RP University--READ THE FIRST POST!!!

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Postby Vage » Fri Feb 11, 2005 8:49 pm

did you like the on i just did

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are you leaving
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Postby Angelin » Fri Feb 11, 2005 8:50 pm

This is really a pain in da ass and it is only one person that we are trying to teach how to be arround the RP thread...
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Re: RP University--READ THE FIRST POST!!!

Postby Vage » Fri Feb 11, 2005 8:50 pm

hello! any one there
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Postby Ro Wong » Fri Feb 11, 2005 8:51 pm

X.X Well, it's better than before. I'll show you the needed corrections, though. (Try to learn from them and see what you need to do.)

"okay,ill do a proper sentance." should be, "Okay, I'll do a proper sentence." Things like names of people and places need to be capitalized, as well as 'I's. And you need a space after that period.

"Do you like this sentance, shiro" should be, "Do you like this sentence, Shiro?" When asking a question, the period at a sentence's end should become a qeustion mark.
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Postby Vage » Fri Feb 11, 2005 8:51 pm

shes right no offense i think i learned enough for today.
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Postby Jay » Fri Feb 11, 2005 8:52 pm

Vage, you must learn the art of patience. A forum is not a chatroom, do not try to reply quickly, take all the time in the world if need be. You're not rushed by anything, we can all wait. So be patient and realize that it may take us a while to reply to your posts because we like to take our time with them. I myself am a bit long winded, but that seems to help with Rping.
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Postby Angelin » Fri Feb 11, 2005 8:52 pm

Ppl... I am sorry to say this but this guy is a lost case... We cant do nothing about it...

We can continue explaining to him but he will keep doin the same mistakes *cries in a corner* Its no use!
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Postby Vage » Fri Feb 11, 2005 8:54 pm

"Okay, thanks Shiro"

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"Okay ill be patient."
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Postby Jay » Fri Feb 11, 2005 8:56 pm

I'll be DAMNED before I FUCKING GIVE UP!!! I SWEAR, I'm going to go to the END of THIS world to FREE this forum from the horrid grips of bad grammar! After that I'll be lazy and push all the work over to Verec or Shiro.
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Postby Verec » Fri Feb 11, 2005 8:56 pm

You forgot to capitalize Shiro, you had no period, and you forgot to use a space inbetween the two sentances.
"I saw it, there, in the sewers...for just a second. All hunched over, skin pale white beneath those rags...so many rags. The vermin crawled about his feet like idolaters at worship, and I swear that the wind drew breath in a frightened gasp at his passing. He wore cold like a cloak and I swear that behind that smiling golden mask he was laughing at me as his curved blade rose and fell, cutting through my men. It left wounds filled with crystals of salt...the screams...the screams...and the pants....Gods! The Pants!!!"
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Re: RP University--READ THE FIRST POST!!!

Postby Vage » Fri Feb 11, 2005 8:57 pm

"Is my sentance's any better."
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Postby Ro Wong » Fri Feb 11, 2005 8:57 pm

Actually, that's much better. You just forgot the period at the end of the first sentence. (And, you don't need the " marks for every time you say something, just when your characters talk in an RP.)
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Postby Mandy » Fri Feb 11, 2005 8:58 pm

"Have my sentences gotten any better?" Is the right way.
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Re: RP University--READ THE FIRST POST!!!

Postby Verec » Fri Feb 11, 2005 8:59 pm

Vage wrote:"Has my sentance's got in even better."

The correct form would be "Have my sentances goten any better?" I can tell that English is not your first language.
"I saw it, there, in the sewers...for just a second. All hunched over, skin pale white beneath those rags...so many rags. The vermin crawled about his feet like idolaters at worship, and I swear that the wind drew breath in a frightened gasp at his passing. He wore cold like a cloak and I swear that behind that smiling golden mask he was laughing at me as his curved blade rose and fell, cutting through my men. It left wounds filled with crystals of salt...the screams...the screams...and the pants....Gods! The Pants!!!"
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Postby Vage » Fri Feb 11, 2005 9:03 pm

"Your, right i used Japanese."

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Postby Ro Wong » Fri Feb 11, 2005 9:04 pm

And, yet again, the sentence has gone to crap. X_X
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Postby Vage » Fri Feb 11, 2005 9:05 pm

Is every one gone.
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Postby Angelin » Fri Feb 11, 2005 9:07 pm

Shiro... forget it.... his a goner ;~;

Even if we teach him... He will continue doin the same thing.
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Postby Vage » Fri Feb 11, 2005 9:08 pm

Know i won't!

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You just used, his a goner.
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Postby Mandy » Fri Feb 11, 2005 9:08 pm

Oy!
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Re: RP University--READ THE FIRST POST!!!

Postby Vage » Fri Feb 11, 2005 9:10 pm

Oy......what?
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Postby Angelin » Fri Feb 11, 2005 9:10 pm

Who wants to beat the crap out of a n00b??? << >>
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Postby Ro Wong » Fri Feb 11, 2005 9:10 pm

No, he can be taught! *points at his last posts* Good, you corrected yourself. It shows you are learning... But, please, remember that the 'i' should always be capitalized when used to refer to yourself. Like this:

I am called Shiro.
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Postby Angelin » Fri Feb 11, 2005 9:11 pm

Then...

*she goes toward shiro and shakes his hand* He is all yours... i don't got too much of... what do you cal it again... (I cant stand ppl for too long...)
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Postby Ro Wong » Fri Feb 11, 2005 9:12 pm

... Patience? *raises eyebrow at Angie*
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