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Concept art/Story

Postby Numa430 » Thu Sep 12, 2013 8:49 pm

Howdy guys,
I need help on deciding the right concept art for Jewel's boyfriend she will be engaged with in my story arc that features her as a young adult.
As you seen in deviantart she looks like a french girl and with enough feedback to my story i've decide to create a partner for jewel to have.

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Meet Adam, he is a rebel from the system in the human world that joins a supernatural hunter group to prevent disasters from happening to our world again after the total demise of Megaville.
When Jewel became human and was transported there after making a deal with a "magican" of sorts.
These two outsiders will change the meaning of Romeo and Juliete But can both of them from different worlds ever become lovers?
You will have to decide ;)
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Re: Concept art/Story

Postby ari-6 » Thu Sep 12, 2013 9:04 pm

I really do love this character design. I wish I were better at making OCs look interesting. Can not wait to see him fully colored. if it is going to be coloured. I hope so. Could you say what colour his coat and hair will be?
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Re: Concept art/Story

Postby Mercen-X » Thu Sep 12, 2013 9:57 pm

All of my OCs look interesting................ in my mind. GOD, you accursed pig bladder, BLESS ME WITH THE ABILITY TO DRAW ALREADY!

That aside, I agree as to the awesomeness of this design. That said, I have the feeling you'll alter this design and a couple of the aspects I like will disappear while a couple of other aspects will appear that I like just as much but I will be left wishing the older aspects would still be worked into the design somehow. That's the feeling I get whenever I see the transition from an artist's lineart to their final colored draft. Whatever.
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Re: Concept art/Story

Postby BeeAre » Thu Sep 12, 2013 10:45 pm

Numa have you really considered that, as Mimi's daughter, Jewel would hypothetically be born to the underworld during a time when no mortals existed :B

unless a god got a permit to make another world.
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Re: Concept art/Story

Postby Birdofterror » Thu Sep 12, 2013 10:53 pm

BeeAre wrote:unless a god got a permit to make another world.
It wouldn't be the first time.

Also do all mods/admins have giant blue/purple borders now or am I just going insane?
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Re: Concept art/Story

Postby ari-6 » Thu Sep 12, 2013 11:23 pm

BeeAre wrote:Numa have you really considered that, as Mimi's daughter, Jewel would hypothetically be born to the underworld during a time when no mortals existed :B

unless a god got a permit to make another world.

I do not understand. I thought it was just Megavill that was destroyed completely. I did not think the human race had been wiped out. Who killed them?
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Re: Concept art/Story

Postby Blood Lord » Thu Sep 12, 2013 11:52 pm

Pfft. I have no idea what you guys are talking about.

ari-6 wrote:I do not understand. I thought it was just Megavill that was destroyed completely. I did not think the human race had been wiped out. Who killed them?

We know Megaville has been destroyed, its just the status of the rest of the world that is in the dark. It might still be there, or its gone.
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Re: Concept art/Story

Postby Birdofterror » Thu Sep 12, 2013 11:53 pm

ari-6 wrote:You are not insane, I see it too. Unless we are both insane. I know it is none of my business and I have no right to say, but it is very distracting.
Very.

Very.

Very.

Distracting.

But back to the topic of the thread, I like the one on the right better. It seems a little more in touch with its religious roots, not blocked by the glasses and lack of the belt-cross which would make him not seem so sincere to his religion. Though I will admit to not actually knowing the character, the one on the right seems better.
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Re: Concept art/Story

Postby Havoc » Thu Sep 12, 2013 11:59 pm

Blood Lord wrote:We know Megaville has been destroyed, its just the status of the rest of the world that is in the dark. It might still be there, or its gone.

What I assumed was that it was the entire world that got destroyed, but there are still people alive in the world of the living. Sort of a post-apocalyptic waste land kinda thing. Like Mad-Max or Fallout. But like you said, we haven't really been told specifically in the main GT arc, what it's like in the world of the living.

But anyways, it sounds pretty awesome, Numa. :)
Will you be making a full comic of it?
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Re: Concept art/Story

Postby Numa430 » Fri Sep 13, 2013 12:27 am

I plan on it totally!!
I have somebody working on Jewel's childhood while i've focus on the later story of Jewel meeting Adam along with the climax.
Their engagment as i mention before is part of the story :)
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Re: Concept art/Story

Postby ari-6 » Fri Sep 13, 2013 12:39 am

So will the scenes while she is a child have a different art style to when she is an adult?
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Re: Concept art/Story

Postby Numa430 » Fri Sep 13, 2013 1:26 am

It depends on the panel for each thread of pages there has to be.
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Re: Concept art/Story

Postby CTCFirebird » Sun Sep 15, 2013 2:57 pm

Nice! We have a concept art here of a character. Could you post up a little Panel-to-Panel so we could see a portion of your creative story? I'm interested in it! Could you clean up the line art for a final design, Numa430?

Geez, I can't believe how many goes for Bleedman style. Usually, I go with the comic book style like from DC or even UDON lol. I guess I'll try doing a little Bleedman style later on.
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Re: Concept art/Story

Postby Numa430 » Mon Sep 16, 2013 1:48 am

The final design will be posted in coloured that features the engagment scene of my story.
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Re: Concept art/Story

Postby Numa430 » Tue Sep 17, 2013 6:49 pm

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Sorry if i bump the thread like this but i got an update with the following picture :)
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Re: Concept art/Story

Postby ari-6 » Tue Sep 17, 2013 7:09 pm

I like how at this angle we can see more of his gauntlet. Not so thrilled that the glasses made it into the final cut. Still, looks awesome!
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Re: Concept art/Story

Postby The Mad Doctor » Tue Sep 17, 2013 7:30 pm

I am very much interested in this as I first gaze upon this thread. You must send me a link to your DA page. The development in this is very interesting.
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Re: Concept art/Story

Postby Tenshi Nova » Tue Sep 17, 2013 7:38 pm

http://numa430.deviantart.com/

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Re: Concept art/Story

Postby The Mad Doctor » Tue Sep 17, 2013 7:43 pm

thanks, I wouldn't think to assume too much that everyone uses the same username everywhere they go on the internet.
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Re: Concept art/Story

Postby Tenshi Nova » Tue Sep 17, 2013 7:45 pm

It's not an assumption lol
It's an option.
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Re: Concept art/Story

Postby ari-6 » Tue Sep 17, 2013 8:03 pm

Not only do I use the same user name everywhere I go, I use the same password.
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Re: Concept art/Story

Postby Tenshi Nova » Tue Sep 17, 2013 8:06 pm

What's your password?
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Postby The Mad Doctor » Tue Sep 17, 2013 8:20 pm

What kind of stupid question is THAT?
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Re: Concept art/Story

Postby ari-6 » Tue Sep 17, 2013 8:21 pm

You are right Doctor. He did not even say please.
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Re: Concept art/Story

Postby Tenshi Nova » Tue Sep 17, 2013 8:40 pm

I can't tell if Doc is playing along or taking me seriously.
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