WOW i like this page it sertinly is evil

what's next i realy want to know. will grim jr. be to late to save his siter? will his nergal powers take controle again?

i can't wait for the next page!

but no pressure

....... where is everybody

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oh well
Can't let this comic dies
I will finish this no matter what

anw, new pages, hope you like it




looks like it's so many pages for Veronica

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real nice comic by the way

its "she's out numbered" not "she's out of numbers"
nice page btw

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They are screwed! Now time for a battle.

oh goody varonica brought some new friends.

activating the don't f*ck with me mode.

lets see if they can handle it .

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@ Haruhi: Thanks
I have fixed it

@ darkness: let's see




I haven't check the grammar on page 35, so please help me if you can

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This page looks really nice... Only thing you might want to check is the dialogue in panel 4. You might want to change that first sentence to something like "We meet again after all", or "After all this time, we meet again". For the second sentence, instead of "have a right choice" try "make the right choice".

i know he is going to deside from two out of the three but even i ponder on that question as well. is he going to choose #2 or #3?
he didn't stand a chance with her brother, so how is he going to kill dark mandy?

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Just have to wonder. Does Veronica come off as a Merry Sue to anyone else?

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Hey, this place hasn't gotten traffic in a while... maybe you want to change that.

maybe she will, mabe she will not. it depends on max on that one.

Keep on going! Keep your hard work liven on.

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@ Imosa: Who is Marry Sue?

@ dark: I still keep going, just have been slowed

well, this is new page, hope you like it



P/S: There is something in a game, do you know what game is it?

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btw, something I done days ago:

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*Holds his laghter.* That comic page is so funny, I might die laghing.

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Sorry for being cruel. I'll try to be better.

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I enjoyed this where has it gone?

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I have been art block for months , can't draw anything
well, sorry for making you wait so long (for someone who like this)

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wow...........witch one is going to die first?

welcom back maxy!

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@ Darkness: Thanks









Hope you like these

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Well good Jr. is screwed.

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liking so far.

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2 Months since the last time I post something here









Well, hope you like this

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Talking about stuck between a rock and a hard place.
And who is this ultamate guy the gate keeper said?

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ooooh I like way much~! except the comic sans...

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Good to be back
Well, at first:


Thanks, I like you, too. but I'm too lazy to change or find some suitable fonts, any ideas for me? (And because of my lazyness, I get use to with this comic sans)

@ darkness: you'll know, soon (I hope so)

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