I experimented with colored pencils today. I like the result, so I'll probably color this way from now on. Plus, it's much faster.

Nice new page! And great drawing!

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in the last frame he doesent look like he has a shoulder. his bicept goes all the way up to his traps. and in pannel before that his arm is too long and his elbow isent supposed to go all the way down to his hip.

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oh, and his hands look weird when hes "scritching"

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you got potential. keep it up.

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yes, you're right. honestly, those were just oversights. I'm surprised that no one noticed that his goatee wasn't filled in on panel 4, though.

Here's a new design for the killer on the first two pages. His arms are supposed to be long, and his hands are supposed to be big. Those things that look like knives are actually his claws. He ended up looking a little like Monogurui from chapter one, but the difference is that Monogurui has a normal tongue, and his eyes are black with a white iris, instead of red with a yellow iris.

That looks awesome!!!

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Here's another character design. Unfortunately, since it was smaller I couldn't make the hair look as good.

This one looks awesome as well!!

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Corrupted Police?
Awesome Page! Keep up!!

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I'm having some trouble with Kurika's hair. whenever I fill it in, she looks more like a boy. But I can't really NOT fill it in, since she has blue-black hair. Hmm...

indeed she looks like a boy...
Oh, well.... Kick him again!

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getting better.

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I think I'm gonna start filling in her hair with pencil. that might look better.

One very fierce girl! Go on!

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hmm...mideval guns...but then again they have knifes that can cut through steel.

^girl! thats a dude!

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Awesome comic.XD Action is hard to draw.x_X

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read the things artists say before or after the drawings Rockwell...

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I still wouldent hit it, shes scared up, muscly and looks like she needs to take a shower, I mean he.

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In response to Rockwell, it's actually not Medieval. It takes place in a fantasy world that's actually pretty advanced, to an extent. For example, they have televisions, radios, and computers. Transportation-wise, there are steam trains, boats, and some cars (very old-fashioned ones, though). But overall there's a medieval feel to everything, which is what I was shooting for.

As for Kurika, she tends to look much better in the sketches than in the inked pages. She is a tomboy, though, which is why she looks the way she does. Yes, she does need a shower... she's homeless, after all. She's actually supposed to be very dog-like, hence her somewhat pointy teeth and the fact that she wears what appears to be a collar. The reasons for this and her scars are important plot points.

She's also an archer, but she won't use her bow untill chapter 3.





Old design, ditched because the skirt was too hard to draw and looked odd

Intresting Drawings... They look really good!

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Here's a brand-new picture of Kurika... I don't know why this is so hard for me when it actually comes to the pages.

I can't draw bows well...

Awwwwwww! She's adorable! :D *thumbs up* Awesome job!

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nice!! a little muscle but still cute in a I'm going to kill you kinda way xD. I suggest making the arms a little bit thinner and it'll look how you'd probably want it.

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what fighing styl are you ging to make her?

from here she looks like a standard thief type that would attack somone whos not looking.

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"Brax4"--Rockwell, seriously, your comics rock, probably one of my favorite artists on the site...
"EagleMan"--Congratulations rockwell. You have become a legend to these people...
"whispersoul"--Woah, Rockwell. Awesome works. It's been a while since I've seen your arts. and I'm glad that your talents are still the shit.
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She's amazingly fast and accurate. When running, she crouches very low to the ground, sometimes running on all fours. She' got her knife for close range and her bow for long range.

On the other hand, she's not very strong.
The teams strengths are:

Riser- Strength, Unpredictibility

Kai - Magic skill, fighting skill, aerial strikes

Kurika - Speed, Accuracy

Aurora - Healing, Shielding

Vincent - Strength, alchemy

Kika - Well, she's the obligatory cute thing....