Hmm you guy are right, it does sound rather cliché...
Well what I’ll do is run through the rest of story planned out and post up the finished art work.
Story; The Giant monster uses a summoning charm to call out an arm of Tripod Soldiers. The tripod soldiers are shot from one his arm attachments as missiles.
Junior outnumbered battles on but is soon weakens. He chooses then, to release himself farther to the Nergal Power within himself.
(If you get bored feel free to skip to the paragraph after next)
He then goes awall and completely blows the Giant monster off the face of Hell.
The Temptress unaware of the events that accrued in the story ‘Down Below’ is surprised at the outcome of the match and offers Junior her congratulations saying ‘well done Little Death, you have won your freedom...
...well I’ll skip the rest
I release the obvious similarity to Naruto (in the story and visually), but that was my intent, to draw parallels been the two story. But I can see now that it all sound horridly cliché
I'll go away and think for a bit, then either I will rewrite the story around the existing art work or start again with a new story.
Thanks for commenting,
Regards
