Muuuuuch better. The "fast regeneration" is fine, but I'd add/clarify that the bone regeneration isn't instant, just very very fast. I like the idea that you can "run out" of bones during a fight, that you'd have to fight one handed for a while if you used an arm bones, that you become vulnerable by using your ribs, would use leg bones as a last resort, and so on. You can make the power more powerful in other ways to compensate, if you'd like. Otherwise, very close to being acceptable. Well done. One would think it was written by a different person.
Everyone else: In case it isn't obvious, for all the people who haven't got anything to do in the game yet, I just gave you an excuse to join the fight going on. Since no one is posted in any requests or anything in this thread, I dunno how else to give you something to work with.
Hana: Your character isn't dead. I figure she's either trapped in limbo, a separate dimension of sorts. As Carrie's power states, a strong will can resists it, so it's simply a matter of Elaine "willing" herself back into existence. Or she could have dodged the attack, diving out of sight, whichever you prefer. You can re-enter the scene, the game, at any time, anywhere, you choose. And you still have the flesh-warping in reserve, to administer as you please. I just did this so we could move on without you for now.