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Postby crises » Sun Sep 23, 2007 10:46 pm

For some reason when I try and upload it with bubbles, it screws up the coloring and blurs it.

Currently working on page 6.

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Here's it with bubbles.


I don't exactly like the concept of the gray character (Gamma) so I'll be redoing him and making some concept art on him.

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I'm thinking about doing this for the rest of the comic, what do you think?
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Postby Coos » Mon Sep 24, 2007 2:22 pm

Hm, I can't decide what you should use, they both seem cool.
And Gamma looks fine, if he is to be the Thug-like character. Is he?
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Postby crises » Mon Sep 24, 2007 7:39 pm

Nope, he's the character who is too stupid to take care of himself. So he was left in the other characters care. Rageana (one with the purple coat).

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It'll explain it later on in the comic.
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Postby crises » Mon Oct 01, 2007 7:14 pm

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Fight scene! I'm not too satisfied with it, but meh, I'm never satisfied with any of my works. XD

I'll be doing grayscale from now on....I suck at picking colors. Might as well be color blind.
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Postby Coos » Mon Oct 01, 2007 7:37 pm

Heh, he punched him good XD
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Postby crises » Sat Oct 06, 2007 6:16 pm

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After asking Endlings permission, I drew this. Her appearence in the Surviver comic was awesome. I grayscaled it cause I didn't know the exact colors that were used.
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Postby nekoneko » Sat Oct 06, 2007 11:11 pm

You need to get a hold of smooth paneling movements. If one reads slowly, he/she's going to have a hard time getting what's going in.

Well from what I can see, the kid's punch missed, giving the guy with shades an opening but a direct punch returned out of no where and I don't know who hit who. I suppose it's the guy with shades given the fact he HAS an opening.

So what does that imply here? You are missing 1 extra frame to show that the guy with shades took the opportunity to hit him back, a quick movement panel. It could be either portraying quick movement lines only (Yes that would be sufficient) or the guy with shades returning the punch.

And it does not show any impact at all. You should make use of movement lines here. Add several vertical lines on the background to show the immense force applied. It will further enhance your frame :3

Now the forth frame, try and refer to how Uzumaki Naruto's movement lines would usually be when he's doing Rasengan. The lines would curve outward and spread open originating from the punch showing the immense force put into the frame, further enchancing it :3

Righto, next is the proper way of drawing debris. If you noticed, must powerful and forceful punches which are able to break walls always cracks like a circle. Thus different shaped triangles are mostly what will fly out and (There can be squares too but try to make them shaped randomly is a better suggestion) also, they are small in size since it is after all cracks flying out. Yours came out looking like big lego bricks ^^;; And like before, to enhance the forcefulness portrayed, add vertical movement lines on the background too.
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Postby crises » Sun Oct 07, 2007 8:02 am

Lol Thanks for the advice. I'll try to apply them in the next page. ^_^

But yah, I have a bit of a hard time applying the lines in the backround in photoshop 5.0. But of course, that's no excuse. Thnx again.
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Postby MrHoboX » Sun Oct 07, 2007 11:35 pm

Congrats on keeping up with the comic. I 2nd everything that neko said. Great advice there. Also nice piece of fanart, I knew it was gluttony right off the bat.
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Postby crises » Mon Oct 08, 2007 4:38 pm

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Haven't done some Marvel fanart in a while....
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Postby Coos » Mon Oct 08, 2007 4:53 pm

My favorite X-Men character.
Looks nice, but the smoke coming out of his nose looks odd.
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Postby crises » Mon Oct 08, 2007 6:07 pm

Lol Yah, yer right.

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Fixed it on deviant.
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Postby crises » Sat Nov 03, 2007 11:05 am

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Sorry for taking so long to get to this page. I kept on putting it off alot.

Tried a different coloring style for the sake of time. I only colored some parts so that you can still differenciate the different parts.

Also, there won't be another comic page in a while. I want to take and take up a different syle...again.
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Postby crises » Tue Dec 04, 2007 5:29 pm

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Page 8...nothing else to say.
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Postby Coos » Tue Dec 04, 2007 5:38 pm

Very nice.
Perspectives on each panel are good too.
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Postby crises » Wed Jan 02, 2008 12:29 pm

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Postby crises » Tue Jan 08, 2008 5:25 pm

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Just to let you guys know that I'm not slackin'. Something I'm working on. Hopefully, I don't screw it up when inking it.
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Postby Coos » Tue Jan 08, 2008 5:40 pm

I think it looks great.
I really need to work on perspectives >.>
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Postby Black » Wed Jan 09, 2008 7:52 am

Lookin' good so far. We'll just wait and see how'd the inking go...
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Postby Grey » Wed Jan 09, 2008 1:05 pm

The first rule of Fight Club is that you do not talk about Fight Club. The second rule is that you do NOT talk about Fight Club. You just broke both the first two rules, asshole.
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Postby crises » Wed Jan 09, 2008 2:25 pm

Thanks Coos and Black.

Coos wrote:I think it looks great.
I really need to work on perspectives >.>


Yup, it's definently one of the best things you can practice for comics and such. Once you start practicing, you'll notice alot of improvement.
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Postby Coos » Wed Jan 09, 2008 3:04 pm

I shall take your word and get to it :D
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Postby crises » Wed Jan 09, 2008 4:18 pm

It also helps to have references and an artists manaquien. Good luck!
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Postby crises » Sun Jan 13, 2008 9:19 pm

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Finished, but not satiafied. Meh.




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Something I never finished and never plan to.
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Postby Faust777 » Mon Jan 14, 2008 9:26 pm

Man, your art is SO cool! It's just that it seems like when you change it over to digital like inking and blah, it starts looking kinda "blocky"? anyways, nice updates
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