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Re: Asmodai™ | Presenting, THE SIREN (sketch)

Postby Asmodai » Mon Feb 15, 2010 7:22 am

aw shucks, thanks guys :3

and yeah, I noticed the little "crotch problem". Working on that in the line art version.
I guess I could use the same mouth I used in the Jane picture, only with greater detail.

anybody got 380 bucks to spare? thats how much a new A4 Intuos4 pad costs :|
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Re: Asmodai™ | Presenting, THE SIREN (sketch)

Postby Fummo » Mon Feb 15, 2010 7:51 am

F U. I need to buy my own one :3
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Re: Asmodai™ | Presenting, THE SIREN (sketch)

Postby visi » Mon Feb 15, 2010 2:08 pm

    lawl I stared at her boobs. xD
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Re: Asmodai™ | Presenting, THE SIREN (sketch)

Postby Asmodai » Mon Feb 15, 2010 2:58 pm

stop staring at her boobs! D:

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THIS. WAS. FUN!
Good lord, I havent had this much fun since.... well.... I dont know O:
I'm ssssoooooooo pleased with her eye. Also notice the little texture on her suit :3

damn it, I spot some messy parts around the handle of the gun >.>

I'll start explaining what everything is later. To tired now, and friends want to play COD6 with me xD
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Re: Asmodai™ | Presenting, dEUS: The Siren

Postby Vegedus » Mon Feb 15, 2010 4:02 pm

Huh, very nice. There's a very noticeable improvement from the girl on the last page to this. Is Visi tutoring you in real time or something?

Still, I feel (with both) there's a bit of an issue with the source of light, namely that it's not clear where it is. It mainly seems it's coming from above, but the most prominent shadow is on top of the head and to the right, and there's no clear indication that there's two sources of light. In general I think the problem is too much symmetry in the shading. There's a bit of shadow both above and below, left and right, on her body. Unless the source of light is from directly above (which can give a special effect in it's own right), shading is all about asymmetry. You can add a bit of shadow on both edges of an object, but there should generally be more on one end than the other. Shadow can also be used to get a sense of distance, in addition to shape, so I would also tend to shade things like hair behind the person a darker shade than the rest.

Also, I wasn't staring at her boobs :P (her eyes are more interesting).
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Re: Asmodai™ | Presenting, dEUS: The Siren

Postby Riz » Mon Feb 15, 2010 4:44 pm

that looks pretty hot, Asmo. :3
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Re: Asmodai™ | Presenting, dEUS: The Siren

Postby Asmodai » Tue Feb 16, 2010 6:38 am

originally I had the lighting in the upper left corner, as you can see by the lighting on her suit and gun. but that also created a massive empty space on her head, that I couldnt fill up.
So I decided to just shadow it :P
And I wish Visi was tutoring me, but all I got is her work as a reference, and 3 life stream vids... so no, most of it is done on my own account :3

Thanks Lily :3
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Re: Asmodai™ | Presenting, dEUS: The Siren

Postby Lemon » Tue Feb 16, 2010 7:31 am

Hmm, I was expecting red-head. Damn Borderlands.
Anyway, should have made the eyes a little more brighter, and give the sniper a different color from her suit.
Red and brown perhaps? Looks good anyway, keep up the good work.
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Re: Asmodai™ | Presenting, dEUS: The Siren

Postby Asmodai » Tue Feb 16, 2010 8:27 am

The rifle actually has a different color from the suit... but only very slightly
And there's a reason I kept everything as gray as possible. What sniper would walk around in a flamboyant suit, revealing her location?
No, gray suits her perfectly, since it blends nice in urban locations.

I'm going to give the dEUS operatives a more darker feeling, lots of gray, dark red and black. They're a more military organization.
Whereas the J&J mercs will be more colorful. They're a bunch of riff-raffs :P
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Re: Asmodai™ | Presenting, dEUS: The Siren

Postby Fummo » Tue Feb 16, 2010 9:38 am

Daaaaaaaaaaamn, Asmo.
Lookin' fine ;3
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Re: Asmodai™ | Presenting, dEUS: The Siren

Postby Doctress Who » Tue Feb 16, 2010 9:46 am

Wow, that girl is amazing. Especially her eye, lips and hair. Good work.
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Re: Asmodai™ | Presenting, dEUS: The Siren

Postby Vegedus » Tue Feb 16, 2010 2:43 pm

Asmodai wrote:massive empty space on her head

Ah, yes, I know that feeling. It's partially why I draw hair the way I do.
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Re: Asmodai™ | Presenting, dEUS: The Siren

Postby Asmodai » Sun Feb 21, 2010 8:51 am

since I dont have anything better to do >.>

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Re: Asmodai™ | Presenting, Food meme thingy

Postby MonoCeru » Sun Feb 21, 2010 9:34 am

O-oh my gosh. xD

Love how smooth that pig is, though. <3
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Re: Asmodai™ | Presenting, Food meme thingy

Postby Chuckledarkly » Sun Feb 21, 2010 11:00 am

mmmmmmmmm goda love dat smooth pork
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Re: Asmodai™ | Presenting, Food meme thingy

Postby Doctress Who » Sun Feb 21, 2010 12:22 pm

Aw poor cute piggy..
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Re: Asmodai™ | Presenting, Food meme thingy

Postby Naur » Sun Feb 21, 2010 12:28 pm

Clinton: dude....we could eat that pig!
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Re: Asmodai™ | Presenting, Food meme thingy

Postby Riz » Sun Feb 21, 2010 4:07 pm

DX couldn't you make the pig dead before eating it???
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Re: Asmodai™ | Presenting, Food meme thingy

Postby Asmodai » Sun Feb 21, 2010 4:29 pm

where's the fun in that? =w=
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Re: Asmodai™ | Presenting, Food meme thingy

Postby Naur » Sun Feb 21, 2010 4:32 pm

and pass up a chance to flip PETA the finger? :P
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Re: Asmodai™ | Presenting, Food meme thingy

Postby Asmodai » Mon Feb 22, 2010 6:53 am

The Worm
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meh, I got bored in class.... love the starry night sky!
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Re: Asmodai™ | Presenting, The Worm

Postby Doctress Who » Mon Feb 22, 2010 7:50 am

-Approves- That sky is very well done.
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Re: Asmodai™ | Presenting, The Worm

Postby Asmodai » Mon Feb 22, 2010 9:14 am

Black and White, what else is there?

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Re: Asmodai™ | Presenting, The Worm & Black and White

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Re: Asmodai™ | Presenting, Food meme thingy

Postby Asmodai » Mon Feb 22, 2010 10:37 am

brown is a lie, fed to you by your oppressive government... reject brown!
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