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PostPosted: Sun Sep 04, 2011 3:00 pm 
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hmm, that puppeteer ability seems dangerous.

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 04, 2011 3:03 pm 
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@Samurai: Could Puppeteer work on an unconscious person? I know that's probably possession and not puppeteer-ing but it'd be quite useful if possible.

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 04, 2011 3:06 pm 
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MQuinny1234 wrote:
hmm, that puppeteer ability seems dangerous.

I actually quoted it to Imenak about Juliette's powers and also her 'upgrades' actually, and he seems to approve of it.

And yes, Akaine. <3 It had been, like, a damn long while. Lol.

@GnSz: I haven't thought of that actually, but I don't think it would work on an unconcious person. I'll talk with Imenak about it. But thanks for the question! At least I'll be able to add on that. ;D

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 04, 2011 3:14 pm 
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@Samurai: lol no problem. I think the puppeteer ability is great. I was planning something similar to what you have, so thankfully I didn't!

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 04, 2011 4:05 pm 
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Well...I'll have to live with it then. Although even that has a weakness thankfully.

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 04, 2011 4:19 pm 
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As a vet of the game, of course she's powerful. Anyway, no, it wouldn't work on an unconscious person. Technically, she could still possess them, but since they're unconscious, it'd be pointless. A sleeping person is different, since she could rouse them awake.

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 04, 2011 4:20 pm 
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D'awwww man. Oh well. :|

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 04, 2011 4:24 pm 
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Would you want a rp sample from me? I know we've been in any rp's, but I figured that I'd make sure XD

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 04, 2011 4:26 pm 
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No, none of the old players need to give me a writing sample. |D

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 04, 2011 7:03 pm 
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Finished Hiram’s sheet on page two.

Hope you don’t mind the brief mention of Phantazia.

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 04, 2011 7:08 pm 
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 04, 2011 7:40 pm 
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Finished Hiram’s sheet on page two.

Hope you don’t mind the brief mention of Phantazia.

Not at all.


I'm loving the fact that so many of the returning characters believe (with extremely good reason) that they're the sole survivor of the Genosha catastrophe. Everyone's inevitable reunion better be so tear jerking, that a single manly tear won't suffice.

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 04, 2011 7:52 pm 
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Anyways, so I noticed Hawaii's not colored. That's miiiiighty interesting.


Just noticed this.

That's part of the reason why I placed my character in California :)

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 04, 2011 8:32 pm 
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Hisui's sheet is done on page 1 Imenak.
Glacier, Ben has been added in her history as promised. You can edit your history to reflect that if you want to.

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 04, 2011 8:47 pm 
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That's a big CS.

Imenak warned you that a fair few of us like to write to some length. Don't concern yourself too too much.

Wish I could make mine that long.

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 04, 2011 9:01 pm 
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I'm still working on my character. I can't help feeling inadequate, though.

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 04, 2011 9:02 pm 
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 04, 2011 9:17 pm 
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I'm still working on my character. I can't help feeling inadequate, though.


It isn't the size that counts, its how you use it.

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 04, 2011 9:26 pm 
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Feels like old times already!

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 04, 2011 9:34 pm 
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My_Little_Sister wrote:
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That's a big CS.

Imenak warned you that a fair few of us like to write to some length. Don't concern yourself too too much.

Wish I could make mine that long.

Then stop whining and start writing.

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 04, 2011 9:39 pm 
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Far from finished, mainly just want to see if his "power" is ok. If you have a problem with it, like preferring a mutant, I have a few other ideas I could fall back on.
Also, if this or any other ones are ok, anyone want a partner? I've considered ways to start on my own, but being with someone when it starts could be neat too.

Name: Leo
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Personality:

History:

Powers: Leo has no super powers. He’s no mutant, just a normal human being. What he does have, however, is technical skill. An engineer and inventor, he’s got a keen mind for technology. He can build and maintain most anything he puts his mind to, and given the conditions of recent years Leo has become quite skilled with jury-rigging creations and repairs with scrap. They’ve also pushed him towards practical over spectacular. This alone wouldn’t make him much of a fighter, however. Based off early Stark designs and modified by Leo’s own vision and the changing situations he finds himself in, he maintains and uses a suit of powered armor.
Armor Suit: Compared to the many suits it takes cues from, it’s relatively bulky and uneven, with rough edges. Most of it is dull grey, with an occasional splatter of dark green or dark grey paint for some bit of stealth. Its mask is relatively plain, with its own rough sharp corners. Despite appearances, it’s quite sturdy and reliable: Leo has spent a lot of time reworking it, giving it reinforcement and back-up systems. Overall, it’s mostly well-rounded, never focused too far on strength, mobility or armor. It’s still considerably stronger than a human being, and while it cannot fly, it can jump several stories, less if it’s carrying too much weight. A close inspection would reveal that several of the parts have been built or assembled from scrap parts from destroyed Sentinels Leo has come across.
Weapons: His foremost weapon is a focused high intensity beam of energy, shot from a unit attached to his right wrist. He can vary the energy and frequency, although really pure damage, light injury and laser pointer are the only settings with much use. His secondary and most potent weapon is a rocket launched integrated to the back of his suit. On command it rises over his right shoulder and locks into position. Auto loader, it fires handmade rockets from a small supply on the lower left side of his back. Beyond these the strength of the suit allows him to physically fight or throw heavy objects to good effect.
Scrap Shield: Not a singular item but more a system, the arms of his suit contain multipurpose grippers on the sides, along with some on his back. These allow him to pick up and store bits of scrap from the battlefield, from metal to concrete to anything else, giving him an on the fly shield to block attacks. Against strong attacks these pieces of scrap are likely to break rapidly, so the grips can release quickly to drop the item. The grips can technically be used for other purposes, such as throwing items or attaching himself to something.
Scanners: The suit is equipped with various scanners, all linked into the heads up display. Beyond basics allowing him to scan the battlefield, foes and technology, he also has a salvaged sentinel DNA scanner, allowing him to detect variations from baseline humanity, chiefly mutants.

Other: While some people like to spend their time training physically, Leo prefers mental exercises.

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 04, 2011 9:45 pm 
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A power suit is fine, although they're unusually prevalent amongst the ideas I've heard. You might want to consider changing just for the sake of uniqueness, unless you're all secretly trying to make a sub-team of armored superheros.

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 04, 2011 10:22 pm 
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Karo wrote:
Then stop whining and start writing.

I'm not whining and I'm waiting for a certain person to get on, I'm basing this char off one of my friends.

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 04, 2011 10:58 pm 
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Hisui's sheet is done on page 1 Imenak.
Glacier, Ben has been added in her history as promised. You can edit your history to reflect that if you want to.


I'll read it and make changes accordingly. Thanks Karo!

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My_Little_Sister wrote:
I'm not whining and I'm waiting for a certain person to get on, I'm basing this char off one of my friends.

Interesting. Try not to rely too much on your friend's version of themself when you are writing your sheet. I believe of the reasons people around here are so reluctant to help you write a CS is that when you ask, you really just seem to be fishing for ideas, not just that but fully formed ideas that you can just throw on your sheet and call it a day. Don't know if this is true or not, but it's what I've made of things. Besides, if you fill your character with other people's ideas then it really isn't your character is it? I'm not saying you can't use others ideas as inspiration or anything far from it, but you need to put in the effort and really make it your own in the end.


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