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Postby Glacier » Sun Mar 21, 2010 2:32 am

I'm done for now. Enjoy!

Name: Vance Ndiaye

Age: 20

Gender~ Male

Race(s)~ African American / Nigerian (Demon Host)

Appearance- He stands at 5’11” and weights around 205 lbs. He has brown eyes and salt and pepper dreads. He’s got the build of an athletic young adult that is actively training. He’s got something of a muscular figure, and he’s quite strong for his weight. His skin is a very light beige complexion. His eyes are green, and his ears are slightly larger and pointier than the norm. He mainly wears jeans, blue or black, a novelty tee shirt with a button down over it, and tennis shoes. Typically black or white. His clothes tend to cover them most of the time though. His favorite colors are blue and black which is his primary color scheme as far as clothes are concerned.

Tattoo*~ He has a tattoo on his left shoulder of two, one bladed axes crossed, and a dragon on the right. The chip is hidden beneath one of the tattoos and the other is there to compliment the look. Since it’s been healed he’s forgotten which shoulder has the chip embedded in it. It’s actually in his right shoulder under the eye of the dragon causing it to raise the skin slightly and not too noticeable warp the eye of the tattoo.

Weapons of Choice:
Axe bladed bracers: * The blades on the bracers extend an inch past the knuckles and span about half the length of his forearm. They are for use in hand to hand combat. * Identical in design to the ones depicted. These bracers house runes that allow the possessed to wield the axe as one would a stick or a bat.

Daora’s Judgment: * His main weapon is Daora’s Judgment, a double bladed ceremonial axe. It carries a razor sharp edge, and weights 10 tons quite literally. 4 ft diameter and a pair of 22 inch bits. He can and usually does wield it single handedly, but two hands are better able to keep it under control. This axe houses the demon lord Lao Shan Daora. It serves as the connection between Vance and Lao Shan Daora allowing him to channel his power directly into the young man’s body. As his power grows, more power is channeled into the axe and it gets various enhancements.

Lv1 (Daora’s Will) Projects a temporary 8 ft tall 5 ft radius cylinder field of zero gravity allowing him to move normally and even float through the air. The force from a swing from the axe would send any opponent flying in this field. It lasts a mere 7 seconds before it dissipates.

Lv3 (Daora’s Fury) The blade is engulfed in black gravitational energy, each swing that connects releases a powerful but narrow repulse wave shaped from the blade it’s released from, pushing back anything it comes in contact with along with taking the weighted impact of the heavy slash.

Lv5 (Final Judgment) The axe blades become engulfed in a powerful field of attractive gravitational energy that bends to the giant axe head’s form. His hands become engulfed in repulsive black gravitational energy that takes the shape of a dragon’s claws. He then hammer throws the axe at the opponent who then becomes the axes center of gravitational pull. The repulsive energy amplifies the hammer throw’s velocity and force, and the attraction forces are quite powerful making it move dangerously fast through the air with an insane amount of force. The blade will pursue the opponent until they die or the field on the axe wears off. The field lasts for 15 min max, and this requires a vast portion of Lao Shan Daora’s power, but if an opponent can out last the axes relentless assault coupled with the carefully precise assault of the powerful embodiment of Lao Shan Daora for an entire 15 minutes than they deserve to live. His fists become lethal weapons with the repulsion field engulfing them but he must get in close which puts him in the axes path. He can knock it away with his fists, and a thunder clap will release a powerful 360 degree repulse wave that expands 4 ft from his hands. Being that it’s projected by his hands and not his axe or body, he gets hit by the wave as well though taking a much lesser hit.

Hurlbats: *. For longer distance opponents, he carries throwing axes. They are designed to be thrown, and can travel several yards before falling with the right throw. They aren’t very heavy, but razor sharp. Thrown with enough velocity and they can split plenty of things. They aren’t very large, so he will need multiple blades to hit in order to bring something down; unless he lands a square head shot. He’s not that great a shot, so they are primarily for maiming a target so that he can close in for the kill.

Additional Items~ 1 belt holding 20 small throwing axes, 2 bundles of medicinal herbs, 1 metal canteen, 1 small utility knife, 1 compass, 1 flashlight, 1 GPS enabled cell phone, 1 pack of cards, 1 rum filled flask, 1 5-pack of black & mild’s, 1 Zippo lighter, and 1 small lighter fluid container (3 refills).

Power Focus~ Celestial. Daniel is possessed by the spirit of a forgot demon lord lost to pages of ancient lore. This demon came to be known as a sky god and was named Loa-Shan Daora by his people. His gravitational powers stem from it and the enhancements to his body are because of it.

Powers*~| Demon Awakening Mode | Vance has protective wards inked into his skin. The wards project a nearly solid barrier to defend again most magical attacks, but no shield is unbreakable. The wards are in place to protect the holder of Lao Shan Daora's power as much as to contain and suppress the demon. When the wards are either willfully or forced opened, they glow. His demon form manifests itself by turning his eyes a glowing red, his hair white, his skin a smoky black, he produces a powerful sphere shaped gravitational aura (similar to that in the clip) and forming a set of concentrated ethereal wings of a grayish blue and black color on his back. His true power lies in the realm of gravitational and repulsive forces. His body’s strength does increase while in this state, but it’s not too drastic, making him as strong as a professional body builder. At the base level his body is also encompassed in an intensely powerful sphere shaped gravitational field. It’s almost like he’s in suspended animation inside a stasis field. It protects him by attempting to stop all that’s inside the field. He can feel the power that surges through him, making him much denser though still able to move no matter how dense he gets. He constantly feels the forces pulling on his body. * (4:47 - 5:18 of the clip, yes you can slide it to the time you want. It'll play from there)

Level 1 – Gravity Barrier: When his power is unleashed, the wards inked into Vance’s skin glow with a bright blue light. The power they were designed to protect is released, wrapping Vance in a powerful spherical barrier of clashing gravitational energies; with the repulsion and attraction forces mixing perfectly together in controlled stasis. The barrier works against any momentum or movement inside the sphere as it strives to maintain stasis. Unlike the nearly solid barrier projected by the unopened wards, the stasis barrier is merely warped space and an object entering at high speed will only be slowed as it passes through the barrier giving him more time to react than usual to help compensate for the vastly reduced movement speed.

Skill - Pull: He can also pull an object affected by his Grav. Barrier to him, the pull and intensity of the barrier getting stronger the closer it gets to the source. The field can only generate 2.5 G’s at this level and extends a mere 3.25 ft from his body. Only can pull 1 object at a time.

Demon Mode – Resistant to pain, enhanced strength, reduced mobility, level 1 magic, causes mild pain to the body as it’s unused to harnessing such intense power. He can freely enter his demon form once every twenty four hours. His demon form will only manifest on its own in times of extreme emotional or physical distress. The state only lasts long enough for him to finish a single battle.


Level 2 – Gravity Manipulation: He can now manipulate the weight of any object he’s touching, but once he’s set on a weight it won’t change so long as he’s holding it until his power is no longer active. The max he can weight down an item is 500lbs at this level.

G. Barrier Upgrade -The barrier can now exert up to 4 G’s. 4.0 ft radius. Pull can now affect objects 3 ft outside of his barrier, yet this requires heavy concentration, both hands and the pull velocity is slower the further beyond the barrier the object being pulled is. Max pull 2 objects (field range). 1 object (outer range).

Demon Mode Upgrade – Level 2 magic, 2 transformations per day, 30 min. max. duration. He can now freely deactivate his demon mode. When taking a beating / on the ropes, he can will his power forward in a last ditch effort to overwhelm the opponent. Lasts until the battle is over

Level 3 – Gravity Repulse: Unleashes a pulsing shockwave in a forward moving 90 degree arc that pushes against any object or magic. The repulse wave travels from him and carries a force of 4-5 N. Like a shotgun, the shockwave is strongest nearer the core of the barrier; capable of knocking opponents away and deflecting hazardous objects at and within 3 feet. Farther away it will push back opponents, knocking the wind from them and possibly knocking some off their feet. Objects will be slowed drastically or completely stopped depending on the force of the object. Excessive use of this power causes severe fatigue, pain, and blurred vision. 2 ft (focused) range. 5 ft (wide) range.

G. Barrier Upgrade – The barrier can now exert up to 8.0 G’s. 5.5 ft. radius. Pull velocity and range have increased. Less concentration required to pull heavy objects. +1 object pull increase at both ranges.

G. Manipulation Upgrade – He can now manipulate the weight of an object caught in his gravitational barrier; Including himself. 650lb max. Now he can change the weight of an object a few times before he can no longer affect its weight.

Demon Mode Upgrade - Level 3 magic, 3 transformations per day, 45 min. max. duration. Minor health regen and reduced pain sensitivity. The state still causes him pain, but he’s much more used to it and it bothers him less.

Level 4 – Gravity Fields: Vance can now form small cylinder shaped gravitational fields outside of his barrier allowing him to make areas of zero to 3X earth’s gravity. Field max size 10 ft high. 6 ft diameter. He can also create an ultra micro singularity capable of drawing in most anything within a 5 ft radius from the field sight. The max range of this power is 15 feet from him. With intense concentration he can detonate the singularity by reversing the forces and rapidly repelling everything from the field with 2 Psi. This can be fatal, but mostly causes property destruction and injury.

G. Barrier Upgrade – The barrier can now exert up to 16 G’s. 8.0 ft radius. Pull equally effective along the full 10 ft range of the pull field.

G. Manipulation Upgrade – Can now manipulate gravity inside the barrier. Can exert anywhere from 0 - 4 g's. *Flight is now possible through zero gravity inside the barrier and focused manipulation of repulsion forces to propel him.
Able to better time the weight manipulation of objects for more effective combat prowess. He can further manipulate objects before they are fixed on a specific weight for 2 minutes after his power deactivates. 800 lbs max.

G. Repulsion Upgrade – Arc increases to a max of 180 degrees and the force rises to 6-7 N. The wave travels farther giving it a focused range of 5.75 ft and wide range 11.5 ft wide.

Demon Mode Upgrade – Level 4 magic, 5 transformations per day , moderate health regen, His skin hardens and his body becomes more dense. He can hold the state for a full hour and can transform again anytime after a 15 minute cool down. It takes a concentrated effort to draw upon the demon’s power, but he can do it after a brief moment of meditation to tap into it. Highly pain resistant and barely feels the stress this state puts on his body.

Level 5 – The Wrath of Lao-Shan Daora: Vance becomes the conduit of Lao-Shan Daora’s power transforming him into a walking embodiment of the gravitational force of nature itself. He has some level of control but his more angsty, angry and violent tendencies tend to show. That coupled with control of weight and gravitational attraction and repulsion make him a force to be reckoned with.

Gravity Singularity: Lao -Shan Daora’s power explodes from Vance’s body forming his barrier into an infinitely dense gravitational singularity. The sphere is then encompassed by a black hole that draws in everything within a 50 ft radius. He then reverses the black hole resulting in a repulsion detonation, blast the entire thing away resulting in a 7 Psi blast. It takes a while for the forces to amass, and though he’s protected by it, the sheer amount of power in the forces at work strain his body beyond what should be possible. His can muscles rip, pieces of skin can be pulled off, and bones can break. It can really fuck him up in the process.

G. Barrier Upgrade – The barrier can now exert up to 32 G’s. 12 ft radius. Pull equally effective along the full 20 ft range of the pull field. Pull force increased, Massive items now effected

G. Manipulation Upgrade – Can exert anywhere between 0 - 6 g's. Excellent timing in the weight manipulation of objects for even further effective combat prowess. He can freely manipulate an objects weight. New weight last for 5 minutes after his power deactivates. 1000 lbs max.

G. Repulsion Upgrade – Arc increases to a full 360 degree blast and the force rises to 9-10 N. The wave travels farther giving it a focused range of 8 ft and wide range 15 ft wide.

G. Fields Upgrade - Fields can exert 5X earth's gravity max. 15 ft tall. 10 ft diameter. Field range 20 ft max. Singularity range 7.5 ft. Repulsion force 3 Psi.

Demon Mode Upgrade – Level 5 magic, freely able to transform , moderate health regen, His skin hardens and his body becomes super dense. He can hold the state for an hour and a half at a time and can transform again anytime after a 10 minute cool down. It takes little concentrated effort to draw upon the demon’s power, and he can do it on command. Feels no pain, nor the stress this state puts on his body.

Abilities~ He’s well versed in Hand to Hand combat and utilizes his own style consisting of Boxing, Wrestling, Kick-boxing, and a hint of submissionist. Formal military training and discipline. Field training: Tactical Combat Simulations and Guerilla Warfare Hostile Neutralization Exercises. He’s got a good throwing arm and prefers weapons to firearms. He has pretty good aim and can typically hit something he throws an object at. While not a weapon specialist in the least, he has had a fair amount of experience with his axe and other weapons.

Strengths~ The element of gravity, pain resistance, magic bracers and battle axe. The bracers allow the possessed to wield the cursed bound axe as one would a stick or a bat despite its immense weight. He can projects a powerful solid magic barrier in human form

Weaknesses~ His denser, toughened body weights him down, making him more powerful and durable yet slower because of it. The wards keeping the bound axe attached to him drains his energy and stresses his muscles, making him of below average strength, decent endurance, and below average dexterity as a human.

Personality~ . He’s a generally accepting person. He may-be considered nice by most people, but that’s just his form of common courtesy. The whole golden rule, treat others the way you want to be treated. He carries an unbiased attitude into most situations, and has a streak of non-chalance which helps. While on his never ending search to find the point in most things, he does have competitive and aggressive tendencies. While not uncommon in him, they do take a bit of provocation to bubble to the surface. Basically he needs an incentive to be motivated. Once he obtains his goal, it’s a coin toss if he’ll remain interested or not. He likes to think of himself as one with a balanced sense of realism, pessimism and optimism. He understands how things are most likely to turn out, and equally has hope for a better turn out while being even skeptical of a normal turnout. He doesn’t like surprises which is why he wants to be prepared to accept near any situation. Was trained for the military. He has a balanced perspective on life. He’s open to new ideas and is not afraid to die. He tries to maintain a peaceful environment, and hears both sides of an argument in order to find some level ground to come to an agreement. He’s a laid back type of guy, but means business. He likes to travel to new places every now and then. A vacation is always nice.

Bio~

After successfully severing the ties between himself and the military; He sighed because unfortunately for him he had to push away from his father and leave that life behind. He grew up in the military as a trouble making army brat that was sent to a military training camp his father was stationed at. Not only did he receive a formal military training and discipline, his father taught him the ins and outs of armed and unarmed combat as well as field training in the form of tactical combat simulations and guerrilla warfare hostile neutralization exercises. He always knew he couldn't stay in the military, but the circumstances surrounding his discharge from their ranks was something no one could have imagined.

The day it happened, his family’s secret was revealed, unleashed on a combat strike zone. It was a routine real combat field extraction simulation with live rounds. They were taking heavy fire and the extraction team was still pretty far out. He called in a missile strike, but by the time the fighter pilot got there, the battlefield looked as if it had been hit by a warhead already. At the center of the destruction, inside a sizeable crater stood the embodiment of the demon lord Lao Shan Daora in the flesh.

Earlier that day, Vance had discovered his family’s oldest heirloom, and their darkest secret. In his father’s study against his wishes, he took his grandfather’s word and learned more about his African roots and even learned the language. He read about their ancestor’s ties to an ancient demon and the ceremonial axe and bracers on the wall that to this day has sealed within it that very demon Lao Shan Daora himself: The ferocious black dragon, master of weight, gravity, attraction, and repulsion and the power to wield it.

When he finished reading an inscription on the axe while he was dusting it, He felt a weight come down on him as the wards manifested themselves on his skin, sapping him of his strength, but when the insanely heavy axe fell over from his dusting, he could catch it. He grabbed it and picked it up. He swung it around, but when it got by his back the axe bound itself to him with a powerful gravitational pull. He went out to his exercise with the axe in tow and immediately jumped into the fray as it had already begun. After taking some heavy fire his power awakened and the simple combat training mission became a disastrous blast site.

Word spread quickly and the pilot’s eye witness account got around the base like wild fire. He was quickly deemed a cursed freak of nature and regarded with fear. Unable to cope with the incident and his new found power while watching his back for fear of retaliation from scared enlisted men, he left the military and after a short stint as a mercenary, he eventually became a bounty hunter.

On his adventures, he refined his craft and acquired the throwing axes. He came into his own with his axe oriented fighting style but has yet to discover the true potential hidden inside him, only experiencing to this point, mere bursts and spikes of his power. When consciously called upon he can only draw so much from the axe as of now..

Lately he’s been getting bored with the bounty hunters life style and while it has its perks and bountiful treasures he wants to fight people that can challenge him. He found an invitation, and flyer to the tournament and a map of the ancient city of Crail and the surrounding area among a mark’s belongings. He decided the invitation shouldn't go to waste and this tournament could be a true test of his abilities.

Under normal circumstances, Vance is protected by powerful wards that are invisible to the naked eye, but reside on his skin. These wards project a powerful protective barrier that shields him from nearly all magic. The same wards drain him of strength and energy, making him of below average strength, decent endurance, and below average dexterity. His only magical feats in his normal human state are his ability to wield Daora’s Judgment and the ability to transform into his demon form. Quantified it would most likely appear as such - Normal: Strength~ (4) Endurance~ (6) Dexterity~ (4) Magic~(2) Magic Defense~ (9)

Stats~

Stats -
Strength~(6)
Endurance~(4)
Dexterity~(2)
Magic~(8)
Magic Defense~(5)
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Re: Crail Endgame OOC~ Accepting CS's!!

Postby sam4books » Sun Mar 21, 2010 8:25 am

I can already see Vance and Ronnie will get along fine xD
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Re: Crail Endgame OOC~ Accepting CS's!!

Postby bankotsu_obsessed » Sun Mar 21, 2010 11:29 am

Sam: To be honest, I would not be surprised XD I have a tendency to think like that about characters too... but all the ones that have a true story have never really been revealed.

Mastermind: You know... I never thought about that... I think that would be an awesome idea! I will see if I can get something like that to work out! I might do it every couple battles.

Glacier: I have seen and enjoyed the progress of this CS being completed. I accept it pretty much! If you need to edit some things, I'm sure that they'll be okay, but just give me a head's up.

Okay, for the RP beginning... I have been requested by Reiu to not start it until spring break is over. He'll be on choir tour, and he knows that he'll be set way behind if I start it before. What I am going to do is start it some time DURING spring break so we can start, and Reiu will have time to reply when he gets back. I might even have people just sign up and walk around the place, maybe talk to some potential competitors. Of course, I am still waiting on some edits, and I am considering Quinn to be not interested anymore since he posted some weeks ago, and no sign of edits.
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Re: Crail Endgame OOC~ Accepting CS's!!

Postby Mastermind001 » Tue Mar 23, 2010 5:49 pm

Well the thing is with Duos, it gives characters a chance to develop. In the tournament, its a double edge sword as quickly as it gets rid of applicants, the two who work together have to expose one another's techniques to work together, and one day they might have to face one another.
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Postby bankotsu_obsessed » Tue Mar 23, 2010 6:13 pm

yeah, I totally see where you're going with this. I think I will just to mix things up and have others work together to get closer to their prize.

I will be taking people's power focus, stats, and even names to determine the current CS's. In the meantime, lets get the chat on and talk about whatever. The RP can't start until a week later. Might as well get comfy
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Postby Slipslash » Tue Mar 23, 2010 6:25 pm

I am disappoint :|


(And most likely thread will get engulfed in tide of other RP's until you start it. . .like it did until Master posted)
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Postby bankotsu_obsessed » Tue Mar 23, 2010 6:37 pm

I am sorry Slip, but I do need to make sure to be thoughtful for Reiu's time along with everyone else.

Please keep in mind that I don't like leaving people behind in RPs
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Postby Slipslash » Tue Mar 23, 2010 6:46 pm

I apologize for my small patience then.



the pet-peeve it gets to me, but I guess not everyone can sit-down and write a CS from scratch with no planning :P
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Postby bankotsu_obsessed » Tue Mar 23, 2010 6:59 pm

I can, but some people don't have the time to post it all in one shot or don't have the time to be online. Reiu's like that. he has strict internet privileges.
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Postby Geomancer » Tue Mar 23, 2010 7:02 pm

I'll have the CS finished by the end of tomorrow.
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Postby Slipslash » Tue Mar 23, 2010 7:02 pm

Tis horrid luck I guess
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Postby bankotsu_obsessed » Tue Mar 23, 2010 7:05 pm

Okay Geo! Awesome!!

Well Slip, I guess that makes sense
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Postby Geomancer » Wed Mar 24, 2010 9:06 pm

I'm having some trouble thinking of a bio that is not entirely cliche so it may take me a bit.
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Postby TheLivingCouch » Sat Mar 27, 2010 5:46 am

I've been back and forth as to whether I wanted to join this or not but after some thinking, and a little inspiration, I might just join after all. Expect a CS late today or early tomorrow. Well, It's off to the old word processor to work everything out. Sorry for the late notice.
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Postby Reiu » Sat Mar 27, 2010 9:41 am

Eh. It'd fine Couch, I'm going off for tour in just a little, so this is the last time I see the forums. I may be able to post if my phone will let me on it's browser and such, but I doubt it...
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Postby Mastermind001 » Sat Mar 27, 2010 11:28 am

Freaking Living is coming now, shit got realz. However, in all serious this is awesome to know, Living.
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Postby TheLivingCouch » Sat Mar 27, 2010 12:54 pm

Thanks for the heads up Reiu. I might just take a little extra time to make sure I don't rush things.

Thanks for the warm welcome MM, I hope I don't disappoint.
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Postby bankotsu_obsessed » Sat Mar 27, 2010 1:49 pm

Geo: That's cool! you have a couple more days! ^^

Couch: Oh wow! I have seen you around on the forums, and I feel honored to see that this RP peaked your interest! Welcome aboard! ^^ Go ahead and take your time! We will be starting this Thursday so take the time you have to its fullest!

Mastermind: lol, this shit is realz now! XD I am so excited!
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Postby sam4books » Sat Mar 27, 2010 2:02 pm

Woo! I can't wait! Great players that I know and respect, and awesome characters! This is going to be great, I can feel it! :D
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Postby Slipslash » Sat Mar 27, 2010 5:58 pm

Reiu wrote:Eh. It'd fine Couch, I'm going off for tour in just a little, so this is the last time I see the forums. I may be able to post if my phone will let me on it's browser and such, but I doubt it...




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Postby Geomancer » Sun Mar 28, 2010 12:31 pm

Done. Not my best work but I think it is adequate.

I'm going to add in 'levels' as I think of them.

If it is okay, I'd like each level to develop mid-game, under a certain circumstance. Thus Hiro 'evolves' to deal with the newest threat, though he can do this only once per level.
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Postby TheLivingCouch » Mon Mar 29, 2010 3:35 am

So it's 4:30AM at the moment but I'm done. I finally finished it, huzzah. It was strange one for me since the appearance and bio were much easier to write than the powers and such. That's never happened to me before. I apologize in advance for the wall of text I'm about to throw at you, though I hope you all enjoy it. Let me know what you like, didn't like, hate, especially if any of you think I went overboard on the powers I really hope I didn't, or whatever else you have to say. Well, without further ado, here it is. *goes off to bed*

~Character Sheet~

Name: Madeline

Age: 24

Gender: Female

Race: Human - Air Elemental

Appearance: Madeline is a slight woman, almost waiflike in appearance. Her skin is a deathly pale color of white with, tinged with a hint of blue the color of the sky. She stands at 5’7’’ with wispy shoulder length grey hair. Madeline’s pale akin is offset by her distinct black clothing. She wears a simple pair of slacks and a shirt of solid black. Around her waist she wears a brown leather belt with several pouches for holding items. Overtop she wears a thick black cloak with sleeves that comes down to her ankles. On her head Madeline wears a wide brimmed hat of black leather with a cone protruding from the center, essentially a witch’s hat, the point of which is eternally slumping to one side or the other. Madeline appears to move about with an unnatural grace seeming to glide across the ground rather than walking.

Tattoo: A an arcing lightning bolt on the back of her left hand, originating at the base of the center knuckle at branching out down to the wrist.

Weapon: A long walking stick of roughly Madeline’s height composed of a tough hardwood. The walking stick is nothing more than a long sturdy branch taken from off ground, and it shows. It is long and straight and obviously well worn through years of use as the bark is pealing off in some places and completely bare in others. The walking stick is wielded essentially only in travel or self defense. It has no special properties.

Additional Items:

Personal Dairy: The personal diary of her mother that Madeline took as her own. She keeps it with her at all times, and writes new entries inside periodically.

Polished Stones: Several pouches filled with small rounded rounded stones smoothed down and polished to perfection.

First Aid Kit: Your average everyday personal first aid kit with all the essentials. Good for treating minor to moderate injuries but not much else.

Food Rations: A few bits of tasty food stowed away for good measure.

Power Focus: Weather Magic

Powers
*Weather Magic: Simply put the ability to influence, direct, and even create the weather above. The magics used to manipulate the weather can be used on scales both large and small scales alike. Making it rain over a city is harder than making a little black cloud rain on someone’s head, and creating a gust of wind from her hand is easier than changing the direction of the wind altogether etc. Bits of her weather magic can also be enchanted into objects to be activated and released later. The objects can be almost anything although Madeline prefers to use small polished stones that she carries on her person.

Level 1 (Initiate of the Sunny Day): Madeline can influence the weather in small ways; conjuring or dispelling clouds or a light fog when conditions permit, stir up breezes, or even influence the duration or intensity of a current weather pattern to a degree. Say what do you think that cloud looks like over there?

Level 2 (Disciple of the Overcast Sky): Here Madeline gains additional control and influence over the weather to the point of being able to create her own weather patterns. Light showers, sustained winds, or manipulation of fronts. Doing so take some concentration but little control is necessary afterwards. She also gains the power to manipulate air temperature here. Back and forth a few degrees on an overall scale but much more locally. The greater the change from ambient the more time and effort it takes. It’s going to be warm and sunny for the rest of the week as this high pressure front you see here moves in and slows down and parks itself right on top of us. It’ll be a perfect beginning for the first week of summer.

Level 3 (Learned of the Blustering Wind): At this stage thunderstorms come under the range of Madeline’s conjurations and control. Conjuring a storm takes a fair deal of time and concentration but controlling it is another matter. The storm itself will not last long and is generally not very intense but whatever damage it causes while it runs its course is up to mother nature. Her own person is safe however beyond any debris that the storm might kick up. Madeline’s range of temperature control also increases. You might get a chill day but you aren’t going to see Christmas in July here.

Level 4 (Sage of the Driving Rain): At this stage Madeline gains additional over the size, intensity and duration of a conjured storm up to the point of even directing the path of a lightning bolt. Doing so however even in a single instance induces a great deal of strain. Conjuration takes a decent amount of time. Her range and of temperature control is also further increased. Snow in Southtown? Sure, but at a cost.

Level 5 (Master of the Cataclysmic Storm): Here Madeline gains near full control over the weather above her head and around her body and can summon the most destructive of systems; tornados, hurricanes, and driving blizzards. Anything is possible anywhere any when although prevailing conditions still help immensely. Doing so requires intense concentration on the conjuration and control it lest the storm spiral out of her control and into the hand of the eternally unpredictable mother nature until it dissipates. The pyramids covered in three feet of snow? A spring day at the North Pole? Global warming gone nuts I tell you!

Abilities

Elemental Attunement: Even if Madeline has a human form she still retains some abilities from her true nature as an air elemental. She doesn’t need to breath to stay alive, or even eat very often unless she wants to. She is also comfortable in a wide range of temperatures, and cannot get frostbite, although her skin can still burn from over exposure to the sun. Most things affect her body normally however save for the fact that she doesn't ever get sick. She even has the ability to disassociate parts or even her entire physical presence right into the air, melding with it. Doing so however takes an immense effort and at the risk of losing that part of herself if she doesn’t have enough power to reform her body. It would be gone forever lost to the winds.

Whisperwind: Madeline has the curious ability to project her ‘voice’ over long distances to anyone she has seen directly within the past twenty four hours as long as air can move between herself and whomever she is speaking to. The person she speaks to will hear her clear as day but only as a whisper in their ear. Even those Madeline is speaking to directly will hear her in this way. In fact this is the only way people are able to hear her speak.

Featherweight: Since Madeline is essentially an air elemental given human form, she only possesses one third of the physical weight of a person of her size. Even with her very average strength and speed this lack of weight allows her to run much faster and jump much higher.

Nature’s Balance: Madeline has an incredible sense of balance and can walk across nearly any narrow surface without losing her balance or falling over.

Strengths: Madeline is strongest at magic pure and simple; those of manipulation of the weather and the more elementalesque offshoots of the manipulation of air, temperature, and even lightning locally, and has immunity from electrocution. She is also both quick and light both on her feet and literally.

Weaknesses: Her greatest weakness is that of up close and personal physical combat. She can handle her walking stick pretty well but it will only go so far. She is neither very strong nor well trained to fight with her fists or weapons.

Personality: Madeline is an undeniably quirky person. Having essentially raised herself on books and her deceased mother’s diary she isn’t entirely apt or willing to abide by normal social standards. She prefers hanging around on rooftops instead of the ground and is happy as a lark to be out and about in all sorts of inclement weather, be it rain, snow, sleet, hail or even the most impressive of thunderstorms, all without a care in the world. She is not exactly the smartest person but is intensely curious and will ask a ton of questions if you let her many of which are common sense to most people. Madeline can actually be very knowledgeable at times even if she doesn’t understand the information. She is wary of approaching people however given most people tend to get nervous around someone who can whisper in their ear, even from ten yards away. Madeline also has a bit of a childish streak. She may look to be in her twenties but is immature, never having anyone to really guide her through life. Madeline can be intensely possessive, stubborn and selfish, seeing life as more of a game than anything else. She has never worked a day in her life, at least not at something she didn’t want to, and basically takes what she needs when she needs it. She feels bad afterwards but doesn’t exactly know how to live otherwise, though she is trying.

Bio: Excerpts From the Diary of Pearl Schafer

“I was able to get my hands on a new book today from a traveling peddler, more spells and incantations with which to affect the weather. No one else knows it yet and it’s going to stay that way. I really hope this one works unlike the last book that swindler brought by. If only he wasn’t the only one to come to this god forsaken village. The soil is so dry and dusty I’m surprised anyone can get their seeds to take at all, but people still manage somehow. All that will change once I can get the rains to come again. I may be old, but I’ll be damned if I let this place turn to ruin before I take my dying breath.”
-Pearl Schafer

“Failure. Failure, failure, failure, failure, FAILURE! Why is it that everything I do ends in failure? I have read every book performed every spell, spoke every incantation and yet noting I seem to do works. I’m just so frustrated and angry I almost can’t take it anymore. I’ve spent days and night cooped up in here in my small cellar working and working and working. The others are starting get worried about me, they think something is up. Some try to check on me but I shoo them away. I’m no invalid. I don’t need someone coming around all the time just to check on me. I can still take care of my self. The ones that aren’t worried are packing up and leaving. Let the traitors leave I say. They’ll be sorry once the fields are again green and full of life. They’ll see their mistake, mark my words.”
-Pearl Schafer

“Three years. Three years and over a hundred books on magic it took. Why is it only now that I find that I am completely incapable of casting these spells that I have worked so hard on for so long? I’m about ready to give up. Is there nothing I can do, nothing at all? Nobody bothers to check on me any more. No time to worry about an old woman on the hill when you have a family to feed. Maybe I’ll go out and take a walk tonight, just to clear my head. I don’t want to give up, but I cannot cast the spells and nobody is going to help me do so. Maybe its time to just wash my hands of this whole matter.”
-Pearl Schafer

“I’ve got it! It’s all so clear to me now I don’t know why I didn’t think of it before. If I can’t cast the spells I need, I need to get someone, and since I can’t get someone to do it for me, I’ll just have to make someone. There are spells I actually can cast to make that happen. My own personal weather witch. Oh how stupid I’ve been. Work begins tonight. I haven’t been so giddy in years.”
-Pearl Schafer

“Success, an absolute success! I can see my little witch forming right before my very eyes as I sit here writing this. All I had to do was birth an air elemental and bond it heart and soul to a human form. All this done through powerful magics and yet I cannot even make it rain. It’s raining now though, harder than I’ve seen it rain in years. Could it be the doing of my little witch, half formed as she is? It must be. This girl will be my pride and joy. I will raise her as my own, teach her magic and she will bring prosperity to these failing farms. It will still be some time before the spell is complete. I’m going to head into town and tell everyone the good news. With it raining like this, none of them would dare not believe me.”
-Pearl Schafer

Excerpts From the Diary of Pearl Schafer Madeline

“hello. there is water everywhere. i am alone”
-Entry Unsigned

“Hello. My name is Madeline. I saw it in a book, and I liked it. I think it is a good name. There are many books here. This is a book to, but you can write in this one. I don’t think you are supposed to write in the other books. Bye.”
-Madeline

“Hello. People came to my house place today. I hid from them. I don’t think I’m supposed to talk to strange people, so I didn’t. They looked for something but didn’t find it and went away. I didn’t come out for a long time. They put something on the door thing that says CONDEMNED in big letters. I don’t know what that that means.”
-Madeline

“Hello diary. There are so many books here so I read them. I started with this one and I learned so many things. This was my mother’s book but it is my book now. She made me so she is my mother, but she is not here now. No one is here but me so I get her book. Mother says that I am an elemental and a witch. I do not understand what these things are but I think it means that I can do things that other people can’t. Maybe some of the other books will tell me.”
-Madeline

“No more people have come to my house place. I don’t think there are any people around at all. I went outside today. There are things that look like house places down the hill but they are all broken so I didn’t go near. Oh, I read a story about a witch today. It was a good story but the witch was bad. All the stories have bad witches in them, I think. I am a witch. Does that make me bad? Do I have to be bad? I don’t think I want to be a bad witch. Mother says I’m supposed to make it rain and help people. The other witches must all be silly.”
-Madeline

“I found a bunch of mother’s magic books and I’ve been reading them so I can make it rain for people. Some of them are broken but there are a whole lot. There are a lot of hard and strange words in them but with mother’s help I’ve been trying really hard. There are so many books though. Do I have to read them all? Also I got a funny feeling in my belly today. Hungry, that’s what it is. I was hungry. People in the stories eat all the time but I was never hungry before. I found a can opener thing and used it on a can thing I and ate what was inside. The can thing said String Beans on it. They were very tasty. Maybe I will eat more later.”
-Madeline

“I can do it I really can do it! I’m so happy! I made it rain today. It was just for a little bit but I know it was me I just know it. I think mother would be happy and proud of me. I went and danced around in it to and had lots of fun. I feel sleepy now though so I’m not going to write anymore.”
-Madeline

“The books say I can do a lot more than make it rain and they are right. I can make the clouds go away and come back and make all sorts of funny shapes with them. I like to spend all day up on the roof thing playing with the clouds. Sometimes I do, but there are still so many books to read. Maybe I will try the big rain next, or maybe snow. I read about the snow. I think it will be a good thing to try.”
-Madeline

“I have spent a very long time here in the house place reading the books and practicing my magic. I can make the fog, and the rain, and the big rain with lightning that bzzzt boom thing, and the snow. I really like the snow but it’s only supposed to come during the cold time. The big stuff makes me sleepy but that’s ok. I’ve read all the magic books and a whole bunch of the others, explored the whole town place and the broken house places. I know what I am and how I was made. I know a whole lot of things now. I am board with this place there are no people for me to talk to and the animals can’t talk like in the stories. I think I’m ready to go find a new town place where people are and make it rain for them. Goodbye house place. I’ll miss you. I’ll come back someday. People say that all the time in stories, but they don’t always come back. I think I might though. I don’t know.”
-Madeline

“My first few days out in the big world thing... place… I don’t know which. Is the world a thing or a place? It is very big but all the people are there. Maybe I’ll ask someone later when I get to a town place. Anyway my first few days have been good. I walked a really long way and found a road thing. I think it’s a road thing. It goes right through the forest thing that I’ve been walking through and there were big vroomy things on it with people inside. If I follow it I might get to a town place.”
-Madeline

“I found the town place I did. It had more house places than I’ve ever seen before and other places where lots people went in and out but they were not house places. Maybe they were the store places I read about. There were so many things that I’ve never seen before here. I was very excited. All the people here look at me funny though and I don’t know why. Maybe they think I’m bad because I’m a witch. I hope not. I whispered to them saying hello but people just got scared and walked away. I don’t think they like it when I whisper to them but I try anyway. People have voices that are big and loud or soft or whatever they want. I can only whisper to people. I think it is because I am not a person even if I look like one. I went up to a roof of one of the house places to rest for a while but after a while someone saw me. A whole bunch of people gathered around and yelled and tried to make me go away. I didn’t want to because I liked it up there but I finally did when a big long red vroomy thing with a ladder on top came to get me down. I jumped down and ran away then. They didn’t catch me. They don’t like me in the town place.”
-Madeline

“I have learned a lot since I left my house place all that time ago. Things I never would have known if I never left. The biggest was that there aren’t really witches anymore. Maybe there never were. The librarian person says so. I spend a lot of time at book places; libraries and book stores. I want to ask people questions but they don’t like it when I whisper to them so I don’t. I smile and nod a lot and let them think I can’t talk. People think I dress funny but they ignore it mostly. I’m a witch so I dress like one. I always have. I try not to spend too much time in one town place because I need to take things when I need to eat. It makes them think I’m bad. I still make it rain sometimes, and I make it sunny sometimes but people always complain about the weather no matter what it is. I do not understand. I’ll be moving on to a new town place soon.”
-Madeline

“I need to go far away, very far away. There is an ugly man in a long coat after me and trying to hurt me. He said a lot of things that I don’t understand and was very angry for some reason. I didn’t do anything to him. He actually talked to me and asked me a bunch of questions so I thought he was nice, but when I said I was a witch like I am and proved it with a little magic he just said he thought so and pointed a gun weapon at me. He said I was ‘evil’ and ‘in league with the devil’ and that I didn’t deserve to live. The man was going to kill me. I didn’t want to die. I blew him down with a big wind and ran and ran and ran. He followed in a car thing but I got away. I am hiding now. I hope he doesn’t know where I am. I never met anyone who thought witches were real before. This man does and is trying to kill them. All of them he said. Maybe the others are hiding from this man to. I really don’t like people sometimes.
-Madeline

“I want a voice, no, I need a voice. Then maybe I can talk to people. All I can do is whisper in their ears and they don’t like it especially when I am far away from them. People whispers cannot be heard very far away like mine can. I still go into town places, but I don’t tell anyone that I’m a witch anymore. The coat man still scares me, but I think I can beat him again if he ever finds me again. Maybe I will hurt him and make him all scared and run away. I would do that I think. I hear in places that there is going to be a tournament in the city place of Crail. If you win you get a wish. Some people don’t believe it but I’m going to go anyway. If I win I can wish for a voice. I will go, and I will win.”
-Madeline

Stats:

Strength: 2
Endurance: 3
Dexterity: 6
Magic: 10
Magic Defense: 4

Motivational Song: Electric Storm (Instrumental)
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Re: Crail Endgame OOC~ Accepting CS's!!

Postby Mastermind001 » Mon Mar 29, 2010 12:01 pm

After reading all that, Living, it gave me an idea to add another weakness to my Character at level 5 and 6.
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Re: Crail Endgame OOC~ Accepting CS's!!

Postby Kemious » Tue Mar 30, 2010 12:18 am

Name~ Soren Chronos

Age~ 14
Gender~ Male

Race(s)~Human

Appearance: His appearance if typical if not a little bit cute Left Blue, Right Green. Soren stands at a little over 4'10" . He hasn't exactly lost all his baby fat so his a bit on the chubby side. His Ash-blonde hair is short never going past the very top of his neck line. The only really outstanding feature about him appearance wise is his heterochromia eyes. the left one is a Jade color while the right one is Sapphire.

His attire consists of a Large brown poncho and Gray duster hat. an odd combination, but especially useful do to the fact he hides his weapons within the cloth.

Tattoo*~ Gemini on his left hand
Weapon(s): Throwing knives (6) ,Darts(20), Boomerang

Additional Items:
Binoculars, Camera

Power Focus*~ Space manipulation

Powers: Are the manipulation of Space, or to me more precious numbers, regarding universal constants.

Stage one: Soren gains the innate knowledge of equations. If he knows the numbers regarding an object he can effectively perform the necessarily calculations and figure out what exactly will happen.

Stage two:Soren gains the ability to figure out the numbers: ( Mass, size, speed, distance) of any object that he sees or touches.

Stage three: At this stage Soren can temporarily change the numbers of any object he's touching. Effectively this is best used as simple teleportation do to the fact that he's only able to change one number at a time for no more than a few seconds.

Stage Four: He can change multiple numbers of any object he sees. So he could effectively teleport multiple objects at once. Or increase/ decrease the mass of one object while affecting the density of another.

Stage five: Changing the constants of the world. Pressure , gravity. If it exist he replace its number with a new one. Making gravity around the world, heaver, the density of all iron heavier or lighter. However changing these numbers doesn't necessarily give him an advantage, after all he still affected by the changes like a normal individual

Abilities: High speed calculations, in addition to his incredible hand-eye co-ordination.

Strengths: Intelligence, Knowledge of basic anatomy, extremely quick and agile. Sister over watching him , Long range fighting

Weaknesses: Lacks true physical strength. Sister, Close range. Magic

Personality~ The best way to describe Soren is a siscon. He has a not so hidden sister complex for his slightly older twins sister. It borders anywhere from hero worship to creepy. If by some chance he's not in one of his odd sister raving moods, which is rare or rather if you can look past . Soren is quite friendly. Easily capable of chatting it up with complete strangers and is an odd contrast to his cool and gloomy sister. he's a quite gentle unless you send him into a berserker rage, by insulting or hurting his sister.

Bio: The youngest of the pair of twins sent to stop the power struggle between the two brothers that would eventually cause the world to crumble. He and his sister were born for the purpose of killing those two men and stopping the future tragedy they would cause. Despite being created and raised for this sole purpose Soren is not a fighter. He is more akin to a man of science trying to peacefully resolve any conflict he comes across. Instead leaving the fighting to his older sister. The reason why he hasn't died yet is do to his sister, his fondness of ranged weapons and perhaps most importantly his knack for battle strategy which compensates for his lack of physical attributes.

Stats~ This section I highly rely on in order to choose your opponents. Please have your character fight like the stats you display. The most points you get are 25.

Strength~ 3
Endurance~ 3
Dexterity~ 10
Magic*~ 4
Magic Defense~ 5
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Re: Crail Endgame OOC~ Accepting CS's!!

Postby bankotsu_obsessed » Thu Apr 01, 2010 11:49 am

Awesome! Looks like I have 2 more CS's entered and 1 completed! Lemme take a look at them and let you know what I think!

Geo: Even though your character's bio is shorter than you desired, I can see that you went right to the point and gave all the information you needed. Accepted! Welcome aboard!

Couch: Read it over, and I must say that you- my good sir- left me in awe. I am impressed with the wonderful CS you have created! Nothing wrong with it at all! Accepted! I am honored to have you join!

Kemious: Since you said that you will be adding some more later, I will take that into consideration when I give you some small edits.

1~ Detail is the key when it comes to appearance. Although you do tell me what he looks like... I desire a some deep detail.

2~ Thank you for making the stages without me asking you to. That made me feel happy

It seems like that will do, but I was a tad confused about the sister deal, but then I pieced it together when I read it again. Do what you need to before we start.

Also, I am on a search for some co-GM's right now because the week will be starting again. I can check, but the issue is that I need people to help me out! ^^;; Anyone interested, please PM me. I need people who can be on every day, I can contact them one way or another (whether it may be IM or texting), and someone who's planning to stay in the RP for a while and ask me if I need a hand. I really do need someone so... please please! :3

I am not accepting any CS's from this point on. I also lost Quinny and RoZo for some reason... but we will be starting either later tonight or early tomorrow! I'm going over the first round for the battles and I will be posting them when the time comes.
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