This fills me with joy and suspense at the hope of huggling him in future comic strips. =3

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I just realised the name is missing from my reference sheet. XD

Hm... So it is, so it is.

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Oh man, this is going to be epic!
Btw, my OC is done.

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Name: Van Irons

Race: Human

Gender: Male

Age:17

orginization: Orichalcos Mage academy

Motive: Tracking down and eliminating his father and all his work.

Personality: Charismatic and optimistic. Has a strong sense of justice.

Bio: Bieng the son of one of the most prestigious magic scientist in the world Van gained easy access to the orichalcos Academy of magic. a school dedicated to training youth in the arcane arts. Vans father was never around due to work. and when he was around he never focused on his family. Van ended up resenting him for this. shit hit the fan when one day an explosion erupted from van's home while he was away. Vans father had always been a magic based scientist and began tampering with technology based magic. a form of taboo. the result ended in his mothers death. Apon arriving Van witnessed his demented father clinging to his research announcing that he has risen above this meaningless life of mediocrity. In his dispair Van swore to train in the arcane arts to one day avenge his mother and put an end to his fathers forbidden work. Van soon discovered the location of his father along with many other scientst practicing this tech/magic at a rival university. Van hears rumors of others heading to the university to claim some new breakthorugh the scientist created. knowing his father would be behind this breakthrough Van heads out. Putting the dangerous work his father has in someone else's hands could be disaterous to this world. Its now up to van to eliminate all trace of this so called "breakthough" so that no other tragidy befalls anyone else.

Weapons: none except his magic based skills.

Abilities: intermediate knowledge in Flame, Ice, and lightining magic.

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I'm sorry, but I think exploding enemies is a bit too much. I'll change it to this:
"He can raise the temperature of the fluids of the bodies of enemies, causing them immense pain."
Is it okay with you?

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I wouldn't mind the whole bowing up thing as long as he gave it some weaknesses like the person can't move wile hes doing it or it wont work or he has to be able to see/smell the other person x3 or he is unable to move wile doing it and it takes a few minutes. bla bla bla Or do what black said cause thats probably easiest I'm just getting my mind crap out.

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Oh Fine. That was his main DPS move though. You just nerfed him.



You really need to fix your grammar and spelling.

@Black: Can you give us the description of this university?
Is it on a middle of a desert? a jungle? or what?
Is the place heavily protected?
If so, how is it protected? with Magic? with Security Bots? or both? or something totally different?
We need information.

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Sorry, but I said, and I quote:

...and making people blow up is deffinitively overpowered in my opinion.


Your OCs are looking for a lab hidden in an ordinary university. That means it's in the middle of the city. There are even students and teachers roaming around. Entering the place is easy, your OCs can just walk in. The hard part is finding the hidden lab entrance(s). The entrance can be a hidden door opened by pulling a hidden switch or pressing a hidden button. However, it can also be a door made to look like a wall by illusionary magic. Any technological/magical puzzle. Also, there are several hidden rooms/labs. Your OCs probably won't be able to find the main lab and the scientist and mage right away. These hidden rooms/labs can be protected by technological or magical traps/security devices, but they can also have no protection at all (that would mean your OC just found a low-priority side-lab). Apart from finding the hidden lab entrance, OCs have to keep a low profile, because they can't tell for sure who's just an innocent by-stander and who's an agent/mercenary looking for the breakthrough. Most fights should occur inside one of those hidden rooms/labs, 'cause civilians can't be found inside those. Whoever's inside is either assistant of the mage/scientist or an agent/mercenary who have found a way in. However, fights don't HAVE to occur inside labs, but they should either be covered-up or fought in places where no-one is likely to see them.

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Ok ill have to make this quick cause i gotta go to work. Since im doing school work and already working on a comic series I couldn't really do anything amazing with this single strip to promote the character so its in black and white. another thing is i read black's new message a litle late so i didnt have time to make up a new strip. thats why my guys trying to sneak into the university. i geuss you can just say others beat him to the breakthough and he's gonna tie up loose ends with his old man. aight peace out!!1!

Thank you for the info, Black.

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Name: Nereid Felbrigg

Race: Human

Gender: Female

Age: 18

Organization: the high order of the Mages Guild

Motive: The destruction of this so called Breakthrough.
"Combining sorcery with filthy technologie can not be tolerated" where the words of the high order.

Personality: Nereid hardly shows any emotions, she speaks in a quiet monotone manner even if she is furious.
Contrary to her cute and innocent appearence she tends to boss people around and is quite violent.
Ask her what to do, when there is an angry mob standig in the front door, her first suggestion would be "slaughter"
She is a Traditionalist and detests the Idea of fusing Sorcery and Technology.

Biography: Nereid is a prodigy.
Born as the Daughter of a scholar she finished grade school in only 2 Years.
With 7 Years she entered one of the most famous Arcane Academies and graduated when she reached the Age of 15.
When she turned 17 she was married to the son of her father's closest friend.
She sees this marriage not as a relationship but as a duty she has to do for her family.
Being such a most talented girl, naturally the Mages Guild was very interested in her abilities.
They offered her a high postion in the guildranks if she was able to accomplish this mission.

Weapons: If needed, she creates them herself

Abilities/Powers: Tai-chi-chuan useful as martial-art and to focus her powers.
Mastery of the Water: Water Breathing, Water control, Changing states, molecular influence, Water creation, Purify Water, Liquid Form, Water of Healing
Several non-elemental Spells

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Yo, is the auditions still open? Because I'm totally interested

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Yes. Go for it. More the better.

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Great! Mine's gonna be a pastel user! YOM-TAH!

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I've got a better explanation: instead of blending in during the day, he decided to sneak in during the night. Of course, university's got it's security and guards during night because of expensive equipment inside.


Welcome to Snafu O.C.T., Sam. Glad to have you aboard!

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Black, can you give us the map of the building? I wanna plan this out carefully.

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Truthfully, we haven't thought about that too much. Actually, we havn't even decided on the number of floors the university have XD I just pictured it as a building with "several" floors, one main hall and hallways branching from it. I'll try to post the map and description tomorrow.

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This is how I feel right now.

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That would be great, cause I planned to include the building in the first panel. ^^
so at least a layout would be helpful

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Here's the map of the first floor of the university:

The rooms tagged as "Classrooms" on the outer side do exist, I just didn't draw them. They're actually the only ones with windows. Others have only artificial light sources, powered with several generators, so if one would cease to work, only every second light will go out and there will still be enough light in the room (kinda weird concept, I know).
If you'll excuse me, I have to go to sleep now, the midnight have passed long ago. I'll add the basement level and other floors tomorrow, as well as outside shot of the university.

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Thank you Black. God Bless You

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It's so elaborate xD

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