While Arch is still busy, I'm just going to go over a couple things about your CS Creastal. There's a couple perspective errors that really do need some changing.
so if his hand sliped off my handle it would stop my hand from getting cut from my own axe.
allies by my side but will cover himself if everyone
As he got my vengence.
These examples should be written as 'his'. The grammatical errors are there but these are the most glaring factor when reading someone's post due to the random shift in perspective.
Now story wise, you'd want to change the fact that orcs have a king. Orcs don't fight as one normally. As a whole the race fights in multiple 'warbands' and are lead by a 'warboss'. Just alter that and it'll fit into the RP better.
Chaz hates orcs because of his past and willing to to kill every last orc on the planet because it remind him of his past.
It's a bit redundant to mention that Chaz hates orcs due to his past twice. Just end that sentence with 'and is willing to kill every last orc on the planet.'
There are a couple other points but I think I've said enough for now in one post.