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Artificial: my new webcomic!

Postby krayhayft » Sat Jul 31, 2010 2:43 pm

Hey, If I've read the rules right then I can tell you about my new webcomic Artificial.

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Here's the synopsis.

When James Leff helps a girl floating in the ocean by his house, he never would have imagined that she would a perfect, sentient, robot girl named Aira. Now, James and his friends must protect Aira as they face off against high school bullies, a billionaire with a hidden agenda, another female robot and even each other to save not only themselves, but the heart and soul of an artificial girl that just wants to be normal.

We have a new page every Thursday.

Come on over, check it out and tell me what you think.

http://www.arobotslove.com
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Re: Artificial: my new webcomic!

Postby krayhayft » Thu Aug 05, 2010 7:00 am

Page 5 is up!
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Re: Artificial: my new webcomic!

Postby Asmodai » Sat Aug 07, 2010 3:27 pm

so far so good... and the synopsis promises comedy, drama and action

I'm keeping an eye on this
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Re: Artificial: my new webcomic!

Postby krayhayft » Wed Aug 11, 2010 11:48 pm

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Postby Chuckledarkly » Thu Aug 12, 2010 4:41 am

looks good i'll comment more when theres moar pages =]
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Re: Artificial: my new webcomic!

Postby krayhayft » Thu Aug 19, 2010 9:20 am

Page 7 is up! Check it out!

http://www.arobotslove.com/artificial
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Re: Artificial: my new webcomic!

Postby krayhayft » Thu Aug 26, 2010 1:29 pm

Page 8 is up! :mrgreen:
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Re: Artificial: my new webcomic!

Postby krayhayft » Thu Aug 26, 2010 5:05 pm

A new group is up for Artificial over on facebook!!! Check it out!!!

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Re: Artificial: my new webcomic!

Postby Grivous » Thu Aug 26, 2010 6:01 pm

Wow, the draw it's better than mine... o.O
Really gorgeous.

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Re: Artificial: my new webcomic!

Postby krayhayft » Thu Aug 26, 2010 7:53 pm

Thank, Grivous :grin:. Coming from you, that's a real honor. I love your art and your style. I'm always on the look out for updates to PPGD, Sugar Bits and Grim Tales.

Ninja Liz was a real find and I'm proud to be working with her.
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Re: Artificial: my new webcomic!

Postby krayhayft » Mon Aug 30, 2010 4:10 pm

I've updated Artificial a bit with a new background, an archive and some future links. Let me know what you think.
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Re: Artificial: my new webcomic!

Postby krayhayft » Thu Sep 02, 2010 3:59 pm

Hey world, the next page of our web comic is up. Check it out!

http://www.arobotslove.com/artificial
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Re: Artificial: my new webcomic!

Postby Grivous » Thu Sep 02, 2010 8:02 pm

Hm... Nice one.
Did you read one of Scott McCloud's books? It's really awesome and help a lot about making comics.
Like change close-ups, zoom in or out, how many scenes can be put in a page, if you want to do a intense or light comic and other stuffs. If you never knew, here are the links:
Wikipedia links:
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Re: Artificial: my new webcomic!

Postby krayhayft » Fri Sep 03, 2010 5:47 am

These are fantastic! I'm going to see if my artist and inker have read these. If not, then I might buy them for them. Plus I'm going to find me a copy and see if there's anything for writing.
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Re: Artificial: my new webcomic!

Postby krayhayft » Wed Sep 08, 2010 11:48 pm

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Postby kalish88 » Mon Sep 13, 2010 2:03 am

Beautiful question i say. The term Deus ex machina literally means "the god comes from a crane or machine" and refers to an unexpected, artificial, or improbable character, device, or event introduced suddenly in a work of fiction or drama to resolve a situation or untangle a plot. The phrase has been extended to refer to any resolution to a story which does not pay due regard to the story's internal logic and is so unlikely it challenges suspension of disbelief; allowing the author to conclude the story with an unlikely, but more palatable ending.
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Re: Artificial: my new webcomic!

Postby krayhayft » Wed Sep 15, 2010 11:19 pm

Page 11 is up :eek: ! Also, new character sheets are up in the cast section :grin: .

http://arobotslove.com/artificial/
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Re: Artificial: my new webcomic!

Postby krayhayft » Wed Sep 15, 2010 11:23 pm

Please, don't forget to share and vote!
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Re: Artificial: my new webcomic!

Postby krayhayft » Wed Sep 22, 2010 11:22 pm

Page 12 is up and running. One more page and the prologue is over. The main story is about to begin!

http://www.arobotslove.com/artificial
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Re: Artificial: my new webcomic!

Postby krayhayft » Thu Sep 23, 2010 6:36 pm

Artificial has broke 4000 view!
Thanks everyone, it's a great start.
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Re: Artificial: my new webcomic!

Postby Grivous » Sun Sep 26, 2010 5:42 pm

Wow, 4000 views?! o.O
That is really great!

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Re: Artificial: my new webcomic!

Postby krayhayft » Sun Sep 26, 2010 6:27 pm

Thanks Grivous. :grin:
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Re: Artificial: my new webcomic!

Postby krayhayft » Thu Sep 30, 2010 8:02 am

The last page of the prologue is up! Check it out!!!
We'll be going on a two weeks hiatus then we'll be back with the Chapter 1.

http://www.arobotslove.com/artificial
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Re: Artificial: my new webcomic!

Postby krayhayft » Sun Oct 03, 2010 9:19 pm

Artificial has reached 5000 views!!!!! Thanks everyone!!!
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Re: Artificial: my new webcomic!

Postby krayhayft » Wed Oct 06, 2010 11:46 pm

And so begins our short hiatus. New posts on the 21st as we start Chapter 1: Discovery.

See you then!
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