well i only said almost because i don't know if grammar is part of literacy or just something that goes with it

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They taped over your mouth, scribbled out the truth with their lies, you little spies - You will release your life, joining with the god-damned world of the dead and the lonely. - Я сошла с ума, Mне нужна она
Innuendo Squad's Resident Lesbian
Mother of darkness, mother of light, earth beneath us, soul in flight, songs of love and love of light, guide us to our heart.
We all come from the Goddess and to her we shall return like a drop of rain flowing to the ocean.

Tell me if you state you have good writing skills, why don't you actually do it now? Why not show us what you can do right now? Instead of just waiting to do it IC.

is, this is from a random rp I pulled from another site i'm on

Sapphire was screaming, her pink spaghetti strap showing off a little too much cleavage for a girl her age as he strawberry red hair bounced with every jump, complimenting her brown eyes. She also wore a red denim skirt that went halfway down her thighs. Her feet were covered with pink socks that came halfway up her shins and red pumps. Then again, what girl wasn't? The newest hit band, Bombs in the Sky, had just passed on their way to the back door to their concert. "They're so hot!" she heard multiple girls exclaim before someone pushed her, making her fall in front of the boys. She was shocked. A second passed though it felt like an hour as she tried to return to her feet and hide in the crowd. "Are you alright?" one of the boys asked, obviously concerned for his fan. Sapphire couldn't help but blush at the thought of all the things he could get away with. "I'm alright." she replied, looking down. "Here." he smiled, handing her a backstage pass. "Come hang with us after the concert." She blushed more, almost fainting.

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They taped over your mouth, scribbled out the truth with their lies, you little spies - You will release your life, joining with the god-damned world of the dead and the lonely. - Я сошла с ума, Mне нужна она
Innuendo Squad's Resident Lesbian
Mother of darkness, mother of light, earth beneath us, soul in flight, songs of love and love of light, guide us to our heart.
We all come from the Goddess and to her we shall return like a drop of rain flowing to the ocean.

Goddammit Trag, it was a clicking error. You goof.

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no comment on my example post? it was very literate, more than i am OOC

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They taped over your mouth, scribbled out the truth with their lies, you little spies - You will release your life, joining with the god-damned world of the dead and the lonely. - Я сошла с ума, Mне нужна она
Innuendo Squad's Resident Lesbian
Mother of darkness, mother of light, earth beneath us, soul in flight, songs of love and love of light, guide us to our heart.
We all come from the Goddess and to her we shall return like a drop of rain flowing to the ocean.

Because we don't really care. If you don't write good CS's and you don't write grammatically correct OOC you are not likely to be accepted, regardless of skill. It is a courtesy thing.

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well that sucks... can someone help me create a good cs? i know i won't be able to get a good 1 on my own without going back and editing it for weeks... mostly because i don't normally write very long posts, more short and to the point

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They taped over your mouth, scribbled out the truth with their lies, you little spies - You will release your life, joining with the god-damned world of the dead and the lonely. - Я сошла с ума, Mне нужна она
Innuendo Squad's Resident Lesbian
Mother of darkness, mother of light, earth beneath us, soul in flight, songs of love and love of light, guide us to our heart.
We all come from the Goddess and to her we shall return like a drop of rain flowing to the ocean.

WIP

Fairy tale: Could I use Rokku's rp idea here? it actually seems pretty nice and I do have a girl that could fit.

Patient Number:

Name: Alice

Age: 15

Gender: Female

appearance:

Likes:

Dislikes:

Disorders:

Powers/Abilities:

Weapon

Main Weapon:
Secondary Weapon:


History:

Theme:

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They taped over your mouth, scribbled out the truth with their lies, you little spies - You will release your life, joining with the god-damned world of the dead and the lonely. - Я сошла с ума, Mне нужна она
Innuendo Squad's Resident Lesbian
Mother of darkness, mother of light, earth beneath us, soul in flight, songs of love and love of light, guide us to our heart.
We all come from the Goddess and to her we shall return like a drop of rain flowing to the ocean.

MLS, I have to ask this again: are you sure you're not an alt?
For someone who isn't Rokku, you sure are favouring his 'attempts' to RP.

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Hiryu: Doc's bag is a portal. She's actually from another dimension and when she jumped into it, she ended up at a desk with a browser open on this site. That's how she found it.
We have a Doctor Who thread now. Doctor Who threads are cool.

I'm just saying the lab idea seems a little cool. I'm not an alt and, if I had pictures, I'd show you.

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They taped over your mouth, scribbled out the truth with their lies, you little spies - You will release your life, joining with the god-damned world of the dead and the lonely. - Я сошла с ума, Mне нужна она
Innuendo Squad's Resident Lesbian
Mother of darkness, mother of light, earth beneath us, soul in flight, songs of love and love of light, guide us to our heart.
We all come from the Goddess and to her we shall return like a drop of rain flowing to the ocean.

It's often considered to be a better idea to have an area or two completed in a CS before posting your 'WIP' version, just so we can critique or give advice. That and having it posted as WIP is usually a sign that you've been working on it, but had to leave.

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Fenix13: Remember this well Gareth: With great power... comes hot bitches.

Garethcool: I WILL BECOME YOUR MANSLAVE.
Sam4books: That's the plan ;D

I'm not convinced. Awhile back you had no idea who Rokku was. Now you're casually bringing him up.

Gareth: Well, mom doesn't like me saving docs on the computer and I don't have a flash drive or anywhere else to save it, otherwise it wouldn't be here yet.

Bolts: Because I read...

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They taped over your mouth, scribbled out the truth with their lies, you little spies - You will release your life, joining with the god-damned world of the dead and the lonely. - Я сошла с ума, Mне нужна она
Innuendo Squad's Resident Lesbian
Mother of darkness, mother of light, earth beneath us, soul in flight, songs of love and love of light, guide us to our heart.
We all come from the Goddess and to her we shall return like a drop of rain flowing to the ocean.

Hah. That proves it. You are an alt.

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Hiryu: Doc's bag is a portal. She's actually from another dimension and when she jumped into it, she ended up at a desk with a browser open on this site. That's how she found it.
We have a Doctor Who thread now. Doctor Who threads are cool.

There's this magical "Save" button next to submit.

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Fenix13: Remember this well Gareth: With great power... comes hot bitches.

Garethcool: I WILL BECOME YOUR MANSLAVE.
Sam4books: That's the plan ;D

I only see preview and submit, no save

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They taped over your mouth, scribbled out the truth with their lies, you little spies - You will release your life, joining with the god-damned world of the dead and the lonely. - Я сошла с ума, Mне нужна она
Innuendo Squad's Resident Lesbian
Mother of darkness, mother of light, earth beneath us, soul in flight, songs of love and love of light, guide us to our heart.
We all come from the Goddess and to her we shall return like a drop of rain flowing to the ocean.

PM it to yourself.

Also, Doc has a point. Rokku had very little memory space too.

Oh, the computer has a lot of memory space but I can't break mom's rules, no saving documents on the computer.

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They taped over your mouth, scribbled out the truth with their lies, you little spies - You will release your life, joining with the god-damned world of the dead and the lonely. - Я сошла с ума, Mне нужна она
Innuendo Squad's Resident Lesbian
Mother of darkness, mother of light, earth beneath us, soul in flight, songs of love and love of light, guide us to our heart.
We all come from the Goddess and to her we shall return like a drop of rain flowing to the ocean.

Same as Rokku.

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What?

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They taped over your mouth, scribbled out the truth with their lies, you little spies - You will release your life, joining with the god-damned world of the dead and the lonely. - Я сошла с ума, Mне нужна она
Innuendo Squad's Resident Lesbian
Mother of darkness, mother of light, earth beneath us, soul in flight, songs of love and love of light, guide us to our heart.
We all come from the Goddess and to her we shall return like a drop of rain flowing to the ocean.

Rokku wasn't allowed to save ANY docs on his PC, just like you.
The odds of this happening to other people is extremely slim and unlikely.
In other words, you may be an alt.

Has anyone asked a Mod to check the User's IP address?

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Memento mori

Fine, if you believe I'm an alt do an IP ban on Rokku. If I'm him, I'll disappear. If not, I'll still continue to try to get better.

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They taped over your mouth, scribbled out the truth with their lies, you little spies - You will release your life, joining with the god-damned world of the dead and the lonely. - Я сошла с ума, Mне нужна она
Innuendo Squad's Resident Lesbian
Mother of darkness, mother of light, earth beneath us, soul in flight, songs of love and love of light, guide us to our heart.
We all come from the Goddess and to her we shall return like a drop of rain flowing to the ocean.

You better if you're not that Rokku guy.
Otherwise, you'll end up giving up like Bug.

So...yeah, experience and stuff.

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Memento mori

Yo.

You can change and IP, it's not that hard. And how did you know he was IP banned?

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