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 Post subject: David's Art
PostPosted: Mon Jul 20, 2009 4:00 am 
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So, I began to draw recently. A few nights ago, I uploaded most of my works to DA and also showed them to Twilight Flame, and I was told their reminiscent of Tim Burton's Nightmare Before Christmas. That makes sense, I loved the movie and the art (This Is Halloween is an awesome song, btw. Its on my iPod because I love it that much).

So, with only 1 further ado, I shall now post my art itself. Here's link to DA: http://davidka1.deviantart.com/ and now for the art: (By the way, each picture is also a link to the DA page)

Abstract Doodle:
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Fred and Joe:
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Creepy Face:
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Abstract Doodle 2:
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WTF Gremlin:
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Zelda Fangirl:
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Criticisms are welcome, as are any tips and advice I can be offered on how to draw better and not like a horrid newb. (Yes, I know I ought to be ashamed of myself for drawing the TP Triforce so horridly)

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 Post subject: Re: David's Art
PostPosted: Mon Jul 20, 2009 8:48 am 
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You might wanna try adding more detail, I mean, we've all been there, normally toward the beginning of our drawing lives, but you just gotta' work on it, keep going with it, and you'll get better.

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 Post subject: Re: David's Art
PostPosted: Mon Jul 20, 2009 10:28 am 
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:up: That
You might also want to draw on white paper instead of lined paper.
Most people find lined/squared paper disruptive.

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 Post subject: Re: David's Art
PostPosted: Mon Jul 20, 2009 1:00 pm 
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I also wouldn't add that onto DA. I would have used Photobucket or picoodle.com

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 Post subject: Re: David's Art
PostPosted: Mon Jul 20, 2009 4:50 pm 
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Mehoaido wrote:
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You might also want to draw on white paper instead of lined paper.
Most people find lined/squared paper disruptive.


I draw on whatever I have available to me. I draw almost all all of them during Chemistry class at summer school, and when thats gonna end this week, I'll just draw during the normal school year during Biology class (Because as interesting as science is, lectures are as boring as fuck if you have nothing to do to occupy your hands. Drawing is great for this).

Add more detail? Please be more specific in what you mean. Most of them are but abstract doodles.

And now for some more 'art', construed today.

Abstract Doodle 3:
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Nam:
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Abstract Doodle 4:
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Angel Cat:
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Fat Cat:
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 Post subject: Re: David's Art
PostPosted: Mon Jul 20, 2009 7:40 pm 
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First things first: You have an awesome avatar. As in, if it wasn't taken already, I would so use it myself.

Now, on to business. I want to be able to draw humans, human bodies proportionally, human faces somewhat correctly (added creepiness factor makes every drawing better). I guess once I can do that, I'll be able to draw the other things easier.

As to what I want to improve on, what are my weaknesses?

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 Post subject: Re: David's Art
PostPosted: Mon Jul 20, 2009 10:40 pm 
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Your faces are extremely simple, lack of any detail I would appreciate. Also, use white paper.

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 Post subject: Re: David's Art
PostPosted: Thu Jul 23, 2009 4:41 pm 
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Drew another one (Actually two, but the other was just a generic person in my drawing style, which I drew on somebody's grade print out while he wasn't at his desk) during class today. Going on vacation to Switzerland on Sunday, expect a bunch of drawings when I get back.

Barkeep:
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Yeah, that one long arm is a bit of a fuck up. Also the TV + remote are horribly drawn. Other than that, I don't think it was done too terribly. Criticisms welcome, as always.

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 Post subject: Re: David's Art
PostPosted: Thu Jul 23, 2009 4:58 pm 
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I think wine bottles would be more appropriate here.
The pitchers make it look like a super Lemonade Stand to me. :P


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