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PostPosted: Sun Mar 20, 2011 3:44 pm 
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At least you didn't make her a ditz. Because that would just unleash a floodgate of insults.


Ugh. = = The members of TTE have no idea what I deal with ;_;

Your GM wanted me to make my character inept -- with no combat experience at all -- so he could make fun of her. Bubs is always making Sis the butt of the joke. =<

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*Sighs* And poor Viscont is stuck dealing with the both of them as in all likelihood they'll be deployed together as they're all scouts. Or are we all deployed at once (With the assault and heavy groups.)?


Bryan is right, we're all deployed together. To be honest, I always pictured the missions as a commando-type thing, not "sit and wait" sniper stuff. I think that would get boring.

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 20, 2011 5:04 pm 
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Eh, Iris, I can be the guard of your spot, and my character doesn't talk much.

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 20, 2011 6:03 pm 
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Hey guys, I got bored and drew my "Jackal" SMG

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I'm proud of the EPiC acronym :3

Poop, forgot to add the flashlight marker... it's right under the barrel

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 20, 2011 6:17 pm 
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 20, 2011 7:15 pm 
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Bolts wrote:
Your logic is sound if you're thinking real life but this is a little different. For one, a scout SIREN would be able to carry a .50 caliber with anti-tank rounds. Secondly, while it's true snipers don't always have to move, they do have to be able to GET to the position. If that position is a hill top, a heavy is going to have a VERY hard time.


so does that mean Alice cant be long range support?
Well technically i was looking more on terms i dont move so running targets are a hassle to chase, So Range was required for any Heavy... So Im guessing I need to change her specialization?

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 20, 2011 7:41 pm 
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Hey guys, I got bored and drew my "Jackal" SMG

I'm proud of the EPiC acronym :3


Wow Asmo, that looks jawesome. =]

I'm not sure I understand the acronym. Doesn't "ExtraSensory Perception Scope" = ESPS.

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@Tsuna: Changing your specialty is a good idea but not entirely necessary. I would just add artillery to it. Essentially, Heavys are designed to either head up the front lines with their minigun, or sit back with howitzers, mortars, and other such weapons and pummel the enemy from a distance.


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PostPosted: Mon Mar 21, 2011 12:14 am 
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Instead Since my Weapon set is set for both long range and close quarter combat, I'll change the specialty to Breach and Assault, Long range support, and Mechanics... Would that be fine?

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Done, Also added a part in her history to Make it more plausible for her to be an assault specialist...

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Done

Far from it I'm afraid. At this point it's the consent of both my co-GM and I that you redo this profile. Whether you start from scratch or just do a full overhaul is your choice. As it stands now there's just a lack of flow in the whole thing and more grammatical errors than you could shake a stick at. That's my shpeel for now. Good luck with your revision.


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--Way to be vague, Bryan. Anyway Tsuna, to be specific, it seems like each sentence has a capitalization error. Her personality is all over the place, too. "Hot-blooded", "innocent", "warm smile", and "terrorizing" were all descriptors you used. Her history is hazy as well -- there aren't a lot of concrete events.

Check out Isaiah and Sharline's character sheets to get an idea of the standard we're shooting for, if you're still interested in TTE. They're both good examples of real, relatable characters.

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Asmodai wrote:
Hey guys, I got bored and drew my "Jackal" SMG

I'm proud of the EPiC acronym :3


Wow Asmo, that looks jawesome. =]

I'm not sure I understand the acronym. Doesn't "ExtraSensory Perception Scope" = ESPS.


Oof it was late when I made that... less proud now that I'm more awake xD
Extrasensory Perception Scope

I've seen weirder acronyms though... so meh

EDIT: I shouldnt be working on this... I should be working on Flash aaaaaaahhhhhh!

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 21, 2011 3:51 pm 
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Been working on a CS. Be up soon...ish.

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Been working on a CS. Be up soon...ish.

Been busy.

Please, please, please, please, please, tell me you're not a Scout. Once Soul finishes his we'll have like 4 of those.

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Terrence is an Assault. :3

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He will be if you ever finish him. >=[

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 21, 2011 7:19 pm 
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Extrasensory Perception Scope


Omg XD You can't pick random letters to make the acronym.

But if you could...

BRYAN = Hobo redneck may carry narcotics

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 21, 2011 7:23 pm 
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pffft I play the free literary freedom card!

Although, if I change Scope to Camera (which is far more accurate to begin with) it works (there's a reason the i in EPiC was small)

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I'm just giving you a hard time Asmo. :grin: This IS funny to me tho, because I've created every acronym in the story so far (SIREN, DART, S-DAT...although S-DAT doesn't mean much. But it sounded good.)

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Ooooh? I thought those were just names taken from Vanquish... You, ma'am, have earned my respect!

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Has anyone noticed that even though we're supposed to be the best that the Republic's military has to offer we all seem to have some kind of drastic personality defect?


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In my defence, 'Rill is only quirky out of suit.

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In my defence, 'Rill is only quirky out of suit.

The same goes for Isaiah but still.


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At least mine's not a drug addict.

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