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 Post subject: Re: Dreamscape OOC Open
PostPosted: Tue May 10, 2011 2:19 pm 
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You have no idea how to explain the shape of her face? The shape of her eyes? How long exactly is her hair? If she's thin and short, exactly how curvy is she? What do her scars look like? You say she wears clothes, but don't expand on what she wears. Should I assume she's wearing a bag, or a cotton bikini? You're missing so much basic information it feels like I'm reading something written by an elementary schooler.

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 Post subject: Re: Dreamscape OOC Open
PostPosted: Tue May 10, 2011 10:58 pm 
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Karo wrote:
If she's thin and short, exactly how curvy is she?

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She has a rather small but curvy frame with slender shoulders, a large chest that lead down to a narrow waist and wide hips.

Not specific enough?

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 Post subject: Re: Dreamscape OOC Open
PostPosted: Wed May 11, 2011 6:36 am 
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Not nearly. I never play girls and I know more you could add.

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 Post subject: Re: Dreamscape OOC Open
PostPosted: Wed May 11, 2011 7:56 pm 
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 Post subject: Re: Dreamscape OOC Open
PostPosted: Wed May 11, 2011 8:44 pm 
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Well, Keiran, what would you add? Only things I can think are specific measurements.

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 Post subject: Re: Dreamscape OOC Open
PostPosted: Thu May 12, 2011 5:10 am 
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The trick to any CS is bloating it up with pointless words that just add a 'thickness' to the sheet without actually adding anything. Makes it look less... barren.

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 Post subject: Re: Dreamscape OOC Open
PostPosted: Thu May 12, 2011 7:05 am 
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Kei: Gotta love Finland. <3

Yes, gotta love the axe-swinging mute.

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 Post subject: Re: Dreamscape OOC Open
PostPosted: Thu May 12, 2011 9:13 am 
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Zelosse wrote:
The trick to any CS is bloating it up with pointless words that just add a 'thickness' to the sheet without actually adding anything. Makes it look less... barren.

Well, then, help me, please.

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 Post subject: Re: Dreamscape OOC Open
PostPosted: Thu May 12, 2011 6:16 pm 
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Zelosse wrote:
The trick to any CS is bloating it up with pointless words that just add a 'thickness' to the sheet without actually adding anything. Makes it look less... barren.

You! Hush. The point is to prove you have more brain cells than a squirrel, and can use the english language in such a way as to allow someone else to perfectly visualize your character.

@MLS: People have been helping you. Listen to them.

@Kei: Except he's not mute at all.

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 Post subject: Re: Dreamscape OOC Open
PostPosted: Thu May 12, 2011 6:19 pm 
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True, you just can't hear him over everyone else screaming.

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 Post subject: Re: Dreamscape OOC Open
PostPosted: Thu May 12, 2011 6:33 pm 
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Hey, squirrels are pretty smart you know... Oh, wait.

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 Post subject: Re: Dreamscape OOC Open
PostPosted: Thu May 12, 2011 6:59 pm 
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Another example

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 Post subject: Re: Dreamscape OOC Open
PostPosted: Thu May 12, 2011 9:15 pm 
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I edited her again with help from the DMs I live with. Is she better? I'll try to think of something else for her last 5 skills.

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 Post subject: Re: Dreamscape OOC Open
PostPosted: Fri May 13, 2011 7:21 pm 
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Hold my tail I think I'm gonna barf.

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 Post subject: Re: Dreamscape OOC Open
PostPosted: Tue May 17, 2011 6:18 pm 
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Your CS earns a resounding Meh. I don't accept meh.

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 Post subject: Re: Dreamscape OOC Open
PostPosted: Wed May 18, 2011 3:25 am 
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She's not finished yet but she is much better than when I started. I still have some tweaks to make plus her last 5 powers.

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 Post subject: Re: Dreamscape OOC Open
PostPosted: Mon May 23, 2011 6:22 pm 
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You can tweak her powers as much as you want, but it's still Meh. Your lack of ability to describe the basics of how a person even looks astounds me.

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 Post subject: Re: Dreamscape OOC Open
PostPosted: Mon May 23, 2011 7:24 pm 
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She described the physical characteristics of her character more than Geo did, but mkay

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 Post subject: Re: Dreamscape OOC Open
PostPosted: Mon May 23, 2011 8:53 pm 
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Karo wrote:
You can tweak her powers as much as you want, but it's still Meh. Your lack of ability to describe the basics of how a person even looks astounds me.

What else could I put? Only other thing I can think of is if I add in specific measurements.

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She described the physical characteristics of her character more than Geo did, but mkay

I did?

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 Post subject: Re: Dreamscape OOC Open
PostPosted: Mon May 23, 2011 10:23 pm 
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She described the physical characteristics of her character more than Geo did, but mkay

The difference being I know exactly what Geo's capable of, and last time I checked, I decide how to admit people into my game. She's new and has shown me in no uncertain terms that being hard on her is the only way to get what I want from her.

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 Post subject: Re: Dreamscape OOC Open
PostPosted: Mon May 23, 2011 11:07 pm 
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Being hard on me is 1 way of it, yes, but I would not prefer it.

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 Post subject: Re: Dreamscape OOC Open
PostPosted: Mon May 23, 2011 11:21 pm 
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I would prefer players who took my advice the first time I gave it, instead of having to give it repeatedly and then watch my other players have to repeat what I've said in order for one person to get a clue.

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 Post subject: Re: Dreamscape OOC Open
PostPosted: Mon May 23, 2011 11:27 pm 
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What did I miss?

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 Post subject: Re: Dreamscape OOC Open
PostPosted: Mon May 23, 2011 11:31 pm 
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I've pointed it out several times. Also, your skills for 25 and 30 are unacceptable.

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 Post subject: Re: Dreamscape OOC Open
PostPosted: Mon May 23, 2011 11:34 pm 
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Move them up higher?

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