D
and I fixed "behide" =) Thanks :D

well, another page:
[img]http://s855.photobucket.com/albums/ab118/Maxgate/?action=view&current=page14copy.jpg
[/img]

Fail page? XD

Re: Grim Tales From Dark Realm - page 14: Game Over

Sat Jul 16, 2011 10:04 am

oh, sorry
I have fixed it :D
enjoy!

Re: Grim Tales From Dark Realm - page 14: Game Over

Sat Jul 16, 2011 3:14 pm

Awesome page. I'm pretty sure the other junior would be illuminated by the ball of energy, dramatic effect aside.
Also your last panel is astonishing. Mankind has been trying to master passing off a blank page as art for as long as art existed. I need the desktop version.

Re: Grim Tales From Dark Realm - page 14: Game Over

Wed Jul 20, 2011 7:52 pm

I think you should shade in things, now. Don't leave big white gaps in your Art. Anything white, try to grey it up, black it up, or shade it up. It'd add a cool effect to it.

Also do this. Add color to eyes, and blood. Maybe some color to parts of clothes. Say a light hits blood and you have it resonating, glowing in a sense, back onto the clothes. With this, in the Black and White style, it'd look fantastic.

Re: Grim Tales From Dark Realm - page 14: Game Over

Sun Jul 24, 2011 3:54 am

Maxgate wrote:oh, sorry
I have fixed it :D
enjoy!

I am and did!! :D

Re: Grim Tales From Dark Realm - page 14: Game Over

Fri Jul 29, 2011 9:18 pm

update new page after... 20 days after going military camp :D
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Re: Grim Tales From Dark Realm - page 15: Naughty Minnie

Fri Jul 29, 2011 9:55 pm

Nice. Grammar errors as far as I can see. This is coming along.

Re: Grim Tales From Dark Realm - page 15: Naughty Minnie

Fri Jul 29, 2011 10:06 pm

Very good. Loving Anti-Jr's evil face on panel 4.
Keep it up! C:

Re: Grim Tales From Dark Realm - page 15: Naughty Minnie

Sat Aug 13, 2011 1:28 pm

@ Imosa & Alopunk: Thank you thank you very much
well, here we go again
page 16 (lots of mistake, I know)

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Enjoy!

Re: Grim Tales From Dark Realm - page 16: Nozone

Sat Aug 13, 2011 2:39 pm

Hm... What a weird guy.

About the mistakes, well, I can't help you so much with it... I am a foreigner. :P
But I think it's "Okay" in the second panel.

... "Nozone". That's a good one. lol

Grivous.
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