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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby korikou » Tue Dec 31, 2013 2:22 pm

I feel kind of bad, I just saw all of these comments today but I'm so happy that you all wished me a happy brithday!
A picture for a pokemon story I was thinking of doing.
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Along with a profile of the character
NAME

Light Mochi, brother of Hiroto Mochi


SPECIES

Human


STORY

Light is a mysterious boy who lives on an uncharted island large enough to sustain a few major cities. He is the sole owner of the "Snoring Flame" a small shack located on the island that doubles as his and his younger brother's residence. As very few people know the location of the island, Light's phone is always ringing for another delivery and so he's very rarely not seen flying threw the sky on one of his Pokemon's backs.


HISTORY

Light was originally a test subject in team rocket's lab but escaped after ten years with the help of the other test subjects(all of which were Pokemon) after running his "creators" off the island and completely obliterating the facilities, Light built a small shack and started his own restaurant and delivery service.


ABILITIES-

Light is known as the "Connector", he has a knack for befriending Pokemon with incredible ease and almost instantaneously. This ability was something his family had always had but it is further amplified by his left eye which was manifested through the countless tests and experiments done on his body by Team Rocket. Light's connection to his Pokemon gives him a small sort of empathy which allows him to always know when some thing's wrong or when one of them is hurt.

As a side effect to the experiments, Light doesn't require sleep but is instead in a perpetual state of "tiredness"; he always seems a little groggy like he just woke up but never actually gets to the point where he's fatigued and needs to lie down.


PERSONALITY-

To most people, Light comes off as a slacker who doesn't really care, he doesn't show much enthusiasm for anything and keeps a perpetually bored face all the time. Though his features lack much emotion and though he puts very little effort into his appearance; Light works around the clock to make sure that all deliveries are on time and that everything is in tip top condition for his brother and his Pokemon without fail. Light is a reliable and incredibly kind trainer, who simply doesn't have the time for things like rivals or petty arguments...which means when he's angry, it's for a reason. It should be noted that Light is very kind and though he doesn't show it, he's very happy with his life and is always ready to protect it.


POKEMON

Light has a multitude of Pokemon, a majority of which were the ones he set free during his escape of subsequent destruction of the Team Rocket facility and the rest being from encounters he's had with Pokemon on his vast deliveries around the region. In counting, he has over a hundred Pokemon in his care, all of which share the mutual affection for their trainer that he gladly returns.

Though many of his Pokemon have grown powerful throughout the many years he's had them, Light is not a head on battler; his style revolves around using tactics that result in a win without having to cause any actual damage to the opponents Pokemon.
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby Sigmas » Tue Dec 31, 2013 2:38 pm

A Pokemon fanfic? Interesting... I'm curious to see where you take it. Will it be a literary or graphic novel?
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby korikou » Tue Dec 31, 2013 3:11 pm

Let's split the difference and go for a light novel, Pictures on one page with the dialogue on the other
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby Sigmas » Tue Dec 31, 2013 4:17 pm

Works for me. :)
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby korikou » Tue Jan 07, 2014 2:58 pm

The first ever picture of the Shinbai's Board trio, together!

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This is most definitely my newest favorite picture and I'm pretty it's my best!
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby korikou » Sun Jan 12, 2014 9:14 pm

YOU GUYS POST ENTIRELY TOO OFTEN YA KNOW THAT, I GOTTA KEEP UP WITH YOU GUYS SO I DON'T GET SENT TO THE BOTTOM OF THE LIST!!!

TITLE:Cocoa?
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And some Kitsune dialouge to go with it
Y-you don't have to drink it i-if you don't want to..I just thought....maybe...you might of gotten cold out there senpai
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby Mad-Mutt » Mon Jan 13, 2014 1:34 am

Your work is really improving as you keep going. Great job.
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby Varspool » Mon Jan 13, 2014 6:29 pm

Wowie, you've improved a lot, just glanced at the four year difference.

One thing though, it may be just me, but Kitsune's lower half just seems massive compared to his upper half, make sure you take consideration on body proportions. Other then that, the lines seem clean.
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby Holly Jolly Harumii » Tue Jan 14, 2014 1:39 am

awesome work! i'm liking everything i see in this thread haha
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby korikou » Tue Jan 14, 2014 5:16 pm

Varspool wrote:Wowie, you've improved a lot, just glanced at the four year difference.

One thing though, it may be just me, but Kitsune's lower half just seems massive compared to his upper half, make sure you take consideration on body proportions. Other then that, the lines seem clean.

You know you're totally right! My friends told me Kitsune-chan's proportions were off so I gave another go at it
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After all, giant shoulds and a little body aren't very cute at all right?
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby Frosty The Tiki » Tue Jan 14, 2014 10:56 pm

very simply my friend, the art is very good, but you need to work on anatomy, the frames of the people are too boxy.
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby korikou » Sat Jan 18, 2014 9:40 pm

MORE WINTER STUFF
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A rough sketch of Sarah-san (a.k.a the blonde anti-Christ) from my story Shinbai's board. She was gonna be the "Snow Queen" but ice sounded much closer to her personality.

If I decide to finsish this, I think I'll do a "Snow Prince" pic for Kitsune-chan!
Wanna learn more about my characters, read my story, Shinbai's Board at the link below!
http://www.fictionpress.com/s/3068406/1/Shinbai-s-Board
Read and review people!!!
READ....AND....REVIEW!!!
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby Ethereal Blaze » Sun Jan 19, 2014 10:46 pm

Pretty good, you're getting better, and here is a small tip from me. the shoulders can move, so they don't always have to be directed upwards, they could also be slouched downward or tilted forward or back, when the shoulders are up they can give the character a bit of a rigid look, or used when holding objects, while slouched shoulders can give a kind of relaxed look, just look at other people or characters' shoulders to help with that. But still, good work. :)
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby korikou » Mon Jan 20, 2014 9:28 am

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I made the lineart! I decided to change the crown into something more Ice Queeny. Anyway, the colored version will be out soon so just wait a little bit and I'll get back to you.

Ps. Holy crap! None of those shoulders are relaxed at all! wait, I found one that has relaxed styles

This one is really old!
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Oh yeah and I drew this a few days ago for a code lyoko fan fiction I had started
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But yeah. these are like the only two I have that are like and I'm not even sure if the second one counts!
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby Varspool » Mon Jan 20, 2014 2:01 pm

These look pretty good, but yea, make sure you're more aware on the shoulders, but you're pretty good with colors and lineart.
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby Brax4 » Tue Jan 21, 2014 10:12 pm

Your coloring and shading is so soft and light toned. I like it quite a lot. Makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside.
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby korikou » Wed Jan 22, 2014 12:52 am

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My friends at fictionpress made up an Rp called Line Break! It's about people playing an mmorpg in virtual reality (the game is called Line Break!) you can pick between races and then those races can become different classes so I did a picture for the five races.
Listing is from front to back
The Smallfolk-Brown
The Humans-Blue
The Elves-Green
The Minotaurs-Red
And
The Fae-Pink

And check out those shoulders now! They all chill and whatnot so I think I did a good job.
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby korikou » Fri Jan 24, 2014 5:34 pm

COMMISSIONS ARE NOW OPEN!!!!!!!!

I will now be taking commissions, I've decided that if I wanna make my mark on the art world than I should do more active stuff and I kinda need the money so yeah, let's get some requests in here!

I know I'm not the best but I'm still gonna put my best foot forward with this so give me your best shot!


Thank you for reading this message!
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby korikou » Sat Jan 25, 2014 2:49 pm

New Picture
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To see the poetic rant that goes with this, please visit
http://simsterd.deviantart.com/art/When-You-re-Like-The-Ocean-429429320
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby korikou » Tue Jan 28, 2014 11:59 pm

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Hey guys guess who just finished his salute to winter!
This is definitely my best work for the Shinbai's Board series don't you think!?
In this upcoming year I hope to improve so please give me as much critisism as you think is needed!
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby Frosty The Tiki » Wed Jan 29, 2014 4:32 pm

Work on your shoes and make sure that the lines you put in clothes match the folds.

You seem to be improving fast, maybe try using some of that skill on your backgrounds more?
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby korikou » Wed Jan 29, 2014 7:03 pm

Thanks for the criticism!
Oh I decided to make the background simple, I mean I would've done the usual shade for the bars and higlights where the light touched the metal but I wanted it be simple; I guess I thought that this way it would make the picture have an effect ya know make certain parts stick out more by contrast.

And yeah, I am not good at shoes, I did Yuu's sneakers kinda badly so I tried to the cut the picture off at their knees but that seem too much so I just left it like it was.

The only thing I don't get is the clothes thing, could you be a little more specific on the areas where you see that just so I know where I should watch out for it.

Again, thanks for the criticism!!
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby Grieffon » Wed Jan 29, 2014 7:08 pm

You can add some shadow where they sit to define that they are in contact with the surface.
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby Ethereal Blaze » Wed Jan 29, 2014 8:15 pm

Wow your art looks like it improved since I saw it last like about a week ago, good job, and keep improving. :D
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Re: Korikou'S Art try out

Postby korikou » Mon Feb 03, 2014 4:12 pm

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Akane's day starts promptly at three in the morning; she starts by getting dressed and combing her hair before collecting her ninja equipment and leaping out the window. She has to be quick so that she can set up all of her booby traps around the school for Yuu and Kitsune not to mention making sure to mess with their clothes and such so that they'll be late just like god intended. Akane used to reset their alarm clocks as well but Kitsune's internal clock always had the blonde wake up early in the morning and you can only shoot someone with a sleep dart so many times before you have to start worrying about their health.

Read about Akane's antics in my story Shinbai's board
https://www.fictionpress.com/s/3068406/ ... ai-s-Board
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