Heavenly Point is a new web comic that i hope of posting here in snafu when it releases, but that'll never come true, i think.......

here are the 2 main characters
http://kwamar.deviantart.com/art/hevean ... -155789986

me and my associate are working on the story, im designing more chars and enemys and monsters.
here is an awkward story to it
they live on the top of the earth on the top of a mountain.....cold
thats what we made up
i couldnt think of anything better so.. yea
i will come up with something better through the process of making this comic
i quit ghost hunters.... it was too much looking alike others in it, so i quit it
hope u like it when it releases..........................somewhere?

1. Bleedman does not own Snafu-comics, a guy named Dave Stanworth does.
2. your style is clearly ripping off of Bleedman. while there is no real problem with that on its own, you need some originality to get your "webcomic" noticed. there's no problem copying someone else's style to get started but to become a better artist you need to develop your own way of drawing things.

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I'm still the Queen of Dicks

1.if thats the way i draw thats the way i draw
2.thos other pic of mine are old anyway
3.web-comic not even released yet so does it matter?
4.i draw what i feel like drawing and how i draw it
5.no one owns any art style and i dont think any style of art is a..ya know a style
6.don't complain about it because it doesn't really matter
someone told me that bleedman owned it so don't complain to me anyways mmk
have a nice day :3
love u all teehee
to me art is art
doesn't matter how u draw or color it really, hate me if u want but ima keep drawing in any way i like
and no it isn't really stealing if it isn't against the law
i own those chars any way ,i made em :3
i never said he owned snafu-comics anyway
i just said witht the help of a guy name bleedman

ugh. I tried to help but there's really no point.

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I'm still the Queen of Dicks

i wasent mad
i was just explaining
u can help if u want

Some people you just really hope are younger then they probably are...

Well, I'll just write this off as another person who can't take criticism. But, I might as well try to take a shot.

1: Creating your own unique style gives you more freedom than being tied down to another signature style of someone else. Even if you're just using Bleed's as a starter, put your own uniqueness in it and experiment as time goes on.

2: Understand when someone is trying to help you, and when someone isn't. Lily was just trying to help you in this case. Keep being an ass, and no one will care what you think. By creating this thread, you have invited EVERYONE here to evaluate, and critique your work. This means people will also strive to point out flaws in your work to help you improve. By ignoring or fighting against these remarks, it shows people that you are unwilling to learn, and are no longer of interest. Except for the trolls.

3: Your grammar and spelling sucks. It makes you look like an unintelligent fool that we can't take seriously. So start using correct skills that might show whatever intelligence is within you.

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Snafu's Mercypostle.

i never said i wouldn't take her criticism did i ;P
it may seem like i didn't but i did
i'm a mysterious kid ya know ;P
i'm not fighting anything at all
u guys just think that way
i'm sorta happy that i got some comments and crit at all
thanks ;P
btw i love comments and crit
i just love to see it when i i come to my art page : D

Grammar and spelling, use it.

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Stufflikehearts - He is a Sith Lord. I love Blood Lord :3
Jeffffey - Blood, you look at the information someone says, look over what really happened, and reply in a way that makes them realize what they were really thinking.
Mythrrinthael - Blood Lord, our local expert in interpretation of The Grim Tales from Down Below!
Fievel - Numerous campaigns and conquests, countless bodies decaying after the abandonment of victorious battlefields. Such is the life of Blood Lord.
Dusk_Imp - Blood Lord is like a celebrity here. Everything he does is pure awesome. ALL HAIL BLOOD LORD
Doctress Who - Why couldn't there be a Blood Lord in every forum? It would make life so much easier.
Snafu's Mercypostle.

I'm giving this up as a lost cause. good luck, kid.

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I'm still the Queen of Dicks

thanks lily
your a good friend ;P
ehhh grammar, i don't really care about it, unless its needed to be used in a serious manner

It is in the Global Rules for this site.

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Stufflikehearts - He is a Sith Lord. I love Blood Lord :3
Jeffffey - Blood, you look at the information someone says, look over what really happened, and reply in a way that makes them realize what they were really thinking.
Mythrrinthael - Blood Lord, our local expert in interpretation of The Grim Tales from Down Below!
Fievel - Numerous campaigns and conquests, countless bodies decaying after the abandonment of victorious battlefields. Such is the life of Blood Lord.
Dusk_Imp - Blood Lord is like a celebrity here. Everything he does is pure awesome. ALL HAIL BLOOD LORD
Doctress Who - Why couldn't there be a Blood Lord in every forum? It would make life so much easier.
Snafu's Mercypostle.

I know, i know. OK, I'll start using proper spelling and grammar. GOSH!! .
Just so that i wont get banned.

Everything I was going to state was already used in this thread, and he/she/they don't seem willing to accept criticism, even if you say you do, you need to tone it down, because when I read your words, it seems very hostile or defensive "Don't wanna' change my style" attitude.
But hey, I'm not gonna' complain, because I'm the same way, you just need to relax and take criticism without getting all defensive about it.
Other than that, it is nice work, but you should really use more of your own style, it just looks like Bleedman's, which isn't a bad thing, and I would love to draw like Bleedman, but I stick to my own unique style, it's just a combination of everything I like, and with touches of my own thrown in. Good luck in the future, I hope to see a new change. Welcome to the forums, don't piss anyone off.

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My dA http://elfei62.deviantart.com/

I have one more thing to say besides all of this that has been said.
Keep your art in one thread.

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I couldn't find my other thread, so i just made a new one sorry
i took the criticism but i don't really have my own style, is that a bad thing?

Alter it.
Alter it into your style.
Alter it into a style which is new and unique.
Alter it into something we have never seen before.

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