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A 'Grim Tales' story

Postby Baroque Gothic » Sat Jan 01, 2011 9:53 pm

A 'Grim Tale' story, between 'Down Below' and 'After Birth'
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Re: A 'Grim Tales' story

Postby Baroque Gothic » Sat Jan 01, 2011 9:57 pm

Between the two stories 'Grim Tales, Down Below' and 'Grim Tales, After Birth' Junior meets a fearsome monster in an arena located one of the 9 layers of Hell. Summons to the arena by the over lord 'Temptress' Junior must battle the giant monster to win his freedom. But things get even worse when Junior loses control of his powers.

We start half way through
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Re: A 'Grim Tales' story

Postby Baroque Gothic » Sat Jan 01, 2011 10:24 pm

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Re: A 'Grim Tales' story

Postby Baroque Gothic » Sat Jan 01, 2011 10:41 pm

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enjoy!!!!
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Re: A 'Grim Tales' story

Postby Scissors » Sun Jan 02, 2011 10:16 am

Not bad.
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Chuckledarkly: Scissors don't lie. Only cut.
Blood Lord: Scissors, I tip my hat to you, my good sir and/or madam for giving me a good chuckle today.
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Re: A 'Grim Tales' story

Postby Unlimited » Sun Jan 02, 2011 10:23 am

An arena?
Sound pretty cliché.
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Re: A 'Grim Tales' story

Postby Asmodai » Sun Jan 02, 2011 12:45 pm

good art
terribly cliché story
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Re: A 'Grim Tales' story

Postby Baroque Gothic » Mon Jan 03, 2011 4:42 pm

Hmm you guy are right, it does sound rather cliché...

Well what I’ll do is run through the rest of story planned out and post up the finished art work.

Story; The Giant monster uses a summoning charm to call out an arm of Tripod Soldiers. The tripod soldiers are shot from one his arm attachments as missiles.

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Junior outnumbered battles on but is soon weakens. He chooses then, to release himself farther to the Nergal Power within himself.

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(If you get bored feel free to skip to the paragraph after next)
He then goes awall and completely blows the Giant monster off the face of Hell.
The Temptress unaware of the events that accrued in the story ‘Down Below’ is surprised at the outcome of the match and offers Junior her congratulations saying ‘well done Little Death, you have won your freedom...

...well I’ll skip the rest

I release the obvious similarity to Naruto (in the story and visually), but that was my intent, to draw parallels been the two story. But I can see now that it all sound horridly cliché

I'll go away and think for a bit, then either I will rewrite the story around the existing art work or start again with a new story.

Thanks for commenting,

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Re: A 'Grim Tales' story

Postby Unlimited » Mon Jan 03, 2011 6:32 pm

Whoa, what's happening here?
Your art downgraded or something.

Speaking about cliché stuff, I see more!
Summoning charms, the hero gives up too easily, an A-bomb goes off in a very RP style, a person (Temptress) congrats the hero.

Yeah...
This is turning into one of those RPs that die too quickly.
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Re: A 'Grim Tales' story

Postby reaperrose101 » Fri Oct 07, 2011 10:45 am

Baroque Gothic wrote:Image

oh i saw that on Fanpop.
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Re: A 'Grim Tales' story

Postby Coos » Fri Oct 07, 2011 11:12 am

Raperrose please stop commenting on dead threads.
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