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Re: DinosaurPirate's Elementia Chronicles

Postby DinosaurPirate » Sun Mar 11, 2007 8:46 am

I experimented with colored pencils today. I like the result, so I'll probably color this way from now on. Plus, it's much faster.

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Postby Elend-X » Sun Mar 11, 2007 10:43 am

Nice new page! And great drawing!
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Postby ROCKWELL » Sun Mar 11, 2007 6:34 pm

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in the last frame he doesent look like he has a shoulder. his bicept goes all the way up to his traps. and in pannel before that his arm is too long and his elbow isent supposed to go all the way down to his hip.

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oh, and his hands look weird when hes "scritching"

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Re: DinosaurPirate's Elementia Chronicles

Postby DinosaurPirate » Mon Mar 12, 2007 3:28 pm

yes, you're right. honestly, those were just oversights. I'm surprised that no one noticed that his goatee wasn't filled in on panel 4, though.

Here's a new design for the killer on the first two pages. His arms are supposed to be long, and his hands are supposed to be big. Those things that look like knives are actually his claws. He ended up looking a little like Monogurui from chapter one, but the difference is that Monogurui has a normal tongue, and his eyes are black with a white iris, instead of red with a yellow iris.

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Postby Elend-X » Tue Mar 13, 2007 7:38 am

That looks awesome!!!
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Re: DinosaurPirate's Elementia Chronicles

Postby DinosaurPirate » Tue Mar 13, 2007 3:15 pm

Here's another character design. Unfortunately, since it was smaller I couldn't make the hair look as good.

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Postby Elend-X » Tue Mar 13, 2007 4:40 pm

This one looks awesome as well!!
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Re: DinosaurPirate's Elementia Chronicles

Postby DinosaurPirate » Wed Mar 14, 2007 4:15 pm

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Postby Elend-X » Wed Mar 14, 2007 4:52 pm

Corrupted Police?
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Re: DinosaurPirate's Elementia Chronicles

Postby DinosaurPirate » Thu Mar 15, 2007 4:11 pm

I'm having some trouble with Kurika's hair. whenever I fill it in, she looks more like a boy. But I can't really NOT fill it in, since she has blue-black hair. Hmm...

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Postby Elend-X » Thu Mar 15, 2007 4:13 pm

indeed she looks like a boy... :unsure:
Oh, well.... Kick him again! :)
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Postby ROCKWELL » Thu Mar 15, 2007 5:42 pm

getting better.
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Re: DinosaurPirate's Elementia Chronicles

Postby DinosaurPirate » Fri Mar 16, 2007 3:50 pm

I think I'm gonna start filling in her hair with pencil. that might look better.

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Postby Elend-X » Fri Mar 16, 2007 4:10 pm

One very fierce girl! Go on!
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Postby ROCKWELL » Sat Mar 17, 2007 11:33 pm

hmm...mideval guns...but then again they have knifes that can cut through steel.

^girl! thats a dude!
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Postby Deena » Sun Mar 18, 2007 1:38 am

Awesome comic.XD Action is hard to draw.x_X
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Re: DinosaurPirate's Elementia Chronicles

Postby Elend-X » Sun Mar 18, 2007 5:57 am

DinosaurPirate wrote:I'm having some trouble with Kurika's hair. whenever I fill it in, she looks more like a boy. But I can't really NOT fill it in, since she has blue-black hair. Hmm...

read the things artists say before or after the drawings Rockwell... ;)
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Postby ROCKWELL » Sun Mar 18, 2007 11:22 am

I still wouldent hit it, shes scared up, muscly and looks like she needs to take a shower, I mean he.
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Re: DinosaurPirate's Elementia Chronicles

Postby DinosaurPirate » Sun Mar 18, 2007 12:26 pm

In response to Rockwell, it's actually not Medieval. It takes place in a fantasy world that's actually pretty advanced, to an extent. For example, they have televisions, radios, and computers. Transportation-wise, there are steam trains, boats, and some cars (very old-fashioned ones, though). But overall there's a medieval feel to everything, which is what I was shooting for.

As for Kurika, she tends to look much better in the sketches than in the inked pages. She is a tomboy, though, which is why she looks the way she does. Yes, she does need a shower... she's homeless, after all. She's actually supposed to be very dog-like, hence her somewhat pointy teeth and the fact that she wears what appears to be a collar. The reasons for this and her scars are important plot points.

She's also an archer, but she won't use her bow untill chapter 3.

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Old design, ditched because the skirt was too hard to draw and looked odd
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Postby Elend-X » Sun Mar 18, 2007 2:16 pm

Intresting Drawings... They look really good!
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Re: DinosaurPirate's Elementia Chronicles

Postby DinosaurPirate » Sun Mar 18, 2007 7:59 pm

Here's a brand-new picture of Kurika... I don't know why this is so hard for me when it actually comes to the pages.

I can't draw bows well...

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Postby Relick » Sun Mar 18, 2007 8:01 pm

Awwwwwww! She's adorable! :D *thumbs up* Awesome job!
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Postby DarkCrystal65 » Sun Mar 18, 2007 8:47 pm

lol nice!! a little muscle but still cute in a I'm going to kill you kinda way xD. I suggest making the arms a little bit thinner and it'll look how you'd probably want it.
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Postby ROCKWELL » Sun Mar 18, 2007 10:18 pm

what fighing styl are you ging to make her?

from here she looks like a standard thief type that would attack somone whos not looking.
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Re: DinosaurPirate's Elementia Chronicles

Postby DinosaurPirate » Mon Mar 19, 2007 6:04 am

She's amazingly fast and accurate. When running, she crouches very low to the ground, sometimes running on all fours. She' got her knife for close range and her bow for long range.

On the other hand, she's not very strong.
The teams strengths are:

Riser- Strength, Unpredictibility

Kai - Magic skill, fighting skill, aerial strikes

Kurika - Speed, Accuracy

Aurora - Healing, Shielding

Vincent - Strength, alchemy

Kika - Well, she's the obligatory cute thing....

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